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God Of Sand

Post by Soul2 on Sat Dec 03, 2011 11:55 pm


Name: Soul
Nickname/Alias: Sand God ; Lonely Soul
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Looks:

Soul has a spiked short type of hair that sticks out in the crowd sometimes. When he moves his hair usually just stays still and doesn't move or bounce. Soul likes his hair because it reminds him of the battle's he's faced. The color of red reminds him of the blood that dripped off him during battles. Soul refers that his hair is the slomo type of verse. Soul also carries his 3 swords in great places. One in his right hand, left hand, and one in his mouth. When he's using them he tipes his head to use the one in his mouth to slice enemys. Soul wears a black jacket that coats over his body like a egg shell protecting the yolk. Though his belt seems to be a little tight around his waist. His shirt is fine enough, but also it has a cross that goes down the middle. The cross represents that he believes in god and only god. He's mostly chirtainty. He also wears a tie but it is very small and only goes two inches under his shoulders. Under his cross shirt is a white T-Shirt. He keeps that T-shirt when he's trianing. The t-shirt also has a cross but its bigger and its red. Souls's pants are mostly the black color. Not to mention his shoes. Totally old fashion most people would say.

Personality: Soul is not the wisiest man but hes a cold hearted man that doesn't give a damn about expectations. When soul was a kid he was mostly agreesive and he was one ofthe cocky kids. But when he was a teenager he began to change. He would hang out by himself and visit bar shops without buying beer. But once in a while he would buy a beer. Soul doesn't give a damn about his village. He nearly cares for wars at all. But if someone is attempted to be killed he would step up and do what a man's gotta do. Soul is very agreesive now. But he's not cocky or reckless anymore. He's more ignorant and sturbborn. Most folks say he's a idiot but still Soul is who Soul is. A cold hearted man.

Soul's personality to woman is unspeakable. He is a gentlemen around woman. Though he does not like most woman. Soul doesn't pay attention to mid chest woman but to woman with big breats he pays most attention. Soul isn't the pervy type really, but he is some part of it. Soul doesn't take being called "Perv" likely. Infact he hates pervs but no one notices it because he doesn't talk about it at ALL. Soul would save any woman if she's on his side. Soul maybe the stuborn type but saving woman is what he does.
Likes & Dislikes:

  • Training
  • God
  • Red
  • Fighting
  • Learning



  • Raw Food
  • Camps
  • Cabins
  • Killing with no reason
  • War

Catch Phrase: (Does your char have any catch phrase's? Optional)





Clan Name: Suna no oni
Kekkei Genkai: The Suna no oni clan member's are very great at manipulating Sand. But instead the same they manipulate is "Dry Sand". This sand is very easy to manipulate with members of the clan. The jutsu are used by Wind and Rock. Mostly the member's do not care for there elements aside from Sand. They manipulate the sand by using there hands and concretrating on the sand. Most members make a symbol with there palm to represent when the sand is forming and then when it closes and crushes an enemy. The sand becomes more solid or dense once the user manipulates it. The user needs at least chakra to make it dense, but making it solid is just a jutsu.


Manipulation range

C Rank – 10m radius
B Rank – 30m radius
A Rank – 50m radius
S Rank – 75m radius

Manipulating sand out of your range will take more chakra and be difficult.

Secret Clan Jutsu
Spoiler:

Name: Air Sand Protective Wall
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Long range
Description: This air defence technique creates a giant shield of sand that is suspended in mid-air by raising a great amount of sand from the ground. By gathering the best possible mineral-rich sand, the hardness of the shield is considered to be very high. Furthermore, the sand has its defensive strength raised by flowing chakra through it. It was strong enough to protect Sunagakure from C3.

Name: Armour of Sand
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Short range
Description: Compacted layer of sand, providing an additional defence should his Shield of Sand fail; combined together, these two are known as Gaara's "Absolute Defence" (絶対防御, Zettai Bōgyo). Though quite effective, maintaining the armour requires a large amount of chakra and stamina. Furthermore, it is nowhere as resilient as the Shield of Sand, since it easily breaks away upon impact, indicating that the sole purpose of the armour is to absorb impact channelled unto the user's body during battle. Another weakness is the additional weight of the sand which leads to decreased levels of speed and mobility.

Name: Desert Layered Imperial Funeral
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Close range, Mid range, and Long Range
Description: Using a large quantity of his sand, The user covers the enemy with several successive layers of the material, before compressing it into the form of a huge pyramid which acts to imprison the target upon its completion.

Name: Desert Suspension
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Mid range
Description: This is one of the multiple offensive and auxiliary methods past members has thought of during combat. It is a trick where he uses the chakra-enhanced sand to support his own weight and float in mid-air.


Name: Prison Sand Burial
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: All ranges
Description: The user using his ability to manipulate sand, loosens the ground below his enemy and catches them in a maelstrom of sand. The swallowed enemy sinks up to two hundred meters underground, while completely unable to move a muscle. Then, the sand glued onto their limbs applies pressure on their whole body, so they can't even twitch a finger. The pressure resulting from being buried at such an extreme depth would surely kill any normal human, if not from suffocation, then from the fact that all their bones would break.


Name: Sand Tsunami
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Long Range
Description: This technique creates a massive amount of sand towards an opponent in the form of a wave, covering and "drowning" them in an ocean of sand. From the sand clan members carries in their gourd, he grinds the rocks and minerals from underground into a large sea of sand and manipulates it like a tsunami that engulfs absolutely all things in his line of sight. This raging sea deals a lot of damage by itself, but one can further take advantage of the sand for a second and a third consecutive assault. The user can control the sand, allowing him to attack his opponent while they attempt to outrun the wave. This technique has the added effect of changing the landscape. It is usually followed by an area crushing technique to kill the trapped opponent.

Name: Sand Binding Coffin
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: All Ranges
Description: With his ability to control sand, The user encases his opponents in a large amount of the special chakra-infused sand kept inside his gourd, immobilising them. It can be used to suffocate an opponent or in preparation for a deadlier technique, the Sand Waterfall Funeral. This appears to be clan member's signature technique.


Name: Sand Binding Prison
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range:Mid and Long range
Description: A capturing ninjutsu that is characteristic to any clan member. Using ordinary sand, a perfectly airtight space is created, in which the enemy is captured. An enormous quantity of sand completely envelops the target from every direction and capture them. The speed, hardness, and scope of the sand depend on the amount of chakra poured into it. The user can fine-tune the sand's properties to the target's size and characteristics. No matter if the target is on the ground or flying in the air, it is almost impossible to escape from this technique. However, even if someone successfully escapes from it, the user can easily use one of his offensive techniques, like the Sand Binding Coffin, to immediately attack the target.


Name: Sand Bullet
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: All Ranges
Description: The user forms a small sphere made of sand and compresses it to increase its hardness. The sphere can strike opponents with such speed and force that it knocks them unconscious. He can also change its trajectory, to strike down multiple targets. By using this one small bullet.


Name:Sand Clone
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Close Range
Description: This technique is used to create clones in the shape of himself or others using sand as a medium. The clone's form can be changed instantly into sand, and the enemy's body can be trapped. Its many applications with long-range attacks can have it act as a lure and a decoy. Due to the properties of the sand.


Name: Sand Drizzle
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: All Ranges
Description: After clotting together sand into countless small lumps, The user uses them to attack an enemy from every direction. Because all the sand lumps are controlled by chakra, it is possible to commence an attack without any blind spots. This technique is often used as lure in battle, distracting an opponent and leaving them vulnerable to an attack from below. In order for this to work, the enemy is first made to face upwards with the sand rain, simultaneously bringing their field of activities under the user's control. Then, a bold move is made from underfoot. To make sure the rain hits its mark, it can be combined with Sand Binding Coffin to immobilise the target.

Name: Sand Hail
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Long Range
Description: A larger scale version of the Sand Drizzle technique, the user gathers his sand into large clumps in the shape of massive boulder-like formations and then drops them from the sky on to his opponents. It covers a large range, making it difficult to dodge. Like the Sand Drizzle, the technique can distract the enemy with the aerial assault, leaving them open to an attack from below.

Passive:


Name: Sand Sensing
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: All Ranges
Description:A contact type (接触タイプ, Sesshoku Taipu) of sensing. By dispersing specialised sand into a targeted area, the user is able to discern the presence of any enemy that comes into direct contact with it. This sensing sand can be spread across a wide terrain, or even float in the air allowing aerial foes to be detected.


Name: Third Eye
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: All Ranges
Description: With chakra, the user connects an eye made of sand or Gold Dust to their optic nerve, which enables them to know what happens in the artificial eye's field of vision, this is genuinely a third eye for its user. The user can control the size of the eye depending on its use. Its main purpose is spying, since it can form and disperse in any location on command. The user also uses it when he completely surrounds himself with his Shield of Sand so he can see what's happening outside of the protective dome. In order to use it however the user must keep one of their eyes closed for the duration of the technique.
Name: Sand Shuriken
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Long Range
Description: The user shapes the sand composing his arms into countless shuriken, and he swings them both. Taking advantage of that formidable centrifugal force, the fired blades of sand change into dangerous weapons. The user also creates and fires an uninterrupted succession of sand rounds, tearing everything in sight to pieces.

Name: Sand Waterfall Funeral
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: All Ranges
Description: After wrapping an opponent with sand with either Sand Binding Coffin or Sand Drizzle, the user will cause the sand to implode and crush whatever is within it. According to Gaara, when used to kill a person, the death is so quick that there isn't even time for the victim to feel any pain. The pressure also produces a sizeable fountain of blood. The user can control the pressure used in the attack, which allows him to either break bones or completely liquefy an opponent.


Name: Sand Waterfall Imperial Funeral
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: All Ranges
Description: This technique is a specialty of the clan member's, where he makes the land a stage for his representation. This technique is identical to Sand Waterfall Funeral in that the stream of sand crushes the enemy. But as far as scale goes, this is in a totally different league. One may be able to hold their own against a single attack, but multiple obliterations are where this technique shines. Gaara slams both hands down onto the sand, creating powerful shock waves that compress the sand. Anything buried in the sand is subsequently crushed.
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Member's Rare Abbility
Name: Shield of Sand
Rank: D-S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: All Ranges
Description: A technique that is unique to Gaara. Whenever Gaara is about to be harmed, a shield of sand will automatically surround and protect him. The sand will react regardless of Gaara's will, even protecting him from self-inflicted injuries. In Part I, the shield's power was considerable in speed and strength. It is capable of withstanding considerably strong attacks and blocking fast projectiles. However, it could be easily defeated with extreme speeds and brute force, as is the case with Rock Lee's Reverse Lotus. Later, in Part II, Gaara's sand shield became so fast that even Amaterasu failed to breach it,[2] and his sand shield became so strong that even the extreme force of A's Guillotine Drop failed to crush through it. The Shield of Sand and the Armour of Sand together were known as Gaara's "Absolute Defence" (絶対防御, Zettai Bōgyo), well known and praised by even Naruto, who had just witnessed the Third Raikage's defences. Gaara can completely surround himself in the shield to further increase his defensive capabilities.[3] He then uses the Third Eye to watch his opponents' movements and control sand as necessary to battle them. In addition to being extremely dense, this sand-sphere can form spikes from its surface to spear any would-be attacker. This formation can be used in mid-air. In Part I, Gaara can use this technique to shield himself from his opponent long enough to perform his transformation into Shukaku, though with sufficient force, this defence can be breached.
((I didn't care for editing this one cause I didn't really know how to))
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Name: Successive Shots: Sand Drizzle
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: All Ranges
Description: A more powerful version of Sand Drizzle. The user creates dozens of sand bullets that he uses to shower the enemy.

Clan History: It is unknown where the Suna no Oni originated but this clan where the first to find the land that the village of suna would be made on, along with the Kimura family.
Clan Village: Suna





Village: Suna
Village Rank: Jounin
Skill Rank: A




Skill Specialty:
Main: Ninjutsu
Sub: Kenjutsu

Elemental Affinity:
Main: Wind
Sub:Earth
Tertiary: Sand

Special Characteristics:


  • Endurance and Speed- Soul has 30% more Endurance and Speed than member's in his rank. Though his musclar power doesn't show much in his apperance. But he is truly has 30% endurance and speed than others in his rank.

Flaws/Weaknesses:

  • Flexibility- Soul has 30% less flexibility then others in his rank.
  • Less Body Composition- Soul has 30% less BC than others his rank






Name: Bokken
Appearance: A wooden Katana..
Rank: D-B
Special Abilities: Swordsmen Style Jutsu
Origin: Soul got it from a store..


Name: Katana
Appearance:
Rank: B
Special Abilities: SwordsMen Skills/Jutsu
Origin: ANother of Soul's mom swords collection. Soul was gaven this sword once she had died. Soul trained with this sword for 1 year holding it in his mouth.


Name:Black Katana 1: Daito
Appearance:
Rank: B
Special Abilities: Swordsmen Skills/Jutsu
Origin: Soul trained for another 1 year once he had gotten it. He used it on his right hand.


Name: Black Katana 2: Kukri
Appearance:
Rank: B
Special Abilities: Swordsmen Skills/Jutsu
Origin: Soul got this sword from his father(same type) and Zarath trained with it for another year. Soul became very powerful with Swordsmenship..


Name: (Name of weapon or item)
Appearance: (A pic or brief description of the object)
Rank: (What rank would this be classified as?)
Special Abilities: (What abilities does this have? It can be none)
Origin: (Where does this weapon come from? Why does your char have it?)






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Ninjutsu:

Name: Air Sand Protective Wall
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Long range
Description: This air defence technique creates a giant shield of sand that is suspended in mid-air by raising a great amount of sand from the ground. By gathering the best possible mineral-rich sand, the hardness of the shield is considered to be very high. Furthermore, the sand has its defensive strength raised by flowing chakra through it. It was strong enough to protect Sunagakure from C3.

Name: Armour of Sand
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Short range
Description: Compacted layer of sand, providing an additional defence should his Shield of Sand fail; combined together, these two are known as Gaara's "Absolute Defence" (絶対防御, Zettai Bōgyo). Though quite effective, maintaining the armour requires a large amount of chakra and stamina. Furthermore, it is nowhere as resilient as the Shield of Sand, since it easily breaks away upon impact, indicating that the sole purpose of the armour is to absorb impact channelled unto the user's body during battle. Another weakness is the additional weight of the sand which leads to decreased levels of speed and mobility.

Name: Desert Layered Imperial Funeral
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Close range, Mid range, and Long Range
Description: Using a large quantity of his sand, The user covers the enemy with several successive layers of the material, before compressing it into the form of a huge pyramid which acts to imprison the target upon its completion.

Name: Desert Suspension
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Mid range
Description: This is one of the multiple offensive and auxiliary methods past members has thought of during combat. It is a trick where he uses the chakra-enhanced sand to support his own weight and float in mid-air.


Name: Prison Sand Burial
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: All ranges
Description: The user using his ability to manipulate sand, loosens the ground below his enemy and catches them in a maelstrom of sand. The swallowed enemy sinks up to two hundred meters underground, while completely unable to move a muscle. Then, the sand glued onto their limbs applies pressure on their whole body, so they can't even twitch a finger. The pressure resulting from being buried at such an extreme depth would surely kill any normal human, if not from suffocation, then from the fact that all their bones would break.


Name: Sand Tsunami
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Long Range
Description: This technique creates a massive amount of sand towards an opponent in the form of a wave, covering and "drowning" them in an ocean of sand. From the sand clan members carries in their gourd, he grinds the rocks and minerals from underground into a large sea of sand and manipulates it like a tsunami that engulfs absolutely all things in his line of sight. This raging sea deals a lot of damage by itself, but one can further take advantage of the sand for a second and a third consecutive assault. The user can control the sand, allowing him to attack his opponent while they attempt to outrun the wave. This technique has the added effect of changing the landscape. It is usually followed by an area crushing technique to kill the trapped opponent.

Name: Sand Binding Coffin
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: All Ranges
Description: With his ability to control sand, The user encases his opponents in a large amount of the special chakra-infused sand kept inside his gourd, immobilising them. It can be used to suffocate an opponent or in preparation for a deadlier technique, the Sand Waterfall Funeral. This appears to be clan member's signature technique.


Name: Sand Binding Prison
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range:Mid and Long range
Description: A capturing ninjutsu that is characteristic to any clan member. Using ordinary sand, a perfectly airtight space is created, in which the enemy is captured. An enormous quantity of sand completely envelops the target from every direction and capture them. The speed, hardness, and scope of the sand depend on the amount of chakra poured into it. The user can fine-tune the sand's properties to the target's size and characteristics. No matter if the target is on the ground or flying in the air, it is almost impossible to escape from this technique. However, even if someone successfully escapes from it, the user can easily use one of his offensive techniques, like the Sand Binding Coffin, to immediately attack the target.


Name: Sand Bullet
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: All Ranges
Description: The user forms a small sphere made of sand and compresses it to increase its hardness. The sphere can strike opponents with such speed and force that it knocks them unconscious. He can also change its trajectory, to strike down multiple targets. By using this one small bullet.


Name:Sand Clone
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Close Range
Description: This technique is used to create clones in the shape of himself or others using sand as a medium. The clone's form can be changed instantly into sand, and the enemy's body can be trapped. Its many applications with long-range attacks can have it act as a lure and a decoy. Due to the properties of the sand.


Name: Sand Drizzle
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: All Ranges
Description: After clotting together sand into countless small lumps, The user uses them to attack an enemy from every direction. Because all the sand lumps are controlled by chakra, it is possible to commence an attack without any blind spots. This technique is often used as lure in battle, distracting an opponent and leaving them vulnerable to an attack from below. In order for this to work, the enemy is first made to face upwards with the sand rain, simultaneously bringing their field of activities under the user's control. Then, a bold move is made from underfoot. To make sure the rain hits its mark, it can be combined with Sand Binding Coffin to immobilise the target.

Name: Sand Hail
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Long Range
Description: A larger scale version of the Sand Drizzle technique, the user gathers his sand into large clumps in the shape of massive boulder-like formations and then drops them from the sky on to his opponents. It covers a large range, making it difficult to dodge. Like the Sand Drizzle, the technique can distract the enemy with the aerial assault, leaving them open to an attack from below.

Passive:

Name: Sand Sensing
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: All Ranges
Description:A contact type (接触タイプ, Sesshoku Taipu) of sensing. By dispersing specialised sand into a targeted area, the user is able to discern the presence of any enemy that comes into direct contact with it. This sensing sand can be spread across a wide terrain, or even float in the air allowing aerial foes to be detected.


Name: Third Eye
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: All Ranges
Description: With chakra, the user connects an eye made of sand or Gold Dust to their optic nerve, which enables them to know what happens in the artificial eye's field of vision, this is genuinely a third eye for its user. The user can control the size of the eye depending on its use. Its main purpose is spying, since it can form and disperse in any location on command. The user also uses it when he completely surrounds himself with his Shield of Sand so he can see what's happening outside of the protective dome. In order to use it however the user must keep one of their eyes closed for the duration of the technique.


Name: Sand Shuriken
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Long Range
Description: The user shapes the sand composing his arms into countless shuriken, and he swings them both. Taking advantage of that formidable centrifugal force, the fired blades of sand change into dangerous weapons. The user also creates and fires an uninterrupted succession of sand rounds, tearing everything in sight to pieces.

Name: Sand Waterfall Funeral
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: All Ranges
Description: After wrapping an opponent with sand with either Sand Binding Coffin or Sand Drizzle, the user will cause the sand to implode and crush whatever is within it. According to Gaara, when used to kill a person, the death is so quick that there isn't even time for the victim to feel any pain. The pressure also produces a sizeable fountain of blood. The user can control the pressure used in the attack, which allows him to either break bones or completely liquefy an opponent.


Name: Sand Waterfall Imperial Funeral
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: All Ranges
Description: This technique is a specialty of the clan member's, where he makes the land a stage for his representation. This technique is identical to Sand Waterfall Funeral in that the stream of sand crushes the enemy. But as far as scale goes, this is in a totally different league. One may be able to hold their own against a single attack, but multiple obliterations are where this technique shines. Gaara slams both hands down onto the sand, creating powerful shock waves that compress the sand. Anything buried in the sand is subsequently crushed.


Name: Shield of Sand
Rank: D-S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: All Ranges
Description: A technique that is unique to Gaara. Whenever Gaara is about to be harmed, a shield of sand will automatically surround and protect him. The sand will react regardless of Gaara's will, even protecting him from self-inflicted injuries. In Part I, the shield's power was considerable in speed and strength. It is capable of withstanding considerably strong attacks and blocking fast projectiles. However, it could be easily defeated with extreme speeds and brute force, as is the case with Rock Lee's Reverse Lotus. Later, in Part II, Gaara's sand shield became so fast that even Amaterasu failed to breach it,[2] and his sand shield became so strong that even the extreme force of A's Guillotine Drop failed to crush through it. The Shield of Sand and the Armour of Sand together were known as Gaara's "Absolute Defence" (絶対防御, Zettai Bōgyo), well known and praised by even Naruto, who had just witnessed the Third Raikage's defences. Gaara can completely surround himself in the shield to further increase his defensive capabilities.[3] He then uses the Third Eye to watch his opponents' movements and control sand as necessary to battle them. In addition to being extremely dense, this sand-sphere can form spikes from its surface to spear any would-be attacker. This formation can be used in mid-air. In Part I, Gaara can use this technique to shield himself from his opponent long enough to perform his transformation into Shukaku, though with sufficient force, this defence can be breached.


Name: Successive Shots: Sand Drizzle
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: All Ranges
Description: A more powerful version of Sand Drizzle. The user creates dozens of sand bullets that he uses to shower the enemy.

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Custom Sand Jutsu:

Name: Sand Release: Emperors Great Wall
Rank: D-A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: All Ranges
Description: Soul uses a block of sand to block a certain area. This can be a small one person wall to a whole villages wall.

Name: Sand Hover Up
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: All Ranges ; 1 whole village length
Description: When their's no sand in a type of area Soul absorbs the sand from rocks making rocks into small pebbles. This jutsu would be able to cover up a entire village if have to. But this sand wouldn't blow away that easy. It would stay in place. But not forever. It would stay their for 2 years and then it would start to blow away and disslove.


Name: Sand Sand
Rank: D-A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: Short Range
Description: This jutsu is automatic. Soul can making a simple limb turn into a dust of sand. Whenever he's hit by water,Rock,Wind, or lightning it still makes him poof into a dust of sand. THis sand is very rare. This was a curse from Soul's father to never be a normal shinobi. Soul found ways to harden himself, But that was his weakness. When he hardened himself a taijutsu user would have the advantage of beating him up before he can go dusty again.


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Wind Jutsu:

Name: Wind Release: Vacuum Serial Waves
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wind
Range: Short to Mid range
Description: The user takes a deep breath and exhales several blades of wind at different angles, by rapidly moving their head in various directions. The power of this technique can be dramatically enhanced when utilised in conjunction with the effects of extreme suction, such as that generated by the Baku, where the augmented attack proved effective enough to even slice through the defences of a complete Susanoo.

Name: Wind Release: Flower Scattering Dance
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wind
Range: Long-range
Description: This technique allows the user to summon a cyclone of petals to attack their opponent. The user can remain in one spot for the use of the technique, because he or she can direct it anywhere they desire. Therefore, the user can increase the direction and power of the technique to the maximum as a last resort.

Name: Wind Release: Pressure Damage
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wind
Range: All ranges
Description: A powerful wind technique which is released by Kakuzu's wind-element mask. A tornado-like mass is compressed until it has a very high density and is then released. The wind pressure is raised to its highest limit, and once the technique hits the target, the resulting blast sweeps everyone off their feet.
If the technique is used by someone who has mastered wind nature transformation, the blast can hit a vast range, inflicting massive damage on both the target and their surroundings.

This technique can be combined with the Fire Release: Intelligent Hard Work, to increase the flame's potency in a great scale, causing a massive fire-storm

Name: Wind Release: Rotating Shuriken
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wind
Range: Short to Mid range
Description: This jutsu will infuse wind-based chakra into bladed weapons. The user can than manipulate the blades in a spinning manner to attack the target.

Name: Wind Release: Spiralling Wind Ball
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wind
Range: Short to Mid range
Description: This technique allows the user to breathe wind-infused chakra into the palm of their hand, shaping it into a small, whirlwind-like ball. Then the user will shoot it at their opponent. This technique seems to be very fast and powerful, as it is capable of smashing through thick rock. They can be launched in rapid succession.

Name: Wind Release: Twister Shot
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wind
Range: Mid range
Description: The user seemingly releases a stream of wind infused chakra from their mouth that takes on the form of a twister to attack the enemy. An unnamed Konoha shinobi used this against Pain's Preta Path, though it was absorbed by Blocking Technique Absorption Seal.

Name: Wind Release: Vacuum Great Sphere
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wind
Range: Short to Mid range
Description: A stronger version of the Wind Release: Vacuum Sphere technique, where the user instead chooses to compress the entirety of the previously inhaled breath into a single large, crushing sphere of wind chakra that they then proceed to expel from their mouth.

Name: Wind Release: Vacuum Sphere
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wind
Range: Short to Mid range
Description: The user takes a deep breath and then exhales several small blasts of wind chakra in such a manner that they are dispersed over an expansive range, enough to make it difficult to avoid them entirely without taking any damage. Due to the properties of this technique, the expelled blasts are capable of piercing into and potentially through an opponent's flesh when they collide, in a similar manner to how bullets function.

Name: Wind Release: Vacuum Wave
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wind
Range: Short to Mid range
Description: The user takes a deep breath and spins while exhaling, compressing the released air into a solitary blade of wind that covers a substantial area around the user, due to their circular motion. The resulting sharpened blast is large enough to slice through multiple targets located a significant distance from the user, causing grievous injuries to those hit.

Name: Wind Release: Gale Palm
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wind
Range: Short to Mid range
Description: A simple technique that when the users hands are clapped together, wind is compressed and transformed into a powerful gale. This technique, when used as an isolated attack has the power to easily knock over a human. Though the true value comes from using it together with projectile weapons like shuriken or kunai. Their speed, power, and ability to wound or even kill are all increased several times.




Name: (Name of jutsu)
Rank: (E,D,C,B,A,S)
Type: (Ninjutsu, Weaponry, Genjutsu, Kenjutsu, Taijutsu)
Element: (Lightning, Wind, Earth, Water, Fire)
Range: (Optional for cannon jutsu.)
Description: (About a paragraph describing your jutsu)





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Re: God Of Sand

Post by Soul2 on Sat Dec 10, 2011 11:04 pm

History:
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A married couple was sitting in a log cabin when a baby was being born. "PUSH HARDER!" the father said shouting at the mother as the doctor examined the mother. "I'M TRYING ALL I CAN BITCH!" the mother shouted back. And then the baby was born. The mother held him on her lap as the clouds covered the full moon in the sky. The baby cried that night, since it was born it had no clue where he was. But there was a wide sky for adventure in his head. He would think of something. And he could change the future.

Academy ARC:

The baby's name was chosen at the age of 5. His name was Soul. They chose his name so that many 'angels' can watch him for life. They said that his soul was pure of heart and would be the beast soul yet. They were wrong. Soul was one of the most mean kids in the academy. Soul was always stubborn and he would always be the ones amoungest the evil. Soul hated everything for a strange feeling. But every night he would pray to god about how his day went. Soul learned how to cuss when he heard adults talking about how sex went on and on and on. Soul would easily get pissed off when he was a kid. Soul would try to beat up his teachers but he would get pulled back. Soul was in a clan called the Suna Clan. He was in the vilage of Suna so it made sense to him. His family had to be one of the best clans in Suna. But they weren't. They were just one of the noble ones. One friday Soul was talking to his teachers about ninjutsu. " Hey faggot, when are we going to learn about ninjutsu " Soul said talking to his teacher. "Shut the fuck up, we learn it after genjutsu" the teacher said. "We've been on the 'genjutsu' topic for 5 mounths" Soul said. "Thats because the students can't get a good decent grade on it! They think Genjutsu is just some crappy shit" the teacher complained. "Well maybe you should teach it more sudden" Soul said. Making up shit is not going to help". The teacher got little pissed off at Soul that moment. "Get your ass back to class!" The teacher said hitting Soul. "You better watch out! ONe day I'll gather up the bravest members of a organzation and then I'LL CHANGE THE WORLD!" Soul shouted.

Genin ARC:

Soul tierd the headband to his head. This day was the day he had passed the exam. Soul slimied as he was now a genin. Soul was tempted into kenjutsu then any other type of jutsu. Soul would chop down tree's and destroy training dummys in the dessert. Suna was a hot place. So Soul had to train really fast before the sun would gleam on Suna even closer. Soul tried his best and learned enough fighting moves. Soul has trained one year with his one katana. The next year he obtained a black katana and used that one for a year. And finally he was using the 3-style swordsmen jutsu. The ninja war was going on lately. Soul was just to young to fight in it, Soul was training all that time. Him and his family was keeping a low profile. Soul didn't care for the war anyway. Soul had trained out of his free will and he was stunned. On how happy he was to be training so hard. He had learned 20 new kenjutsu that day and mastered most of them. That day when Soul got home his father was sitting on the table. Not so happy. And their layed his mother sleeping...It was odd. His mother looked paler than ever. Soul's father rised over Souls tiny body. "Seal: Caging Sand" he said. A sign appeared on Soul's forhead as Soul fell down feeling more pain then ever. "AAAAAHHHHH!" Soul said as pain shook his whole body. He had started to dissolve. Starting with his foot. "NO MAKE IT STOP! PLEASE!" Soul pleaded. But his father denied and sat their drinking tea. Half of soul's body had dissolved and it was still going even faster. "No FATHER PLEASE DON'T! I DON'T WANT TO DIE! FATHER NO!" Soul yelled at the top of what remained. But no. His father sat their, smiling, grinning, the grin turned into laughter, a evil laugh. All remained was now Soul's head. "IT HURTS! STOP!" Soul said. Soul's mouth disspeared. One tear dripped off his face as his body dissolved into sand. "Where am I?" Soul muttered to himself. " Am I in heaven or hell? Whats going on? " Soul said. Soul looked around and saw his body floating around in a underworld place of darkness. Soul reached for his pockets. But his hand dissolved when he reached for it. "W-What the hell is this?" Soul said. Soul saw that the seal was gone. But he was still alive. Where was he?

Chunin ARC:

Soul woke up in the park with his body and everything. Maybe that was a dream he muttered to himself. Soul looked around and saw his sword. When he reached for it his hand dissolved. "W-What?" Soul said. This has to be a joke!" Soul saw his hand be regenrated by sand. "WOw..This is....not a joke...What the hell is going on?" Soul said. Soul looked around, the park was completely empty. Not even trash was lying on the sand. Soul turned and started to slowly crawl on the floor closer and closer. Soul banged his hand against the ground but his hand dissolved. "WHat is pain? I can't feel anything....But it feels like...I'm no one...." Soul said. Tears went down his face. Soul forced himself up. Soul started to walk slowly across the sand. Today the sand was cold. And today the sand had no soul. The next morning Soul woke up in his house. Soul looked around. "Wait..Was that a dream???" Soul said outloud. Soul wanted to know of that was a dream or not. Soul looked around. Same room...Soul then had to test if he could still dissolve. Soul pounded his fist onto the ground and his whole arm dissolved. "Shit...It still fucks up" Soul said. Soul walked to the living room where his mother stood their with an evil grin. "How's 1# soul doing" she said in a strange voice. "Uhm..Good..Whats going on mom? ANd where's dad?" Soul said nervous. "Well that prick had to get the fuck out son" she said in a deep voice. Then she touched Soul's head. A seal appeared on his head. But a different one from before. This one would be a shield of sand. That would protect Soul, every attack that would be given to him would be protected. The sand wasn't just to protect Soul. It was a wound of his mother that protected him. Soul never found out. By the end of the day Soul was called up to the Kazekage and elected Jounin. Soul trained harder and harder and became mch more stronger. He learned the jutsu of his clan and even different custom types of sand jutsu. Soul became much stronger now. He was elected jounin after years of traning. Soul would stay lonely as long as he was.

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Twenty Years ago....Before Zarath was born.... Deep within the east blue...A massacare was at play. Countless of lost souls were killed and injured. Only Eighty Percent died. The other Twenty-Percent were all Devil Fruit eaters. How did this fight start extually? It was all thanks to the father of "Full Heat" Zarath. His name was Rathor. But he would go bye, "Devil's eye". Devil's eye wasn't you average pirate. He was a devil fruit eater. Along side his crew, he was certain to bring Peace to the world. But he would have to len his mission to someone else.

Rathor weared a Black Gi and a cape behind him. He would celebrate with his crew at bar shops and spar with friends. But on one day, Three Bounty Hunters had arrived at the bar. " Hello how can I help you?" The Cashier said. " I would like some fresh beer " The first man said. The man gave a 10 berries to the Cashier. " Thank you asshole" He said as he left. " Fucking Bitch " The Cashier said. The second man came up to the Chashier, " Hey baby kick me in the balls and give me some beer, Because I'm gay and I need to get back to the Strip Club . You know what I mean?". " Oh yeah!" The Cashier said. After getting a free beer for the man he had left. The thrid one came up holding a knife. " Ok asshole, give me all the bitches and the beer. I'm having a Strickclub party and I don't want you to fuck it!" The thrid one said. " You mad Bro? " The Cashier said. " Fuck you!" The thrid one said raising his blade. Rathor responded before he could hurt anyone. Rathor cut threw the Man's shirt through the heart.

"What the-" The thrid said falling to his death. "Well...Well..." Rathor said. The boss bounty hunter came his name was "Uraka Oisa". "What the fuck did you do!" Uraka said. " Shut the fuck up and get the fuck out " Rathor said. " Well well well....Isn't it Rathor..the Devils eye...The man that's raised for 1,000,000 berries. Dead or Alive. " Uraka said. " Hmp, so they raised it to 1,000,000...Figures.." Rathor said. "I'm going to fuck you really hard" Uraka said. " Rapist..." Rathor said. " I told you he was a rapist!" a Random girl said. " Grr..." Uraka said. Uraka took out a gun and shot it at Rathors head. Rathor rapidly used his sword to repel it. " Gummy Bears " Rathor said. " huh-?" Uraka said. Rathor cut through his armour and sliced the figure in half. " Gummy Bears.... Are my favorite snack of the day!" Rathor said. Rathor say that there was a Marine ship right outside of the islands curve. Rathor rushed out of the bar out into the open. 10 cannon balls shot at him at once. Rathor appeared on top one of them knocking it into anotherone that hit the ship. Rathor hoped into the ship, The marine Soilders started firing there pistols. Rathor deflected every last one. Then he attacked them at once. Rather took out a lighter then threw it on to the ship.

The ship bustered with flames as it sank into the sea, Rathor escaped in a row boat. Leaving the island he waved good bye. He floated across the long sea. But, then a large shadow appeared behind his row boat. It was another Marine Ship. But with only one of them on it. "Arm Strong Lucks". Rathor remembered the name very well. He had various duels with him. Rathor ran across the ship on top of the Shit(Poop) deck. " So, lets settle that score!" Lucks said. heh, This time there's no one to interrupt...A fight to the death!" Rathor said. " After this I'll get so much berries I'll be rich!" Lucks said. Rathor took the first hit, he aimed for a hit at the legs then a Cut at the Rim of his face. Arm Strong blocked the first hit with his musclar leg. Then he dodged the second one with his cutting speed. Lucks upcutted Rathor in the stomach. "Shit!" Rathor said. Arm Strong kicked Rathor on to some bird poop(shit). "Is this all you got?" Arm Strong Lucks said. Rathor stood up trembling. "Rathor, If your the man who will guide the world then how will you do it? Your too weak!" Lucks said. " Because, If you look into darkness you won't find light. Fighting is the only way to guide your light out of the darkness. That means...That the only way to stop these fights is immortal peace. " Rathor said. Lucks kicked Rathor over the bird shit. "Goddamnit!" Rathor said. " If you will find this so called "immortal Peace" then how will it last? Hatred runs in the blood, even the sofest thing can have the worst hatred. Give it up. There is no "Peace". Everyone will keep fighting until there's one that stands on top of all! The pirate King!" Lucks said. " No...Your wrong.....Peace..Is not something that can be killed or drained. Peace...is the light inside of your heart!" Rathor said smiling. Lucks was shocked. " The light in your heart that keeps you running! The god that speaks to every burden. The.... Kindness in every soul!" Rathor said. "THERE IS NO PEACE! FOOL!" Lucks said about to punch Rathor. Rathor sliced his arm off. Blood spranded from the arm ass it colored the bird poop(shit) red. " If you don't believe in peace! You don't believe in your heart!" Rathor said. Rathor stuck the sword through Lucks heart. " Rathor....Thank you...For now on..I will believe in peace...." Lucks said as he passed away smiling. Rathor then made anything possible for Peace.

~Twenty Years Later~

A young boy named Zarath was born. Zarath opened his eye's as his first thing to ever see appeared. When Zarath turned Three, his mother had passed away. Zarath lived in an apartment where he would stay for free. Zarath was hated against other parents. He was treated like a hobo and was shown no respect. Zarath was always down at times, but in the morning he would rise up. Zarath spended most hours at his apartment. But one day, those hours would be his worst. At the age of Six....

"I KNOW YOUR IN THERE DEMON!" Ula said banging on the door. Everyone in town called Zarath the "Demon Dragon". Zarath payed no intention to the door and tryed to sleep. Ula broke the door down with a axe and slowly walked bloodthristy to Zarath's bed. " I had enough of you! Everyone is saying your worth 10 berries. With that money I'll be able to rent a pistol! Now die!" Ula said. Zarath tripepd off his bed as it was axed down from Ula. " Come back runt!" Ula said. Zarath took out a knife from the drawer and cut the man on the arm. " Stay away!" Zarath protested. " Nah, Bitch!" Ula said about to chop at his feet. Zarath used the end of his shoe to block the hit then he twirled to the other side of the room. " Goddamnit... " Zarath whispered to himself. " DIE! " Ula said as a strange fruit dropped from his pocket. " What the- " Zarath said. Zarath's stomach roared like a tiger ready for dinner. " hehe....DIE!" Ula said abo to chop at Zarath's head.

Zarath ducked for cover as he had his mouth opened he bumped into the fruit. " DON'T EAT THAT! IT'S WORTH 10,000,000 BERRIES! " Ula shouted. But it was too late. Zarath's hunger striked as he glomped the fruit into his stomach. "aaah...." He sighed as he finshed every last bite. " GODAMNIT!" Ula said striking at Zarath's hand. But it was no effect. Zarath's magma devil fruit power's protested the strike. " Awesome!" Zarath said. Ula striked Zarath in the stomach as he fell down out cold. Ula picked the body as he dragged the body outside. he tied him with rope so he couldn't move.

As Zarath woke up there was burning fire surondding him. Then stood ever single parent in the village. " As promised, Captain GayDick! " Ula said represnting Zarath rope tied. "Goddamnit..." Zarath said. " Are you sure he's a devil fruit eater? " Gay Dick Said. " Are you sure your mama named you right? " Zarath responded. " HAHAHAHAHAHA" The parents cried out loud. GayDick got pissed off as he raised a sledgehammer tied to where his hand use to be. " Die! " GayDick said. gaydick slammed Zarath three times messing up his face. "F-F-Fuck it...." Zarath said trying to be let free.

"It's useless" GayDick said. " Says for you....Gay....Dick..." Zarath said. What a gay name!". "IT STANDS FOR HAPPY MOBY IDIOT!" GayDick shouted. " That's what she said!" Zarath said smiling. "Goddamnit!" GayDick said. Every parent let out a laughter of cries. GayDick slammed Zarath repeaditly. Over and Over. Blood spranded into the air. The parents got worried. Even Ula peed his pants that leaked into his ass as, wet poop plopped out. Bam! Boom! Bam! Over and over Zarath was cutted and wounded. " He is no devil fruit eater....HE'S JUST A PUNK!" Gay dick said as he punched Zarath out of the rope breaking the log.

Zarath full of anger begain turning himself into Magma...."Inugami Guren" he said as a dog shaped dragon bursted out of his hand. Followed up by 2 other dragons. They all completely ate GayDick Followed up by Ula. As they had both died, Zarath fainted. Early in the morning he woke up at the hospital.."uhh what happened.." Zarath said. " You were out cold from that big battle " The nurse said. " Big battle? More like me getting beat up...." Zarath said. " Some parents said that you were a "devil Fruit Eater" " The nurse said. " There right...That fruit..... " Zarath said. " The good thing is that all your wounds healed " The nurse said. Zarath walked off the bed. " Where ya going? " The nurse said. " To the mountains...I'm gonig to become a pirate...But first to train! " Zarath said as he left thw village for 10 years of training.At the age of 15 he would return.

~Ten Years later~

After ten years of training, he returned knowing more skills of his powers. Zarath returned to his sweet loved village. But 3 days ago the village had been attacked. A fleet of pirates had came to the village to steal the treasure of everything. Zarath's first warning was a group of ten men attacking him. "GET HIM!" THEY CRIED! "Ryusei Kazan" Zarath said as More then 1000 magma attacks hit the men. When they crashed onto the floor, Zarath wondred what they were up to. He picked one of the bitches. " What are you doing here? : Zarath said. " Pirate...Fleet...Attacking...Village...." The pirate said. " ugh..." Zarath said. Zarath threw the man away as he started running to the ship near by. More then 1000 men rained down. "Inugami Guren!!" Zarath said as 10 dragons came out of his body raining down as they ate the pirates. " Don't understimate me! " Zarath said. After the dog shaped dragons was finshed, Zarath moved aboared the ship. "What the-" Zarath said.

" My name is Arm Strong Lucks Jr! " A kid one year younger than Zarath said. I have come here to seek revenge!" "Revenge for what?" Zarath said. "The mans's son of who killed my father, of course" Lucks Jr said. "What's his name?" Zarath said. " Rathor...And I heard his name was Zarath. Also, I've heard his bounty is 100,000!" Lucks Jr said. "Your looking at him!" Zarath said getting prepared for a fight. " Very well..." Lucks Jr said. Lucks took out his golden Ave sword. " This will be a fight to the death! " Lucks Jr said. " What ever " Zarath said. Magma Fist!". Lucks Jr used his Golden Ave to block the attackc and send Zarath back flying. " Is that all? " Lucks Jr said. " Nope, There's more where that came from! " Zarath said. Dai Funka!". Lucks Jr raised his sword deflecting that attack. "Goddamnit!" Zarath said as he was lipped over and crashed into the deck of the ship. "I can't stop fighting!" Zarath said. " Your right...Are you really the man of Rathor. Your to weak! Your suppose to be the son of the man that will bring peace to the world!? What a chump your father was..." Lucks Jr said. "No....He wasn't a chump....No matter what happens...If you look into darkness you won't find light. Fighting is the only way to guide your light out of the darkness. That means...That the only way to stop these fights is immortal peace." Zarath said.

"Ryusei Kazan!!" Zarath said shooting multi magma fist's at Lucks Jr. Lucks Jr was beaten down by the attack caught off gaurd. "I-Imortal peace you say? If you will find this so called "immortal Peace" then how will it last? Hatred runs in the blood, even the sofest thing can have the worst hatred. Give it up. There is no "Peace". Everyone will keep fighting until there's one that stands on top of all! The pirate King!" Lucks Jr said lying on the floor. "No...Your wrong.....Peace..Is not something that can be killed or drained. Peace...is the light inside of your heart!" Zarath said about to punch Lucks Jr. Lucks Jr dodged the attacking rolling around then picked up his sword, noticing that his ship was runied. "IF THERE IS THIS PEACE IN MY HEART! THEN RIP IT TO SHREADS!" Lucks Jr protesting. "FINE! MEIGO!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Zarath said as his hand turned into molten rock attacking Lucks Jr at his heart. Zarath appeared next to Lucks Jr. "The light in your heart that keeps you running! The god that speaks to every burden. The.... Kindness in every soul!" Zarath said protesting Lucks Jr's opinion. "Damnit...Don't you get it...You idiot! THERE IS NO PEACE!" Lucks Jr shouting as he slashed at Zarath's hand, Zarath withdraed his hand sending him backwards in a slow motion. " YES THERE IS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! " Zarath shouting. INUGAMI GUREN!". A dog shaped dragon came out from his hand as it bite lucks jr taking him up into the sky. " If you don't believe in peace! You don't believe in your heart! " Zarath shouted. " Goddamnit...Just finsh it! Let me leave this world...But Zarath...We will meet aga-" Lucks jr said as his body was crushed from the dragon. " Phew....." Zarath said. Zarath slowly crawled off the ship onto the shoreline. From his energy drained he began to fall onto the floor, "Don't worry i got you" His nurse from 10 years ago said. So even the might Zarath faints from blood loss? Why do you believe in Immortal Peace so much?". Zarath responded, " Because that's what I believe in! And someday I'll find my father! Lets bet on it!". The nurse gave him a sealing sword. She showed him how to use it and activate it with his Devil Fruit powers.

And along that day Zarath has sworn to protect anyone in danger. Two years of training and Zarath has improved more then ever. Zarath left the island hoping to come back. He left on a row boat out into the sea. Zarath would find a crew sometime, but now he was just chilling with the ocean. He remember's the good times with his mother. Zarath started crying just thinking of her. But Zarath....Was now a pirate. Later when he was 17 years old, he smilied looking into thesky picturing GUMMY BEARS!

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Re: God Of Sand

Post by Soul2 on Sat Dec 10, 2011 11:20 pm


Name: Soge King ; Sniper King
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Rank: D
Special Abilities: This gives pride and courage to the user. Preety Abstract. But its just a normal mask.
Origin: Soul made it from scratch.

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Re: God Of Sand

Post by The Blainiest on Sat Dec 10, 2011 11:33 pm

I dont like the flaws or SCs, also I don't know if this is jounin worhty.



Cheshire Cat: Oh, by the way, if you'd really like to know, he went that way.
Alice: Who did?
Cheshire Cat: The White Rabbit.
Alice: He did?
Cheshire Cat: He did what?
Alice: Went that way.
Cheshire Cat: Who did?
Alice: The White Rabbit.
Cheshire Cat: What rabbit?
Alice: But didn't you just say - I mean - Oh, dear.
Cheshire Cat: Can you stand on your head?
Alice: Oh!

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Re: God Of Sand

Post by Soul2 on Sat Dec 10, 2011 11:34 pm

What's wrong with SC's and Flaws

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Re: God Of Sand

Post by Soul2 on Sat Dec 10, 2011 11:44 pm

Changed the stuff. And added a new village. Alright ready.

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Post by The Blainiest on Sat Dec 10, 2011 11:54 pm

Use percents, also it stops at 30% so 1,000% is just retarded.



Cheshire Cat: Oh, by the way, if you'd really like to know, he went that way.
Alice: Who did?
Cheshire Cat: The White Rabbit.
Alice: He did?
Cheshire Cat: He did what?
Alice: Went that way.
Cheshire Cat: Who did?
Alice: The White Rabbit.
Cheshire Cat: What rabbit?
Alice: But didn't you just say - I mean - Oh, dear.
Cheshire Cat: Can you stand on your head?
Alice: Oh!

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Re: God Of Sand

Post by Soul2 on Sat Dec 10, 2011 11:57 pm

Changed

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Re: God Of Sand

Post by The Blainiest on Sun Dec 11, 2011 12:03 am

2 S rank SCs for a C rank flaw....NO



Cheshire Cat: Oh, by the way, if you'd really like to know, he went that way.
Alice: Who did?
Cheshire Cat: The White Rabbit.
Alice: He did?
Cheshire Cat: He did what?
Alice: Went that way.
Cheshire Cat: Who did?
Alice: The White Rabbit.
Cheshire Cat: What rabbit?
Alice: But didn't you just say - I mean - Oh, dear.
Cheshire Cat: Can you stand on your head?
Alice: Oh!

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Re: God Of Sand

Post by Soul2 on Sun Dec 11, 2011 12:07 am

Fixed? I guess.

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Re: God Of Sand

Post by Elendril on Mon Dec 12, 2011 8:56 am

Write a dam personality


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Post by Soul2 on Mon Dec 19, 2011 7:03 pm

I just did lol Sorry for long wait

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Post by Elendril on Mon Dec 19, 2011 7:32 pm

Personality needs to be 2 paragraphs


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Post by Soul2 on Mon Dec 19, 2011 9:54 pm

Done

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Post by Elendril on Tue Dec 20, 2011 9:36 am

Approved unless said otherwise


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Post by The Blainiest on Tue Dec 20, 2011 9:55 am


Name: Swordsmen Style: Tiger's Feast
Rank: A
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: 1-20 meters
Description: Soul uses one sword to raise his sword up and then bow it down sending a Hyper slash at his enemy. Its like a advanced Swordsmen cut but it has more energy to it making it litterally slash out of the sword. This slash can cut through Iron, Metal, armour, skin, flesh, organs, and bones.

Name: Swordsmen Style: Twin Tiger's Feast
Rank: A
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: 1-40 yards
Description: This has the exact same effects as Tiger's Feast except Soul uses two swords to throw out the hyper cut. Its like a strong blaze of fire rushing at someone. After this move Soul can put his sword back into the case or keep it out.

Name: Swordsmen Style: The Fire in a Tigers Eye!
Rank: A
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: 1-100 yards
Description: Soul raises his blade and then lower's it sending a blue flamed source of energy at an oppenet. This is mostly just like Twin TIger's feast but its not a hyper cut. Its a mastered hyper cut, but a Sword Blast.

Twenty meter cut all slash huh? Cuts through all metal huh? Yeah no...

Name: Swordsmen Style: Thrity Two! Hot Shot Gun!
Rank: B
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: 1-10 yards
Description: Soul uses two swords to fly past an enemy and slash them more than 100 times. But before it deals damage Soul safely puts his swords in his case and then all the slashes are given over the enemy's body.

Make it like ten


Name: Swordsmen Style: The Devil's cry!
Rank: A
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: 1-1000 meters
Description: Soul raises both of his blades and then launches a red flamed source of energy at his oppenet or oppenets. This has the same effects as The Fire in a tigers eye and Twin TIger Feast. But this is twice as powerful. When it reaches an oppenet it explodes a and does the effects of Twin TIger's feast. If the enemy doesn't move fast his or her head will be rolling on the floor.

A mile long slash that cuts through nearly anything...I've seen enough remake this whole app.



Cheshire Cat: Oh, by the way, if you'd really like to know, he went that way.
Alice: Who did?
Cheshire Cat: The White Rabbit.
Alice: He did?
Cheshire Cat: He did what?
Alice: Went that way.
Cheshire Cat: Who did?
Alice: The White Rabbit.
Cheshire Cat: What rabbit?
Alice: But didn't you just say - I mean - Oh, dear.
Cheshire Cat: Can you stand on your head?
Alice: Oh!

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Re: God Of Sand

Post by Soul2 on Tue Dec 20, 2011 10:14 am

I just deleted the kenjutsu list. I'm not editing everything. Your just complaining about the kenjutsu and you want me to remake everything? I don't even think you've seen EVERYTHING. So the kenjutsu list is deleted so go check the rest of the app.

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Re: God Of Sand

Post by Soul2 on Tue Dec 20, 2011 10:19 am




Name: Sand Gourd
Appearance: It's what Gaara use to carry around and move sand.
Rank: A
Special Abilities: Manipulation Of Sand
Origin: Soul had it once he was promoted Jounin

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