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Naimoto Tatsuna

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General Information


Name: Naimoto/Yamasawa Tatsuna
Nickname/Alias: Kitsune
Age: 24
Gender: Female
Looks:
Spoiler:
Tatsuna’s looks are not far from what her nickname would imply. Bright red hair falling in usually mussed waves to her waist offset the pale pink tones of her skin. Out from a heart shaped face shine eyes the color of deep emeralds framed with long lashes and the whole face complimented by full pouting lips. Her features are a bit vulpine what with the grin she often has on her fact that seems to be half mischievous and half serene, as if she knows something you don’t. She has a full figure with generous hips as well as more generous breasts that are made to seem even larger by her small waist. Not too tall but not a certified dwarf, she stands at about 5 feet 3 inches, making her smaller than most. This, however, is an asset as this small female is amazingly flexible, well balanced, and quick as a fox.

Generally she wears whatever strikes her fancy from her mounds of stolen or ‘acquired’ clothing and accessories. When she isn’t working she wears all kinds of casual styles, constantly changing and sometimes very odd. While she is on the job, though, she tends to dress in dark and neutral clothing, but if not working at night tends to stay away from straight black outfits. Working clothes are often dark greens and browns to blend in while looking ordinary as her work is constantly shifting from one end of the spectrum to another. Tatsuna has two permanent seals upon her body. One is the seal of her conduit relationship with the dragon Shinano Kaiten, which rests over her navel and spans about 7 inches across. It is very light and barely visible until it's usage, upon which it turns black and glows depending on how much chakra is being pulled through it. The other is the seal that keeps her from being electrocuted by the Denki blades and this resides on her left bicep.



Personality:
Tatsuna comes off as serene and sometimes even shy or distant around those she doesn’t know very well. However, once one gets to know her they realize that inside she is not exactly serene but has an immense cache of emotion that lies waiting to be expressed. She cares very deeply about those she has chosen and the ideals she lives by. A large aspect of those ideals is justice, though this sense of justice may not be anyone else’s cup of tea. A younger Tatsuna had more romantic ideas of what justice and right was and was not. Through the years at sea, those romantic wisps of justice were condensed and hardened into a amalgamate of piratical ways of thinking and the childhood sense of good and bad. She dislikes injustice when she sees it happening and more than not finds herself in all sorts of situations due to her innate empathic need to protect and make things right. For a price, of course, as she has to eat, too.

She sees the world as having endless possibilities, a never ending adventure full of experiences and most importantly, treasure. Unable to kick this high-seas habitual love of all things worth something, she tends to give in to her stealing and hoarding habit. Her quick-wittedness, nimble feet, and flaming hair earned her the oft-yelled salutation of ‘Kitsune’ which means fox. Tatsuna won’t hesitate to take something that she falls in love with and put it away with all of her other objects. Despite this, the green eyed dragon-rider has a capacity for selflessness beyond what is normal and this selflessness inspires her to constantly push herself beyond the breaking point to succeed.

Others often misunderstand Tatsuna, thinking her either airheaded and useless or cold and heartless. Because of this, Tatsuna often feels freer when part of a large group where she is simply a face among the crowd. Unnoticed and unremarkable. This trait is a boon in her field of employment, which varies from escort to hunter to bodyguard to silent assassin. She has the keen ability to blend in despite her fire-colored hair and is skilled in transformations. Tatsuna takes pride in her work and adapts easily to new situations, always taking in new information and ideas to put to good use. Another trait that helps her in this regard is her ability to sense emotions from objects and individuals. Though these emotions from other’s and her reaction to them may cause her to switch loyalties at the drop of a hat, she very rarely makes a mistake in choosing the individual who is best at heart. Once these people are decided upon as the one to be protected or fought for, the one in the right, she will stop at nothing to ensure their safety and happiness.

While she does have a vast emotional store from which to draw, her deep seated reservations with getting too close keep her at arm’s reach of anything more than casual. Her past wrought havoc with her ability to trust and she doesn’t easily. Although her empathy aids her in choosing what jobs to take and which to reject, she still doesn’t trust herself or others well enough to get much closer than employer or acquaintance. Yet this doesn’t mean she does not care about people, for the acquaintances and easy friends she chooses are never without her assistance. Her deep seated reservation does mean that she is quite content being alone and prefers no traveling companion unless it is absolutely necessary. This is compounded by the fact that due to past events, Tatsuna generally prefers not to be directly touched except by a select few, whom, as of right now only include Shinano Kaiten.

One oddity about this usually cheery and relatively outgoing young woman is that every so often, a shadow that she currently does not understand takes hold of her mind. Her thoughts turn to places of such darkness she would never dream of wandering through normally. Flashes of terrible visions pass through her mind and while this happens from time to time during resting hours and rarely during waking ones, while this alien shadow takes hold of her her reaction is different. Instead of being shaken to her core as she usually would be, a dark part of her seems to feed off it. Sucking in the evil thoughts and images until her eyes gleam with twisted excitement and an eerie grin splits her pretty face. These are the times when it is best to make oneself scarce, for these are the instances in which the young Tatsuna shifts from run of the mill shinobi for hire to bloodlusting berserker in search of treasure and thrill. Generally this happens after head injuries or headaches of some sort, or by random triggers that Tatsuna heself has not yet figured out completely. The only individual who is able to pull her back from the abyss of seeming abandon is the beast that accompanies her, a chaos-loving dragon himself.

Likes & Dislikes: Tatsuna loves sweets, books, art, and treasure. She hates injustice, pickled plums, not getting paid, and liars.



Rank Information


Village: Free Lands
Title Rank: Wanderer
Skill Rank: ANBU



Skill Information


Skill Specialty:
Main: Ninjutsu
Sub: Kenjutsu
Tertiary: Taijutsu

Elemental Affinity:
Main: Lightning
Sub: Wind

Special Characteristics:
Name: Empath
Rank: Average
Description:
Tatsuna is able to sense the emotions of other's. She can also sense the emotional recent history of an object. Sometimes this is an asset and other times this is a burden. She cannot read thoughts, only the emotions behind those thoughts. To do this she needs to be within range, which is about 15-20 feet. Any farther than that and she can simply sense the presence of another person. Her range on being able to sense another person is about 25 - 30 feet. The closer she gets, the clearer the sense of emotion she can feel. The further away, the more general it is. This is average because it doesn't really do anything for her in battle and while it does let her know someone else is within 30 feet, she'd figure that out anyway if they were to attack her.

Name: Fleet
Rank: Super
Description:
As a result of the extremely intense training by a hard-to-please master, Tatsuna is incredibly quick. This goes for the speed both on foot and in her reflexes or reaction time. To put it measurably, Tatsuna is naturally 25% faster than others at her level.

Name: Energy Pull
Rank: Super
Description:
While the seal is mainly for the use of Shinano Kaiten to achieve his full form, Tatsuna and the dragon have discovered an interesting side effect. The seal on Tatsuna's body was created as an exit gate for the dragon's chakra. From Tatsuna's body, Shinano Kaiten can pull his power to himself with fluid ease. However if the dragon does not take it for his own benefit but allows the girl to borrow it, the chakra remains in Tatsuna's body. For this reason the small girl is able to keep a portion of the dragon's chakra within herself for her own use. This is especially useful when her own chakra is down or to supplement her chakra during a long battle. She can pull enough chakra to completely recharge herself if necessary, but usually never does this, instead only pulling about a quarter of the chakra she needs to be fully battle-ready. Because this is a chakra above human level, it is extremely potent and usually Tatsuna needs only a very small portion to keep herself going until a battle is won. Sometimes, though, this chakra is needed a bit longer and in this case, problems arise. (SEE FLAW: OVERCHARGE)

Flaws/Weaknesses:
Name: Blackout
Rank: Average
Description:
Because of the ability to sense emotions that are not her own and therefore are alien to her brain, she has problems with headaches when around too many people for too long. Tatsuna can filter out the emotions of others but she can only filter others' emotions out for about 12 hours. After that a headache starts and depending on the intensity, either volume of people or strength of emotion, she develops a full blown migraine. This is NOT just a headache. Migraines are debilitating and can affect vision, light sensitivity, sound sensitivity, balance, and consciousness. Tatsuna has bad days and good days with this ability, sometimes not having any problems and sometimes having a flare, which is a debilitating migraine. These migraines can last from an hour or so and go away, to a few days and/or result in passing out so Tatsuna must be careful when she uses this ability.

Name: Overcharge
Rank: Elite
Description:
While borrowing the energy from a dragon may seem like a wonderful and lucky thing to be able to do, and it is, it has it's drawbacks. Shinano Kaiten being a powerful beast, has magnificently potent chakra and Tatsuna's body was not built to harbor such stuff. As a result, Shinano Kaiten's chakra burns Tatsuna from the inside out the longer it stays in her body without being taken, and moreso as she uses it. For every turn she harbors the dragon chakra, she takes the damage of one E rank attack. For every turn she attacks using the dragon chakra, she takes another damage of D rank. This means that without even using chakra, Tatsuna takes damage just for having the too-potent chakra flooding her system. If she uses dragon chakra to power jutsu then for that turn she takes a damage equal to a C-rank for each jutsu she uses the intense chara to fuel. Needless to say, while borrowing the chakra of a dragon might be nice, it is often not worth the repercussions.




Name: Denki
Amount: 2
Appearance:
Spoiler:
Rank: A
Special Abilities:
This metal has the ability to attract and conduct both chakra and natural lightning without electrocuting the user as long as the user has a matching seal. The user CANNOT state there is lightning-conducive weather during posts. Both curved blades have a seal placed upon them that keeps the individual with the corresponding/matching seal from being electrocuted while the lightning is being conducted. As these are not large blades, they cannot conduct large amounts of lightning at one time. They also attract lightning whether the user wants them to or not and can only absorb 1 attack (A and below) every 3 posts.
Origin:
While the blades themselves were stolen whilst Tatsuna sailed the seas and pillaged her fill, she was unaware of their ability being untrained in the ways of the shinobi. She found out the hard way that they attract and conduct wild electricity during a storm at sea and as a result, locked them away and did not look upon them again until under the care of her master. He, skilled in fuuinjutsu, placed the seal upon them originally as an experiment but it later proved to be an asset to Tatsuna.

Name: Arashi
Amount: 2
Appearance:
Spoiler:
Rank: A
Special Abilites:
The main thing about these blades is that until they're being used, you can't see them. Unless you look on the outside of Tatsuna's thighs, where permanent seals with the blades in them are tattooed. On one leg is a seal with an image of one of the blades pointing towards her feet. On the other thigh is the same seal and image, but with the blade pointing towards her head. When unsealed, one blade will come out pointing up and other will come out pointing down. Unsealing one blade does not automatically unseal both. In this way, Tatsuna is never without a weapon.






Name: Shinano Kaiten
Nickname: Kaiten-san
Age: 569
Rank: A
Species: Dragon
Appearance:

(This image shows only two 'legs' and Shinano Kaiten actually has four legs.)
Kaiten has the ability to change sizes at will, He changes into three different sizes. The first is about the size of a very long ferret/snake, the second is about the size of a horse (from his feet on the ground to the top of his back), and the third is his full massive form which is pictured below. He also has the ability to take on the appearance of a human as he wishes.
Spoiler:
Personality:
Kaiten is only sort of the typical Asian dragon. While he now has a great capacity for calm serenity and benevolence (though not used that often), he didn’t always used to be this way. All that calmness was developed during his injury induced dormancy. Inside there still lurks the ill-tempered and blood-lusting beast he was a hundred years ago, though he is rarely incited to such wrath, when he does it is quite scary indeed.
Spoiler:
He does have the ability to speak as well as to turn into a human, but doesn’t always choose to do so. When outside a populated area, he very rarely is in human form, usually donning this appearance to be able to accompany Tatsuna without gawking stares and to smoke. When he is in human form, he has a penchant for smoking opium, usually selling Tatsuna’s things to procure the drug.

He cares very much about Tatsuna though he still calls her ‘Kagi’ which means 'key' though he does it somewhat affectionately since she did release him from his prison. Over time he has taken on the role of a sort of grudging guardian, accomplice (he still enjoys causing trouble), and friend. Though he is almost always around Tatsuna, he is often less than pleasant and is even worse around new people. Shinano Kaiten is a very possessive dragon who doesn't like his things to be touched, and he considers Tatsuna one of his things. Though he does have a large capacity for being benign and peaceful (though it’s more laziness) once he is incited, he’s downright foul to be around. Mostly Tatsuna and he get along rather well, Kaiten-san having developed a fondness for her over the years.
Background:
Kaiten-san has been around for a few centuries already. A hotheaded beast with a taste for chaos and destruction, he got into fights quite frequently and purposefully. His hulking form battled with other enormous creatures and they took delight in the chaotic mess they left in their wake. Shinano Kaiten would even take his human form so he could slake his thirst for bloodshed with the skilled of mankind. Very contrary to the benevolent dragons the humans were used to hearing of, Kaiten-san easily caused wars and upheaval within nations simply for the sake of the fight. He never expected anyone to be able to complain about his designs, and most certainly did not expect to be foiled. Yet he was, by a human no less, and as a result was sealed away in an ornate wooden funeral urn. Constantly guarded, the box-urn was transferred from place to place for over six generations until it was stolen by a common thief in the hopes of selling the box for quick cash. From there the box wound up in many places over the course of the next dozen or so decades, strangely not able to be opened by anyone who tried, until finally it was stashed away on an island along with many other things. The stasher intended to return to retrieve it but never came and there Shinano Kaiten remained in his box prison for just shy of a hundred years.

Until, one glorious day, he was freed by a curious young human with hair like a floating flame and eyes like the forest. At first he thought that it was a fox woman, come to taunt him in his diminished state. For in his battle with the wretched human who imprisoned him, he had been wounded and his centuries in the box had not allowed for his body to heal. He quickly learned that she wasn’t, made obvious by the fact that she decided to mend his mangled body with the help of the other denizen of the island. Begrudgingly he admitted that no fox woman would be so reckless as to help the terrible Shinano Kaiten. Over time, he healed but before he could leave to wreak more havoc upon the world, the very man that healed him put a seal upon him and Tatsuna that requires her to unlock his titanic full form. In his fury he attacked the old man and ended up battling the young woman and, due to his smaller size and weakened state, lost to her. This created in him a sort of respect that grew when she came to him later, telling him that she had basically decided to be the conduit through whom he could attain his true form. Still angry at the betrayal of the fuuinjutsu master and the loss of his latest battle, he tricked the girl into activating the seal on her body and tore all of his chakra from her. As a result of his actions the girl fell unconscious and didn't awake for days on end, causing the usually callous beast to feel ashamed of what he'd done. After this the two developed an easy companionship and in time Shinano Kaiten grew to become fond of her instead of resentful. An unintended side effect of the seal is that it becomes hot when the other uses a certain amount of chakra, indicating that they are in trouble. Without Tatsuna being conscious, Shinano Kaiten cannot attain is true hulking size and therefore sticks around so as to protect her and in case he needs to unlock it.

Jutsu's:


Background Information


History: Warning: Long. Don’t click if you don’t want to read.
Spoiler:
Tatsuna’s story starts out the way anyone else’s would. She was born to loving parents and taken care of until she grew into a beautiful woman. Only Tatsuna’s parents loved gambling, not Tatsuna. To pay off their debts, a mountain of unreconciled accounts and owed to organized crime no less, they did what any desperate addict would do. They sold their firstborn child. Her parent’s insisted on calling it collateral, but the barely a year old redhead only knew that her parents weren’t there anymore. Unsure of what to do with a kid but knowing such coloring would fetch a high price across the water in a few years, Tatsuna was plopped into the care of the oyabun’s help for the next three years. Rarely spoken to and never touched, she never learned what her name was and could barely speak at all except for ‘yes’ and ‘no’. Eventually, she was plopped into the cargo hold of a ship and sent off to be sold into the sex trade to pay off her parents’ debt. That would have been the open and close story of her life had it not been for a mere coincidence.

Perhaps it was coincidence and perhaps it was fate, but when the captain of the Kyuubi Ketsueki pirate vessel attacked the cargo ship it changed the almost-slave girl’s life. Yamasawa Kenzo had just lost his lovely and courageous green-eyed wife in childbirth and his baby girl only survived for a handful of days after. In his rage, Yamasawa boarded the cargo ship and slaughtered every inch of human flesh residing upon it. Until he came across a very young girl with striking red hair and green eyes as deep as the sea. He would have had no qualms about cutting the small girl down had she not simply stared at him with the clear and understanding eyes of his late wife. Instead of afraid, as any child would be with a sharp sword at their throat, she simply looked at him with acceptance and reached out to touch his face. Stunned and confused, Yamasawa stayed his hand and in a moment of paternal instinct ordered the girl to be taken to his quarters.

After raiding the cargo ship of all its goods, the captain came back aboard and got the gist of what had happened to the girl. For some reason the child seemed to be lacking in verbal skills. Unable to leave her to a life of prostitution, Yamasawa kept her aboard the Kyuubi Ketsueki. She learned to speak very quickly and then moved on to learn everything she could be taught like a sponge. Due to her thirst for knowledge and her apparent knack for understanding and surprising intelligence, she was given the name ‘Tatsuna,’ a play off the word for ‘hidden genius.’ First she was kept as a cabin girl, then as her skills grew, particularly her combat skills, she became part of the actual crew. It was plain that she was an asset to the crew and as such, she moved up in the ranks easily. Her attitude, quick-wittedness, and fast reflexes earned her the nickname ‘Kitsune’ and her prowess in battle and tactics earned her the position of first mate at the age of 16. She had found a group of crew that treated her like family, a captain that saw her as a daughter and treated her as such with a very firm but loving hand, and a livelihood that kept her rolling in treasure. Treasure was a thing she had learned to love immensely, and there was nothing she wouldn’t do for the chance of a big payout.

Nothing, including the merciless slaughtering and burning of entire villages. Though her beloved captain viewed the redhead as a daughter and showed favor to her as such, Yamasawa was no less ruthless and cruel as the captain of a ship full of bloodthirsty and treasure-hungry seafarers. He stopped at nothing to achieve his ends and the only survivors were ones that joined the crew or served for their entertainment. Many a full crewed vessel was sent a ghost ship from the clutches of the Kyuubi Ketsueki, sailing aimlessly about the waters. Tatsuna learned to thrive in this environment, being the one exception to the captain's callous heart. She developed the soul of a Viking berserker reborn and reveled in blood, glory, and the feel of sweet gold in her hands. In battle she was a whirlwind of blades, cutting down every man, woman, or child that stood in her path and leaving none to protest her gleaning. The adventure thrilled her, the battles invigorated her, and the misfit family that had formed around her fulfilled all her need. All in all, Tatsuna was happy.

However, as they say, all good things come to an end. This happy period of learning, family, adventure, and treasure came to a rather violent end. It seemed that a small group of crew were unsatisfied with what they saw as favoritism by the captain towards the redheaded first mate. Jealousy can incite the most ugly acts and this case was no different. During a routine rape and pillage of a smaller island village purported to have a hidden cache of rare jewels, all hell broke loose on board the Kyuubi Ketsueki. A mutiny broke out and in the ensuing chaos, Yamasawa was beheaded, thus installing the new captain. Upon her return to the ship, Tatsuna was captured immediately and told to accept the new captain’s leadership. She refused outright, causing the new captain to go into a fury. He ordered his men to have their way with the 17-year-old, which they did eagerly. Instead of pleading and crying, Tatsuna mocked them one by one, going on to list a string of very detailed insults that turned into threats of what she and the real captain would do once they were free. It was then showed to her in all its grisly glory, the head of her adoptive father.

Tatsuna has no recollection of what happened after that and hardly any memories of what happened before that besides flashes every now and again. The next thing she knew she was on sand, in pain, and it was incredibly bright, so she shut her eyes again. After that there was a bed and soft words being whispered to her, but she paid no attention, preferring to be lost in her own mind. She knew that she had served on a ship and how she came to be there. She recalled her relationship to Yamasawa and her other 'family' members, also that her adoptive father was gone. Unfortunately she retained her memories of events leading up to the knowledge of his murder and remembered the horrible vision of his head separated from its body. It took time for her body to heal and even so, her mind took longer. The kind soul who saved her turned out to be an old ninja who had mastered the arts of fuuinjutsu but not the art of dealing with a society that in his mind, interfered with his work. So he left it behind and focused instead on his work with fuuinjutsu, conducting experiments in peace and quiet. Little did he know that 8 years after his self-imposed exile, the old man would encounter a young woman washed up on shore. She was gravely injured and along with her came hulking remains of a large ship and the corpses of many slaughtered corpses that the old man guessed to be the crew. He let the sea take care of the corpses and simply left the parts of the ship on shore. The young redhead (at first the fuuinjutsu master thought her hair to be matted with blood) screamed in her sleep and woke up in sweats. Her injuries often gave her fevers but he was able to nurse her slowly back to health.

The day came when Tatsuna was fully healed and faced a choice, leave the island and face the world or stay and hermit herself away a while longer. She was torn, for on one hand she longed for the adventure and the treasures and the excitement. Yet on the other she feared facing people and the potential for betrayal they would impose upon her. Simply put, she was not ready. The shinobi master that had nursed her back to health gave her an alternative: if she chose to stay he would teach her all the ways of the shinobi in return for her day to day help, as he was getting up in years by now. Relieved that she had a valid excuse to stay, Tatsuna agreed and her training begun immediately. First theoretical knowledge was taught to her along with light physical training to get her mind and body fully prepared for what was to come. Tatsuna thought it would be simple compared to what she was used to doing on the high seas.

Alas, she was wrong. As a nurse and healer the old man was gentle and kind as spring rain. As a sensei the man was a beast. He trained her harder than she had ever been trained and demanded more than she thought her body could actually perform. At first she failed tasks often, but while her training remained strict and unyielding and she thought her body would surely break, her determination to succeed blossomed like a sakura tree in season. Tatsuna pushed herself beyond what she thought she could do and as time went on, she succeeded far more often than failed. Chakra control was drilled into her mind and very being until she could leap through the entire island without once touching the ground. Her master taught her truly everything he knew, the only thing she could not become skilled in was that for which her sensei himself had been renowned for. While her sealing techniques functioned well enough, they would never be good enough to take on apprenticeship with the master.

His skill in fuuinjutsu did become useful many times, however. Upon recovering goods from the wrecked ship, she found many weapons and two distinct matching blades that had properties beyond her current ability to wield. Her master sealed them so that his pupil could use them and she became quite adept at their application. Two years into her tutelage she came across the most powerful weapon she would ever behold. It was during one of her earlier attempts to transverse the island without touching the ground, a difficult feat, where she had discovered something both wonderful and terrible.

Tatsuna had been following along one of the streams that webbed across the island when a familiar shining had caught her eye. Knowing full well that this was the sheen of blessed gold, she immediately stopped and investigated. One piece of shining money led to her eye catching sight of another and she knew where there was some gold there might be much more. Up to the trees she took and scoured the ground with her eyes, picking out a scattered but sure trail of the yellow stuff. This trail she followed and was led after a time, for the trail was sparse at best and took hours to uncover and follow to completion, to what looked to be a simple rock wall overgrown with various flora. Disappointed, Tatsuna turned away to head back only to have another glimmer of gold catch her eye. Right betwixt the vines that snaked all across the rock, it lay as if giving her one more push of hope. She began to tear down the vines, now determined as ever, and as they came down they revealed a medium sized cave. The best part was that therein laid a collection of trunks. Excited, Tatsuna explored these trunks discovering gold pieces, jewelry, very old clothes, a few weapons, and other such items. Some smaller boxes in the trunks even opened to new treasures, except one that she could not open.

It was the most ornate box there, with images of fighting beasts inlaid with jade and precious stones on the sides and lines upon lines of writing on the bottom and the top. No matter what she tried to open the box, using all the weapons she had on her person, the lid would not budge. She imagined some great treasure lying within waiting for her to hold it in her hands. A huge gem, maybe. Or the royal seal of some long dead emperor in solid gold. Yet she would never get to it if she couldn’t open it. Getting irritated, she took the box out of the cave where she could better see and haphazardly copied a releasing technique that she had seen mentioned once in the vast amount of scrolls her teacher kept. The lid snapped open with a ground shaking boom and a shockwave rippled out from it, sending her unprepared body tumbling back several feet.

As she stared in wonder at the hulking beast glowering and shimmering with power before her, she felt such an intense wave of suffering that she fell to her knees. The beast looked livid and when it spoke, the deep voice grated like falling rocks, demanding to know what a puny fox was thinking, releasing the great Shinano Kaiten upon itself. Tatsuna implored to the very irritated dragon that she was not a fox but a human and begged to be allowed to assist him in his injuries. Anything to not get slaughtered on the spot, as this dragon was extremely different from the onse told about in stories. The dragon, Shinano Kaiten, must have been amused at the boldness of such a small human, for he laughed and agreed. He said that if she could actually heal his wounds, she would be always in his favor. Tatsuna immediately went to her master and explained the situation, and after much convincing that this had actually taken place, agreed to help.

Shinano Kaiten must have been being sarcastic, for when Tatsuna returned with her master and a plethora of healing items, he looked shocked. Or as shocked as a dragon can actually look. The two humans, tiny in comparison to his enormous size, did as they said and healed him, though it took time. He learned that the small redhead was being trained in the arts of battle and he himself longed to once again become the bane of most living creatures. After careful study of the imprisonment box, the fuuinjutsu master learned about the dragon's history and decided that this was no beast that should be unleashed upon the modern world. So while the beast was resting with the help of the heaviest drugs the old man had, a seal was placed upon the dragon. The seal reduced him to a much smaller size, certainly no match for the larger bests, and the dragon was none the wiser. Until he awoke to a heated argument between the old man and his student. Thus Kaiten-san became appraised of the situation and was beyond furious, attacking the old man.

The girl got in the way and protected the aged trickster and Tatsuna’s first real battle ensued right then and there, with the dragon she had just helped heal. Due to his much reduced size and still healing injuries, therefore unable to use his full power, the small girl won. Kaiten-san was shocked and appalled and refused to speak until days later when the girl came back and lifted her shirt, showing a seal that was much similar to his own right over her navel. She explained that she convinced her master to create a way for Kaiten-san to attain his full form, though she would act as the conduit through which he received it. His full power was locked away within himself but the seal on her body, when activated, allowed the free flow of that power through her seal. Eager to attain his full size once more, the dragon slyly asked her to demonstrate giving him just a little of his power. Tatsuna agreed, but the moment she activated the seal, Kaiten-san immediately pulled his full energy through her and reveled in his mightiness. Only when he looked down did he see the girl collapse into an unconscious heap on the earth beneath him. Upon her loss of consciousness, he reverted back to his smaller size and using his human form, carried her to her master. The girl was unconscious for many days and the dragon was much chagrined, both because he had done something dishonorable and because he was back in his smaller size.

When she awoke and forgave him instead of being angry, going so far as to apologize that she was unable to help him keep his form for longer, the dragon’s attitude changed. Though he still didn’t like the deceitful old man, after his wounds had healed properly, he spent more of his time around the girl. Often he would go so far as to assist in her training and to assume human form for her to spar with, being careful in his fully healed condition to not injure her. As now he realized that if she died or lost consciousness, his true form was out of his reach. The sealed pair gradually developed a sort of light camaraderie.

After five years of intensive training and conditioning both her mind and her body for use as a shinobi in the real world, her master pronounced her ready. Now, years away from where she had mentally been before, Tatsuna did indeed feel prepared to face the world again and planned her departure. She would use the parts of the broken ship she had once served on to craft a new, much smaller vessel and journey to the mainland with Kaiten-san. The old man refused to return, saying that now he could continue his experiments in peace. His parting advice was a little confusing for Tatsuna, but she said she would heed his words and set out with her companion and her belongings, including the treasure she found Kaiten-san amongst, safely sealed into a handful of scrolls.

Upon arriving on the mainland, there were many things for the 24-year-old to reacquaint herself with and she spent many days doing just that, until she ran out of pocket money. She was unwilling to use the treasure just yet, as unsealing it in an unsafe environment would bring trouble and so had to search for other ways to take care of necessities. It was easy to fall back into old habits and though not on the ocean any longer, the same basic rules applied. Kaiten-san was all too eager to assist in the burglaries that ensued and soon the pair had many things and nowhere to keep them. They worked out a solution that was comfortable for them both. As neither were used to living in a set place, much less houses, this kind of existence was out of the question. Neither did they wish to align themselves with any nation, as per her master’s advice. Instead they found a suitable site for a cache in which to store whatever they wished, a deep and sizeable cave on the side of a small forest covered mountain. It was perfect and they used it as their loosely termed ‘home,’ though in reality the duo wandered throughout the lands. For Tatsuna it was similar to being at sea, always moving, but instead of gunning down cargo ships she found random jobs to occupy her time and fill her wallet. She is currently for hire doing anything from escorting gentlemen to a party to assassinations, for a price.

RP Sample: Warning: Long. Don't like, don't read. Though it's a good read if I say so myself. It was fun writing. And obviously this is not Tatsuna, though it still shows that I'm not completely inept as a writer.
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“Reika! Are you alright?” the man that had just burst into the room exclaimed with a raised voice. His dark eyes shifted from the ink haired female that was his lover to the one holding the weapon pointing in her general direction, “You!”

The fiery head tilted and then rolled slowly to face the man, bright gold eyes regarding him boredly while at the same time sizing him up. Upon seeing the woman’s face, his own expression changed to first shock, then fear. The killer tried to hide her disgust.

“Your…eyes… that village… they said it was a demon…” he seemed to be confused, his hand still on the handle of his katana but not gripping it.

“It was not.” She countered.

A blink and fear quickly turned to anger, “It was you!”

“It was.”

His face took on a reddish and most unbecoming hue as his grip on his katana tightened and the sound of a blade being drawn sounded again. The kimono clad woman holding her own katana sighed again. This was not one of the scenarios she had played in her head. This was also not what she had agreed upon with her client. She was most displeased. Even more displeasing was the fact that the man was now charging her, in anger no less. His sword was carried at an improper angle and his body was also coming at her in an ill-devised posture. She casually and politely stepped out of the way just as he was about to barrel into her. Replacing her body with her sword just as he brought his down, effectively blocking his sloppy downward stroke. Leaving him wide open.

Soft, lightly tanned thighs were exposed as her leg shot up to let her foot pay a visit to his chin. The force of it pushed the man a few steps back and she gave him the time he needed to clutch at his face. Red seeped through his fingers and she inhaled sharply as her knees almost failed her, a skilled hand going to her abdomen as a familiar heat started to permeate her veins. The dark-haired singer below her caught her falter and decided to try and be a hero by trying her hand at attacking her. It didn’t quite work out the way she planned, as the redhead grabbed her again by the neck and shoved her back into the wall, pinning her with a terrifyingly emotionless stare.

“Scream or move and I make you watch me torture your lover to death.” Her eyes glittered like molten metal, a slight side effect of the psychosis inducing fever rearing its head. The raven haired girl shrunk back, her mouth half open.

“P-please…” the girl didn’t get to finish, as the man had now recovered enough to open his mouth. He rounded on the redhead, eyes dark with fury,

“Bitch! My family was in that village!” he charged her again, his sword drawn back to hit her in the stomach, something she could not allow under any circumstance. He continued his yelling at her,

“You killed my brother!”

Golden eyes widened and stared past him into nothingness as time seemed to go in slow motion and fast forward all at once. Brother… The breath went out of her as that single word ran through her mind like a speeding marquee. Flashes of blonde hair and a laughing face skittered across her mind and her body sang with sorrow. One moment he was feet away and the next a cold bite of folded steel was going through her shoulder, making a clean hole from the front to the back. In shock, her body unconsciously leaned forward onto her assailant. It took three pants of breath for her to come back to her senses… almost.

He’s touching me… no one touches me! The scene of a sunset flashed through her mind and she rapidly became irrational. DON’T TOUCH ME! It’s his fault! He’s keeping him from me! He’s keeping me from finding him! I have to stop him! I have to FIND HIM! Irrational turned to panic for a moment before something else… something from deeper within her brushed the surface like the rippling of a mirror. Kill...kill… In the way. Kill him! Kill! KILL HIM! KILL HIM NOW!

Immediately, a wave of searing heat spread outwards from that same cursed place before she drew back slightly, the man’s blade still in her shoulder. She forced herself not to wince as it tore muscle, instead bringing her other hand up with lightning speed to close fingers around his esophagus in a vise grip. He made a choking sound. Her head, previously down with vermillion locks covering her eyes, came up to reveal an eerie lopsided grin plastered across her face. No longer were her eyes a dark foreboding, deep golden color but such a brilliantly vivid shade they seemed to glow in the dim light of the room, adding to the chaotic aura now surrounding her. Her fingers squeezed harder and when she saw his hand jerk away from the katana handle to scrabble at his throat she shoved him back. He thudded to the ground and she tilted her head slowly to the side, walking forward as if curious. On her way she paused in front of the singer and snapped the point of her own sword to the woman’s throat,

“Up.” She commanded. The wide eyes staring back at her held nothing and so the redhead reached forward and grabbed the woman’s hair, jerking her up by it roughly and shoving her towards her fallen lover. The hem of the blue yukata ripped and the wearer fell forwards, landing next to the man that now struggled to breathe through his damaged throat. With shaking hands, Reika reached forward to try to do something to help him, helplessly sniffling in an attempt not to cry.

A gasp was heard and again the singer’s eyes went wide as the assassin’s blade sunk into her lover’s throat, jerking to the side to slit it open. Blood spattered her pretty face, the red a stark contrast to the pastel cream of her skin, her yukata staining as streaks of the same dark ruby substance dripped down the fabric. She let out a shaky breath and looked at the pair of hands that gripped the hilt, one bloodstained and dripping onto the other smearing the handle with red. Further up the same crimson liquid seeped steadily into the silk kimono sleeve and above that the katana still remained, protruding from the shoulder of the fire haired woman where she had been stabbed by the now dead man before her. Reika looked down, feeling warmth against her knees, to see her lover’s blood forming a puddle and spreading over the wooden floor. She stared at it dumbly.

“Kentaro…” she whimpered softly.

The killer’s head snapped towards her, the eerie smile now gone but the eyes still seeming to resemble lanterns.

“He should not have intervened.”

The raven haired performer had seemed to be in shock, but her eyes flickered up to the injured woman before flicking to the nearest door, the one that lead to the stage. The assassin wasn’t able to pull her katana from the throat and the wood beneath it in time to stop the girl from running for it. She made up for it by catching the girl before she could get close to the curtains separating the audience from the performance, grabbing her by that long hair again and dragging her back. The singer fought back rather valiantly for a weak untrained woman. Alas, in the end the performer was on her knees, her head pulled roughly back in a variance of the executioner position. The hired blade did not see her hand edging down to her thigh, or realize she had pulled out a tanto until the blade was buried into her side. The acrobat clenched her teeth to stem the scream that threatened to rip free as pain shot up the right side of her body.

Instead of screaming, as that would give away her position to the thankfully raucous crowd just opposite the curtain, she did the next best thing. Twisting quickly to get behind the singer, the redhead bent the brunette’s body backwards towards herself into an arch as Reika was still on her knees. This position made it easier for her to drive her katana through the ribcage of her victim while covering her mouth. Nevertheless, the singer let out a little pretty scream, her slender body jerking as the life slowly faded from those clear hazel eyes. The yukata was now covered in blood and ripped in places, but the redhead paid no mind to any of this as she removed the belt from the young woman just as she was drawing her last breath. Her robe fell partly open to reveal the wound that was killing her and the assassin’s eyes glittered again before fading back into their normal darkness. Gripping the piece of cloth that would serve as proof for her client, she slid her blade from Reika’s body and limped offstage.



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Re: Naimoto Tatsuna

Post by Guest on Mon Aug 27, 2012 8:47 pm

General Ninjutsu
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Name: Body Flicker
Rank: D
Range: L
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:N/A
Handsigns:1
Description: a high-speed movement technique, allowing a ninja to move short to long distances at an almost untraceable speed. To an observer, it appears as if the user has teleported. A puff of smoke is occasionally used to disguise the user's movements. It is accomplished by using chakra to temporarily vitalize the body and move at extreme speeds. The amount of chakra required depends on the overall distance and elevation between the user and the intended destination.

Name: Generic Sealing Technique
Rank: D
Range: S
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:N/A
Handsigns:None
Description: This technique is a standard ninja skill which allows a ninja to summon an assortment of items that have been stored using fuuinjutsu. Scrolls are the most common choice for item storage. When needed, the owner will activate the seals releasing their item or weapon of choice.

Lightning Ninjutsu
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b]Name:[/b] Lightning Rod
Rank: C
Range: S
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Lightning
Handsigns:1
Description:
When the user is in physical contact with the target, they gather lightning chakra and focus it. Then they allow it to pass through their bodies and to the opponent, who is then sent flying away from them with a large shock of electricity. This is good in a bind where the user cannot move anything but their hands, as only one handsign is needed.

Name: Static Cannonballs
Element: Lightning
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Handseals:4
Description: The user will summon their chakra into one arm. Outstretching their arm and holding it steady with the other the user will then be able to shoot off Static balls of electricity the size of cannon balls filled with concussive force. These cannon balls are quite powerful and can break apart rock.

Name: Lightning Clone
Rank: A
Range: M
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Lightning
Handsigns:5
Description: This technique allows the user to make This technique allows the user to make a shadow clone infused with lightning. Because it is a shadow clone, it is able to perform techniques and interact with the environment due to it having physical substance; and also evenly distributes the user's chakra to each clone. If the clone is injured, it will revert to its natural lightning-state, at the same time electrocuting whatever it is touching

Name: Flashing Serpent
Rank: C
Range: S
Type:Nin
Element:Lightning
Handsigns:4
Description: This attack allows the user to attack the opponent with lightning that spreads from their hands to under the victim. The lightning travels along the ground, resembling a snake.

Name: Spears of Heaven
Rank: B
Range: L
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Lightning
Handsigns:4
Description:The user creates spears of lighting of about an arm’s length and hurls them at the opponent. This attack only allows 4 lightning spears to be made with a single jutsu.

Name: Electromagnetic Murder
Rank: A
Range: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element:Lightning
Handsigns:5
Description: This technique allows the user to create a wave of electricity from their hands. The user can vary its power from a small surge to shock an opponent to a powerful stream of lightning capable of ripping through solid rock. It is ideal to use in conjunction with a water technique.

Name: Undershock
Rank:C
Range:M
Type: Ninjutsu
Element:Lightning
Handsigns: 3
Description:
Once activated, the user will send lightning into the ground which will travel towards the target and electrocute them. This attack acts as an immobilizer much like a tazer would, leaving the opponent twitching and veritably useless for 1 turn.

Kenjutsu
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Name:Denki Shock Shot
Rank: D - A
Range:S
Type:Kenjutsu
Element:Lightning
Handsigns:4
Description: This technique involves the user pushing lightning chakra into the blades (Denki only). The blades become consumed by crackling lightning that condenses until the blades are surrounded by flickering white light. Tatsuna then aims the blade or blades (fired at separate locations the damage is half of the full rank of chakra used for each direction, if both are aimed at same location, full damage. Very simple,) at the desired location and releases the chakra. A concenctrated shot of pure lighting chakra is sent directly at the location.

Name: Mirror Blade
Type: Kenjutsu
Rank: B
Range:M
Element:N/A
Description:This skill allows the user to wield two blades with concentration on only one. The reason is that the dominant arm is exactly mirrored by the other arm. The movements are the exact same without the user having to focus on both. This is very advantageous if one arm is numb or injured. However, using an injured arm is pretty dangerous as it can further damage the arm. Use of this technique in such a situation is up to the discretion of the user.

Name: Wind Decapitation
Rank: A
Range: M
Type:Kenjutsu
Element: Wind
Handsigns:1
Description: The user infuses their blade with wind, before slashing in the direction of the desired enemy, resulting in the creation of large arcs of sharp wind that are sent speeding towards the opponent. A skilled user of this technique is capable of surrounding their immediate area with a wave of lethal wind chakra that can slash multiple targets badly no matter where they approach from.

Name: Dance of the Crescent Moon
Rank: A
Range: S
Type:Kenjutsu
Element:N/A
Handsigns:None
Description: The user creates three shadow clones, and each one of them assaults the enemy from a blind spot. The attack occurs on three fronts simultaneously, so it's almost impossible to catch them flat-footed. Furthermore, the mighty attacks are so severe that receiving a blow even from one among the three will inevitably result in a fatal wound. In addition, because of the magnificence this ninjutsu projects as they jump at the opponent's upper body in an orbital pattern, the elegance of which is reminiscent of the shape of a crescent moon.

Name: Flying Sparrow
Rank: C
Range: S
Type:Kenjutsu
Element:N/A
Handsigns:None
Description: User channels enormous amounts of chakra into their chakra conducting weapon and repeatedly strikes the opponent. With the finishing blow they make a great big slash. Then, the opponent falls, and out of nowhere another blinding slash comes, wounding the enemy severely.

Name: Cutting Helicopter
Rank: B
Range:M
Type: Kenjutsu
Element:Wind
Handsigns:3
Description:
The user can toss either kunai, senbon, or shuriken in the air and after making the handsigns, catch them with chakra infused wind. Then the user makes the weapons spin like helicopters and can launch them at the target. A benefit is that because the weapons are controlled by chakra wind, they can be pulled back after hitting the target, or missing, to hit them again. This can be done up to 3 times (barring obstacles) before the technique dissipates.

Wind Jutsu
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Name: Kamaryuu
Rank:C
Range: S -M
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Wind
Handsigns:2
Description:
This jutsu requires Shinano Kaiten to beat his wings once to create a gust of wind. From this wind, Tatsuna can create pockets of vacuum by colliding the currents of air together, and send this mini-maelstrom at a target. Once inside the whirlwind the target is at the mercy of the high pressured wind cutting at their body. This is also very useful for deflecting incoming projectile weapons.

Name: Penetrating Wind
Rank:C
Range:S-M
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Wind
Handsigns:5
Description:
A relatively simple technique that creates a sudden gust of wind, but its scale varies greatly depending on the user. If used by a superior shinobi, it has enough destructive power to knock down a large tree. The wind from the squall can blow away all things in the user's line of sight. A variation of the technique involves a smaller blast of wind which gets ignited with flame.

Name:Dust Cutter
Rank:C
Range:S-M
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Wind
Handsigns:3
Description:
After forming the needed hand seals, the user places the palms of their hands together and blow through them, creating a strong burst of cutting dust racing towards the target. If the user moves their head, they can follow the first dodge the target makes. However, should the target dodge another time, the user can’t follow with the Dust Cutter because it doesn’t last that long. About only 1.5 turns. (i.e. the technique will dissipate during the users second post)

Name: Spinning Hammer
Rank:C
Range: S - M
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Wind
Handsigns: 5
Description:
A vortex of spinning wind is created with this technique that is made up of natural detritus such as leaves, flowers, paper, sand, or anything else that is lightweight and numerous. With this the user can either limit the target’s range of vision to leave them open to attack or the powerful vortex can slam the target into objects like trees, rocks, buildings, other people, etc.

Name:Wind Blade
Rank:C
Range:S-M
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Wind
Handsigns:3
Description:
The user is able to create blades of wind without the use of an actual blade and send them hurtling towards the target. These can also be used to block incoming attacks of projectile weapons as well as change the trajectory of chakra based attacks such as fireballs or water bullets.

Name: Slicing Blast
Rank:C
Range:M
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Wind
Handsigns: 6
Description:
With this attack the user blows into their hands and uses chakra to heavily amplify that breath into a cutting wind. They then aim their hands at a target and release the pent up and pressurized attack in a flurried web of cutting air currents that slice through flesh very easily.

Name: Wind Spear
Rank: C
Range:M
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Wind
Handsigns:5
Description:
The user will focuse wind chakra and send it out in a concentrated spear about the length of their arm. This wind spear is sent speeding towards the target who takes damage as if an actual spear was throws at them. This technique creates two spears to be used.

Name: Wind Bullet
Rank:C
Range:M
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Wind
Handsigns:5
Description:
To use this attack the user will inhale a huge breath and while the breath is in their body, infuse it with chakra. They then expel it forcefully, sometimes using their hands around their mouth to further imbue the wind with chakra, to create bullets of concentrated powerful air that are shot at the target. This technique can create 4 bullets.

Taijutsu
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Name: Crackling Fist
Rank: B
Range: S
Type:Taijutsu
Element: Lightning
Handsigns: 3
Description:
When this jutsu is used, the user focuses lightning chakra into their hands until it materializes. Once their hands are crackling with lightning chakra, they attack their opponent. Every hit they land also shocks their opponent, dealing twice the damage sticking a finger into an electrical socket would. The electric shock damage coupled with the physical assault logically does enough damage on its own to incapacitate the victim with about 4 immediately successive hits (i.e. hits that are not spaced out but one immediately after another). This attack is not near as powerful as the super-concentrated Chidori developed by Hatake Kakashi long ago and cannot kill or punch through an opponent’s body in one blow, or is it formed into a ball.


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Re: Naimoto Tatsuna

Post by SUN on Tue Aug 28, 2012 3:51 am

Alright, going to make this quick and only doing this for a second. As I told you. I'm uncomfortable doing your app, you know why. But yeah. Lets go.

Your Weapons.
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SCs

Alright. Your Denki. You say it can attract, and conduct both chakra lighting & natural. I have to say no to the natural or pure lighting. As that is similar to Kiba. The attraction of chakra lighting might be a small problem, but nothing huge. When you say attract do you mean if an opponent uses a lighting jutsu it is drawn specifically to the blade? If, so you'll need to state what ranks the Denki attract, as it would be unfair to pull every single lighting jutsu to the sword.

Arashi is the next one.
That weapon is S-Rank
You state that it absorbs water and wind chakra, and allow you to use them in your next technique. Just checking first of all. You mean like when you stab someone or cut someone, and they have either the water or wind element it absorbs chakra that way? Or did you mean if they fired the water dragon or air drilling bullet your blades with absorb the chakra? Btw can you describe what the Hayate blades are? You mentioned them, but didn't state what they are.

Your Flaws.
These need some polishing.
Your Overcharge is a super flaw not an elite. It's a super because of the because your energy pull can completely regenerate your chakra supply. Not saying you'll use it to do so, but you did write it with the capability.
E-Rank Techniques deal NO damage. That should be changed to a D

Your Denki Drawback needs to be completely relocated to your weapon. It's not a personal flaw for your character. The reason why is because you can simply choose not to use this weapon. It isn't directly tied to your character, as it's a tool they can/you can decide to use. So please move it to the weapon Denki.

Your Energy Pull is an Elite.
We don't really allow additional chakra increase unless, special permission is given.

Fleet.
E.T Phone Home! Uh.. damn. I forgot what I was going to say...
Oh. Uh you must change the X3 to either 20%-25% if you want to maintain it at Super.
Or to 30%, if you want to upgrade to Elite. I know it sucks. I kinda hate the 30% or this that stuff, but meh.

Your Empath, thingy (sorry, if I screwed that)
Is at least a super. It allows you sense anyone with in 90 feet. In addition you can also feel the emotional state of who is around you. Even though you don't know exactly what a person is thinking. Knowing the emotion they are feeling, could give you a heads up, but overall it's pretty much the sensory aspect ._.

Well, that's all for now my Love. Please don't be mad at me.
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Re: Naimoto Tatsuna

Post by Guest on Tue Aug 28, 2012 5:06 pm

Fixed. Also jutsu involving Arashi blades taken out.

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Re: Naimoto Tatsuna

Post by Rizuma Jigoku on Tue Aug 28, 2012 6:57 pm

Sun-san is allowing me the jutsu in this app to approve. Get ready Aki-sama, I'm going one spoiler at a time.


Lightning Ninjutsu


Name: Static Cannonballs
Element: Lightning
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Handseals:4
Description: The user will summon their chakra into one arm. Outstretching their arm and holding it steady with the other the user will then be able to shoot off Static balls of electricity the size of cannon balls filled with concussive force. These cannon balls are quite powerful and can break apart rock.

Ouchies. That is all, you're good here.

Name: Lightning Dragon
Rank: A
Range: M
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Lightning
Handsigns:5
Description: After generating lightning from their body which takes the form of a large dragon, the user can manipulate it to affect multiple victims at once by electrocuting them. Like various other Lightning Release techniques, the potency of this ability can be increased through the application of water. from their body which takes the form of a panther, the user can manipulate it to affect multiple victims at once by electrocuting them. Like various other Lightning Release techniques, the potency of this ability can be increased through the application of water. techniques, the potency of this ability can be increased through the application of water.

O_o what?



Name: Electromagnetic Murder
Rank: B
Range: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element:Lightning
Handsigns:5
Description: This technique allows the user to create a wave of electricity from their hands. The user can vary its power from a small surge to shock an opponent to a powerful stream of lightning capable of ripping through solid rock. It is ideal to use in conjunction with a water technique.

Can you make this A rank please?

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Re: Naimoto Tatsuna

Post by Guest on Tue Aug 28, 2012 7:37 pm

Hai! Wagashi! Ninmu kanryou.

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Re: Naimoto Tatsuna

Post by Rizuma Jigoku on Wed Aug 29, 2012 2:44 am

To the sword crap!


Kenjutsu


Name:Denki Shock Shot
Rank: C - S
Range:S
Type:Kenjutsu
Element:Lightning
Handsigns:4
Description: This technique involves the user pushing lightning chakra into the blades (Denki only). The blades become consumed by crackling lightning that condenses until the blades are surrounded by flickering white light. Tatsuna then aims the blade or blades (fired at separate locations the damage is half of the full rank of chakra used for each direction, if both are aimed at same location, full damage. Very simple,) at the desired location and releases the chakra. A concenctrated shot of pure lighting chakra is sent directly at the location.

pure lightning = ouchies, could this be B - S instead.

Name: Wind Decapitation
Rank: A
Range: M
Type:Kenjutsu
Element: Wind
Handsigns:1
Description: The user infuses their blade with wind, before slashing in the direction of the desired enemy, resulting in the creation of large arcs of sharp wind that are sent speeding towards the opponent. A skilled user of this technique is capable of surrounding their immediate area with a wave of lethal wind chakra that can slash multiple targets badly no matter where they approach from.

Ha! i know where this one came from! It's fine though.

Name: Flying Sparrow
Rank: C
Range: S
Type:Kenjutsu
Element:N/A
Handsigns:None
Description: User channels enormous amounts of chakra into their chakra conducting weapon and repeatedly strikes the opponent. With the finishing blow they make a great big slash. Then, the opponent falls, and out of nowhere another blinding slash comes, killing the enemy.

It can't say "killing the enemy," sorry. Near fatal wounds are fine, but i can't give auto-kills.

Name: Cutting Helicopter
Rank: B
Range:M
Type: Kenjutsu
Element:Wind
Handsigns:3
Description:
The user can toss either kunai, senbon, or shuriken in the air and after making the handsigns, catch them with chakra infused wind. Then the user makes the weapons spin like helicopters and can launch them at the target. A benefit is that because the weapons are controlled by chakra wind, they can be pulled back after hitting the target, or missing, to hit them again. This can be done up to 3 times before the technique dissipates.

This one is good but i just have to remind you that if your winds can't reach the weapon, they can't control them. Meaning if they get stuck in a tree or something, you're have to find some way to push the weapon out before you can control it again. You might wanna add tha,t but I won't make it mandatory.
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Post by Guest on Wed Aug 29, 2012 2:57 am

Fixed

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Post by Rizuma Jigoku on Wed Aug 29, 2012 3:13 pm

To the wind stuffs!


Wind Jutsu


Name:Wind Blade
Rank:C
Range:S-M
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Wind
Handsigns:3
Description:
The user is able to create blades of wind without the use of an actual blade and send them hurtling towards the target. These can also be used to block incoming attacks of projectile weapons as well as change the trajectory of chakra based attacks such as fireballs or water bullets.

I feel kinda stupid asking the second part of this question but i must. Can this be blocked or seen? If not I'll have to ask for a rank upgrade please.
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Post by Guest on Wed Aug 29, 2012 5:08 pm

Yes, you can see it.

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Post by Rizuma Jigoku on Wed Aug 29, 2012 5:23 pm

Hey, guess what.....

APPROVED

Dangit so close. I need you to change your skill rank to a letter first.

never mind, i got unlazy
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Post by Rizuma Jigoku on Wed Aug 29, 2012 7:05 pm

UNAPPROVED


Name: Lightning Dragon
Rank: A
Range: M
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Lightning
Handsigns:5
Description: After generating lightning from their body which takes the form of a large dragon, the user can manipulate it to affect multiple victims at once by causing the dragon's long shape to touch them at once, electrocuting them. Like various other Lightning Release techniques, the potency of this ability can be increased through the application of water.

I totally forgot Kirin was Banned. this is too similar so i'll have to ask you to get rid of it. Sorry.
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Re: Naimoto Tatsuna

Post by Rizuma Jigoku on Thu Aug 30, 2012 2:26 am

RE-APPROVED

Idk where to put this so it's going in A-Rank


Name: Jigokugan [Cancer Hell]
Rank: C
Type: Kekkei Genkai
Description: Raises the perception of the user allowing them to see clearer and react 5% faster. Also allows the user to use their Nether chakra. this is only on one eye and the image in the eye will never leave, whether the Jigokugan's abilities are active or not. The user can also mimic the handsigns of the opponent only, not the jutsu.

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