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Grudge Rain

Post by Guest on Thu Apr 17, 2014 4:18 pm

Jutsu Name:Grudge Rain
Rank:C
Type:
Handsigns:Dog
Appearance:User creates a storm cloud that produces rain. Over time a large amount of water accumulates under said clould the quick accumulate of water causing a wave of water in all directions as the water tries drain away.
Backstory:Historically this was done with a group of ninja to increase range of affect.

Range:20ft
Duration:4 post
Effect:Drains target(s) chakra 5 per post. On the 4th post the water will hit them enemy in wave. Doing this jutsu by yourself instead of a group 4+ only produces enough water to cover ankles. (Hardly a wave at all)

Requirements:/past or present affiliation with Amegakure


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Re: Grudge Rain

Post by Takeshi on Thu Apr 17, 2014 11:41 pm

Fix the template. I see broken BBcodes around, such as "[b]Requirements:[/edfqwdfqwefqwef " How big is the cloud? Like the radius it covers? And how does it drain the chakra? And what do you mean "On the 4th post the water will hit them enemy in wave" How does a cloud relate to the wave? Write that all down. And about draining chakra. Hmm, for a C rank, no. It's technically an autohit, plus it drains a total of 20 chakra. Increase the rank.

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Re: Grudge Rain

Post by Guest on Fri Apr 18, 2014 8:38 am

Its as big as it needs to be to cover range

There tons of ways to avoid being rained on

lets say they let it rain on them all 4 post 20 is small percent of the total pool of chakra

It rains to post after the technique is cancels because rain will take time drain from cloud

Maintence cost will depend on site rules for maintainable jutsu

(I can't believe there is an issue with every singe post.)

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Re: Grudge Rain

Post by Takeshi on Fri Apr 18, 2014 8:40 am

This jutsu is now under staff discussion. Please take a moment, and wait.


(There wouldn't be any issue if you were to make it more specific. I don't want to always comment on every single post, but it's inevitable. I did approve a few apps without any issue, so It isn't my thing to find fault in everything. I hate commenting too. It prevents me from actually working on my character)

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Re: Grudge Rain

Post by Momoko on Tue Apr 22, 2014 1:58 am

Please be a lot more specific with the description of the technique such as the specific size, direction(s), strength, speed, and so on of the wave. "If it's not a paragraph long, then you probably did something wrong."


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Re: Grudge Rain

Post by Guest on Fri Apr 25, 2014 7:20 am

Some times it takes just a few words. It has no speed and no strength is just rain a heavy rain. A person is not going to dodge it be running. It takes special techniques.

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