Dance of the Seedling Fern

by Kaguya Shinigai Sun Jul 05, 2020 5:55 am

Kaguya Shinigai: B-Rank; Posts : 288

Post n°1

Dance of the Seedling Fern

Post by Kaguya Shinigai Sun Jul 05, 2020 5:55 am

Name: Dance of the Seedling Fern
Specialty: KKG
Rank: S rank
Element: N/A
Cost: 25 Stm/20 chakra
Range: 25 Meter Radius
Duration: 3 posts

Description: The last of the Kaguya's five dances where countless bones rise from underground — which can be as many as thousands, up to the tens of thousands. The blades of bone indiscriminately slaughter whoever stands on the ground's surface within a 50M Diameter. The user can cause the to happen one of two ways. One by placing their hands on the ground and focusing for a full post. Or being trapped underground and focusing for a full post. The bones are 5 meters tall.

Furthermore, if this fails to bring down his foe, the user can become one with the bones, which in turn can allow him to attack an enemy unnoticed. The user has 6 post to use the bones and travel through them before they decay from the field. Can only move at the users current movement speed through the bones and it takes up an action per post.
Status: KKG

Last edited by Kaguya Shinigai on Sun Jul 05, 2020 5:18 pm; edited 2 times in total

by Sojiro Sakura Sun Jul 05, 2020 4:47 pm

Sojiro Sakura

Sojiro Sakura: S-Rank; Posts : 1040

Post n°2

Re: Dance of the Seedling Fern

Post by Sojiro Sakura Sun Jul 05, 2020 4:47 pm

Alright, gonna need a few things changed on this move before we can slap an approval on it!

For starters, the radius needs to be brought down to a 25 Meter Radius instead of 50. The post duration is also going to need to be limited at 3 instead of 6.

There needs to be mention in the description that the spikes can be no taller than 5 meters.

And then, when it comes to moving through the bones. That's fine but I need you to add that it takes an action to move through the bones and you can only move your movement speed.

by Kaguya Shinigai Sun Jul 05, 2020 5:03 pm

Kaguya Shinigai

Kaguya Shinigai: B-Rank; Posts : 288

Post n°3

Re: Dance of the Seedling Fern

Post by Kaguya Shinigai Sun Jul 05, 2020 5:03 pm

I get the Radius and the size of the spikes but i dont get why it needs to be dropped to 3 duration instead of 6 or 5 seeing as it is an S rank jutsu. Also i dont understand the whole moving at my current movement speed if im phasing through my own bones that should make it quicker for me to move

by Sojiro Sakura Sun Jul 05, 2020 5:14 pm

Sojiro Sakura

Sojiro Sakura: S-Rank; Posts : 1040

Post n°4

Re: Dance of the Seedling Fern

Post by Sojiro Sakura Sun Jul 05, 2020 5:14 pm

The reason the duration has to be lowered is because the move allows for full control over a large portion of the battlefield, is an attack, as well as a defensive maneuver, and lets you move through them. Mostly for balancing reasons, seeing it's an extremely good attack and versatile move, it shouldn't also have a long duration.

We don't really have a 'speed' stat here on the site, is the thing. The distance that you travel does not directly correlate with how fast you are traveling. And, again, balancing. If you were just allowed to, essentially, teleport(slide) between any of the bone spikes in a 25 meter radius, that is better than Hiraishin. So, instead, you're limited to your normal movement instead.

Does that clear it up? Smile