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Omoi (Done Done Done!)

Post by Kousuke on Wed Aug 01, 2012 3:17 pm


Name:Omoi Yuki
Nickname/Alias: Ethereal Wolf, Black Angel
Age: 21
Gender: M
Looks:
First Look


Secondary Glance
Spoiler:

Upper Body Attire & Torso
Omoi has a finely toned upper body of a shinobi his age. His body isn't ripped or hulking in size, but simply by looking at him one could tell his body is in excellent health. His abs, and arms are well defined with a shimmer of glisten. Omoi sports an one sleeved ebony kimono, which is slightly covered with a tint of light blue wolf fur on the cuffs .
On the reverse a light blue wolf paw on the back. The Kimono also features a lime green shield like shoulder guard that covers the shoulder blade.

• Arms
On his left hand Omoi wears a white bandage which extends all the way past the elbow, but doesn't succeed the knuckles.

• Lower Attire
Omoi wears large loose fitting black pants that are made of entirely of silk. Laced on both leggings are patterns that resemble claw marks. The patterns on the left legging are white, while the opposite design is basked in gold. Around his waist Omoi wears a shinobi utility belt which contains numerous scrolls, however this is hidden by a forest green sash that blows in the wind.

Personality: Omoi is a character who is observant, calm, and calculating. He tends to be rather silent when others are speaking, as it is a chance to either learn something new, or a simple sign of respect. He isn't evil or good, he simply goes with the flow of the situation. However others may object his actions as evil, but are simply misunderstood in many ways. If one could use a term to describe him it would be anti hero. His absolute goal in life is power, but not to rule others or become a Savior but it's only for himself. To protect his own existence and to extinguish the life of others who would attempt to seek his.

In battle Omoi likes to keep some moving distance between himself, and his opponent often employing trickery into his combat tactics ranging from genjutsu and trap setting. He isn't a coward, but he sees no point in putting himself in any immediate danger until he at least knows what his opponent is capable of. When it comes to children and women, he does not seek their life, but will often attempt to remove them from the battle if necessary, but he isn't a murder.

What attracts him to other people is their power, if they are powerful, and fearless it is possible for him to take a slight liking or an interest. To where he may be willing to help that individual, but more often than not he is observant. He cares nothing for the consequences, or walls in his way. His one truth is to gain might.

Omoi will not risk his life for another, if the situation is seemingly hopeless. His life is his own so he would never place his life in the hands of another. This doesn't mean he won't cooperate, but he is willing to sacrifice the life of another in order to secure his existence. While conversing with others he is very quick to respond, with one word or very simple and short sentences. His ownly downfall for conversation is that others may not answer a question directed at another person. If he was talking to that person, it was that person alone.

Omoi spends most of his time people watching when he isn't training or simply reading a good book or two.
Likes & Dislikes:
Likes: Reading, Rainy weather Power
Dislikes; Unnecessary Death, Unprovoked Violence,
Catch Phrase: I am the Punishment of God, and I've come to set you free.



Clan Name: Yuki
-Bloodline Description: Ice Release
Village: Kiri
Clan Symbol: [Optional]
Clan Traits: [Optional] Capable of using jutsu with one hand.
Secret Clan Jutsu: [Optional] Demonic Crystal Ice Mirrors, Ice Dome, Certain Killing Ice Spikes
History: [Optional]
The Yuki clan (雪一族, Yuki Ichizoku) lived in the Land of Water. Some time ago, the country was in the midst of a civil war. In this war, different sides battled each other using ninja, some of whom possessed kekkei genkai. After the war ended, memories of the horrific battles still lingered in the minds of the people, causing wide-spread persecutions against those with kekkei genkai. Because of this, the Yuki clan, whose members carried the Ice Release kekkei genkai went into hiding.




Village: Free Lands
Title Rank: Akatsuki
Skill Rank: S




Skill Specialty:
Main: Ninjutsu,
Sub: Genjutsu
Tertiary: Fuuinjutsu

Elemental Affinity:
Main: Water
Sub: Wind
Tertiary: Ice

Special Characteristics:
Name: Evasive Shadow
Rank: Elite
Description:
Evasive Shadow: 30% more faster reaction time. Allowing him to keep up with even the quickest of Ninja in the same rank.


Name:Falling Mortality
Rank: Super
Description:
Has 15% Less Chakra than Shinobi of the same Rank,

Name: Under pressure
Rank:Super
Description: His physical strength is 15% lower than that of shinobi of the same rank.




Standard Tools
10 Scrolls
2 Solider Pills
10 Shuriken
10 Kunai
3 rolls of bandages
Two weeks supply of food in scroll
3 Water bottles.
2 Ear buds


Name: Armor of Nothing
Amount: (How many of this weapon you have.)
Appearance:
Rank: S
Special Abilities: It simply produces a barrier of chakra, that renders the effects of chakra abilities ineffective upon Omoi from weapons. Meaning the harmful effects of chakra ability weapon do not apply to Omoi, while he is wearing the armor. However the barrier requires chakra to be activated one post before the barrier is produced. When it's not in use it takes the form of a wrist watch. The armor is very flexible, and easy to move around in.

Origin: It was created by himself with good old fashioned wits, and sealing jutsu

Name: Elemental Affinity Pill
Amount: 8
Appearance: They look like star burst.
Rank: B
Special Abilities: When eaten this pills will increase the power of or damage output of the user for the next four post by 15 percent. When the duration of the four post have passed the recoil effect will kick in weakening his elements used during the by the same amount.
Origin: Made it himself.

Name: Flames of the Underworld
Amount: 20 (per battle)
Appearance: Until chakra is poured into them they take the shapes of many metallic silver beads that are 2 1/2 inches. The chakra used inside holds the napalm inside, Once a small amount of chakra is palced it inside it is ready to use.
Rank: A
Special Abilities: When thrown it releases the deadly incendiary. Called napalm. The Range of the napalm's raidus per bead/balls is 10 meters wide.
Origin: He invented it

Name: Seven Star Shuriken 8 Kunai
Amount: 20
Apperance:Like a regular shuriken with each tip having a small kanji sealed upon it
Rank:A
Special Abilities: This is specifically used witht he Lion Closing Roar Jutsu
Origin: Average Shinobi Tools with fuinjutsu placed upon them



Name: (Name of jutsu)
Rank: (E,D,C,B,A,S)
Type: (Ninjutsu, Weaponry, Genjutsu, Kenjutsu, Taijutsu, etc.)
Element: (Lightning, Wind, Earth, Water, Fire)
Range: (Optional for cannon jutsu.)
Description: (About a paragraph describing your jutsu)



Name: Goro
Nickname:
Age: 500+
Rank: S
Species: Shokan
Appearance:
Height:12'2
Weight:945 LBS
Personality: Goro is a powerful fighter, who takes pride in himself. He can sometimes seem over confident, do to his size, and physical strength. However Goro isn't a brute, he is fairly easy to talk to and can even have a decent conversation with him. He is also fairly intelligent, but as stated before his overconfidence and cockiness can hide this.
Background:
Spoiler:


Name: Earth Spear
Type: [Ninjutsu,
Rank: B
Element: Earth
Description: The user flows chakra through all parts of their body causing it to become noticeably darker, which increases their defensive power to its utmost limits by making the skin as hard as diamond. Furthermore, the destructive power of physical attacks is increased, making this a great all-purpose technique. The amount of techniques that can break through the areas hardened by the Earth Spear are close to zero, excluding its undeniable weak point: Lightning Release ninjutsu.

Name: Double Suicide Decapitation Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: D
Element:Earth
Description: This technique conceals the user underground and drags the object of their attack down into the earth, robbing them of their freedom. In addition, they can start another attack.

Name: Hiding Like a Mole Technique
Type: Ninjutsu,
Rank: C
Element: Earth
Description: This technique changes earth into fine sand by channelling chakra into it, allowing the user to dig through it like a mole. This effect goes around the body (not just the hands), making it just large enough for a person to move through. The user can pinpoint where they are, despite being underground, by sensing the magnetic forces. They can also sense what is happening on the surface and use that information to launch a surprise attack on the enemy.[2][3][4] One can also hide deep in the ground, escaping to a depth where the enemy can't reach. It also appears that after digging, the ground can be returned to its original state, leaving no trace of where the user entered the earth.

Name: Earth Style Wall
Type: Ninjutsu,
Rank: B
Element: Earth
Description: he user creates a solid wall of earth as a form of defence. Chakra is either converted to earth within the body and then spat out to form the wall or the user can manipulate pre-existing earth to form the wall. The earth then instantly rises up and takes form. The barrier itself is also coated with chakra, making its strength incomparable to that of a normal mud wall. Because of the earth's special characteristics, the wall is highly resistant against, for instance, fire and water. Also, for a Kage-class shinobi it is possible to create a vast volume of earth.

Name: Swamp of Underworld
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Element: Earth
Description: By changing the surface of an object beneath an enemy into mud and creating a swamp, the user can sink his enemy into the mud. The adhesive, chakra-infused mud ensnares the enemy's body, making it almost impossible to recover one's strength and escape from the swamp. The size and depth of the created swamp depends on the user's skill and the amount of chakra used, but if the user is an expert in this technique, it will always be possible to make a fair-sized swamp which is extremely effective against a great number of enemies or when having to face gigantic creatures

Name: Earth Prison Dome of Magnificent Nothingness
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Element: Earth
Description: This technique traps the victims inside a self-repairing dome of earth which is almost instantaneously able to reform. However if the chakra is not evenly distributed it is possible to leave a weak spot inside of the dome.

Name: Earth Mausoleum Dumpling
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank:B
Element: Earth
Description: With chakra work and superhuman strength, Jirōbō lifts up the very surface of the Earth. The lump of earth is gigantic and the destructive power is obvious. But even just the visual impact can be enough to make enemies lose their fighting spirits and run away. The ball of earth is then hurled at his opponent, flattening everything in its path.


Name: Golem Technqiue
Type:Ninjutsu
Rank: S
Element: [Earth
Description: This technique allows the user to create a large, humanoid creature composed of rock that can either be expelled from the user's mouth or formed from a nearby, pre-existing source of earth.[1]

The size of the golem differs depending on use, but it always possesses an ample amount of brute strength, being able to bite and tear through a an enemy with ease, using just its mouth and hands respectively.[2] It is also very durable, as it was left almost completely intact after being hit by a powerful explosion, detonating at point-blank range.[3] This makes the golem ideal whether it be serving as additional support or simply as a mobile shield.


Name: Kintaro
Nickname:
Age: 500+
Rank: S
Species: Shokan
Appearance:
Height 12'5
Weight 989
Personality: Kintaro has a very violent nature and is very short tempered. Unlike his brethren, Kintaro hails from a subspecies specializing in savagery. He rarely speaks and normally displays his anger and power through loud roars.
Background:
Spoiler:


Name: Ash Pile Burning
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Element: Fire
Description:he user spews a stream of chakra infused gun-powder from their mouth, which surrounds the region. As the gunpowder is composed entirely of ash, it stays in the air around the victim like a cloud, which can be used like a smokescreen. After surrounding the enemy with the ash, the user can ignite it with a flint placed on their teeth beforehand to create a spark, resulting in a violent explosion, burning the enemy. However, this technique requires keen senses to read the air currents, the insight to read the movements of the enemy, the tactical experience to not also enfold one's allies in the flames, and careful attention for the timing of the ignition.

Name:Great Dragon Fire Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Element: Fire
Description: The user compresses a large amount of chakra built up inside their body and changes it into a dragon head-shaped fireball. The user then skilfully manipulates that great fire, and attacks their opponent. Even outside of the attack range, its power and reliability are stressed. The flames have a high temperature, as they can create an upward movement of air currents which in turn can give rise to thunder clouds. A master of this technique can fire off several flames in succession and anyone caught in the technique could potentially be reduced to ashes.

Name: Exploding Flame Shot
Type: Ninjutsu,
Rank:A
Element:Fire
Description: creating a spark from their hands, this technique allows the user to throw multiple balls of flames, which are able to either c Byause fiery explosions on impact or set the target on fire.

Name: Nova Roar
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: S
Element: Fire
Description: Kintaro Releases a powerful chakra infused roar which is capable of knocking down or knocking down the opponent. One the opponent is knocked down the flames will soon follow producing 4th degree burns. This attack ranges from short to mid range.

Name:Hissori (PET, not a summon)
Nickname:
Age: 2 1/2
Rank: A
Species: Bird
Appearance:
Personality: Hissori never runs to far from Omoi unless Omoi tell him to hide or go deliver a message. He is fond of sunflower seeeds, and likes to move freely throught the skies when he isn't sitting upon Omoi's shoulder
Background: [How did you meet your Pet? How did the bond form? -OPTIONAL-

Jutsu's:

Name: Sky Breaker
Type: Taijutsu, Chakra Flow
Rank: A
Description:Hissori surrounds himself in a sphere of chakra, and takes off to the sky. This can also be used as an attack to crash into an enemy, but more often then not it's a used to help increase the speed he flies to deliver the message.

Name:
Temple of Nirvana Technique
Type: Genutsu
Rank: A
Description: A powerful genjutsu that generates a fluttering rain of sleep-inducing, illusory white feathers. Whomever sees them as they fall, piling up and covering the whole target area will experience Eden-like bliss and fall into a state of tranquil slumber. No matter how much one resists the hypnotic spell, the desire to sleep is instinctive, and there's no fighting it. However, an experienced shinobi will be able to dispel the genjutsu before it takes effect.




History:
Early Life.
Omoi's life was fairly well. His family was middle class nothing above well off, but definitely enough for them go to get by and more. His father was a shinobi who was often off upon missions, while his mother was a house wife, who also aided at the village hospital. When Omoi became of age at 6 he decided to follow in his father's footsteps. He entered the Academy proving to do well, but not well enough. it wasn't until he received help from both his old man and his fellow leaf peers would he graduate to the rank of Genin at age Nine. That same year Omoi would begin training himself, and preparing saving his money, as the years grew closer and closer to the chunin exam. Omoi trained very hard during the day before the completion, but unfortunately he had over worked himself, and fell asleep early on. Making it impossible for him to even awake for the completion. Thus rendering him unable to take mantle of genin. The next year however Omoi had completed his training a week before the tournament allowing his body to rest. He would preform well, and making his father and mother proud to call him their son and a chunin. Omoi was now 11 years old, and had had begun building up income from his ninja missions. At the time Omoi younger siblings were aging behind him swiftly. With three girls and two boys. Omoi did his best to set the example and fill the roll of a big brother. However when he turned 14 some Ninja from inside the village had a dispute with some other ninja and a large battle resulted between the two family clans. With his father away once again Omoi bolted into action trying his best to help his village. However his home had caught on fire. Doing what he could, Omoi had saved his brothers, his birth giver. Seeing that he was in his ninja uniform the a jounin from one of the attack clans was blinded with rage, and attempted to attack him and his family. knowing he was no match Omoi rushed his family to safety, however he had been hit serval times with Kunai inside of his back. He pushed the raft out into ocean while attempting to reach for his mother's hand that maybe she would save him, she instead turned her back on him in order to comfort his brothers and sisters. She ignored his cries of agony, and cries for help, as he began to drown in tide. His life had begun to slip away into the darkness.

A week later Omoi had awoken inside the Kirigakure hospital. He asked what of his brothers and sisters, they simply told him they had vanished. His father had also seemed to vanish with them, and Omoi had begun to live the life of a true shinobi, but felt the pain of knowing his mother choose to leave him dead over the life of his brothers and sisters. He then had begun to live with the ideal that no one is going to protect you or aid you, and that if you truly want to live you must live to protect yourself with your own power. As others do not value your life, they only value their own. So Omoi had determined to strengthen himself into something strong, fearless and intelligent. He quickly ascended towards the ladder of Jounin as he captured two jounin on his own who were fleeing after their failed attempt of the Mizukage. He continued his service until he had heard word that his father had been captured by an enemy village. He had heard news of this and attempted to ask his village for assistance and retrieving this one man, but the Elders of the Village, and the Mizukage could not risk an era of peace for the sake of one man. Omoi told them he would go in alone to rescue his father, but they forbid him. stating coldly that if he were the leave the village against their order to save his father,he would be marked as a traitor, and hunted as such. Omoi left the village immediately with the hunter nin hot on his tail, He attempted to find his pops, but the one he called father was again no where to be found. He had been set up by somone, but now he was a missing nin on the run with them wanting his head on a pike. Every Hunternin they countinued to send after him swiftly fell one after another. Making his body count of the Kiri Anbu 40-0. Soon the Black Angel vanished off the radar living his life under the service of a cooperation whose whole plans would help his sole goals and ambitions. Might, and the will of the Living. Omoi had joined the Akatsuki .


RP Sample:
The four hundred scarlet flares began to waltz wildly, and untamed as it it gave birth to light in the darkness. The Hokage was one with this darkness, as he was alone in a room which held no illumination, but that of the candles. This dim-lighted room was voluminous, making it's existence well over three hundred meters, and Hazama sat in the middle of this ivory chamber that held nothing but himself candles. The riverbed beneath him was made from the very trees of Konoha's lands themselves. They were a deep wood brown, with a slightly tint of crimson that glistened from the refection of the flames. It took Eighteen hands to polish this wood each day, and Hazama's hands were one of those that gave aid to this task. Even though he was a Hokage he firmly believed he should dally a function in this endeavor. There where a total of two exits in this chamber, one being a sliding screen door at the end of three hundred meters, and the other being it's opposing analogous at the omega of the room. Seven Foot, Eleven Inched human ascended to his legs, with his fingers engaging in polka. He optics began to skeet, and he he went into a temporary hiatus before unlatching his eyelids. His facial expression hadn't changed, but his eyes... his eyes went through a metamorphosis which his akin called the White Evil Eye. His face now branded and laced with vascular tubular blood vessels that began branching around his visage. His tongue slithered around his bottom lip, leaving a very thin coating of saliva.

Hazama erected his arm forward with it's palm unobstructed, his left arm bending at his side at a ninety degree angle. His solar plexus began to constrict as he began to absorb zephyr through his nasal and mouth. He raised his right leg and took a slight onward slamming it into the foundation. The audio melody popped generating enough sound to pop ones ears, His body moved in harmony as he simultaneously expelling a large burst of fuuton chakra. The Hyuuga's mass would then recoil fifteen meters opposite from where he previously held his anatomy. Before his anatomy even finished migrating backwards, Hazama had already crouched his brute with his arms slanted left and right. This stance was very familiar to him, and one of his most prized to employ. A large green circle was deployed beneath him, it's light was fierce and blazing with energy. Hazama began delivering blows to the air as he was simply shadow boxing with another man in the form of a shadow. Each blow made a sharp high-pitched blast with every stab that was made. Hazama's muscle's began to tighten while the bang away continued to drizzle from his abdominal. With his final palm striking upward a burst of moisture ejected from his body as he stood with both fist forward in a thrusting position. The flares had finally given out, and whisk of each candle head was no more, but a crippled string. There was no more light in the darkness, the creators of light had forsaken Hazama, and thus his enlightenment was gone, and over.

The seven foot ten lockets of hair were wet, and waving from side to side as Hazama transcended towards his domain of living. Hazama himself had been a training for six days and six nights without proper rest the shinobi was slightly exasperated, and his next assignment was a shower, and possibly a good nights rest unless fate itself had other plans for today. Hazama shut the door to his personal Dojo behind him, and took a gaze around his village viewing his people and the land he was to protect. He stood erect holding his position watching attempting to watch everyone in in with his eyes.
(I don't type like this all the time, but it's one I thought I did pretty good at)


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Re: Omoi (Done Done Done!)

Post by Kousuke on Thu Aug 02, 2012 6:15 am

GENJUTSU
Spoiler:
Name: Strength of Many
Rank: A
Type: Genjutsu
Range: Optical.
Description: Once an enemy has laid eyes on him Omoi must perform a handsign once that is done twenty clone will appear and attempt to engage the enemy in combat. This is often used as a diversionary tactic. When hit the clone will continue to multiply.

Name:Run
Rank: B
Type: Genjutsu
Range: Optical
Description: Omoi will begin running the opposite way from the enemy opponent. However if they see him running they are already caught in the genjutsu. As he isn't really there. During this time he can reposition himself behind the enemy to land a sneak attack from the rear.

Name: Precious
Rank: A
Type: Genjutsu,
Range: Optical
Description: Omoi simply points to an object, and if the opponent happens to view the object, the opponent will become increasingly unstable to the object attempting to hold on to he very object for dear life, as if they are possessed by the object itself. For the next two post this person will hold tight object.

Name:The smell of fear
Rank: A
Type: Genjutsu,
Range: The Gas Raidus is 20 meters
Description: Releases a airborn grey gas from a black canister , With it, he can cause his victims' worst fear come to life. He can also cause a person to fear something they didn't before. Allowing him to find out the weakness of his opponents or to simply make them unable to preform basic actions such as walking or speaking. Instead they will stutter or piss themselves. In this wolrd Omoi can be extremely versatile. This last for 3 post

Name: Reality Check
Rank: S
Type:Genjutsu, Fuinjutsu
Range:Verbally
Description: One of Omoi's most powerful genjutsu. It is used often to set up for other genjutsu, and is often one of the easiest to employ. By throwing a kunai with a fuinjutsu sealed upon it. If the opponent looks that the kunai the genjutsu will begin. The genjutsu automatically triggers as it has activated with the slightest glance. Putting the Victim's mind inside an exact replica of what is going on. Nothing changes, and it's nearly impossible to tell that they are under the effect of a genjutsu unless they themselves are genjutsu experts. Once they are in this world everything that happens from now on does really happen in the real world. There is a battle of the mind. Think of it like the matrix machine one hooks up to fight the Agents. What happens there can effect them in reality as brain registers it to be real. When they are inside of this genjutsu their real body is stunned, and they are unable to move it.\They may break this genjutsu by asking the same question to Omoi himself or until someone else frees them from this genjutsu.If the opponent dies in the genjutsu mind battle they will die in real life as their body believes it to be dead so the brain will shut down. However the other genjutsu that took place inside the battle of the mind are still effective meaning they would also have to break out of those.


Name: One and the Same
Rank: A
Type: Genjutsu
Range: Optical
Description: A replica of his opponent will be formed, and the replica will fight by Omoi's side. However the unique thing about this genjutsu is it acts like a Voodoo Doll. Any damage the replica receives his opponent will fill it as well or believe he is receiving the damage as well. Meaning even if the opponent hits the replica they will still fill the pain, and force of the attack placed upon themselves. The only way to break this genjutsu is to inflict pain upon themselves, this is when it will end.

Name: Demonic Illusion - Ice Mist
Rank:A
Type:Genjutsu
Element: Ice
Range:Optical.
Description: This genjutsu is unusual to the clan, because its an illusion. Certain practitioners can use their nature to project a chill through out their body to the opponent to be enveloped in a freezing haze. While in this haze, the user will "create" three clones made of ice to attack the opponent endlessly and relentlessly. This will allow the clan member to hide behind the images to give significant damage while the target believes they are fighting three opponents, making them hallucinate and hit nothing but air, if the go for the wrong illusion clone. This is best used with ranged attacks like Kunai, Shuriken. This triggered by looking at his waiste and uph This genjutsu last for 4 post

Name: Demonic Ice Crystal Vision
Rank:A
Type: Ninjutsu-Genjutsu
Element: Ice
Range: Optical
Description;
A powerful genjutsu. The user first creates a giant ice mirror, then uses a few handsigns, activating the mirror. If an opponent even so much as glances into the mirror, they are caught by the genjutsu. They will see shadows begin to form in the mirror, before they shoot out and seem to drag them through the mirror into a frozen wasteland, while in reality, they are just standing still and staring into the mirror. In the wasteland, the opponent will be beset upon by attackers that just wont die. These attackers are usually people the person knows or had known, such as loved ones and friends, anyone they have ever felt that they may have let down or betrayed, or people they have lost or killed. While it is difficult to break free from within the genjutsu, if a teammate is with the opponent all they would have to do is shatter the mirror to break it. As of all genjutsu, it can be kai'd out of if the user realizes they are in a genjutsu. This genjutsu last for 3 post

Name: Desire of Passion
Rank: B
Type: Genjutsu
Range: Optical
Description: If someone looks at him,the genjutsu allows him to input sexual images inside of the users mind. They will become uncontrollably sexually attracted to him. Their hormones will rage, and with in seconds they will have an organism. Omoi uses this to make the unwilling willing. However, it is possible that Omoi can make them forget the sex ever happened, depending on his mood. This genjutsu last for 3 post. Until broken

Fuinjutsu
Spoiler:
Divine Ice Box# 6
Type: Fuinjutsu
Rank: B-S
Element: Ice
Omoi creates a string of Handsigns and Prouduces A large light blue rectangle whenever the target is in range. Whatever is locked inside the ice box will soon be frozen completely in a matter of moments. Omoi is the only one who may leave & enter at will. The only ways to break this is simultaneously attacking the inside & outside of the barrier, or using a fuinjutsu breaking jutsu of equal rank. Another way to escape the barrier is by hitting all five walls of the box at exactly the same time. An A Rank Katon may also help release them from the barrier, However Taijutsu isn't the way to go unless they want to be stuck.
The fuinjutsu triggers when an enemy enters a specific range.
B-rank 15 Meters
A-rank 30 Meters
S.-rank 45 Meters

B-Rank 1 post Before Death. AOE 30 yrds
A-Rank 2 post before Death. AOE 45 yrds
S- Rank 3 post before Death. AOE 55 yrds

Name:No Man's Land
Rank:A
Element:Ice
Type:Fuinjutsu
Range: Mid
Description:
Omoi peforms a string of handsigns and claps his hands preforming a jutsu that requires knowledge of fuinjutsu. By doing this Sen creates a type of land mine effect around a certian area. Once the enemy enters the range of a certain area they will be in immediate danger of being impaled by serveral large ice spikes (20 meters large) which produce from the ground spreading rapidly, and striking swiftly. Sen may trigger the effect himself if he pleases.

This justu activates when an enemy enters the range of the jutsu which is 35 meters. The jutsu has an AOE Range of 45 meters.

Name: Fuinjutsu Breaker
Rank:A
Element:None
Type:Funijutsu
Range:Short
Description:Rakka has created a fuinjutsu that is capable of restraining, and lowering the effects of fuinjutsu placed upon his body directly

Name:Divine Armor
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu, Fuinjutsu
Element: Ice
Range: Self
Description:Omoi has placed a fuinjutsu seal on the back of his neck. This fuinjutsu will activate automatically as a last line of defense. Protecting him from A and Below. This jutsu last for 1 post and has a cooldown of 4 post. The fuinjutsu encases Omoi in a very goregous sheet of iced armor, making him appear as a night of such. There are no blind spots or loop hones in the armor. This jutsu offers no upgrades to speed or strength, but it does however absorb the damage and turn it into chakra reserves. This doesn't protect from genjutsu, or fuinjutsu but is very formidable against ninjutsu, taijutsu and genjutsu.

Name: Combat Seal of Chakra Suppression
Rank: B
Type: Fuinjutsu
Description: Omoi has created a fuinjutsu that can be places upon an object wether it is a clone or an item or a person. Whatever the seal comes in contact with. It will suppress 25% of the total chakra supply of whatever it came in contact with. It doesn't absorb chakra nor does it work on external jutsu. It simply puts a limit cap, upon the victim.

Name:Seal of Contact
Rank: A
Type: Fuinjutsu
Description:
Omoi had created a fuinjutus that allows him to track, and monitor the target, while also acting as a two way form of communication if he ever needs to speak to the target.

Name:Seal of Forbidden Memories
Rank:A
Type Fuinjutsu
Description: This fuinjutsu allows a complete memory wipe of the target. Ranging form the last 30 seconds to the last 48 hours. However physical contact must be made with the target to become active.

Name:Seal of Reduction
Rank:B
Type: Fuinjutsu
Description: Omoi has made a seal that he can place on himself or an object. During this time it is capable of holding back attacks from up to B rank. It activates Automatically, and it helps nerfing incoming damage or blocking damage of B and below.

Name:Sealing Teching of:Lion Closing Roar
Rank:A
Type: Fuinjutsu
Description:This sealing technique completely blocks the target's chakra with a sealing formula (封印式, fūin-shiki) drawn on the ground or a wall. This is done by closing all the tenketsu of the person caught in the middle. When the target is sealed, a stylised kanji for "close" or "shut" (閉, hei) appears in the middle of the sealing formula.

To successfully seal the target, one has to get them exactly inside the sealing formula. This requires great accuracy and is very difficult. Various methods can be used to make this easier. For instance, one can prepare a puppet or a ninja tool like the Lion-Headed Kannon with this sealing formula.

Name: Combat Seal of Destruction
Rank: B
Type: Fuinjutsu
Description: Omoi places chakra into an object and produces an explosive charge inside of it which may be detonated mentally at his whim. This can't be used on person only upon inanimate objects. The force is equivalent to an explosive tag and ranges up to 10 meters.


Name: Combat Seal of Stealth
Rank: B
Type: Fuinjutsu
Description: Omoi places a barrier around the target of this fuinjutsu and for the next four post the object or target's presence will be completely sealed. This jutsu is variant of Hidden camouflage techniuqe.

Name: Scroll of Solitude
Rank: B
Type: Fuinjutsu
Description: Omoi seals himself inside of a scroll which allows him to remain hidden or to travel unharmed as there is usually a shadow clone in his place or he can be handed off to a person

Name: Combat Seal of Rest
Rank: B
Type: Fuinjutsu
Description: Is capable of storing some of his chakra in an object, or another person so he may use it later if necessary. Such as if he were to have most of his chakra absorbed, he could simply retrieve it from the seal. Making it great for self survival.

Name: Combat Seal of Pain & Emotion
Rank: B
Type: Fuinjutsu
Description: Omoi has created a combat seal that truly helps the cowards, or the pain go away. When applied to a certain being their body feels no pain no emotion that isn't battle specific. As a fail-safe Omoi can either make it the seal fully aggressive or lapse into fear.

NINJUTSU
Spoiler:
Name:Secert Technique:Divine Sphere
Rank:A
Element:Ice
Type:Ninjutsu
Range:Long (70+ Meters)
Description:Omoi preforms a circle with either one hand or both to make an even larger circle. The Yuki clan ninja will then preform a single handsign, and producing a large swirling orb infront of him or in the palm of his hand. he will then release the sphere(s) forward with great velocity. The orb looks similar to a misty type of fog, but whatever the large sphere hits will instantly begin to freeze immediately, anything with chakra of A rank may cancel this out.

Name:Ice Release:Shadow Clone
Rank:B
Element:Ice
Type:Ninjutsu
Range:All Ranges
Description: This technique allows the user to make a shadow clone infused with Ice. Because it is a shadow clone, it is able to perform techniques and interact with the environment due to it having physical substance; and also evenly distributes the user's chakra to each clone. If the clone is injured, it will explode releasing a blue liquid similar to liquid nitrogen. Whatever the large mass of liquid hits will freeze it instantly.

Divine Shuriken # 5
Type: Nin
Element: Ice
Begins creating mutiple 12 inch snow flake shaped blades that float around his anatomy do to it's light weight and manipulation of Ice Release. Each blade is composed of ice, with the sharpness of a regular shuriken, or kunai blade, but with density of ice release. These blades can be moved mentally to fit his needs range and formation and flow. These bladeds flow around the user constantly. When an attack hits the snow flake it will release an ice liquid (like Nitrogen) like explosion with a range of 10 meters. [Note, these can also be detonated by Omoi mentally, or by physical handsigns.] Whatever the liquid lands on will immediately begin to be covered in solid ice. This technique can be used for offensive, and defennsive purposes.
D- 5 Shurikens
C- 15 Shurikens
B- 20 Shurikens
A- 35 Shurikens


Name: Water Whip
Rank:C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Range: Short-Mid
Description: The user creates a whip made of water that can wrap around the opponent. The user can also channel lightning chakra to shock anyone wrapped in it. This technique seems to be known by the Kirigakure hunter-nin.

Name: Hidden Mist Jutsu
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Range: All Ranges
Description: This displacement technique is a speciality of the ninja from Kirigakure, where one causes a mist to spring forth by lifting up some water from either a pre-existing source or expelled from their mouth,[2] then goes in and out of sight at will from within the pearly-white realm. The mist's thickness is controlled by the amount of chakra kneaded into it. It can't fool the Byakugan, but, due to the mist being created with the user's chakra, any Sharingan and Rinnegan-user will see the mist coloured by their opponent's chakra, which will effectively hide the user from the dōjutsu.

Name: Water Prision Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Range: short
Description:This technique is used to trap a victim inside a virtually inescapable sphere of water. The only downside to this technique is that the user must keep at least one arm inside the sphere at all times in order for the victim to remain imprisoned. This technique requires a sufficient amount of water, which can be provided by expelling it from one's mouth.[2] Despite the fact that the prison is made up entirely out of water, it is stronger than steel as stated by Zabuza Momochi. Once trapped the target is unable to move while within it due to the heaviness of the water. Because of the density of the water it can be used, to a limited extent, for defensive purposes if performed on oneself.[2] It can also be stored in scrolls as traps.[3]

Water clones can be used in preparation for the technique, which block an opponent's attack and trap the attacker in the prison using the clone's own water.[4] Neji Hyūga was able to use his ability to release chakra from all of his tenketsu simultaneously to disrupt the flow of chakra and break the prison.

Name: Water Clone Techniuqe
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu,
Element:Water
Range: (Optional for cannon jutsu.)
Description: The Water Clone Technique is similar to the Shadow Clone Technique except it creates clones out of water that have one-tenth of the original person's power.[2] Like other solid clone techniques, the clones can be used to perform tasks the user is unable or unwilling to do for themselves. The range of the clone is limited however, as it can not travel very far from the original body without losing control. Like other clone techniques, if the water clones are injured enough they will revert back to normal water.

Name: Rain Tiger at Will
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu,
Element: Water
Range: (Optional for cannon jutsu.)
Description: A perception ninjutsu, allowing one to freely manipulate rain infused with the user's own chakra. The rain falls from rain clouds, formed with Omoi's own chakra. During this technique, the falling raindrops are closely linked to Omoi's senses. When the rain is obstructed by a chakra belonging to someone not of the area , the existence of the intruder can be detected. [Requires c-rank chakra to maintain] This requires an A rank chakra if used to cover an area eqivulant to the size of a village.

Name: Secert Techniuqe Mist: Rain
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element:Water
Range: (Optional for cannon jutsu.)
Description: A technique known by a Kirigakure hunter-nin, the user makes rain which eats up any chakra when it comes in contact with that is not of the same signature as the original user. During this time the user can't preform Ninjutsu.

Name: Demonic Ice Mirrors
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element:
Range: (Optional for cannon jutsu.)
Description: The abominable and tremendous ability, passed down only within the Yuki clan. The "Kekkei Genkai: Demonic Mirroring Ice Crystals" is a technique wrapped up in many mysteries. It was said that no method in existence can defeat this technique. In an instant, multiple mirrors of ice are created around the enemy, reflecting nothing but Omoi . The opponent is trapped in a dome of twenty-one floating mirrors made out of ice. Twelve remain at ground level, eight float above the first twelve and angled toward the ground, and the final mirror is above the rest and facing the ground. Once Omoi has entered the mirrors, it's possible for him to move between the mirrors at the speed of light. It's near impossible to follow attacks send out from this incredible movement. As every mirror shows his reflection, one could say it's impossible to see all of Omoi's attacks. Even if the opponent tries to attack the real body, Omoi will have already moved to another mirror.[1] Without eyes like the Sharingan, it will be impossible to keep track of him.

If the mirror Omoi is in is broken, he can leap out of one of the fragments and continue his attack or move to another mirror. The technique requires a large amount of chakra to maintain, so Omoi's movement becomes progressively slower the longer he maintains the mirrors.[2]

Omoi can also form individual mirrors, not restricted to the twenty-one-mirror formation. He can create them high in the sky allowing him to take out airborne targets. The cold which emanates from the mirrors is also enough to cause snow to fall.[3] Though they are made from ice, the mirrors are resistant to Fire Release techniques

Name: Protective Ice Dome
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Range: (Optional for cannon jutsu.)
Description:The User can quickly create an ice dome around his allies and himself to act as a defence. It is strong enough to withstand the assault of many explosive tags at once, remaining almost undamaged.

Name:Water Shark Bullet
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Range: (Optional for cannon jutsu.)
Description: The user shapes water into the form of a large shark and thrusting their hand forward, sends it hurtling towards the opponent at high-speeds, resulting in a powerful impact.[2][3] The user can also ride inside the water shark to dramatically increase their swimming speed.[3]

Name:Five Feeding Sharks
Rank:B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Range: (Optional for cannon jutsu.)
Description: The user puts his hand on the surface of a body of water and from the tips of five fingers, chakra is released into the water, changing it into the form of five ferocious sharks. The sharks circle the target with high speed, creating a raging stream that takes away their prey's freedom of movement and their sharp teeth tear into the enemy with each consecutive attack. In the anime, these sharks can regenerate from surrounding water, making them difficult to destroy.

Name: A Thousand Feeding Sharks
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Range: (Optional for cannon jutsu.)
Description: A much more powerful version of the Water Release: Five Feeding Sharks, the user creates one thousand sharks out of water that enter into a wall formation and rain down to attack the opponent.

Name: Black Rain
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element:Water
Range: (Optional for cannon jutsu.)
Description: This jutsu creates a flammable black mist that forms a small cloud. The user can then move the cloud above their target and disperse it, covering the target in flammable oil. This jutsu was first used to burn down Idate Morino's boat, after it was lit with fire.

Name: Hiding in Water Techniuqe
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Range: (Optional for cannon jutsu.)
Description: The user blends in with water to be undetected by the enemy, similar to the Earth Release: Hiding in Rock Technique. It was shown that this technique is usable even in water as shallow as a puddle, as seen when the Demon Brothers used it to ambush Tazuna and his bodyguards.

Name:Vacuum Sphere
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element:Wind
Range: (Optional for cannon jutsu.)
Description: The user takes a deep breath and then exhales several small blasts of wind chakra in such a manner that they are dispersed over an expansive range, enough to make it difficult to avoid them entirely without taking any damage. Due to the properties of this technique, the expelled blasts are capable of piercing into and potentially through an opponent's flesh when they collide, in a similar manner to how bullets function. )

Name: Great Vacuum Sphere
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wind
Description: A stronger version of the Wind Release: Vacuum Sphere technique, where the user instead chooses to compress the entirety of the previously inhaled breath into a single large, crushing sphere of wind chakra that they then proceed to expel from their mouth.

Name: Vacuum Blade
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wind
Range: (Optional for cannon jutsu.)
Description: The user exhales wind-infused chakra onto a weapon in order to increase its sharpness, range and lethality. For example, the user can infuse a kunai to resemble a makeshift scimitar or infuse shuriken to increase their range and cutting power.

Name: Temporary Paralysis Technique
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: (Optional for cannon jutsu.)
Description: A technique that physically restrains an opponent, as if the opponent had been tied in invisible steel ropes. It debilitates the victim for a short period of time, which allows the user to either strike again, or take the target into custody. This is a D-rank ninjutsu where the intensity will vary greatly according to the user's level of skill. The technique can also be cast on every target at once, depending on the user's skill, and won't fail a shinobi during his missions.

Name: Extreme Starch Syrup Capturing Field
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Range: 25 meters
Description: The user spits out high-viscosity, chakra infused water, aimed at a surface of wide scope. This is a stream of sticky liquid which can be used to form an adhesive trap that can inhibit a person's mobility. One can effectively reduce their enemy's area of activity with this technique, and has the effect of being able to take complete control over the battlefield. The normal scope of this technique is normally just a few metres, but if prepared, it is also possible to make an entire pond of starch syrup. Being caught in the technique can be avoided by channelling chakra to one's feet allowing one to walk upon it uninhibited, beforehand. However who ever steps into this field will slowly have their chakra drained.

Name: A Thousand Flying Water Needles of Death
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu,
Element: Water
Range: (Optional for cannon jutsu.)
Description: Using this technique, User gathers some water from the air and surrounding environment into one thousand long needles. He then directs them to a specific target at high speed, leaping backwards before impact so he doesn't get caught in the crossfire. While the needles do surround a target from all sides, they don't appear above the target, creating an escape route. Omoi is able to perform this jutsu with one-handed seals, allowing him to pin an opponent's arm and attack while they cannot use any techniques themselves.

Name: Portable Water Field
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu,
Element:Water
Range: (Optional for cannon jutsu.)
Description: opens a scroll and lays it on the ground. He then performs the required hand seals and then taps his foot in the middle of the scroll, which summons a large amount of water that covers a wide area which, with the right timing, can be used with a Lightning Release technique.

Name: Kuchiyose no Jutsu (Summoning Jutsu)
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: N/A
Range: Where palm hits ground
Description: A jutsu that allows the user to summon objects, but more commonly, animals and summons to his location to fight with him or for a variety of other uses. The user must first sign a summoning contract with an animal that they wish to summon, and can only have one summoning contract at a time.

Name:Hidden with Camouflage Technique
Rank:A
Type:Ninjutsu
Range:
Description:This is a ninja escape technique that allows the user to control how light is reflected around their body with chakra inflections. The technique also erases the user's scent and shadow, and is usable on any terrain, making it ideal not only for covert maneuvers but also offensive strikes. Perceiving the user's position is possible only for ninja who are astute enough to observe minute variations within their surrounding environment, such as distortions of air currents in the immediate vicinity or distinguishing sounds, i.e. footsteps etc. The usefulness of this ability can be entirely negated by those with special vision or sensory skills, except for particularly adept users, who can completely erase even their chakra signature with it

Name: Winter Rapture
Rank:A
Type:Ninjutsu
Range: 30 meters

Description: The user preforms a string of handsigns, and makes the skies rain down droplest of ice chakra infused water. Whatever the rain falls upon will quickly be covered in an extremely thick sheet of ice.

Name:Water Mirror Technique
Rank;A
Type Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Description: The user creates a large, flat, circular pool of water in front of their opponent. Its surface acts like a mirror, perfectly reflecting the attacking targets. By then hooking onto and rotating the 'mirror' 90° with their staff, the reflections emerge and materialise from the mirror, where they collide with the mirrored targets. As these reflections use the exact same techniques as the enemy regardless of its type, they counter their respective target's attack completely, while repelling them in the process. However, upon impact, the reflections disperse back into water.

Name: Shadow Clone
Rank: B
Description: Similar to the Clone Technique, this technique creates clones of the user. However, these clones are actual copies, not illusions. The user's chakra is evenly distributed among every clone, giving each clone an equal fraction of the user's overall power. The clones are capable of performing techniques on their own and can even bleed, but will usually disperse after one or two solid blows. They can also disperse on their own. The clones will be created in roughly the same condition as the original.

Shadow clones can't be distinguished from the actual person even by the Byakugan because the clones have the exact same amount of chakra and aren't made from any other substance

Name:Great Clone Explosion
Rank: A'
Description:
This technique is used to create a shadow clone that can be detonated. The clone looks like a normal shadow clone, which allows the user to get it close to the target without them expecting anything besides a normal attack, or the target might even close in willingly to try to attack the clone. Using multiple tricks and diversionary tactics to disguise the nature of the clone can make this technique more likely to be effective.

Name:Shuriken Shadow
Rank:A
Description:The user creates a thousand shadow clones from one shuriken, striking down the enemy. This is a technique that combines ninja tools with ninjutsu. Compared to normal shadow clones, clones of material objects are said to be on a far higher level. There is no need for preparations beforehand, like stocking up on shuriken, yet since the shadow clones are real and not illusions, all the shadow blades that fly around are equally lethal. Because the clones form in just an instant, completely evading them is next to impossible.

Name: Kuchiyose no Jutsu (Summoning Jutsu)
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: N/A
Range: Where palm hits ground
Description: A jutsu that allows the user to summon objects, but more commonly, animals and summons to his location to fight with him or for a variety of other uses. The user must first sign a summoning contract with an animal that they wish to summon, and can only have one summoning contract at a time.

Academy Jutsu
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Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range:10m away from original place.
Element: N/A
Description: This jutsu lets the user quickly switch places with another nearby object, such as a plant (normally a section of a log), an animal, or even another person within reach, leaving the opponent open to a counter-attack. Explosive tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise. Fundamentally, all ninja know this technique.

Name: Henge no Jutsu
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range:N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This jutsu allows the user to assume the appearance of another person, animal, or object. This is one of the basic jutsu taught at the Konoha Ninja Academy. Fundamentally, all ninja know this jutsu. The transformation jutsu is considered to be among the more difficult E-ranked techniques, since it requires constant emission of chakra while mentally maintaining the form. On top of that, the user would be, most likely, interacting with the environment. This puts much mental strain on the inexperienced ninja.

Name: Bunshin no Jutsu
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range:N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This technique creates intangible copies of the user. The clones are simply illusions and will dissipate when they come into contact with something. The illusions can be seen through by the Byakugan and the Sharingan. A person with normal eyes can also distinguish the clones from the original, since the clones will not disrupt the area around themselves with their movement (won't kick up dust, crush grass, etc.).

Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range:N/A
Element: N/A
Description: A basic jutsu taught at the Konoha Ninja Academy, this jutsu allows a ninja to free themselves if they have been tied up.

Name: Genjutsu Kai
Rank: E-S
Type: Ninjutsu
Range:10m (Genin) 50m (S-Rank)
Element: N/A
Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.

Name: Shunshin no Jutsu
Rank: D
Type: Ninjuts
Element: N/A
Description: This jutsu is a high-speed movement technique, allowing a ninja to move short to long distances at an almost untraceable speed. To an observer, it appears as if the user has teleported. A puff of smoke is occasionally used to disguise the user's movements. It is accomplished by using chakra to temporarily boost the user's reflexes. The amount of chakra required depends on the overall distance between the user and their intended destination.

Name: Kinobori no Waza - Act of Tree Climbing
Rank: N/A
Type: Ninjutsu/Chakra Control
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: Kinobori no Waza, the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. Taking part in Kinobori Shugyou (Tree Climbing Training) helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra. It also teaches the ninja how to run up trees and walk on vertical walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are regarded as the hardest location to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will have any jutsu available (theoretically) because they will be able to focus their chakra as needed.

Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza - Act of Water Surface Walking
Rank: N/A
Type: Ninjutsu/Chakra Control
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: A variation on the Kinobori no Waza (Act of Tree Climbing), the art of water surface walking allows a ninja to walk on water as if it was a solid surface. Focusing an even amount of chakra out of the soles of their feet, they can balance themselves on the very surface of the water.

Name: Ayatsuito no Jutsu - String Reeling Technique
Rank: N/A
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Depends on wire
Element: N/A
Description: Ayatsuito no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing wire. This string can be used in rappeling, or as a method to tie down and restrict the movement of an opponent. The Uchiha clan also utilizes the wire in their Sharingan Soufuusha Sannotachi technique. The wire allows the clan member to pin down an opponent, and then unleash a torrent of fire upon them.

Name: Bikou Ninjutsu - Shadowing Stealth Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 10m away from target
Element: N/A
Description: Bikou Ninjutsu is the technique ninjas use to follow their targets covertly. The manner in which the ninja shadows their target can differ, from the basic hiding under a nearby object, to using a jutsu to turn oneself invisible.


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Re: Omoi (Done Done Done!)

Post by Kaira on Thu Aug 02, 2012 12:59 pm

Name: Rain Tiger at Will
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu,
Element: Water
Range: (Optional for cannon jutsu.)
Description: A perception ninjutsu, allowing one to freely manipulate rain infused with the user's own chakra. The rain falls from rain clouds, formed with Pain's own chakra. During this technique, the falling raindrops are closely linked to Pain's senses. When the rain is obstructed by a chakra belonging to someone not of the village, the existence of the intruder can be detected. The rain will keep on falling until Pain uses the seal to cancel it. Pain made it rain every Sunday in Amegakure, or whenever he had to leave the village.

Remove the canon describtion from this and this technique requires a constant useage of chakra per turn to sustain the jutsu.
Also jutsu is A rank and the sustain cost is C rank chakra
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Post by Nuitari Kouga on Thu Aug 02, 2012 2:39 pm

Name: Fearless
Rank: Average
Description:
Since he has no fear he can often be oblivious to danger, and/or not recognize a threat when brewing.
Personality trait. Remove this.

Name: Double Impact
Rank: (Elite, Super, or Average)
Description: All jutsu do 30% more damage than Ninja of the same rank.
This is elite. Meaning you will need to balance this with the flaws.
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Re: Omoi (Done Done Done!)

Post by Kaira on Thu Aug 02, 2012 3:25 pm

Normal blades and cuts and attacks with still be able to get through the barrier of your amour the only ability it can stop is chakra abilities, the barrier will need a chakra cost to sustain it per post.


It's secondary function allows him to be stealted from sensory. He makes no sound, or breathing or heat comes from his , and everything about him is complete erased from existence, unless that person has a doujutsu that allows other wise. does this make you invisable as well


Name: Spiders of the Underworld
Amount: 20 (per battle)
Appearance: Until chakra is poured into them they take the shapes of many metallic silver beads that are 2 1/2 cm. Inside the center is a small purple dot which actually carries liquid.
Rank: A
Special Abilities:Once they are awakens per say their primary functions are to attack the enemy or spy. They are incredibly swift, but Omoi uses them to track his opponents or sends them to burrow under grown. They are strong enough to burrow through stone and iron. If bitten they are more than capable of burrowing through the skin of the opponent. Inside the butts of each one there is a purple liquid that is used to inject the enemy with a small amount of poison which may slow the victims mechanical skills.
Origin: He invented it

The poisen part is a no because to use poisen at all you need to have a spec as medical or puppetry .

you could have instead of posien a electric stunner like a sten gun build within it instead to give shocks to enemy it bites.


ill check the jutsu after these changes



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Post by Hakai Hozuki on Thu Aug 02, 2012 3:44 pm

Name: Lion without Fangs
Rank: Elite
Description:He has little to no skill in hand to hand combat. Literally getting owned in Hand to Hand combat.

This is not a weakness, this is just part of your character. As he doesn't use Taijutsu or any physical specialty. It would be like me not have ninjutsu in my app and saying he isn't very good at ninjutsu. Its an obvious statement and it doesn't count as a weakness.

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Name: Elemental Affinity Pill
Amount: 8
Appearance: They look like star burst.
Rank: B
Special Abilities: When eaten this pills will increase the power of or damage output of the user for the next four post by 15 percent, while also locking the affinity of the elements used during this moment of combat for 5 post.
Origin: Made it himself.

These pills need a down side, after the 4 post you must have 4 posts of that element weakened, by the same amount.
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Re: Omoi (Done Done Done!)

Post by Kousuke on Thu Aug 02, 2012 4:05 pm

Edits made.
And um Please re-read my pill buddy. My elements aren't weakened after it. I had it stating that he can't use that element for five post. ._.
I figure the one I have is better than still allowing me to use that affinity.
Edit: As for the SC I am open to suggestion for a suitable weakness. as I don't have any good idea for what would be a decent weakness atm.
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Re: Omoi (Done Done Done!)

Post by Kousuke on Thu Aug 02, 2012 4:36 pm

Uh, please look to previous post I posted above regarding the second note you mentioned.
I'd like to thank you all for doing your job and taking time out of your day to check my app and stuff, but I'ld like to request not so much posting simple things like the previous post above Something that could have been asked or told in the chat (even though it's do to some of my mistakes) I ask this because the bit by bit thing will make my app look bad. With 6-12 Replies upon them. So, if you absolutely must post i is it possible to overview more than 1-2 things per post, or if you have to do it 1-2 per post later on would it be alright to have those post deleted when my app is fully approved?
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Re: Omoi (Done Done Done!)

Post by Hakai Hozuki on Thu Aug 02, 2012 11:39 pm

Name: A Thousand Feeding Sharks
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Range: (Optional for cannon jutsu.)
Description: A much more powerful version of the Water Release: Five Feeding Sharks, the user creates one thousand sharks out of water that enter into a wall formation and rain down to attack the opponent.

S RANK

Name:Five Feeding Sharks
Rank:B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Range: (Optional for cannon jutsu.)
Description: The user puts his hand on the surface of a body of water and from the tips of five fingers, chakra is released into the water, changing it into the form of five ferocious sharks. The sharks circle the target with high speed, creating a raging stream that takes away their prey's freedom of movement and their sharp teeth tear into the enemy with each consecutive attack. In the anime, these sharks can regenerate from surrounding water, making them difficult to destroy.

A RANK

Name: Rain Tiger at Will
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu,
Element: Water
Range: (Optional for cannon jutsu.)
Description: A perception ninjutsu, allowing one to freely manipulate rain infused with the user's own chakra. The rain falls from rain clouds, formed with Omoi's own chakra. During this technique, the falling raindrops are closely linked to Omoi's senses. When the rain is obstructed by a chakra belonging to someone not of the area , the existence of the intruder can be detected. [Requires c-rank chakra to maintain]

S rank and requires A rank to sustain.. it covers a village... and is amazing sensory jutsu. XD Which is why it will probably be banned.

ALso you have to many S rank jutsu, you can only have 5 total. I also have decided to stand by my original idea on the pills, whatever boost you take you must take the opposite effect for the same amount of turns afterwards.
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Re: Omoi (Done Done Done!)

Post by Hakai Hozuki on Thu Aug 02, 2012 11:47 pm

Name:Demonic Ice Armor
Rank:S
Type:Ninjutsu
Range: Self
Description: Produce and exoskeleton which is extremely resistant to A Rank Katon, and Raiton jutsu. Like it's parent technique Demonic Crystal Ice Mirrors of Death. During this time Omoi's reaction speed, and movement speed are increased by 40%. This last for the next three post. In addition to this his perceptive abilities and chakra control is also enhanced by 10%

The boosts don't make any sense... >.> How do you even get them... covering yourself in ice would slow you down.

Name: Chakra Sensing Technique
Rank:A
Type: Ninjutsu,
Range: (Optional for cannon jutsu.)
Description: This technique is used by sensors to detect someone's chakra. Using this technique, sensors can tell when enemies are approaching, and can easily track down targets. The range of this technique varies between sensors.

Name: Chakra Suppression Technique
Rank: A
Type: Ninjtsu
Range:
Description:This ability allows the user to suppress their chakra to the point that it is completely undetectable. This makes it impossible for sensor-type shinobi to track them via chakra.

The downside of this ability is that since the user suppresses their chakra they are unable to use any of their ninja skills. When Karin uses this technique, she is unable to use her Mind's Eye of the Kagura technique.

Remove both of these, they fall under special characteristics.

Name: Secert Techniuqe Mist: Rain
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element:Water
Range: (Optional for cannon jutsu.)
Description: A technique known by a Kirigakure hunter-nin, the user makes rain which eats up any chakra when it comes in contact with that is not of the same signature as the original user, such as Utakata's Soap Bubble Ninjutsu and Naruto's Rasengan.

remove canon references and state the user cannot use ninjutsu when this is used.

Name:Divine Armor
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu, Fuinjutsu
Element: Ice
Range: Self
Description:Omoi has placed a fuinjutsu seal on the back of his neck. This fuinjutsu will activate automatically as a last line of defense. Protecting him from 1 S rank Attack of physicality and three Attack of A -Rank and below. This jutsu last for 2 post and has a cool down of 5 post. The fuinjutsu encases Omoi in a very goregous sheet of iced armor, making him appear as a night of such. There are no blind spots or loop hones in the armor. This jutsu offers no upgrades to speed or strength, but it does however absorb the damage and turn it into chakra reserves. This doesn't protect from genjutsu, or fuinjutsu but is very formidable against ninjutsu, taijutsu and genjutsu.

no just no.
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Re: Omoi (Done Done Done!)

Post by Kousuke on Fri Aug 03, 2012 12:31 am

Name:Demonic Ice Armor
Rank:S
Type:Ninjutsu
Range: Self
Description: Produce and exoskeleton which is extremely resistant to A Rank Katon, and Raiton jutsu. Like it's parent technique Demonic Crystal Ice Mirrors of Death. During this time Omoi's reaction speed, and movement speed are increased by 40%. This last for the next three post. In addition to this his perceptive abilities and chakra control is also enhanced by 10%

The boosts don't make any sense... >.> How do you even get them... covering yourself in ice would slow you down.


About the first one. Please read about the parent jutsu Demonic Crystal Ice Mirrors. And No being covered in ice would not slow him down you and I both know what. I can remove the perception increase, and chakra increase by 10%. But the speed boost could also be nerfed a bit, but however. But it the speed boost is perfectly logical as I said it was an child or variation jutsu of the demonic ice. There have been examples of other characters being covered in an element that aren't impeded speed. . Roshi the 4 tails in his Lava Armor, Ai, Kakuzu. Hell even DS has a jutsu similar to mine So I will fix some of this.


Everything else I'm in the process of redoing.

EDIT: Alright Edits have been made to all but the Pills atm. I'm going to edit those now, but for the rest of the things you addressed.
I actually have the same amount S rank as DS
My Jutsu ranks of Five Feeding Sharks is B-Rank, because that's the offical Rank of the Jutsu.
Thousand Feeding Sharks is one Rank above Five Feeding Sharks (even though it holds no official Rank),but to be honest I have my Thousand Feeding Sharks also higher than DS by a whole rank. So I will not be changing those. Everything else has been editted.


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Re: Omoi (Done Done Done!)

Post by Elendril on Fri Aug 03, 2012 1:30 am

Name: Lion without Fangs
Rank: Elite
Description: Omoi's hand

Name:Falling Mortality
Rank: Elite
Description:
Has 15% Less Chakra than Shinobi of the same Rank, and his physical
strength is 15% lower than that of shinobi of the same rank.

Fix this take out the first flaw, and make the second one 2 super flaws


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Re: Omoi (Done Done Done!)

Post by Kousuke on Fri Aug 03, 2012 1:47 am

Edited ._.
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Re: Omoi (Done Done Done!)

Post by Hakai Hozuki on Sat Aug 04, 2012 2:53 am

It's secondary function allows him to be stealted from sensory. He makes no sound, or breathing or heat comes from his , and everything about him is complete erased from existence, unless that person has a doujutsu that allows other wise. This is highly simimar to the Hidden Camouflage

Silent homicide, which is banned and so many other things wrong with it. Not for discussion remove the entire section.


Name: Flames of the Underworld
Amount: 20 (per battle)
Appearance: Until chakra is poured into them they take the shapes of many metallic silver beads that are 2 1/2 inches.
Rank: A
Special Abilities: When thrown it releases the deadly incendiary. Called napalm. The Range of the napalm's raidus per bead/balls is 10 meters wide.
Origin: He invented it

How do metal balls release napalm. >.> You can't seal Napalm, so the item makes no sense.
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Re: Omoi (Done Done Done!)

Post by Kousuke on Sat Aug 04, 2012 4:35 am

Edits have been made.
I've also added Academy Jutsu & 2 summons and my Pet.
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Re: Omoi (Done Done Done!)

Post by Kaira on Sat Aug 04, 2012 11:49 am

Name: Shunshin no Jutsu
Rank: D-S
Type: Ninjutsu
Range:10m (Genin) Land to Land (S-Rank)
Element: N/A
Description: This jutsu is a high-speed movement technique, allowing a ninja to move short to long distances at an almost untraceable speed. To an observer, it appears as if the user has teleported. A puff of smoke is occasionally used to disguise the user's movements. It is accomplished by using chakra to temporarily boost the user's reflexes. The amount of chakra required depends on the overall distance between the user and their intended destination.


Remove this it should just be body flicker which is D rank.

you need summoning jutsu as well to summon the familars and can only do one at a time.


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Re: Omoi (Done Done Done!)

Post by Kousuke on Sat Aug 04, 2012 12:19 pm

DONE
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Re: Omoi (Done Done Done!)

Post by Nuitari Kouga on Sat Aug 04, 2012 2:18 pm

Approved, assuming all changes have been made.
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Re: Omoi (Done Done Done!)

Post by Kaira on Sat Aug 04, 2012 7:07 pm

Approval Item


Name: Book of Symbols
Amount: Unique
Appearance:
Spoiler:
Rank: A
Special Abilities: This book has the special ability of every page in the book is blank this works with the own users chakra natures that they process, when you draw the fuuinjutsu symbol on a blank page it activates one of three unique abilities. Wind B rank jutsu in power which will be a strong gales from the book capable of blowing back enemy's the wind is 80 mph in strength.

Drawing a Water fuuinjutsu symbol on blank page the book will fire from it a Water B rank jutsu in power which is a giant water canon with lots of water getting pumped from the book.

When Ice fuuinjutsu symbol is written on a black page an Ice breeze will come from the book which act as a mist like affect that will keep you hidden from the enemy as you can remain completely out of sight, drawing these symbols for the book doesn't require any chakra to use them but can only be once per thread each symbol type.

Origin: This book was recently found in the great Konoha library and was passed onto Nelo when he joined the Akatsuki


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Re: Omoi (Done Done Done!)

Post by Hakai Hozuki on Fri Aug 10, 2012 11:00 am

This character has been killed... Moved to appropriate forum.
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