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Hokkaido Clan

Post by Katsu Hokkaido on Sat Aug 25, 2012 8:43 pm

Clan Name:Hokkaido Clan

-Bloodline Description:
Spoiler:
Saki No Aime{Blue Eyes Of Blades}The Saki no Aime, when activated, turns the user's eyes a sapphire blue, and the pupils suddenly extend outward, resembling the blades of a windmill shuriken, It also allows the user to see when currents, the wind currents when be shown as arrows allowing the user to be able to use the wind currents to help go on the attack or slow down or even stop a jutus in its tracks. The more chakra the user uses during a jutsu or technique, the blue shade glows brighter and brighter, eventually maxing out where the user, when running, leaves a trail of blue light. Most of the bloodline's effects are extremely passive; only created for support of the user rather anything offensive, save for the 3rd and 4th stage.
Though considered a jutsu meant for support of genjutsu techniques, the bloodline itself consists mostly of ninjutsu properties, but is developed and trained for the use of genjutsu, utilizing speed and distance to activate genjutsu techniques from far away.

Stage 1 :

Description:
As a result of the massive chakra surge within the user's body, the user's eyes begin to shine the color of sapphire blue, the same shade color as chakra itself. In this stage, one blade extends outwards towards the end of the iris, resembling a curved blade, exactly like that of a windmill shuriken. The first stage is considered the "raw" stage of the bloodline, due to the effects upon being activated being uncontrollable. After the first activated you have control over your eyes but are almost blind due to the wind currents. this is due to the fact that the chakra flow is flowing wildly during this stage, hence the transformation of the user's eye color.

Activation:
The bloodline is activated for the first time through the use of feeling strong emotions that affect the whole body, such as adrenaline, shock, anger and any such that surges the chakra flow within one's body faster and faster until it surges in the form of blue eyes with blades.
However, it eventually becomes a tradition along the Hokkaido lineage to activate bloodlines during the rite of passage. If the user is a shinobi, he is /required/ to activate the bloodline once he reaches genin and /only through/ the rite of passage. If he fails to summon his bloodline, he cannot attend Genin missions or proceed with his shinobi lifestyle until he he activates the bloodline.

Strengths:
- User's sight is heightened; he is able to see sharper and see much farther things in detail equal to one with 5/20 vision. (He can see at 20 feet what a normal person can see at 5 feet)
- The user is able to see wind currents{ the wind currents are more like arrows showing which the wind is going and coming from} within his view in the form of solid blue waves up to a 7 times the range of his arm fully extended forward. It is known as the "Wind Tunnel"
- Long range-sight and predicting wind-current paths perfect for long-range combat. If user is skilled at long-range weapons, he can take flat, wind-cutting shots at a long-range.

Weakness:
- He can see /every/ wind current. Even the smallest breezes are visible due to his increased sight, even moving blinds him due to the winds. Thus, Taijutsu is basically impossible due to to guaranteed blindness, forcing him to keep a long distance from the opponent.



Stage 2:

Description:
This can only be activated once the user has begun to properly utilize his bloodline despite the horrible setbacks. The user's pupils suddenly extend another blade on each eye, and the eyes become a brighter blue from the extra surge of chakra needed to activate the second stage. He will now have two blades on each eye each time he activates his bloodline. This brighter shade of sapphire blue automatically becomes the standard, normal shade with each activation. The chakra flow is now calm, and the weaknesses of Stage One have been "fixed."

Activation:
First stage of his bloodline must be activated and used in battle 3 times, win or lose

Strengths:
- The user is now able to "toggle" his eyesight between seeing the currents and not seeing the currents, enabling taijutsu and proper movement.

Weakness:
- The range of seeing the currents has halved, enabling the user to only see currents at only 3 times the range of his arm extended forward.
- Slipstream Dash creates a huge strain on the legs each time it is used, therefore can only be used for a max of 2 posts before he is forced to stop.
- Stop period before he can Slipstream again is one post. (Dash>Stop>Wait>Dash)
- Slipstream Dash can only be used 3 times in battle



Stage 3:

Description:
A third blade extends on each eye and is permanantly there each time the bloodline is activated. The eyes glow even brighter, and the blades slowly begin to circulate in a circular motion, like an actual windmill. The chakra flow remains calm, but flows faster. The eyes, when activated, will glow with Stage 2's shade. Only when the user utilizes any stages above stage 2 will the eyes brighten. Once the technique for the higher stage is completed, the glow returns back to stage 2.

Activation:
User must have used his bloodline 6 times in battle total. User must have won at least once with his bloodline. Stage 3 cannot be activated until C- Rank.
User must enter the next Hokkaido Rite of Passage, where he is forced to endure a full-time Tower of Sorrow genjutsu from his senior clan relative to test his mental and logical balance.

Final Stage "Eye of the fallen king":

Description:
The final stage of the Saki no Aime features the fourth and final blade that extends, completing the full windmill shuriken. The eyes glow to its maximum level, resulting in a bright blue glow that is noticeable from afar and can leave a streak of Miasma particle with any movement. As like stage 3, the eyes only glow this bright when utilizing Stage 4's jutsus or activating it for the first time. Known as "Eye of the fallen king," the user's body becomes calm and controlled while chakra pours within him.

Activation:
6 times more in battle after the previous stage is unlocked .

Strengths:
- The Miasma begins to slowly pour out of his body, creating tiny solid particles in the air that, if the victim breathes it in, will experience a harsh, intense, unrelenting pain in his lungs each time he breathes. This forces the victim to keep his distance at all times, as the pain is unbearable. The range is 2x the length of his arm extended forward.
- User is immune to the particles
- Calm and controlled body in any situation.
- User can see every wind current in his plain view
- User can toggle the viewing of currents and not viewing them.
- User retains Stage 2's strengths

Weakness:
- Tou no ushi (and Toki Kiri) is sealed during this stage, and cannot be used in the current battle due to the extreme chakra use of Stage 4
- Stage 4 (and the bloodline itself) has a time limit, indicated by the disappearing blades. One blade from each eye disappears until there are no more blades, and the bloodline deactivates. This means Stage 4, and the bloodline itself lasts for a limited time (6 posts total)s. Also using jutsu in this level will hinder the length you can stay in this level.
6 D rank= 1 post lost, 4 C rank=one 1 post lost, 2 B rank= 1 post lost, 1 A rank=1 post lost, 1 S rank= 2 post lost. all together a max 6 jutsu can be use before drained out of chakra regardless of rank

Village: Leaf Village { members have now spreaded through out the 5 villages}

Clan Symbol: [Optional]

Clan Traits: [Optional]

Secret Clan Jutsu:
Spoiler:



Name: Saki No aime{ 1st blade}
Type: Dojutsu
Rank: D Rank
Description:
As a result of the massive chakra surge within the user's body, the user's eyes begin to shine the color of sapphire blue, the same shade color as chakra itself. In this stage, one blade extends outwards towards the end of the iris, resembling a curved blade, exactly like that of a windmill shuriken. The first stage is considered the "raw" stage of the bloodline, due to the effects upon being activated being uncontrollable. After the first activated you have control over your eyes but are almost blind due to the wind currents. this is due to the fact that the chakra flow is flowing wildly during this stage, hence the transformation of the user's eye color.


Name: Saki No aime{ 2nd blade}
Type: Dojutsu
Rank: D Rank
Description:
This can only be activated once the user has begun to properly utilize his bloodline despite the horrible setbacks. The user's pupils suddenly extend another blade on each eye, and the eyes become a brighter blue from the extra surge of chakra needed to activate the second stage. He will now have two blades on each eye each time he activates his bloodline. This brighter shade of sapphire blue automatically becomes the standard, normal shade with each activation. The chakra flow is now calm, and the weaknesses of Stage One have been "fixed."


Name: Saki No aime{ 3rd blade}
Type: Dojutsu
Rank: C Rank
Description: A third blade extends on each eye and is permanantly there each time the bloodline is activated. The eyes glow even brighter, and the blades slowly begin to circulate in a circular motion, like an actual windmill. The chakra flow remains calm, but flows faster. The eyes, when activated, will glow with Stage 2's shade. Only when the user utilizes any stages above stage 2 will the eyes brighten. Once the technique for the higher stage is completed, the glow returns back to stage 2.


Name: Saki No aime{ 4th blade}
Type: Dojutsu
Rank: S Rank
Description: The final stage of the Saki no Aoime features the fourth and final blade that extends, completing the full windmill shuriken. The eyes glow to its maximum level, resulting in a bright blue glow that is noticeable from afar and can leave a streak of Miasma particle with any movement. As like stage 3, the eyes only glow this bright when utilizing Stage 4's jutsus or activating it for the first time. Known as "Eye of the fallen king," the user's body becomes calm and controlled while chakra pours within him.



Name: Slipstream dash
Rank: C
Type: Taijutus
Element: Wind
Range: n/a
Requirements: Second level of dojutsu must be activated.
Description: The user is now granted the ability to "push" the wind away at a very short range (the range of his arm extended forward), allowing him to slipstream while running without the need of someone in front of him to block the wind knockback. This makes the user faster than normal and can maneuver faster while in Motion. (15% Max Speed Increase) can travel about 5 to 15 meters.
Draw backs:- The range of seeing the currents has halved, enabling the user to only see currents at only 3 times the range of his arm extended forward.
- Slipstream Dash creates a huge strain on the legs each time it is used, therefore can only be used for a max of 2 posts before he is forced to stop.
- Stop period before he can Slipstream again is one post. (Dash>Stop>Wait>Dash)

Kaze Ya no Jutsu (Wind Arrow Technique)
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C Rank
Description: The user molds chakra and breathes in. He or she then blows out and an arrow made of wind is shot from the user’s mouth. The arrow cannot be blocked but it can be dodged. Since it is made out of wind the arrow is hard to see. One arrow shot at a time.

Fuuton Kaze no Senbon (Needles of the Wind)
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C Rank
Description: The ninja gathers air with his hands and mixes it with chakra, by doing this he transforms them into sharp and deadly needles. The needles are almost invisible so it is hard for the enemies to see them. Because the needles are made of air they cannot be blocked or deflected. The only way to ensure safety is to dodge them.

Name: Guiding Winds
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: None
Range: 35 yards per rank
Description: The user is able to activate a Wind Current within himself that flow's out of his body. The user would embedded there charka into the wind. It will feel like a normal breeze to anyone using this technique he will be able to detect near by enemy's without giving away his current position. Requires no hand seals.

Kaze no Yaiba (Wind Blade)
Type: Kenjutsu
Rank: A Rank
Description: Creates a blade of wind around the user’s arm. The sword cannot be blocked due to it being made of wind but it can be dodged. Since the wind is condensed down it does weigh down the user’s arm.

Kaze Gyorai no Jutsu (Wind Torpedo)
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B Rank
Description: The user gathers a large amount of wind into his lungs and expels it in a single blow. The wind forms a torpedo that is near invisible that launches towards the opponent. Upon contact it explodes with the force of two exploding tags.

Kaze Kiri no Jutsu (Wind Drill Technique)
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B Rank
Description: The user creates an arrow made of pure wind from his mouth that is fired from the mouth. Once fire the arrw then takes the shake of a drill which has the power to crush threw trees and stones, and even a perseon body if it makes contact with them. But onces this drills hits the ground it dispels.

Fuuton - Tsuin Doragon no Jutsu (Wind - Twin Dragon Technique)
Rank: S-rank
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: Requires the only seal of dragon. It utilizes the element of wind to create two dragons that swirl around the user and can be moved through the air by chakra usage towards a target. The two dragons become feirce winds and collect any debris or anything that swirl around within it, and charge towards an enemy, slashing at them with fierce winds and a powerful blow. If the seal is formed upsidedown, the wind dragons can be used in a vaccuum sort of way; basically when the dragon's hit the user, the only effect it has on them is that it sucks the air out of them, causing lack of oxygen and possible suffocation.
Special: Handseals : Dragon (reverse dragon)
Drawback: If used incorrectly, or not strong enough to weild this technique, the jutsu could backfire. Expecially dangerous when using reverse version, if not utilized well, suffocation could become your downfall.
Description: When created, it becomes two twin dagons, about 5 feet in diameter, length varies to the distance of the opponent. They look like traditional chinese dragons, no color since wind is transparent, color can change to the debris that is collected.

Name:Toki Kiri / Time Shaver
Rank:B
Type:Taijutsu
ElementN/A
Range:N/A
Requirements:Must have the 3rd stage of the dojutus activated
Description:he user's eyes glow even brighter, inputting a massive amount of chakra onto the legs, and, also utilizing Stage 2's Slipstream Dash, can run even faster than before. (25% Speed Increase). With a 15% increase in reaction time.moves up to 20 meters per post

Fuuton Furyuu no Jutsu (Wind Dragon)
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A Rank
Description: Creates a dragon formed from wind. The dragon looks like a large serpent, a traditional Chinese dragon that is twenty feet long. The dragon has a red mane and the rest of his body borders light blue. The color is not distinct because the wind manipulates it from its color to transparency. The dragon can shoot Kaze no senbon from its mouth.

Kamaitachi (Cutting Whirlwind)
Skill: Ninjutsu
Rank: C Rank
Description: The shinobi uses a fan or the correct elemental affinity to blow a concussive wind that is imbued with their Chakra. When the opponent is caught in the wind, a tornado will raise them into the air and hold them with the Chakra. The wind will then begin to cut the target like a sickle. If caught in the the jutus the slicing will last 1 full post.
Limits: Fan Type Weapon or Elemental to Fuuton.

Kuchiyose Kirikiri no Mai (Summoning Skill: Execution Whirl)
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B Rank
Requirement: Fuuton Fuuryu (Wind Dragon)
Description: After the user wipes their own blood on the area in front of them or on the offensive weapon they intend to use for the attack, kamaitachi No Jutsu is prepared as normal. But instead, when the wind is released. This is a much more intensified gust of wind that is able to chop down trees with ease. If caught in the jutus the slicing will last 2 full posts.

Fuuton - Renkuudan (Drilling Air Projectile)
Skill: Ninjutsu
Rank: A Rank
Description: Renkuudan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Wind Element. The user inhales a large amount of air into their chest and then expels it in one large explosive burst. To strengthen the attack, they will imbue chakra into the air and then release it in large, spherical projectile shots. This is very powerful fuuton jutus capable of doing some serious damage if it by directly not only to the person if its lands but also to the surrounding area leaving large craters where ever it lands.


Name:Koori Torappu no Jutsu [Ice Trap Technique]
Rank: A
Type:Genjutus
Element:N/A
Range: N/A
Requirements: 3rd Stage of Dojutus must be activated, To active the target must dodge a kuani infused with the user charka. Once dodge the charka infused kunai will let off a flow of charka right before it passes the users activing the jutus. {note= This move can be broken if pain from in outside source is use, most likely from a team mate}
Description: This genjutsu uses an illusion of ice to bind the target. After the user performs some handseals, it creates an illusion of snow forming, and falling around the user. After a short moment, the snow becomes to seem fiercer, and ice begins to form at the base of the targets feet, slowly growing upward up the body, until all but his head is engulfed. This whole technique can last about 2 minutes, but to the targeted, seems like about an hour of freezing torture has passed. This technique's effects can even be enhanced more when used in cold and/or snowy areas.
Post duration: 3 posts.

Name:Fuuton Fuuryuudan no Jutsu{ Wind Dragon}
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A Rank
Description: Powerful attack that creates a huge surge of wind in the shape of a dragon, which is sent towards the opponent. If the victim is hit they will suffer great amounts of damage. It will seem as if he or she is stuck inside a tornado.

Name:Niseshi no Gijutsu [Art of Fake Death]
Rank: A
Type: Genjutus
Element: N/A
Range: N/A
Requirements:3rd Stage of the doujutus must be activated, User must fire off a charka infused gust of wind towards there target.
Description: This genjutsu only works while being attacked by an opponent with something deadly. The genjutsu uses the last attack and creates am image where the user fails to finish creating a jutsu in time making the attack look like a success and completely killing the user. The whole illusion is made to lure the opponent into a false sense of security for a sneak attack, or to make a hasty retreat if necessary.
Post duration: Indefinite; keep in mind the chakra drain though.


Name:Tou no Ushi / Tower of Sorrow
Rank:A
Type:Genjutsu
Element:N/A
Range:N/A
Requirements: 3rd Stage of Dojutus must be activated, eye contact required Description:A bloodline genjutsu that merely needs eye contact to begin. The victim finds himself stranded within an abandoned tower, the center of it hollow (so the tower is like a long pipe, so to speak). If the user looks up, s/he can see a large Blue Blade Eye staring down upon him at the very top. The Genjutsu ends only when the blades of that very eye disappear (It is 3 blades originally, but if the user reaches the 4th stage, he is given a 4th Blade of Time.) After a moment, dozens upon dozens of dead bodies around him begin to rush to him, and if the victim makes physical contact with any of the bodies, he is given a first-person view of that person's wretched and horrid death. The user must try and avoid making contact with any of them until all the blades disappear. (Max Time 4 Posts) Using Kai within this genjutsu only destroys one blade from the eye, shortening the genjutsu time by one post. Someone using Kai to help his teammate escape this jutsu only does the same.

Name: Miasma
Rank:A-S
Type:Poison
Element: N/A
Range:Short-Mid
Requirements:4th Stage of Dojutus Activated
Description: The user chakra begins to slowly pour out of his body, creating tiny solid particles in the air that, if the victim breathes it in, will experience a harsh, intense, unrelenting pain in his lungs each time he breathes. This forces the victim to keep his distance at all times, as the pain is unbearable. The range is 2x the length of his arm extended forward.

Name:Kaze Kuiki {Whisper of Death}
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: S Rank
Effect: This is the most rarest and most powerful jutus known to the hokkaido clan. Was created by the current leader Katsu Hokkaido. The user is surronded by a vortex's of wind that is so dangrous it is hard for the enemy to approach it without getting cut or voilently thrown back.
Special:Note that Katsu Hokkaido has to train ant clan member that wants to learn this attack.
Drawback: This requires a large deal of charka to be sacrificed in order to do such a dangeours move. The amount of chakra that is taken is about 80% of the users max's chakra.
Description: A dangerous wind sourronds that user in a sphere that is 5 meters in lenght and 3 meters in width as it protects them from any attack. This move is consider the greatest wind offensive and defensive justu.
Stage 1 Using tremendous amount of chakra and a long serious of hand seals wind starts to pick up around the user in a sphere by 5 meters in length and 3 meters in width. The wind that the user is inside starts to spin at a rate of 80 Mph. The user is then lifted off the ground only 3 meters and sits their without moving. Anything that is not away from the user within 10 meters will be pulled in and violently thrown in another direction or will get sliced in to peices
Stage 2 After the user is in the air the user lets out a loug screaming causing the sphere of wind around them to start to grow bigger in size depending on the stenght on the users nin.Once the sphere starts to expand the ground under the user is destroyed and anything the sphere hits is damaged by wind cutters and goes flying back half the distance of the winds speed in meters.

Quote: C rank worth of charka- Wind goes up to 120 Mph the sphere goes to the size of 10 meters in length and 6 meters in width
B rank worth - Wind goes up to 180 Mph the sphere goes to the size of 15 meters in length and 9 meters in width
A rank worth- Wind goes up to 270 Mph the sphere goes to the size of 20 meters in length and 12 meters in width
S rank worth- Wind goes up to 405 Mph the sphere goes to the size of 25 meters in length and 15 meters in width

Limit This a very power attack and due to the fact the its drain so much chakra this jutus and only be active for a max of 5 posts. Afterward the jutus will cancel out leave the user unable to use a simple jutus or attack for 1 post after the jutus cancel itselfs out.

History:The Saki no Aime was developed years after the Hokkaido's clan appearance. The Hokkaido clan being a clan of Samurai, the use of a bloodline nor ninjutsu was never a concern, yet they remained unaware of their powers until a lone member of the clan decided to choose the shinobi path. Detested for his choice since Samurai and Shinobi did not always get along, he was ridiculed and nearly stricken from the clan at a whole. However, upon reaching the level of Chuunin, Hokkaido Kazuhiro, the lone shinobi of the Hokkaido, activated his bloodline during the Hokkaido Rite of Passage into his teenage years, suddenly able to see blue swirls in his vision, which was revealed to be air currents.

Upon inspection of the Hokkaido scriptures, it theorized that the bloodline is the result of a mutation between the first Hokkaido's bloodline and most likely his spouse, resulting in the sapphire eyes and windmill-shuriken pupils. It is currently unknown as to /what/ the original bloodline was, and has been deemed that it will never be known. However, the wife was noted by the originator of the Hokkaido clan to have "delicate jade green eyes, yet when she was consumed with emotion, the tint and color of her eyes changed to as blue as sapphire... it was as if the wind suddenly feared her when her colors changed, yet I remained even more so attracted to her as a whole." As the scriptures told, whenever Kazuhiro became consumed with emotion, his eye colors changed, which explained why he activated it during his Rite of Passage ritual; as he was consumed with spite for his relatives detesting him, and the sudden emotion to prove them wrong with all his might. It was eventually named Saki no Aime, the Blue Eyes of Blades. Upon further research of the bloodline and the eventual death of from old age, the clan underwent a sudden transformation from a Samurai clan to a sudden division between lingering Samurai and new Shinobi. They would both eventually be integrated, and the use of Samurai and Shinobi styles would be common practice. It is around this time that the Hokkaido clan would fully integrate itself onto the village they resided in, which was the Hidden Village Of The Sand. The Bloodline would then reveal another technique firstly unknown. The Tou no Ushi, known as the Tower of Sorrow, was activated horribly during another Rite of Passage ritual, activated by the elder who was fighting the newly-teen aged boy. The boy would be scarred forever, and eventually was executed by request of seppuku from the boy to release his misery. Due to the fear of this horrible 3rd stage Genjutsu, the Hokkaido clan decided, even against protest, that they focus on Genjutsu for the Shinobi style in order to control their bloodline's horrific jutsu. Upon research, this jutsu is speculated to be the one and final jutsu that originally solely on the first Hokkaido, hence the theory that he too had a bloodline.




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Re: Hokkaido Clan

Post by Katsu Hokkaido on Sat Aug 25, 2012 8:52 pm

Done ready to check and edited as needed.
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Post by Rizuma Jigoku on Sat Aug 25, 2012 10:44 pm

"Also using jutsu in this level will hinder the length you can stay in this level.
6 D rank= 1 blade lost, 4 C rank=one blade lost, 2 B rank= 1 blade lost, 1 A rank=1 blade lost, 1 S rank= 2 Blades lost. all together a max 6 jutsu can be use before drained out of chakra regardless of rank"

Instead of loosing a blade for these amounts of justu, how about you loose a post like when you said it could only be used for 6 posts total? Like, "6 D rank=1 post lost, 4 C rank=1 post lost" ect. ect.

"- Calm and controlled body in any situation."

This would be a trait in a character, not a clan.

"6 times more after the previous stage is unlocked ."

It has to be used 6 more times in battle? Is that what you mean?

"- The Miasma begins to slowly pour out of his body, creating tiny solid particles in the air that, if the victim breathes it in, will experience a harsh, intense, unrelenting pain in his lungs each time he breathes. This forces the victim to keep his distance at all times, as the pain is unbearable. The range is 2x the length of his arm extended forward."

This would be a jutsu in itself.

"Stage 3 cannot be activated until Chuunin."

I'm pretty sure we rank characters by skill rank not title rank. meaning they'd need to be a C rank or higher shinobi to activate this.

"The chakra flow remains calm, but flows faster."

This would also be a trait of a character but if you reworded it differently it'd work. Sorry I have no example at the moment.

"- Any ninjutsu's strength weakens by 5% each post. (100 to 95 to 90 to... etc)"

I don't understand this, could you please clarify?

"- Slipstream Dash creates a huge strain on the legs each time it is used, therefore can only be used for a max of 2 posts before he is forced to stop.
- Stop period before he can Slipstream again is one post. (Dash>Stop>Wait>Dash)
- Slipstream Dash can only be used 3 times in battle"

This would be a jutsu and the amount of times they're able to use it would still depend on the character.

Note: Still hasn't looked through the justu.

"The chakra flow is now calm, and the weaknesses of Stage One have been "fixed.""

Alright this chakra flow this has come up three times and you must be annoyed so ima just state here it depends on the character for the last time. Sorry.

"- User's sight is heightened; he is able to see sharper and see much farther things in detail equal to one with 5/20 vision. (He can see at 20 feet what a normal person can see at 5 feet)"

I'm not sure what to say here. If another mod sees this can they give me their opinion on this, whether it's fine or not?

"The bloodline is activated for the first time through the use of feeling strong emotions that affect the whole body, such as adrenaline, shock, anger and any such that surges the chakra flow within one's body faster and faster until it surges in the form of blue eyes with blades."

Here, can you explain further? Do they have to do a training thread or can they just be in a fight?

Also, about the whole bloodline trait, how much chakra does this use? Does it use the same about of chakra for each stage? Also could you put the chakra usage in rank (does it use A rank chakra or B rank?) afterwards I'll recheck again.

Sorry if my style of modding annoys you but I like to take it step by step to avoid error and confusion. Sorry if it inconveniences you in any way.


Name: Jigokugan [Cancer Hell]
Rank: C
Type: Kekkei Genkai
Description: Raises the perception of the user allowing them to see clearer and react 5% faster. Also allows the user to use their Nether chakra. this is only on one eye and the image in the eye will never leave, whether the Jigokugan's abilities are active or not. The user can also mimic the handsigns of the opponent only, not the jutsu.

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Re: Hokkaido Clan

Post by Katsu Hokkaido on Sat Aug 25, 2012 11:38 pm

* Note have no problem with the way your doing it, to be honest perfer it this way.

Moving forward both the slip stream dash and masima are both jutus i've already listed in my clan jutus{ granted you haven't looked yet just wanted to clarfiy it is all}.

"- Any ninjutsu's strength weakens by 5% each post. (100 to 95 to 90 to... etc)"

I don't understand this, could you please clarify?

This is basically just breaking down the lost of charka. basically breaking it down stating that the user ninjutus attacks lose strength the longer this stage is active. But since this site uses rank and not percentage then this can actually be voided off. I will remove that part.

"Also using jutsu in this level will hinder the length you can stay in this level.
6 D rank= 1 blade lost, 4 C rank=one blade lost, 2 B rank= 1 blade lost, 1 A rank=1 blade lost, 1 S rank= 2 Blades lost. all together a max 6 jutsu can be use before drained out of chakra regardless of rank"

Instead of loosing a blade for these amounts of justu, how about you loose a post like when you said it could only be used for 6 posts total? Like, "6 D rank=1 post lost, 4 C rank=1 post lost" ect. ect.

I actually like it your way edited into your format.

"6 times more after the previous stage is unlocked ."

It has to be used 6 more times in battle? Is that what you mean?

Exactly what it means.

"The bloodline is activated for the first time through the use of feeling strong emotions that affect the whole body, such as adrenaline, shock, anger and any such that surges the chakra flow within one's body faster and faster until it surges in the form of blue eyes with blades."

Here, can you explain further? Do they have to do a training thread or can they just be in a fight?

Actually it can vary, it can be an either a battle or a training post, thats why i didn't want to state anything there. But it most likely will happen in battle due to the fact that theres more emotion in a real battle then a training excrise, but like i said it varys.

Also, about the whole bloodline trait, how much chakra does this use? Does it use the same about of chakra for each stage? Also could you put the chakra usage in rank (does it use A rank chakra or B rank?) afterwards I'll recheck again.


Wasn't aware i had t do this but editing the whole thing to break it dwn into rank seems like a lot of work ll. So if its the same to you can i just added that into the jutus list. { Did it anyway, if it isn't alright with you then i'll just re-edited the whole thing. let me know}
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Post by Rizuma Jigoku on Sun Aug 26, 2012 2:26 am

First of all, I thank you for editing things, that's exactly what i meant about the Doojutsu, btw. You're all good there, so now on to the justu!


Kaze Ya no Jutsu (Wind Arrow Technique)
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: D Rank
Description: The user molds chakra and breathes in. He or she then blows out and an arrow made of wind is shot from the user’s mouth. The arrow cannot be blocked but it can be dodged. Since it is made out of wind the arrow is hard to see. One arrow shot at a time.

The part in bold is too advanced, could you please make it a C rank jutsu?

Fuuton Kaze no Senbon (Needles of the Wind)
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: D Rank
Description: The ninja gathers air with his hands and mixes it with chakra, by doing this he transforms them into sharp and deadly needles. The needles are almost invisible so it is hard for the enemies to see them. Because the needles are made of air they cannot be blocked or deflected. The only way to ensure safety is to dodge them.

Same deal here, please make it C rank.

Name: Guiding Winds
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: None
Range: 35 yards per rank
Description: The user is able to activate a Wind Current within himself using his chakra allowing him to detect near by enemy's without giving away his current position. Requires no hand seals.

The description is kind of vague. I have no examples at the moment to what it'd be better as, but could you change it?

Kaze no Yaiba (Wind Blade)
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B Rank
Description: Creates a blade of wind around the user’s arm. The sword cannot be blocked due to it being made of wind but it can be dodged. Since the wind is condensed down it does weigh down the user’s arm.

It would Technically be a Kinjutsu, due to the fact that it's technically still a sword. I'm not sure if the rank is okay now or not but just to be on the safe side, could you please make it A rank?

Kaze Gyorai no Jutsu (Wind Torpedo)
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B Rank
Description: The user gathers a large amount of wind into his lungs and expels it in a single blow. The wind forms a torpedo that is near invisible that launches towards the opponent. Upon contact it explodes with the force of two exploding tags.

I don't have much wrong with this one, i just have to comment on the fact that i don't wanna get hit by it. XD

Kaze Kiri no Jutsu (Wind Drill Technique)
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B Rank
Description: The user creates another arrow from his mouth that is fired from the mouth. This time though the arrow is in the shape of a drill, much like the arrow Kidoumaro uses in his last attack against Neji. The drill passes through stone and tree but once it hits the ground it dispels. This arrow can drill through a person.

could you please explain it without using canon names?

I want to stop you now to say that i might come back to a few of these jutsu even after you've edited them. Just saying.

Fuuton - Tsuin Doragon no Jutsu (Wind - Twin Dragon Technique)
Rank: B-rank
Skill: Ninjutsu
Effect: Requires the only seal of dragon. It utilizes the element of wind to create two dragons that swirl around the user and can be moved through the air by chakra usage towards a target. The two dragons become feirce winds and collect any debris or anything that swirl around within it, and charge towards an enemy, slashing at them with fierce winds and a powerful blow. If the seal is formed upsidedown, the wind dragons can be used in a vaccuum sort of way; basically when the dragon's hit the user, the only effect it has on them is that it sucks the air out of them, causing lack of oxygen and possible suffocation.
Special: Handseals : Dragon (reverse dragon)
Drawback: If used incorrectly, or not strong enough to weild this technique, the jutsu could backfire. Expecially dangerous when using reverse version, if not utilized well, suffocation could become your downfall.
Description: When created, it becomes two twin dagons, about 5 feet in diameter, length varies to the distance of the opponent. They look like traditional chinese dragons, no color since wind is transparent, color can change to the debris that is collected.

O_O ....... This sounds kinda...... S rank.... please?

Fuuton Furyuu no Jutsu (Wind Dragon)
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A Rank
Description: Creates a dragon formed from wind. The dragon looks like a large serpent, a traditional Chinese dragon that is twenty feet long. The dragon has a red mane and the rest of his body borders light blue. The color is not distinct because the wind manipulates it from its color to transparency. The dragon can shoot Kaze Kongou from its mouth.

Could you translate Kaze Kongou please? I don't know what it is.

Kuchiyose Kirikiri no Mai (Summoning Skill: Execution Whirl)
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C Rank
Requirement: Fuuton Fuuryu (Wind Dragon)
Description: After the user wipes their own blood on the area in front of them or on the offensive weapon they intend to use for the attack, Daikamaitachi No Jutsu is prepared as normal. But instead, when the wind is released, a large summoned weasel, as well as a long pole, two short sickles and a container becomes shaped out of the wind. This is a much more intensified gust of wind that is able to chop down trees with ease.

Just going to say here that I am not fluent in Japanese (or wind jutsu) and I'm not really up to searching for everything. Sorry if i just sounded kinda rude. Could you please translate for me? If it's another jutsu on the app, there's no need to translate but anything else, please translate it. Sorry again if I sound rude.

Fuuton - Renkuudan (Drilling Air Projectile)
Skill: Ninjutsu
Rank: A Rank
Description: Renkuudan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Wind Element. The user inhales a large amount of air into their chest and then expels it in one large explosive burst. To strengthen the attack, they will imbue chakra into the air and then release it in large, spherical projectile shots.

Can we get some information on how damaging the attack is?

Name:Koori Torappu no Jutsu [Ice Trap Technique]
Rank: A
Type:Genjutus
Element:N/A
Range: N/A
Requirements: 3rd Stage of Dojutus must be activated, handseals must be watched or eye contact required.{note= This move can be broken if pain from in outside source is use, most likely from a team mate}
Description: This genjutsu uses an illusion of ice to bind the target. After the user performs some handseals, it creates an illusion of snow forming, and falling around the user. After a short moment, the snow becomes to seem fiercer, and ice begins to form at the base of the targets feet, slowly growing upward up the body, until all but his head is engulfed. This whole technique can last about 2 minutes, but to the targeted, seems like about an hour of freezing torture has passed. This technique's effects can even be enhanced more when used in cold and/or snowy areas.
Post duration: 3 posts.

There needs to be something that activate the jutsu. I.E. sound, eye contact, touch, ect.

Name:Fuuton Fuuryuudan no Jutsu
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A Rank
Description: Powerful attack that creates a huge surge of wind in the shape of a dragon, which is sent towards the opponent. Large dragon, much like the Suiryuudan in size but made out of wind. If the victim is hit they will suffer great amounts of damage. It will seem as if he or she is stuck inside a tornado.

Pretty much the same thing about the translations.

Name:Niseshi no Gijutsu [Art of Fake Death]
Rank: A
Type: Genjutus
Element: N/A
Range: N/A
Requirements:3rd Stage of the doujutus must be activated, eye contact required.
Description: This genjutsu only works while being attacked by an opponent with something deadly. The genjutsu uses the last attack and creates am image where the user fails to finish creating a jutsu in time making the attack look like a success and completely killing the user. The whole illusion is made to lure the opponent into a false sense of security for a sneak attack, or to make a hasty retreat if necessary.
Post duration: Indefinite; keep in mind the chakra drain though.

Same thing here, how is it activated? And Genjutsu is spelled wrong.

Name:Tou no Ushi / Tower of Sorrow
Rank:A
Type:Genjutsu
Element:N/A
Range:N/A
Requirements: 3rd Stage of Dojutus must be activated, eye contact required Description:A bloodline genjutsu that merely needs eye contact to begin. The victim finds himself stranded within an abandoned tower, the center of it hollow (so the tower is like a long pipe, so to speak). If the user looks up, s/he can see a large Blue Blade Eye staring down upon him at the very top. The Genjutsu ends only when the blades of that very eye disappear (It is 3 blades originally, but if the user reaches the 4th stage, he is given a 4th Blade of Time.) After a moment, dozens upon dozens of dead bodies around him begin to rush to him, and if the victim makes physical contact with any of the bodies, he is given a first-person view of that person's wretched and horrid death. The user must try and avoid making contact with any of them until all the blades disappear. (Max Time 4 Posts) Using Kai within this genjutsu only destroys one blade from the eye, shortening the genjutsu time by one post. Someone using Kai to help his teammate escape this jutsu only does the same.

Is the opponents body still moving outside of the genjustu or are they only moving in their mind?

Name:Kaze Kuiki

We'll work on this one after everything else, if you don't mind.

Sorry again if my way of Modding get annoying or inconveniencing.
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Post by Katsu Hokkaido on Sun Aug 26, 2012 10:52 am

*Note dude for some reason i get excited when your doing my editing O.o did that come out wrong?? i think it did lol oh well, but yeah would like you to do my character as well for future notices lol.

Moving forward Edited everything, sorry i'm now doing it on my phone and can't write everything down like i did before hand. But the Kirikiri no Mai (Summoning Skill: Execution Whirl) Jutus that was my own fault i place this jutus and forgot to add the first part of this jutus in the jutus list, i edited that of curse and place it right on top of that jutus so you can known what it is.

As far as the last few jutus go, i place the requirement for being capture in this jutus on the requirement part of the said jutus, don't know if you overlook that or not but it is there.

The last jutus tower of sorrow, no they can't move there body utside of the genjutus, but in there minds they are free to move around. Wouldn't be as much fun if they are frozen in the jutus and outside of the jutus now would it lol.

Also the last jutus that you didn't edited yet and was about to edited. I kinda already edited that. I went into away to much details for that jutus.{ due to the last site i put it on wanted me to add all that crack because of the way there site ran. don't need to tell you that the site didn't last to long lol.} but yeah i took out all of the 80 nin, 90 nin etc. crap and edited to jutus ranks C B A and S, i figure that would help out alot for you so you don't have to trash your brain t much n trying t figure out the right things to say for me to edit this right. Also remove the last two stages of the jutus and only left the first two stages, although the last stage was pretty cool, i can still able to use it with the the second stage of this jutus. So yeah.... hope that helps out a little.


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Post by Rizuma Jigoku on Sun Aug 26, 2012 4:45 pm

Kaze no Yaiba (Wind Blade)
Type: Kinjutsu
Rank: A Rank
Description: Creates a blade of wind around the user’s arm. The sword cannot be blocked due to it being made of wind but it can be dodged. Since the wind is condensed down it does weigh down the user’s arm.

I'm really sorry, i was kinda spacing that day, it'd actually be Kenjutsu.

Kamaitachi (Cutting Whirlwind)
Skill: Ninjutsu
Rank: C Rank
Description: The shinobi uses a fan or the correct elemental affinity to blow a concussive wind that is imbued with their Chakra. When the opponent is caught in the wind, a tornado will raise them into the air and hold them with the Chakra. The wind will then begin to cut the target like a sickle.
Limits: Fan Type Weapon or Elemental to Fuuton.

How long does the sickle cutting last if someone it caught it it?

Kuchiyose Kirikiri no Mai (Summoning Skill: Execution Whirl)
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B Rank
Requirement: Fuuton Fuuryu (Wind Dragon)
Description: After the user wipes their own blood on the area in front of them or on the offensive weapon they intend to use for the attack, kamaitachi No Jutsu is prepared as normal. But instead, when the wind is released, a large summoned weasel, as well as a long pole, two short sickles and a container becomes shaped out of the wind. This is a much more intensified gust of wind that is able to chop down trees with ease.

Just a question, what are the weasel, pole, and container for? Also, the same question as the jutsu before.

Name:Koori Torappu no Jutsu [Ice Trap Technique]
Rank: A
Type:Genjutus
Element:N/A
Range: N/A
Requirements: 3rd Stage of Dojutus must be activated, handseals must be watched or eye contact required.{note= This move can be broken if pain from in outside source is use, most likely from a team mate}
Description: This genjutsu uses an illusion of ice to bind the target. After the user performs some handseals, it creates an illusion of snow forming, and falling around the user. After a short moment, the snow becomes to seem fiercer, and ice begins to form at the base of the targets feet, slowly growing upward up the body, until all but his head is engulfed. This whole technique can last about 2 minutes, but to the targeted, seems like about an hour of freezing torture has passed. This technique's effects can even be enhanced more when used in cold and/or snowy areas.
Post duration: 3 posts.

For the genjutsu, I mean something has to happen to one of the target's five senses, feel, smell, sight, sound, and taste. In short, something has to happen to the brain in order for one to be caught in a genjutsu. Heck, it could even be as simple as using a gust of wind-like chakra their way.

Name:Fuuton Fuuryuudan no Jutsu
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A Rank
Description: Powerful attack that creates a huge surge of wind in the shape of a dragon, which is sent towards the opponent. Large dragon, much like the Suiryuudan in size but made out of wind. If the victim is hit they will suffer great amounts of damage. It will seem as if he or she is stuck inside a tornado.

I don't know what it says.

Name:Niseshi no Gijutsu [Art of Fake Death]
Rank: A
Type: Genjutus
Element: N/A
Range: N/A
Requirements:3rd Stage of the doujutus must be activated, eye contact required.
Description: This genjutsu only works while being attacked by an opponent with something deadly. The genjutsu uses the last attack and creates am image where the user fails to finish creating a jutsu in time making the attack look like a success and completely killing the user. The whole illusion is made to lure the opponent into a false sense of security for a sneak attack, or to make a hasty retreat if necessary.
Post duration: Indefinite; keep in mind the chakra drain though.

Sorry for being so repetitive, Something has to happen to the targets mind still. You could to that small gust of wind-like chakra thing i said before.

Name:Kaze Kuiki
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: S Rank
Effect: This is the most rarest and most powerful jutus known to the hokkaido clan. Was created by the current leader Katsu Hokkaido. The user is surronded by a vortex's of wind that is so dangrous it is hard for the enemy to approach it without getting cut or voilently thrown back.
Special:None
Drawback: This requires a large deal of charka to be sacrificed in order to do such a dangeours move. The amount of chakra that is taken is about 80% of the users max's chakra. Since the move is so long this requires a +30 more training points.
Description: A dangerous wind sourronds that user in a sphere that is 5 meters in lenght and 3 meters in width as it protects them from any attack. This move is consider the greatest wind offensive and defensive justu.
Stage 1 Using tremendous amount of chakra and a long serious of hand seals wind starts to pick up around the user in a sphere by 5 meters in length and 3 meters in width. The wind that the user is inside starts to spin at a rate of 80 Mph. The user is then lifted off the ground only 3 meters and sits their without moving. Anything that is not away from the user within 10 meters will be pulled in and violently thrown in another direction or will get sliced in to peices
Stage 2 After the user is in the air the user lets out a loug screaming causing the sphere of wind around them to start to grow bigger in size depending on the stenght on the users nin.Once the sphere starts to expand the ground under the user is destroyed and anything the sphere hits is damaged by wind cutters and goes flying back half the distance of the winds speed in meters.

Quote: C rank worth of charka- Wind goes up to 120 Mph the sphere goes to the size of 10 meters in length and 6 meters in width
B rank worth - Wind goes up to 180 Mph the sphere goes to the size of 15 meters in length and 9 meters in width
A rank worth- Wind goes up to 270 Mph the sphere goes to the size of 20 meters in length and 12 meters in width
S rank worth- Wind goes up to 405 Mph the sphere goes to the size of 25 meters in length and 15 meters in width

Limit This a very power attack and due to the fact the its drain so much chakra this jutus and only be active for a max of 5 posts. Afterward the jutus will cancel out leave the user unable to use a simple jutus or attack for 1 post after the jutus cancel itselfs out.

Katsu is going to be your character right? IF that's the case, could you also add that Katsu has to teach others to be able to use it? Also there are still some references to the system on that other site, I don't really mind them being there but others might not like it so much, If you could hunt them down that'd be great.

Note: If i sound a little rude or grumpy here, i woke up like an hour ago, sorry. Also I will take over your character's app if that's what you want.
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Post by Katsu Hokkaido on Sun Aug 26, 2012 9:33 pm

I would like to if you don't mind..

oh and everything was edited
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Post by Rizuma Jigoku on Mon Aug 27, 2012 5:03 am

Name:Fuuton Fuuryuudan no Jutsu
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A Rank
Description: Powerful attack that creates a huge surge of wind in the shape of a dragon, which is sent towards the opponent. If the victim is hit they will suffer great amounts of damage. It will seem as if he or she is stuck inside a tornado.




Name:Kaze Kuiki
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: S Rank
Effect: This is the most rarest and most powerful jutus known to the hokkaido clan. Was created by the current leader Katsu Hokkaido. The user is surronded by a vortex's of wind that is so dangrous it is hard for the enemy to approach it without getting cut or voilently thrown back.
Special:Note that Katsu Hokkaido has to train ant clan member that wants to learn this attack.
Drawback: This requires a large deal of charka to be sacrificed in order to do such a dangeours move. The amount of chakra that is taken is about 80% of the users max's chakra.
Description: A dangerous wind sourronds that user in a sphere that is 5 meters in lenght and 3 meters in width as it protects them from any attack. This move is consider the greatest wind offensive and defensive justu.
Stage 1 Using tremendous amount of chakra and a long serious of hand seals wind starts to pick up around the user in a sphere by 5 meters in length and 3 meters in width. The wind that the user is inside starts to spin at a rate of 80 Mph. The user is then lifted off the ground only 3 meters and sits their without moving. Anything that is not away from the user within 10 meters will be pulled in and violently thrown in another direction or will get sliced in to peices
Stage 2 After the user is in the air the user lets out a loug screaming causing the sphere of wind around them to start to grow bigger in size depending on the stenght on the users nin.Once the sphere starts to expand the ground under the user is destroyed and anything the sphere hits is damaged by wind cutters and goes flying back half the distance of the winds speed in meters.

Quote: C rank worth of charka- Wind goes up to 120 Mph the sphere goes to the size of 10 meters in length and 6 meters in width
B rank worth - Wind goes up to 180 Mph the sphere goes to the size of 15 meters in length and 9 meters in width
A rank worth- Wind goes up to 270 Mph the sphere goes to the size of 20 meters in length and 12 meters in width
S rank worth- Wind goes up to 405 Mph the sphere goes to the size of 25 meters in length and 15 meters in width

Limit This a very power attack and due to the fact the its drain so much chakra this jutus and only be active for a max of 5 posts. Afterward the jutus will cancel out leave the user unable to use a simple jutus or attack for 1 post after the jutus cancel itselfs out.

Just translate the names of these two justu and I can approve it!
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Post by Katsu Hokkaido on Mon Aug 27, 2012 5:57 am

Edited translation added.
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Post by Rizuma Jigoku on Mon Aug 27, 2012 3:19 pm

I can approve it right now, but I want to point out that you have two Wind Dragon jutsus under different names. Did you want to keep that, or do you want to edit it out?


Name: Jigokugan [Cancer Hell]
Rank: C
Type: Kekkei Genkai
Description: Raises the perception of the user allowing them to see clearer and react 5% faster. Also allows the user to use their Nether chakra. this is only on one eye and the image in the eye will never leave, whether the Jigokugan's abilities are active or not. The user can also mimic the handsigns of the opponent only, not the jutsu.

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Post by Katsu Hokkaido on Mon Aug 27, 2012 5:12 pm

Its cool keep it as is.
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Post by Rizuma Jigoku on Tue Aug 28, 2012 2:15 am

Alright then.....

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