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The Rumored Shinobi - The Mysterious Man

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The Rumored Shinobi - The Mysterious Man

Post by TheRumoredShinobi on Sat Aug 04, 2012 5:42 pm


Name: Atarashii Uchiha
Nickname/Alias: “Ghost"
Age: 90
Gender: Male
Looks:
The appearance of his sharingan is three tomoes mastered; his black long hair covers his ears always. Atarashii’s left eye has a scar, in which he keeps it close all the time. He keeps his appearance hidden in the shadows, which is one of the reasons why he goes by the name “Ghost” all the time. The clothing he wears is a gray robe with an uchiha crest on the back of it. The scarf he wears around his mouth serves a purpose; he hides something that he wants no one else to see. However, he did not wear this scarf when he was a kid, it was an event in his life that made him wear it at all times. His wrinkles are visible around the palms, arms, and even on his face. This guy is considered one big mystery in the shinobi world.

Personality: The quiet shinobi known as Atarashii Uchiha. He was always the quiet one in class, not uttering a word to anyone unless the teach called his name. No one in the class ever paid any attention to him, due to that simple reason that he doesn’t talk to anyone. He is considered a genius back in his generation; never getting any questions wrong during Q & A with the teacher and never making a mistake during an exam. His tone of voice wasn’t shy; it was more straightforward and strong. The kids and the teacher knew that he took his education seriously. When he wasn’t doing school work, he was doing physical training to get stronger. The genius went wanted both the brains and the brawns rather than sticking to just one. The food that he most enjoyed was ramen in a cup, nothing else. He was always relaxed as a kid, always working hard rather than playing games, and being the best and top of his class always.
Likes & Dislikes:
Catch Phrase: “The more smarter and prepared you are in battle, you will never lose”




Clan Name: Uchiha Clan
-Bloodline Description:
Spoiler:
The Sharingan is not automatically activated in the user by birth. It is only first unlocked under some stressful or emotional condition after which the Sharingan may be used freely. The first of the Sharingan's powers is being able to see the chakra flow. The Sharingan can tell if a person is under a genjutsu.

The Sharingan's second-most prominent ability grants the user an incredible clarity of perception, allowing them to easily recognize genjutsu and different forms of chakra, though not to the same extent as the Byakugan. This also allows the user to pick up on subtle details, enabling them to read lip movementsor mimic something like pencil movements. As the Sharingan evolves, gaining more tomoe seals, this ability extends to being able to track fast-moving objects before finally giving some amount of predictive capabilities to the user. However, even though the user may be able to see an attack or know it is coming, their body may not have time to react.

The Sharingan's third and most well-known ability is that it grants the user the ability to memorize any technique that he or she witnesses, apart from other Kekkei Genkai techniques. The user can memorize ninjutsu, genjutsu, and taijutsu with near perfect accuracy, allowing the user to use the techniques as his own, or even modify them to create his own new techniques. In order to reproduce a copied jutsu, however, one must have the necessary skill or ability to perform them.

The Sharingan's final commonly-used ability is capable of inducing a unique brand of hypnosis that involves suggesting actions and thoughts to the opponent through simple eye contact. When used against animals, the eyes of the target take on the pattern of the users Sharingan while under its influence. When used in conjunction with the other aspects of the Sharingan, this allows the user to perfectly mimic every move their opponents make even before they do, making it appear as if the user can "see the future". More advanced Sharingan users can take the hypnosis ability even further by tricking or even trapping their opponent within an illusion. It also allows for other forms of hypnotism, such as putting an opponent to sleep, replaying memories to someone else, or creating various illusions to fool an opponent. The potency of the Sharingan's illusion is dependent on the user's knowledge and skill with implementing genjutsu.
Village: Konohagakure
Clan Symbol: [Optional]
Clan Traits: [Optional]
Secret Clan Jutsu: [Optional]
History: [Optional]




Village: Konohagakure
Title Rank: Akatsuki
Skill Rank: S




Skill Specialty:
Main: Genjutsu
Sub: Taijutsu
Tertiary:

Elemental Affinity:
Main: Fire
Sub: Water
Tertiary: Wind

Special Characteristics: N/A
Flaws/Weaknesses: N/A



History:
The Born Child:
Atarashii Uchiha, Growing up, he entered the academy at age 5, and graduated at the age of 6. The reasons why he graduated at such a young age is because he always sat up right in the front of the class due to his poor vision as a child. He was better than all of the students in the class, never making a mistake in exams and physical exams.
Genin: By the age of 6 he was genin level. He had a three man squad and was made chuunin level by the age of 8. Seeing how he was an excellent fighter and entered the exams at such a young age. He had tough training with his sensi and two other genin. He had mental training as well, requiring him to take a test given by his sensi. He showed so much potential that his sensi excluded him from the group and he was promoted at the age of 8 to being a chuunin. But during his years of being just 8, was pretty hard for him.
Chuunin: By the age of 8, he was already given top missions made by the hokage, he succeeded all of them having more harder missions, one after another. During this long period of 10 years, he was helping his mother due to her sickness that developed inside of her. He was running through the stores everyday, doing the chores around the house and on top of that given missions, all of this was scheduled. He was also training outside of the house when his mother went to sleep, He was also constantly studying for exams and whatnot.
Jounin: By this point in time, he was 18 and he defected the leaf village due to the hospital disapproving his medication that he has been using for years. He left the village and went on through the years getting his medication elsewhere.
Rogue: By the age of 30, he did many missions for sungakure and did a lot of illegal activity at kirigakure. He also has helped Omoi yuki when he was 14 at the time, saving him from drowning. Soon after he joined the akatsuki to look after Omoi Yuki, he joined it around the age of 30.



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Re: The Rumored Shinobi - The Mysterious Man

Post by TheRumoredShinobi on Sat Aug 04, 2012 9:21 pm

[Jutsu List:]
Genjutsu
Spoiler:
Demonic Illusion: Tree Binding Death [B Rank]
This is one of the genjutsu passed down since ancient times in Konohagakure. The user first disappears from plain sight in a mist-like fashion in order to approach the target without being detected. Once close enough, the target will then be completely robbed of their mobility as they see the mirage of a fast-growing tree coiling itself around them. Given that the subject remains conscious, this technique proves extremely efficient for information-gathering. Once the target is immobile, the user can then attack the enemy, usually after emerging from the trunk of the tree.
Range: Short Range

Demonic Illusion: Tree Binding Death Explosion [ B rank]
After using Demonic Illusion: Tree Binding Death, the tree that trapped the opponent explodes.
Range: Short Range

Dusk Crow Genjutsu [A Rank]
This genjutsu can trap a victim in an illusion with no eye contact, similar to Ephemeral. The genjutsu traps the victim in a torrent of crows, leaving them at the user's mercy.
Range: Long Range

Mental Barricades [A Rank]
The user can use this technique to place mental blocks in the target's mind that contains valuable information in case the one with the information is captured and interrogated. The barricades look like stylized traditional Japanese sliding doors.
Range: Close Range

Cat Genjutsu [ C Rank ]
puts the opponent in a genjutsu where the whole place changes inside the opponent's mind. A new scenery and skilled cats are created illusory and although it is not real, they can fight against the victim
Range: Medium Range

The Coffin trap [ S rank ]
Puts the opponent in a gen jutsu by just having them look into his eyes. They will be placed in a coffin where kunai will fly through the coffin torturing them.
Range: Medium Range
Water Jutsu
Spoiler:
Water dragon jutsu [ B rank ]
The user shoots a wave of water which takes form of a dragon.
Range:Medium Range

Water clone jutsu [ C Rank ]
Makes a clone out of water
Range: Close range

Water Prison Jutsu [ C rank ]
Traps the opponent in a prison in water, in which the user must hold his hand inside it for the opponent to stay inside.
Range: Close Range
Earth jutsu:
Spoiler:
Earth Release: Earth Dome [ B rank ]
The user creates a dome constructed from the earth that can protect them from external attacks.
Range: Close Range

Earth Release: Earth and Stone Dragon [ B rank ]
The user creates a dragon made from the ground to attack the opponent.
Range: Close Range

Earth Release: Earth Flow River [B rank]
After forming the needed hand seal, the user transforms the ground underneath their opponent into a river of mud that throws them off balance and away from the user. The mud created by this technique can also be used as a medium for the Earth Release: Earth Dragon Bullet technique.
Range: Close Range

Earth Release: Earth Dragon Bullet [B rank]
When used with Earth Release: Earth Flow River, this technique can create a dragon-like head to fire balls of mud at an opponent. This can also be combined with a fire technique to shoot searing hot rock towards an opponent.
Range: Close Range

Earth Release: Earth Clone Jutsu [C rank]
Makes a clone out of earth rocks
Range:Close Range
Fire jutsu
Spoiler:
Fire Release: Great Blaze Ball [ A rank ]
exhales a meteor-sized sphere of fire that carries the enemy away and causes a massive explosion on impact. This is much like Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique, but a larger and more destructive version.
Range: Medium Range

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Post by Kaira on Sat Aug 04, 2012 10:00 pm

The app in general is an overall mess and is a need of tidying up so go through it and complete the app with more detail you are after a S rank position within the akatsuki and there need to be some kind of standard within apps proper history is needed this includes arcademy all the way though to you defecting/ joining the akatsuki also add more to appearance and personailty you need a rp sample as well.


do this first then bump or post you edited then jutsu will be checked


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Post by TheRumoredShinobi on Sat Aug 04, 2012 10:36 pm

Atarashii Sharingan Training: Mastered
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Unmastered 1 Tomoe:
Atarashii was walking through sunagakure just leaving the academy, as the bell rang and all the kids rushing home or just playing ninja nearby. He continued his journey home, but first he walked over to the local flower shop and decided to get his mother a set of roses for her and the new baby sister. Atrashii continued to walk through the local town and finally made it to his house. He opened the door and closed it right behind him as he tried looking for his mother. He kept walking around the house and finally found his mother cleaning the dishes in the kitchen. Atarashii gave her the flower of roses and she placed them in a vase filled with water on the table. She smiled at Atarashii as he smiled back at her in an innocent way. The mother suddenly started screaming and fell to the ground as the water broke. Atarashii started being scared and ran over to his mother. She started screaming more loudly, which made Atarashii more scared and started crying heavily. He tried pulling her up, but she pushed him way due to the pain happening to her. Atarashii got off the ground and started to walk closer to his mother. Within a second, the mother stopped screaming, her eyes looking directly at her son’s eyes. She was dead and Atarashii was in heavy tears thinking that it was his fault that his mother died right in front of him. Atarashii was so angered and sad that he awakened both his sharingan. Atarashii is considered a mysterious shinobi throughout the world.

Mastered 1 Tomoe:
Atarashii was in the forest fighting various giant animals. These animals were a giant snake, a giant gorilla and a giant bird. Atarashii was using his sharingan to track the animals movement, due to the size of the animals, there movements and attacks were slow. Atarashii avoided all there attacks, striking them with kunais on each of their body parts. The kunais had no effect, the giant animals kept lunging at him, the gorilla sent his right fist, the bird came down from the sky to attack him with the peak, and the snake came from the opposite direction of the gorilla and tried to bite him. Atarashii quickly saw all there slowed attacks jumped in the air and quickly shifted threw a kunai with wire over to the tree that was near to them. He pulled himself away from the animals, The gorilla ended up putting the snakes face, with the snake biting down on the gorilla’s right hand, and with the bird striking the snake’s head. The animals started getting angrier and fixed themselves and started to go over to Atarashii. The snake went underground this time, the gorilla ran on all four, and the bird started flying around the area waiting for the right time to attack. While Atarashii was against the tree with the wire in his right hand. The snake came out of the ground right under him and opened its mouth real big to hit him. Atarashii threw a kunai with an explosive tag at the snake. Causing the snake to close his mouth and explode to millions of pieces. The gorilla was already coming closer to Atarashii, while the bird started to come from behind and try to eat him. The gorilla jumped in the air trying to slam him on the ground. Atarashii dodged him and the bird took the impact. The bird hit the floor coughing tons of blood. The gorilla put his index finger on his mouth being clueless. Atarashii started pulling out various kunais with tags on them out of his pouch. He threw the kunais with the tags on them over to the gorilla’s whole body structure. The explosive tags started to build up black smoke as the gorilla’s eyes got real big. The gorilla exploded and landed on the ground again being a million pieces of him in different directions. The bird started got off the floor from coughing blood and started to inhale so much air into his system. The bird blew tons and tons of air out of his mouth over to Atarashii’s body. Atarashii flew back but grabbed onto a branch which was thick enough to not be cut by the winds. After the winds stopped from the bird’s mouth. Atarashii let go of the branch and started sprinting over to the bird. He pulled out a kunai threw it over to the bird. The bird dodged It and came flying faster over to Atarashii. The bird opened his peak, trying to eat Atarashii, but Atarashii was holding onto the peaks top mouth to not be eaten. He then through a kunai into the birds mouth with a tag on it. He threw himself away from the bird as he closed his mouth. The bird blew up with smoked leaving his mouth and laying dead. Atarashii then closed his eyes and opened it to unlock his 1 tomoe.

Unmastered 2 Tomoes:
Atarashii would be kneeling in a dojo waiting for the arrival of his father. The father walking in as he is also getting into the position just like his son is, on his knees; sitting on the heels with his butt cheeks. The father looking towards his son, as he begins to close his eyes. “Son, when you are ready. I want you to come and attack me. “The father getting off his knees and opening his eyes revealing his sharingan to his son. The father getting into a defensive stance as his son gets off the ground getting into an offensive stance. Atarashii taking his ninja sprint over to his father, grabbing onto two kunais with explosive tags on them. He hurls these kunais over to his father’s body within seconds. Atarashii activates his sharingan afterwards. The father jumping into the air as he looks at the spot he just jumped from. The son body flickers to the air, being right above his father with a kunai to his right hand. The father looks up at him with a serious face, He grabs the kunai and disarms his son in midair, and he then slams his son atarashii onto the ground, head first. Atarashii turning into a log, standing far off his father, his father would be on his left knee as it is planted on the ground looking at the log, then he looks at his son. “If you can’t even punch me, you don’t deserve to be in the clan”. Atarashii gets angered by his words, as he grabs a kunai from his pouch, with his right hand he lunges his body at his father trying to stab his body. The father leans back avoiding the stab, as he grabs his son’s wrist with his left hand, disarming the kunai and kicking his son’s stomach. Atarashii goes flying over against the wall, having small cracks appear on the wall due to the hard impact. “If you can’t even beat me with a weapon, then you might as well give up.” Atarashii getting off the ground, brushing himself off and the dust on his whole body structure. The father taking his run over to his son’s body. Atarashii also taking his run over to his father’s body. The father sends his right fist over to the son’s face. Atarashii ducks down from the fist, and sends both his palms on the ground and tries to kick his father in the stomach with his right leg. The father getting hit by the kick, taking his hit into the air. Atarashii quickly moves his body off that spot and behind his father. The father smiles as he turns to a log right after the son appears right behind him. The father appearing behind his son, putting his arm underneath Atarashii’s arm pits, putting him in a master lock. The father and son both land on the ground. “You’re not cut out to be in the clan at all”. The father releases him from the lock as he grabs onto the son’s robe and hurls him into a wall letting go. Atarashii flying over to the wall as he lands with his feet kicking off. Atarashii landing on his feet again. The father getting into a defensive stance, this time pulling out a kunai for both his hands. “Time to make it harder for you son”. Atarashii running over to his father as he also pulls out two kunai like his father. The father throwing the two kunai at the son’s face. Atarashii throws his kunai at the kunai coming at him, both the kunai hit one another, having them hit the ground. Atarashii sending his right fist over to the father’s face. The father avoiding the fist, He sends his knee up to the son’s stomach. Atarashii kneeling to the ground holding his stomach with both of his hands. The father looking down at his son, not being fazed at all. “Stand on your feet, we are going home, you weren’t cut out to be one of us.” Atarashii tearing a bit after hearing those words, Atarashii closing both his fist as he ignores the pain on his stomach. He sends his fist over to his father’s face. The impact would be a strong uppercut, having the father fly up high. The father fixing himself landing on the ground. The father looks at his son as he smiles to him. “I knew you could do it son.” Atarashii opens his eyes unlocking the next stage of the sharingan.

Mastered 2 Tomoes:
Atarashii stands in the same dojo as his father. The father looking over at his son’s sharingan eyes. “Alright son, this will be very simple. In order for you to beat me, the glass cup on my head must fall off to the ground.” Atarashii begins to take his ninja sprint over to his father’s body. The son jumps in midair, sending his right foot coming from the side, over to the cup. The father ducking down low being very careful with the cup. Atarashii lands on the ground sending his right fist over to the glass cup, the father grabbing his right fist quickly; he then lets his fist go as he jumps far back holding the cup with the right hand being placed over his head. Atarashii sprints over to his father’s body in a ninja like run again once more. He then pulls out a kunai using right hand only. He grabs two at a time. He throws one over to the glass cup, the father pushes his head up, having the cup jump in midair, the kunai passes in between the cup and the father’s head. The cup laying back down on the father’s head once again. Atarashii throwing his other kunai at the father’s neck this time. The father clapping both his hands together blowing out tons of water out of his mouth to have the place flooded fully. The kunai would be hit in the process. “Let us see how well you do with the environment has changed. Atarashii doing a few hand signs, as a water clone forms right next to him. The clone and him both running over to the father. The father inhaling so much air into his system also is doing a one hand sign in the process. A giant fire ball leaves his mouth heading towards the clone and the son. The son jump in the water, having the clone turn to water, the giant fire ball turning to ashes. Atarashii clapping both his hands in the water as he does a water dragon jutsu, the water dragon coming from underneath the father. The father jumping in the air seeing the water dragon’s face. The water dragon follows him up in the sky as the dragon hits his body. The father turning into water, as he reappears standing on water again after the son’s jutsu. Atarashii getting out of the water, standing on it again. “Lets change the area son”. The father clapping both his hands as the earth starts adsorbing the water inside of the earth rocks, The son runs over to the father, the father starts to do a few hand signs. A mud dragon coming from underneath the ground in front of him. The mud dragon shooting a mud river over to the son’s body, along with another hand sign blowing fire along with it. The son taking the hit as he turns to a log. Atarashii appearing right above in midair, throwing a few kunai at the father’s head. The father dodging the kunai left and then right, He keeps the cup steady from falling to the ground. The father starts building up chakra, as it starts to grow stronger inside of him. The son feels his chakra as he lands on the ground looking at his father’s charka build up. The father begins to cause the ground to shake a bit as he does his hand signs. Slamming the hands on the ground, he opens the ground underneath him as the cracks start to form up first. Atarashii jumps in the air having no other place to go. The father having 10 earth clones jump from under the ground over to the son’s body. The son throwing kunais at the father’s earth clones, these kunais have an explosive tag on them in which blow up the moment they hit the clones. The clones turn into nothing but small pieces of rock hitting the ground as the father’s face expression changes, with the ground resealing itself back to normal. The father looking a bit more seriously, as he pulls out a scroll from his pocket. The father slamming the scroll on the ground, having him bite a piece of his skin off around the finger area. The smoke would rise up becoming bigger and more cloudy. The smoke finally stops completely having a giant snake come out of the scroll. The snake rushing towards the son, having the son slam both his hands together to form a seal. The son inhaling so much air into his mouth, the snake then jumping underground avoiding his jutsu. The snake then coming out from underneath the son, the son jumping in the air shooting his giant fire ball inside the snake’s mouth. The snake blows up to a million pieces. The son then body flickers over to his father’s back. The father quickly turns around as the son throws a kunai at the cup. The father ducks as he punches his son’s stomach. The son kneeling on both his legs as he holds his stomach real tight. The son rising to his feet as he starts to get angry due to him not being able to get the cup. He sends a fist over to the father’s face. The father jumping far back making sure the cup doesn’t fall on the ground. The son throwing a kunai at the father’s cup. The blocks the kunai with his right arm. The father landing as he takes the kunai out of his flak jacket. The son dashing towards the father being angered. The father jumping into the sky seeing the battle being intense. The father throwing a kunai over to his son’s body, the son getting hit as he lays there taking the injury. The father still in midair about to land on the ground. The son turning into nothing but water, being the clone from earlier. The son appearing right behind the father sending a fist over to the father’s back of the head. The father drops the cup as it hits the ground. The son landing on the ground having his intense training and being angered by not getting it in the first place. He unlocks his new level of the sharingan.

Unmastered 3 Tomoes: (The Drowning Shinobi) (Omoi Yuki)
Atarashii going on an S rank mission assigned by the kazekage. The team of jounin ran through the desert, being a two man squad. The two jounin were both assigned to go over to kirigakure and infiltrate the village. They both finally arrived at the village, standing on a high branch tree seeing. Two kirigakure mist jounin were running over to Atarashii and his jounin teammate. Atarashii jumped off the high branch tree as both of the mist jounin were staring at his sharingan eyes. Within a flash second both of them were under his genjutsu. Both of the high ranked jounin fell on the floor just minutes later in a deep coma. Both Atarashii and his jounin teammate stole their clothing and stabbed there jugular right off. They took the bodies through the forest and dumped them in a river bank, where the bodies traveled off a waterfall. Atarashii and his jounin teammate walked through the mist village seeing that a fight was breaking out between the two clans. Atarashii at that very moment saw a young 14 year old child getting hit with kunai on his back. The child try grabbing onto the mother’s hand but the mother ignored him. Atarashii seeing the kid falling into the waters, he quickly took his ninja sprint over to the water. Atarashii took his dive into the water; the kid was nearly drowning with his eyes close completely. He grabbed the child and took him out of the water. Atarashii walking out of the water soak and wet, with the drips of water hitting the ground, holding the child with both his arms being occupied. Atarashii stared into the mother’s eyes placing her in genjutsu, The genjutsu made the mother see terrible things, The trauma she suffered for just a short amount of time made her fall into the the river, which ended her life. Atarashii looking over to the brothers and sisters of the little boy, he walked away giving a faint smile at them. The brothers and sisters were both crying to one another seeing their mother have been killed. Atarashii looking at Omoi Yuki’s body, staring into his closed eyes, he whispered. “You won’t have to worry about your mother anymore, she didn’t want to save you and she got what she deserved”. The child obviously not able to hear a word that the man has just said. He placed the child on the ground as medical ninja took over and brought the child to the kirigakure hospital. Omoi’s father came running pass the shinobi who were battling one another, seeing his kids on a raft boat, and also his wife lying in the waters dead. “He was furious with anger and looked around to see who killed his wife. Atarashii showing a grin to his face, as Omoi’s father was the reason he was given this mission in the first place. “I killed your wife, what will you?” Omoi’s father ran over to Atarashii pulling out several kunai from his pouch. Atarashii looking at Omoi’s father with the sharingan eyes, placing him in genjutsu, within seconds he dropped to the ground being knocked out. Atarashii’s jounin teammate grabbed the father and placed him on his back, the kids all were crying staring at Atarashii. “Don’t worry, you kids will also come with us, since you have no place to go.” Atarashii putting the brothr and sister into genjutsu, lifting their bodies seconds later with both of them over his shoulders. Both Atarashii and his teammate ran out of the village having two jounin mist ninja chase after them. The jounin teammate threw an explosive kunai tag over to the two jounin who were chasing them. The two mist jounin separated themselves from the explosion, Atarashii looked at both of them in the eyes, and knocked them out with genjutsu in a matter of seconds. Atarashii still running through the forest heading towards sungakure. Both of the jounin making their way to sungakure, giving the father to the kazekage, and having the kids go into the care of the orphanage of sungakure. A week passed and Atarashii went back to the kirigakure village wearing the same attire as before. He began to send word out to other mist villagers that Atarashii’s father was captured by enemy ninja, As Omoi went up the ranks of jounin he finally got word that his father was captured by the enemy of another village. Omoi finally left the village seeing how no one else was going to help him find his father. As Omoi was running out of the village, Atarashii was on a high branch tree folding his arms looking at Omoi leaving the village. Atarashii kept following Omoi being far behind him as he witness the boy ending so many of the hunter ninja who were after him. Atarashii counted 40-0, he knew that he was promised to be a great shinobi. Atarashii kept following his trail and finally he was stopped by an akatsuki member and asked that he wanted to join. The akatsuki member saw the body count that he made all by himself, he let Omoi join the akatsuki. Atarashii smiling to himself as he too wanted to join the akatsuki, for he wanted to look after the Omoi from within the organization. Atarashii left that part of the forest and decided to return to the village. Atarashii was this time training his sharingan with his father. Both of them were fighting one another, using advance genjutsu one after another. Both they both kept breaking out of the genjutsus. They started to uses advance jutsus one after another trying to have the other one fall. They both were struggling to have the other give up. “Son just give up, I will always be stronger then you, you already know this.” The son let a smile on his face, he grabbed both kunai from his pouch and threw it over to his father. The father quickly grabbed the kunai and throwing it back at the son. The son grabbed the kunai from midair and sent it back to the father. The father dodged the kunai and sent his leg over to the son’s stomach; the son moved to the side of the kick and grabbed the father’s leg. He pulled the father’s leg towards him as the father was going off balance on his other leg; the son elbowed his face, having him fall to the ground afterwards. The releasing of the leg allowed the father to send his other leg to the son’s chest. The impact was made and sent Atarashii flying into the air. Atarashii regained his balance a threw several kunai at his father. The father avoided the kunai and started to inhale so much air into his chest, releasing a giant fire ball out of his mouth, Atarashii also did this in midair doing the hand signs and also blowing a giant fire ball out of his mouth just like his father. The giant fireball clashed at one another as the explosion and smoke faded away, the son and father each grabbed a kunai and started running towards each other with full speed. The father jumped into the air and the son also joined him. Within a second, they clashed each other and they both were on the other side of one another with their backs facing each other. The son looking over his shoulder view seeing his father fall to the floor after the impact was made at his jugular. The father holding his neck as he looked directly at his son. Atarashii walked over to his father seeing him about to die. Atarashii started crying a bit to himself as he closed his eyes as his father was dying right in front of him. “You have made me proud son and I am glad you are my son.” Atarashii opened his eyes revealing his new unlocked sharingan to his father. “I knew you could do it son”. The father closed his eyes with tears coming down his eyes.

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Atarashii leaving his village after the death of his father, Ninja sprinting over to the forest of konoha heading towards the valley of the end. Atarashii seeing both the statues of madara and the first hokage. “I’m going to be just like them both, and have a statue of me one day.” During around this time of his event of his life, he began to cough heavily as his vision became worse throughout the years. Atarashii kneeling on the ground as he would begin to pull out different pills from his pouch which was located on his left butt cheek area. He would take the pills twenty minutes each, the side effects would happen one by one after twenty minutes, but he would be taking the pills to stop this from happening, he finally took the last pill having him full restored and no side effects happening. He would still look around konoha forest squinting his eyes around to barley see the animal that is just a bit far from him. Atarashii would be walking through the konoha forest seeing three giant snakes trying to eat him up. Atarashii looking directly at each of their eyes placing them in genjutsu, The snakes wouldn’t be able to move as they were in a world where they couldn’t move their entire body, having kunais all over there body, making them unable to move a single muscle. The snakes in reality would be on the floor unconscious at the event that just took place. Atarashii killing the snakes with an explosive made from a kunai with a tag at the end of it hitting their body. The various kunais and such would kill them due to the explosions made right after. Atarashii would cut the snakes skin off making a fire right afterwards using a small fire jutsu on sticks. He would be placing the snake skin over the fire waiting a long period of time for the snake skin to even cook by itself. Atarashii then picking up the snake skin and starting to eat it being careful due to it being hot. Within the long period of time he would begin to cook the whole giant snakes one by one on a series of sticks that were placed in a big row, with the snakes being tied up on a wire, hanging from high tree branches and such. The long while would take a full day for all the snakes to fully cook, He would finally eat a whole snake within the middle of the night, having him cut off the other snakes into pieces having him place them within his bag. He would be taking his walk through the konoha forest having a bandit coming out from behind a tree pulling out a kunai with his left hand. The bandit making his run over to Atarashii, The bandit taking a lunge knife stab over to Atarashii. This moment in time, Atarashii jumps far back from the kunai and throws several kunai at the bandit, the bandit taking the hit turning into a log substitution. The bandit then reappearing on a high branch tree doing several hand signs making fire balls coming out of his mouth about four of them each being medium sized. Atarashii moving far away from the fireballs having his sharingan looking directly at the jutsu. The bandit jumping off of the tree running over to Atarashii with several explosive tags with kunais all over his hands around five would occupy each of his hands. He would throw the kunai with the explosive tags being attach to the end of the kunai over to Atarashii’s joint areas of the body being the two elbows and the two kneecaps. Atarashii jumping to the air having a kunai being pulled out from his holster from his right outer thigh section. He holds the kunai with his right hand taking his landing on the ground. The bandit running over inhaling so much air into his system, shooting out a stream of fire out of his mouth over to Atarashii’s body. Atarashii avoiding the man’s fire jutsu jumping to the side of it. The bandit then drifting his runs over to Atarashii’s body once again. Atarashii getting off the floor having a kunai battle with him. Both of them would have a series of dodging one another’s attack and also striking each other doing minor wounds to one another. The series continuing on having both of them being exhausted by the body but not in there chakra. Both of them would be running over to each other, but only this time Atarashii put him in a genjutsu having him fall to the floor and dying due to Atarashii stabbing his jugular off him. Atarashii laying on the ground panting and inhaling and exhaling oxygen out and in his system. Being so tired he would be lying in the middle of the forest taking a nap. The next day he would awaken with the sun shining down on his face, with the sky being partly cloudy around the sky, with the animals and such traveling about the forest, with the grass moving along the wind that blows against the whole area of the forest. He would sit on the ground getting off the floor looking around the forest having a bit of battle scars on his face and what not. He would be taking out the snake from his bag and having a meal of snake for breakfast, chomping onto the snake’s tough meat, digging into it like an animal that has been starving a whole day. The meal would finally be over after a series of eating about 10 snake meat made in steak form. The belly would be bloated with him exhaling air after finishing the meal. He would get off the ground heading towards the nearest river bank, falling a dirt path that clears the whole forest being on the opposite sides of the dirt path. Atarashii making his way finally to the river bank finally making it there and cupping both his hands together to make a water drinking fountain from it, He would be on both his knees; moving his head closer to the riverbank, with his hand bringing in the water into his mouth. He would be taking the water in having a lot of it into his system as he is really thirsty. Atarashii getting off the ground as three bandits coming from behind him from a distance. “You’re the one who killed out friend, it’s time you die.” Atarashii turning to face the three men, the men looking over to Atarashii, they would be shocked with fear seeing that he is an uchiha. They would start to talk to one another, realizing that it is three of them against him alone. They would make their run over to Atarashii’s body. Atarashii jumping into the air as the bandits begins to inhale the air into their system at the same time doing different hand signs. One of the bandits blowing out a fire ball jutsu, the other bandit blowing out a wave of water out of his mouth over to Atarashii and the other bandit shooting out a gust of wind out of his mouth. The three of their attacks combined as Atarashii throwing a kunai with wire to another tree quickly pulling him out of the way, already knowing what they were going to do before. The three bandits close their fist angered that they didn’t even touch him. The three bandit shinobi running over to Atarashii’s direction in this very moment, Atarashii weaving a hand sign in which he inhale so much air into his system. He would blow a gust of air over to their bodies at this point. They all would take the hit flying against a tree. After they took the impact over to the tree, this got off the ground and started weaving tons of different seals each of them. They began to inhaling so much air into their system as they would be doing the exact same attack as last time, Atarashii quickly running towards them. Each of the bandits would be shooting out their own attack, being different elements. Atarashii jumping into the sky avoiding the attacks quickly. Atarashii landing on the ground right in front of them. Atarashii looking directly at their eyes as they begin to become very afraid of him. They begin to look into his eyes getting sent into a genjutsu all three of them. They bodies would all be in coffins being right next to each other, there coffins would close right in front of them as they would be locked inside the coffin. They wouldn’t be able to escape as they keep yelling to get them out of the coffin. Tons of kunais would fly over inside of the coffin stabbing their body parts within seconds. In reality they would be on the floor, with Atarashii closing his eyes grinning to himself looking all powerful. He finally opens his eyes awakening his last sharingan. He looked around the forest seeing an akatsuki member approach him. “You’re really good, I saw you fought those men, how would you like to join the akatsuki?” He only agreed to join to look after Omoi Yuki.

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Post by Nuitari Kouga on Sun Aug 05, 2012 8:24 am

Eye Drug: Due to his vision being 50/50, the drug that he takes is the reason why he is still able to see. The side effect of the drug is insomnia, depression, and double vision. The name of the drug is considered N/A.
Sleep Drug: Due to his insomnia, he takes another drug in which helps him sleep at night. The side effect of this drug is dizziness and throwing up.
Health Drug: Due to his constant throwing up which can lead to a fatal death. He takes this drug to stop him from throwing up. Also gets rid of the dizziness.
These are items not flaws. Please put these into the item/weapon template.

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Post by TheRumoredShinobi on Sun Aug 05, 2012 8:58 am

i just decided to get rid of it. check it.

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Post by Kaira on Sun Aug 05, 2012 9:39 am

Sort your jutsu out and use proper template


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Post by TheRumoredShinobi on Mon Aug 06, 2012 5:16 pm

proper template? this is the template. and sort out my jutsu? its right there at the reply, all you got to do is read it, it doesn't matter what order it is in. all it matters if you can read it.

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Post by Makina Hoshimura on Mon Aug 06, 2012 5:59 pm

She mean the Main Template like everyone else.....to be organized like everyone else...plus your a 90 year old S rank increase your history..how did you get involved withe the akatsuki.....what lead you to join them and how you got to the point..also put your jutsu in the right template to be more organized...Said template they need to be in is This:

Name: [Name of jutsu]
Type: [Ninjutsu, Weaponry, Puppetry, Genjutsu, Kenjutsu, Taijutsu]
Rank: [E,D,C,B,A,S]
Element: [Lightning, Wind, Earth, Water, Fire]
Description: [A well detailed description of your jutsu. Remember to add in such fetures as it's range, chakra cost, drawbacks, etc to give an overall view of the technique.]


now change few things like they been telling you..and this can go smoothly as possible...^^


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