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Kazuya, Ushima(Complete)

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Kazuya, Ushima(Complete)

Post by SUN on Sun Aug 12, 2012 5:47 pm


Name:Kazuya, Ushima
Nickname/Alias: SUN.
Age:29
Gender:Male
Looks:




Personality:
Socially
Normally collected and witty, Ushima is a modest gentlemen who genuinely cares for the common man. He speaks in a polite manner and tries to practice humility when facing conflicting interests. Hoping to see the end of the wars and cruelty, he desires to someday see his dream become a reality. Striving to protect chivalry at all times, however, he has a nearly black-and-white perception of the world; he is quick to judge others based on their capabilities, actions, and status. If a person acts with what is commonly perceived as lowly or underhanded, he often cuts them down without question. When meeting others for the first time, Ushima is very silent, not do to shyness or cowardice, but he will only speak to them, if he believes it is worth his time.

Battle
Ushima isn't one who enjoys playing around with his enemies. He attempts to crush them as quickly as possible. He's not sadistic, or hot-headed. He'll try to analyze the enemy, and while countering with timing, and power. However, he is merciful to his enemies, if they can no longer fight, or no longer wish to fight he'll allow them to live.
Likes & Dislikes: (What does your char like and dislike? O
Catch Phrase: (Does your char have any catch phrase's? Optional)




Clan Name:Kazuya
-Bloodline Description:Guraton -- Quake Release
Spoiler:
(Wind + Earth)

A bloodline release formed a combination of Wind and Earth. Quake release allows the user to create a variety of shockwaves originating from the self. When used in taijutsu, the user can dramatically increase the range and destructive power of individual blows; when used in ninjutsu, the result is a number of destructive techniques that transcend all physical medium; effecting water, earth and air. Though it has much potential, the majority of Quake release techniques are based on supplementary boosts to techniques already known. When these attacks are used, much like wind, the trajectory of the shockwaves are seen by the displacement of particles in the air, making them somewhat visible as white fluctuation.

Most shockwaves are able to neutralize if not over power other technques; bringing life to the saying, "a good defense is a great offense", by countering blow for blow, one can stop attacks dead in their tracks by stripping them of their momentum. Not only that but the shockwaves by pass defenses; the waves moving through physical medium and causing massive internal damage with even the most basic of hits.

This technique has supremecy over the two physical mediums of wind an earth, in which it can penetrate and repel with a technique of equal strength (as an advantage, equal techniques go to the technique with an advantage). However, both fire, lightning won't be averted by the shockwaves, as if the two don't at all affect one another when they interact. Water and Wind are fundamentally neutral. Thus, a battle between lightning/fire and quake becomes one of offense.
Village:Mist (Has Permission from Clan Creator to be in Suna)
Clan Symbol: [Optional]
Clan Traits: [Optional]
Secret Clan Jutsu:
Spoiler:
Name: Richter Scale
Rank: D-S
Type: Taijutsu
Element: Quake [Guraton]
Description: This is a technique in which the user stores Quake chakra at a point at the body then releases it into a normal physical attack. The result is a great increase in the power and range of the attack. The taijutsu's strength is increased more for every post that the Quake chakra is stored as seen bellow.

C rank, +1.5meters range increase
B rank, + 3meters range increase
A rank, + 7.5meter range increase
S rank , +15meter range increase

Name: Reverberation
Rank: D-S
Type: Kenjutsu/Weaponry
Element: Quake [Guraton]
Description: A technique in which Quake chakra is channeled through a weapon. Upon weilding or using the weapon, the chakra is released to create a shockwave along with the weapons attack to increase it's destructive potential and range.

C rank, +1.5meters range increase
B rank, + 3meters range increase
A rank, + 7.5meter range increase
S rank , +15meter range increase

Name: Tectonic Omniscience
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Quake [Guraton]
Description: A passive sensing technique in which the user can observe the location of living things by motion alone. All physical mediums become motion detectors to the user, in waves in the ground and in water are used to locate targets. Even the wind generated by swift movement is enough to discover an individuals location within a 30meter radius of the self. This lasts for exactly two of your opponents posts from activation.
History:
The clan originated and a tribal clan from north modern day Sand Country. As the many clans came together in Kinship bonds through war, this clan especially was resistant to change. It wasn't until the rule of the third Kage that the clan was defeated and then assimilated into the hidden village, however even then they were defiant in participating in the hidden village. Over decades they struggled to hold their abilities secret from the world stubbornly until they were pushing the edges of possibly even losing the bloodline all together. As a result, the clan devised a plan to continue the blood line that resulted in an attempt to take over the hidden village along with many other rebellionists shortly after the death of the third. However, they were quickly defeated and those that weren't defeated or killed were exiled. Whats lets of the clan now were those that stay loyal to Sunagakure during this rebellion of sorts.

The clans movement form their was spotty to say the least and it seems as though refugees of the time weren't to be accepted in any other major nation in the continent. They traveled through north fire country until they were eventually pushed to south Fire Country and later to the islands to the east. It wasn't too long, however, until these island were adopted into water country territories and Kirigakure would make a pact of sorts with the clans remnants to keep the bloodline within the territories of water nation; thus they settled there until they were eventually integrated into Water nation culture, mostly defeated simply through virtue of a long hard history.



Village: Suna
Title Rank: Anbu Leader
Skill Rank: S




Skill Specialty:
Main:Taijutsu
Sub: Kenjutsu
Tertiary:Ninjutsu

Elemental Affinity:
Main: Earth
Sub: Wind
Tertiary: Quake

Special Characteristics:
Name: Enhanced Senses
Rank: Elite
Description:Since he lost his sight, Ushima has focused on enhancing his hearing to compensate for his lack of vision. Ushima's sense of hearing is so great that he claims to be able to hear every word being spoken in more than half the kingdom of Sunagakure. He is also able to accurately pick up on changes in an organism's heart rate, allowing him to guess facial expressions and current emotional composition, despite his lack of sight as well as identify a person by the specific patterns of their heartbeat or using it to tell whether a person is lying or not by changes in their heartbeat . Through practice, Ushimais able to control his hearing acuity, mentally blocking out specific sounds like his own breathing and heartbeat, all ambient sounds to a normal human level of perception, or all sounds but a particular sound he is concentrating upon. In addition sense of touch is so acute that his finger can feel the faint impressions of ink on a printed page allowing him to read by touch, though laminated pages prevent him from touching and thus reading the ink impressions at a much faster pace than a normal person would be able to read. The rest of his skin is equally sensitive, enabling him by concentration to feel minute temperature and pressure changes in the atmosphere around him.Even with his sense hearing blocked, he can feel the presence of a person standing five feet away from him simply by his or her body heat and disturbance of air.

Name: Unreal Vitals
Rank: Elite
Description: Ushima's body is able to take far more damage than other people. Allowing him to ignore the pain and continue fighting with wounds, that a man would normally o unconscious from. His resistance to pain and torture might say he is inhuman.
Flaws/Weaknesses:

Name: Disruption
Rank:Super
Description: His powerful hearing renders him extraordinarily vulnerable to excessive sound, which can temporarily weaken him, or if he is bombarded by too much sound at once, Ushima can easily be immobilized, which causes him great pain and leaves him disoriented.

b]Name[/b]: Loss of control
Rank: Elite
DescriptionUshima has 30% less chakra control then ninja of same rank.

Name: Blind Eyes
Rank: Super
Description: Ushima is blind this becomes a problem for Ushima to navigate and track his opponent when his heightened sense of hearing is scrambled or can't detect anything which diminishes Ushima's ability to be able to fight back when in the middle of a battle.



Standared & Additional Gear
Six Kunai Explosive Tags
4 Chili Pepper Bombs
2x stack of 8 shuriken
3 Week Supply of Food and Water inside a Scroll
2 roles Bandages


Name: Edge of the Unknown
Amount: Two
Appearance:
Spoiler:
Rank: S
Special Abilities: Made from the strongest metals. Edge of the Unknown is has nigh high durability, and when broken it will regenerate glowing light blue. Meaning even if the sword is broken somehow it will reform. In addition to this when used with Quake Chakra the blade will blow white allowing extremely bright flashes to be produced with a swing of the sword. However it's most disturbing ability is for it to become unseen. Even the hilt will vanish with a steady stream of chakra allowing it to fool the eyes of an opponent, unless they of course have a special doujutsu or can sense chakra. The last noteworthy thing is that this blade makes no vibrations, so when another blade hits it while attempting to make impact or collide no momentum is transferred allowing for a steady had at all times.
Other: This blade can't be wielded by anyone other than Ushima. If, tried the blade will absorb the chakra of the victim, and follow them forever attempting to impale them for all eternity.
Origin: Given to him by his Great Grandfather.

Name: Hands of the Hydra
Amount: Two
Appearance:
Spoiler:
Rank: S
Special Abilities: By flowing chakra into the gauntlets they are capable of producing bladed chain like constructs from chakra. These chains can reach a maximum of 45 meters. If they happen to make contact with an individual they will leech the chakra from the victims body. The durability of the chakra construct is two times harder than steel. If someone tries to use the glove other than Ushima. When they put it on the chains will sprout out, and aim to sever each limb of the opponent for all eternity, until they remove the glove.
Origin: These gauntlets were found inside the body of a large snake like creature Ushima had done battle with.

Name: Dragon's Eye
Amount: One
Appearance:
Spoiler:
Rank: S
Special Abilities: This shield has the ability to block one elemental of A rank and below for the next three post. During that time the shield can't be used defensively for any other element until the stored element is up. However it can still be used to defend from other types of assaults. As long as they aren't elemental. The shield is said to be as durable as diamonds. There is a special ability of Eye inside the center of the shield will open and release a powerful beam of chakra turning whatever it hits into stone for the next two post. If someone else tries to use or take the shield, the fuinjutsu will activate putting them to sleep.
Origin: The Shield was discovered in sand lands of the Wind Country

Name: Mask of the Hidden.
Amount: 1
Appearance:
Spoiler:
Rank: S
Special Abilities:When worn this mask complete erases the chakra presence. The mask acts as a cloaking device in ways. While the mask also increases the speed, and reaction time of the wear 30%. Note: If anyone tries to put on this mask it will be sealed to their face constantly. It will also take away the sight, hearing, and speech of the intruder forever.
Origin: He uses this as his Anbu mask. This was crafted by a puppeteer, and had a fuinjutsu master place a seal upon it.



Name:
Rank: (E,D,C,B,A,S)
Type: (Ninjutsu, Weaponry, Genjutsu, Kenjutsu, Taijutsu, etc.)
Element: (Lightning, Wind, Earth, Water, Fire)
Range: (Optional for cannon jutsu.)
Description: (About a paragraph describing your jutsu)



Familiar Rules Here
Name: Rashamon
Nickname:
Age:
Rank: A
Species:
Appearance:
INSERT PICTURE HERE
Personality:Doesn't speak.
Background:

Jutsu's:
The Summoning: Triple Rashōmon is an upgrade to the standard Summoning: Rashōmon, which, as its name suggests, creates three Rashōmon Gates. The technique requires two summoning seals to be completed. These gates serve the same function as the standard Rashōmon Gate, but with triple the defence.

Each gate has a specific duty[1]:

The first gate (red), takes the attack head-on.
The second gate (green), reduces the power of the attack.
The third gate (blue) disperses the pressure.

As powerful as these gates are, they are not invincible

Name: [Name of jutsu]
Type: [Ninjutsu, Weaponry, Puppetry, Genjutsu, Kenjutsu, Taijutsu]
Rank: [E,D,C,B,A,S]
Element: [Lightning, Wind, Earth, Water, Fire]
Description: [A well detailed description of your jutsu. Remember to add in such fetures as it's range, chakra cost, drawbacks, etc to give an overall view of the technique.]



History:
Ushima is the elder brother of Kazuya, Shishimaru. Ushima's mother had given up the first born to be taken care of by her
Grandfather inside of Sunagakure, as she felt his Ushima would have a better life, feeling she wasn't quite prepared to be a mother. This was unknown to his father, and he would group up believing that his family had died in a war. Ushima's Great Grandfather's goal was to produce a strong individual who could fend for himself, and mold him into a man. He taught his great grandson the trades of his knowledge helping him develop his skills into that of a respectable Shinobi. By age eight, Ushima's Great Grandfather had enrolled Ushima into the Hidden Sand Village's Academy. Being a shy child Ushima was incredibly nervous, and often sat by himself, until he met a young classmate named Li Li. She was kind, and alluring. Little did Ushima know this was love at first site, and she would become his in the near future.

Ushima and Li Li had grown to become very close as they often spent time with one another, and went from friends to lovers to husband and wife. They had built a very strong bond and they loved each other very much. They were often called the couple to watch. Ushima and Li Li had married at the age of Eighteen, however it felt like they had been married a life time knowing one another since they were in the Academy. Six months after their wedding the Jounin Ushima was, given an assignment by the higher ups a mission that would take three years away from his lover, and his unborn. He was to infiltrate the village of Oto for three years as a mole, but this was a nothing more than a lie. An Elder's Son simply wanted the Kazuya, out of the way, as he could never make his move, if Ushima was around. Three years had passed, and the day of his reemergence he had returned seeking his wifes embrace. She rejected him, and simply told him he no longer loved him, saying someone else had taken his place in her heart. this was a heavy blow from the woman he had loved for over a decade, but Ushima was not one to force love. Li Li and Ushima remained in estranged contact, only because Ushima wanted to spend time with his son in order to raise him as a father should. To be the father that he never had. Unfortunately, Li Li had a change of heart attempting to remove the Ushima from his parental rights. Ushima had lost custody of his son, but was granted visitation for the next year. Li Li came to Ushima on the very day that he asked her to marry him, and told him that she wanted Ushima to remove him from all visitation rights, as her Husband wanted to raise his son. The only person he had left. Ushima would never see his son or Li Li again. He would have to hear from the man himself that he had lost Li Li, and his underling in an inferno. Years had gone by, and Ushima would receive a letter from a man. It was his father, and his last wishes were to meet his son before he died. This rekindled the young man's spirit, to continue living his life, as a man to endure the pain, struggles and hardships, however. Ushima would once again become a victim, he learned that this man was not his father, but was simply a man who needed a kidney. It wasn't revealed that Ushima was being used until, after the man got what he wanted. Pretending to love him as a father until he got what he wanted. The young man, laid in his hospital bed, learning that the one who conned him out of his kidney died two days later in an accident. Depression kicked in, and the transformation from man to beast had begun the night after his Great Grandfather died, Six men roamed into his hospital room as he had begun to recover from his surgery, they pinned Ushima down, and read his Great Grandfather's will.

"Ushima, you know much pain, at such a young age. My goal was to mold you into a man, one who was loved, strong, and respected. We had little success , but it seems you're forgetting what it takes to survive. You no longer want to live your life, by your own choosing, your own passage. So, as my last wishes, I'll give you something to live for. This gift or curse will allow you to understand survival, help develop you into something great. This is the begging of your new life."

Ushima was taken from his hospital room, and heavily sedated. He didn't remember anything, but waking up in complete darkness, with no sound other that his heart beating inside of his chest. Ushima was now living as something else.


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Re: Kazuya, Ushima(Complete)

Post by SUN on Thu Aug 23, 2012 12:08 am

Clan Jutsu
Spoiler:

Name: Richter Scale
Rank: D-S
Type: Taijutsu
Element: Quake [Guraton]
Description: This is a technique in which the user stores Quake chakra at a point at the body then releases it into a normal physical attack. The result is a great increase in the power and range of the attack. The taijutsu's strength is increased more for every post that the Quake chakra is stored as seen bellow.

C rank, +1.5meters range increase
B rank, + 3meters range increase
A rank, + 7.5meter range increase
S rank , +15meter range increase

Name: Reverberation
Rank: D-S
Type: Kenjutsu/Weaponry
Element: Quake [Guraton]
Description: A technique in which Quake chakra is channeled through a weapon. Upon weilding or using the weapon, the chakra is released to create a shockwave along with the weapons attack to increase it's destructive potential and range.

C rank, +1.5meters range increase
B rank, + 3meters range increase
A rank, + 7.5meter range increase
S rank , +15meter range increase

Name: Tectonic Omniscience
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Quake [Guraton]
Description: A passive sensing technique in which the user can observe the location of living things by motion alone. All physical mediums become motion detectors to the user, in waves in the ground and in water are used to locate targets. Even the wind generated by swift movement is enough to discover an individuals location within a 30meter radius of the self. This lasts for exactly two of your opponents posts from activation.

Non-Elemental Ninjutsu
Spoiler:
Name:Clone Great Explosion
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank:A
Element:
Description:This technique is used to create a shadow clone that can be detonated. The clone looks like a normal shadow clone, which allows the user to get it close to the target without them expecting anything besides a normal attack, or the target might even close in willingly to try to attack the clone. Using multiple tricks and diversionary tactics to disguise the nature of the clone can make this technique more likely to be effective.

Name: Shadow Clone Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank:B
Element:
Description: Similar to the Clone Technique, this technique creates clones of the user. However, these clones are actual copies, not illusions. The user's chakra is evenly distributed among every clone, giving each clone an equal fraction of the user's overall power. The clones are capable of performing techniques on their own and can even bleed, but will usually disperse after one or two solid blows. They can also disperse on their own. The clones will be created in roughly the same condition as the original.

Shadow clones can't be distinguished from the actual person even by the Byakugan because the clones have the exact same amount of chakra and aren't made from any other substance.

Name: Welcome Approach 1000 Armed Murder
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Element:
Description: The technique is activated when the user takes a specific stance with their left hand making a half-ram and then extending their right hand down with his palm parallel to the ground. Once the stance is taken, the spirit of the Thousand-Armed Kannon is summoned to defend the user, or attack their enemies. The spirit is normally calm, angelic and looks peaceful. However, whenever the user gets angry, the spirit turns red and transforms into a demonic-looking creature. Kannon then attacks the user's target with its 1000 spirit fists. The size and power of the spirit is dependent upon the skill of the user.

Name:Hiding with Camouflage Technique
Type:Ninjutsu
Rank:A
Element:
Description: This is a ninja escape technique that allows the user to control how light is reflected around their body with chakra inflections. The technique also erases the user's scent and shadow, and is usable on any terrain, making it ideal not only for covert maneuvers but also offensive strikes. Perceiving the user's position is possible only for ninja who are astute enough to observe minute variations within their surrounding environment, such as distortions of air currents in the immediate vicinity or distinguishing sounds, i.e. footsteps etc. The usefulness of this ability can be entirely negated by those with special vision or sensory skills, except for particularly adept users, who can completely erase even their chakra signature with it.

Name: Flight Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Element:
Description: This technique grants the user the ability to fly. Ushima is able to transfer this technique to others through physical contact with them for an unspecified amount of time. This technique requires a D-rank amount of chakra per turn.

Name: Summoning Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank:C
Element:
Description: The Summoning Technique is a space–time ninjutsu that allows the summoner to transport animals or people across long distances instantly.

Before an animal summoning can be performed, a prospective summoner must first sign a contract with a given species.The contract comes in the form of a scroll, on which the contractor uses their own blood to sign their name and place their fingerprints and once signed it is valid even after the contractors death as long as the contract itself remains intact. After this they need only offer an additional donation of blood on the hand they signed the contract with, mold their chakra with hand seals and then plant the hand they signed the contract with at the location they wish to summon the creature. The amount of chakra used during the summoning determines how powerful the summoned creature can be.


Taijutsu
Spoiler:
Name: Fist of the Shockwave
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: A
Element:Quake
Description: Ushima swings his fist with great speed, while releasing a burst of chakra. This burst of chakra releases a shockwave in the area. Capable of releasing a large amount of destruction. A single punch could erode the landscape without even touching it. The Shockwave comes after the physical movement is made. Allowing a type of phantom punch. This attack is strong enough to shatter diamonds.

Name: Final Song
Type: Taijutsu, Kinjutsu
Rank: C-S
Element: Quake
Description: Ushima's most powerful and versatile jutsu. He stores up chakra inside of his vocal cords, and releases it by speaking. When speaking it releases a shock wave in a 360 degree area.

C-Rank:Releasing the chakra in his voice at C-Rank will deafen and disorient victim to the area with in the range of 10 meters. This last for 2 post
B-Rank:Releasing the chakra in his voice at B-Rank will cause physical trama to the brain to anyone with in the area with in 20 meters. This will knock out the victims in for 2 post.
A-Rank: Releasing the chakra in his at A-Rank will push anyone with in the area of 40 meters breaking their bones. This has enough force to break steel.
S-Rank: Releasing the chakra in his voice at S-Rank will immediately produce the effects of 4th degree burns from the velocity and force of the shockwaves around the human body. Meaning they will have the need for amputation, have significant functional impairment, and great dis figuration, in addition to possible gangrene. This jutsu is extremely painful. Range is 50 meters. This is his Forbidden technique.

.
Name: Burst Arc
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: C
Element: Quake
Description: Ushima stores a little bit of chakra as he unleashes a shockwave underneath him. Allowing him to propel himself up or foward depending on how he is angled. The shockwave can act as a secondary platform. The shockwave is capable of being used vertically as well. The range of the distance is about 35 meters.

Name: Shockwave Bullet.
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: C
Element: Quake
Description:By flicking his fingers, while an amount of quake chakra is stored inside them, a tiny burst of chakra erupts from them in the shape of bullets moving 30 meters per second.

Name: Wall of Force
Type:Taijutsu
Rank: A
Element: Quake
Description: By swinging his fist openly. Ushima will produce an expanding shockwave in the form of a dome. This will technqiue acts as a defense and offense at the same time. It forms a very powerful shockwave that is capable of blocking other A-Rank attacks from all directions. Whatever hits the dome will be thrown back from the force. The force is strong enough to uproot trees. The Dome is 35 meters wide and high.

Name:Fist of Parting Waves
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: S
Element: Quake
Description: Using a mixture of chakra, and his physical strength from Taijutsu Ushima smashes his fist into the ground causing a massive tide of force. This attack is strong enough to part waves, and easily disperse water jutsu. If used on something else that isn't water. It will create a massive earth quake with the force of 6.9-7.9 on a Richter scale.

Kenjutsu
Spoiler:

Name: Shadow
Type:Kenjutsu
Rank: B
Element:
Description:Rotates his sword or swords in a circular motion in an attempt to block, and parry in front of him. His skill is significant enough to block kunai, shuriken, and even jutsu of B-Rank, and below.

Name: Shadow Edge
Type: Kenjutsu
Rank: A
Element:
Description: Ushima instantly moved forward forty meters attempting to slash his opponent in whatever angle he likes, however when his slash or cut attempt is made the force of the strike instantly propels Ushima back exactly forty meters allowing him to attack swiftly and retreat back to his location instant. He does this with a variation of the body flicker, and it happens so fast that it appears that he has never moved from his location.

Name: Sky Dance
Type: Kenjutsu
Rank: A
Element: Quake
Description: Ushima will preform an eye blinding upward slash with extreme force. If the enemy manages to block his blade it will lift the upward 35 meters into the sky from the force of the shock wave.

Name: Dance of Crescent Moon
Type: Kenjutsu
Rank: A
Element:
Description: The user creates three shadow clones, and each one of them assaults the enemy from a blind spot. The attack occurs on three fronts simultaneously, so it's almost impossible to catch them flat-footed. Furthermore, the mighty attacks are so severe that receiving a blow even from one among the three will inevitably result in a fatal wound. In addition, because of the magnificence this ninjutsu projects as they jump at the opponent's upper body in an orbital pattern, the elegance of which is reminiscent of the shape of a crescent moon.

Name: Samurai Sabre Technique
Type: Kenjutsu
Rank: A
Element:
Description: Unique to Samurai, this technique employs the concept of Chakra Flow similar to the Flying Swallow and Sword of Kusanagi: Chidori Katana techniques. Through the use of chakra flow, the user channels their chakra through their swords, extending both the reach and cutting ability of the blade, while allowing the user to fire crescents of chakra whenever the blade is swung. This released chakra is capable of great destruction, as shown from how these projectiles completely penetrated a considerable stone pillar, before continuing to damage the immediate surroundings.

The samurai have also shown the ability to use shape transformation during the implementation of this technique, sculpting their respective chakra blades into various rudimentary weapons that extend beyond the natural dimensions of their original swords; such as broadswords, spiked shafts and even axes. This capability allows them to rely on smaller swords while retaining greater reach, damage and the possibility of conducting surprise attacks as necessary.

This transformational quality also appears to extend to even the crescents of chakra launched from the blade, forming a diverse range of projectiles that includes giant buzzsaws and shafts of chakra, the shape of which are seemingly dependent on the structure of the previously formed weapon

Name: Iaido
Type:Kenjutsu
Rank: A
Element:
Description: The term Iaidō (居合道) refers to a specific style of kenjutsu that is concerned with the smooth, controlled movements of drawing the sword from its scabbard, striking or cutting an opponent, removing blood from the blade, and then replacing the sword in the scabbard. The linear motion and force applied to draw the sword from its scabbard result in much faster slashes than ones realised with the sword already drawn.

The speed at which these techniques can be executed — the initial strike in particular — is such, that when performed by a skilled user, it can prevent enemy shinobi from forming hand seals (and thus ninjutsu), by exploiting the small opening that these movements create. This makes them highly effective against most shinobi and potentially.

Elemental Ninjutsu
Spoiler:


Name: Spheres of Stargazing
Type:Ninjutsu
Rank:A
Element:Quake
Description: Ushima does a few handsigns and produces ten eight inch spheres of white glowing chakra. These sphere are will rotate behind the user similar to a cartwheel. Ushima will then fire the blast orbs either with his hands or mentally as his chooses. When they detonate they leave a blinding light. The force is able to causing massive internal damage. Even if the attack is physically blocked it will deal damage all the same as the shockwave, and force is six times greater than an explosive tag. The range of the sphere's radius is 20 meters when detonated.

Name: Swamp of the Underworld
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank:A
Element:Earth
Description:By changing the surface of an object beneath an enemy into mud and creating a swamp, the user can sink his enemy into the mud. The adhesive, chakra-infused mud ensnares the enemy's body, making it almost impossible to recover one's strength and escape from the swamp. The size and depth of the created swamp depends on the user's skill and the amount of chakra used, but if the user is an expert in this technique, it will always be possible to make a fair-sized swamp which is extremely effective against a great number of enemies or when having to face gigantic creatures

Name: Hiding like a Mole
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: Earth
Description: This technique changes earth into fine sand by channelling chakra into it, allowing the user to dig through it like a mole. This effect goes around the body (not just the hands), making it just large enough for a person to move through. The user can pinpoint where they are, despite being underground, by sensing the magnetic forces. They can also sense what is happening on the surface and use that information to launch a surprise attack on the enemy. One can also hide deep in the ground, escaping to a depth where the enemy can't reach. It also appears that after digging, the ground can be returned to its original state, leaving no trace of where the user entered the earth

Name: Added Weight Rock Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Element: Earth
Description: This technique simply allows the user to increase the weight of whatever they are touching. This technique has shown petrification.

Name: Ultra-Added Weight Rock Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Element:Earth
Description: A more advanced version of the Earth Release: Added-Weight Rock Technique, in which the user drastically increases the weight of any object in direct physical contact, but to a much greater extent than that of the original ability. Under certain circumstances, the technique can be used to increase the force behind attacks.

Name: Sky Piercer
Type: Ninjutsu.
Rank: B
Element: Quake
Description: Raising his palm upward, Ushima creates a condensed ball of quake chakra that is about 4 inches all around. Ushima Sky pierce will then accend into the sky completely removing any clouds in the area with in 100 meters.

Name: Light Weighted Rock Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank:B
Element:Earth
Description:Contrary to its counterpart the Earth Release: Added-Weight Rock Technique, instead of making the target heavier, this technique makes it much lighter. This allows freer manipulation of the affected objects, which would normally carry considerably more weight and as such, require a greater amount of exertion to move. The technique can be used on the user or other shinobi to increase their speed,but as a consequence of using it this way, it results in the decrease of the physical force of their blows.

Name: Ultralight Weighted Rock Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Element:Earth
Description:This technique is a more advanced version of the Earth Release: Light-Weight Rock Technique, in which the user drastically decreases the weight of any object in direct physical contact, but to a much greater extent than that of the original ability. The user can use this technique to lift enormous objects that they normally wouldn't be able to such as a meteorite or an entire island.

Name: Earth Sandwich Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank:A
Element: Earth
Description: The user creates two enormous rock formations that close in on the opponent from two opposing sides with tremendous force, smashing everything caught in between. Both of these formations are capable of dwarfing even sizes similar to Demonic Statue of the Outer Path in size.

Name: Golem Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Element: Earth
Description:his technique allows the user to create a large, humanoid creature composed of rock that can either be expelled from the user's mouth or formed from a nearby, pre-existing source of earth.

The size of the golem differs depending on use, but it always possesses an ample amount of brute strength, being able to bite and tear through an enemy with ease, using just its mouth and hands respectively. It is also very durable, as it was left almost completely intact after being hit by a powerful explosion, detonating at point-blank range.This makes the golem ideal whether it be serving as additional support or simply as a mobile shield.

Name: Earth Spear
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Element: Earth
Description: The user flows chakra through all parts of their body causing it to become noticeably darker, which increases their defensive power to its utmost limits by making the skin as hard as diamond. Furthermore, the destructive power of physical attacks is increased, making this a great all-purpose technique. The amount of techniques that can break through the areas hardened by the Earth Spear are close to zero, excluding its undeniable weak point: Lightning Release ninjutsu.

Name: Under Grave
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Element: Earth
Description: Using the element of earth. Ushima produces a pit right underneath the target. The pit is 35 meters deep, and 35 meters wide. The jutsu produces a current that negates chakra making it impossible to get out of by chakra wall walking.

Name:Mystic Earth Box
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Element: Earth
Description:Ushima preforms a jutsu and complete covers Ushima in a coffin like box. Once the coffin like box completely covers Ushima the box will submerge underground, allowing Ushima to move as he pleases. This technique is capable of blocking other A rank Jutsu from all sides.


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Re: Kazuya, Ushima(Complete)

Post by SUN on Sat Aug 25, 2012 1:44 pm

App is Done. I'm ready to make changes and removals where deemed necessary.
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Post by Rizuma Jigoku on Mon Aug 27, 2012 4:55 am

I'm going to work this piece by piece here because it's so big.


Special Characteristics:
Name: Enhanced Senses
Rank: Elite
Description:Since he lost his sight, Ushima has focused on enhancing his hearing to compensate for his lack of vision. Ushima's sense of hearing is so great that he claims to be able to hear every word being spoken in the kingdom of Sunagakure. He is also able to accurately pick up on changes in an organism's heart rate, allowing him to guess facial expressions and current emotional composition, despite his lack of sight as well as identify a person by the specific patterns of their heartbeat or using it to tell whether a person is lying or not by changes in their heartbeat . Using his hearing Ushima, is able to measure the exact speeds of the opponent's attacks with his hearing, and react and counter without wasting energy. Through practice, Ushimais able to control his hearing acuity, mentally blocking out specific sounds like his own breathing and heartbeat, all ambient sounds to a normal human level of perception, or all sounds but a particular sound he is concentrating upon. In addition sense of touch is so acute that his finger can feel the faint impressions of ink on a printed page allowing him to read by touch, though laminated pages prevent him from touching and thus reading the ink impressions at a much faster pace than a normal person would be able to read. The rest of his skin is equally sensitive, enabling him by concentration to feel minute temperature and pressure changes in the atmosphere around him.Even with his sense hearing blocked, he can feel the presence of a person standing five feet away from him simply by his or her body heat and disturbance of air.

I get the heightened senses thing, but i'm sorry to say that his senses are too high. This is impossible to deal with for a human, no matter how strong his will is, he'd go crazy from the overload of, well, of everything. I'm no doctor, but i can say at least this much. I'm not asking for you to scrap it, just nerf it a little.

Name: Unreal Vitals
Rank: Elite
Description: Ushima's body is able to take far more damage than other people. Allowing him to ignore the pain and continue fighting with wounds, that a man would normally die from, or go unconscious from. His resistance to pain and torture might say he is inhuman. His focus on taijutsu has helped him maintain complete body control at all times, allowing him to react by memory even if he is sleep or unconscious.

For the text in italics: I can give you ignoring wounds that people would go unconscious from, but i can't give you ignoring wounds people die from.

For the part in bold: I can't accept that, i'm really sorry.


Flaws/Weaknesses:

Name: Disruption
Rank: Elite
Description: His powerful hearing renders him extraordinarily vulnerable to excessive sound, which can temporarily weaken him, or if he is bombarded by too much sound at once, Ushima can easily be immobilized, which causes him great pain and leaves him disoriented.

This one's good, but it's not Elite. it's be super, or whatever is under elite.

Name: Blind Eyes
Rank: Elite
Description: Ushima is blind this becomes a problem for Ushima to navigate and track his opponent when his heightened sense of hearing is scrambled or can't detect anything which diminishes Ushima's ability to be able to fight back when in the middle of a battle.

this also isn't that Elite either, sorry.

I apologize if modding this way annoys you, it just helps lessen any confusion.
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Post by SUN on Mon Aug 27, 2012 10:04 am

Nah. It's cool. I've made edits.
My enhanced senses may seem kinda strong, but that's because he can't see. He is completely blind. So, his hearing and sense of touch are enhanced greatly in the shinobi world. As he has lost something in order to gain something. As for it being this high in real life of course not. But I went to Arkansas School for the Blind. Some of my blind friends would say hello to me because they knew how I walked, and I didn't even haeto speak to them. I did nerf my sense of hearing a bit though. I've added another flaw, and I did everything else.
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Post by Rizuma Jigoku on Mon Aug 27, 2012 3:13 pm

Name: Edge of the Unknown
Amount: Two
Appearance:
Spoiler:
Rank: S
Special Abilities: Made from the strongest metals. Edge of the Unknown is has nigh high durability, and when broken it will regenerate glowing light blue. Meaning even if the sword is broken somehow it will reform and adapt to the force allowing it to successfully overcome the Unknown. In addition to this when used with Quake Chakra the blade will blow white allowing extremely bright flashes to be produced with a swing of the sword. However it's most disturbing ability is for it to become unseen. Even the hilt will vanish with a steady stream of chakra allowing it to fool the eyes of an opponent, unless they of course have a special doujutsu or can sense chakra. The last noteworthy thing is that this blade makes no vibrations, so when another blade hits it while attempting to make impact or collide no momentum is transferred allowing for a steady had at all times.
Other: This blade can't be wielded by anyone other than Ushima. If, tried the blade will absorb the chakra of the victim, and follow them forever attempting to impale them for all eternity.
Origin: Given to him by his Great Grandfather.

That last part...... kinda freaky...... Anyway, I can give you a regenerating blade, but i can't let it adapt to the forces which broke it.

Name: Hands of the Hydra
Amount: Two
Appearance:
Spoiler:
Rank: S
Special Abilities: By flowing chakra into the gauntlets they are capable of producing bladed chain like constructs from chakra. These chains can reach a maximum of 45 meters. If they happen to make contact with an individual they will leech the chakra from the victims body. The durability of the chakra construct is two times harder than steel. If someone tries to use the glove other than Ushima. When they put it on the chains will wrap around the enemy and squeeze the to death.
Origin: These gauntlets were found inside the body of a large snake like creature Ushima had done battle with.

You really don't want anybody using your stuff do you........ Chain Coffin! Chain Burial!

Anyway, that last part is technically insta-killing, which i cannot allow. Immobilization and a faint humming, tuned to only Ushima's ears, i can allow, but that's just a suggestion.


Name: Dragon's Eye
Amount: One
Appearance:
Spoiler:
Rank: S
Special Abilities: This shield has the ability to block one elemental of A rank and below for the next three post. During that time the shield can't be used defensively for any other element until the stored element is up. However it can still be used to defend from other types of assaults. As long as they aren't elemental. The shield is said to be as durable as diamonds. There is a special ability of Eye inside the center of the shield will open and release a powerful beam of chakra turning whatever it hits into stone for the next two post. If someone else tries to use or take the shield, it will revert into a bright red light sucking the person inside of the it's eye.
Origin: The Shield was discovered in sand lands of the Wind Country

This is also insta-kill. Might a I suggest the thief being put under a genjutsu of sorts?

Name: Mask of the Hidden.
Amount: 1
Appearance:
Spoiler:
Rank: S
Special Abilities:When worn this mask complete erases the chakra presence. The mask acts as a cloaking device in ways. While the mask also increases the speed, and reaction time of the wear x2.
Origin: He uses this as his Anbu mask. This was crafted by a puppeteer, and had a fuinjutsu master place a seal upon it.

I'm not sure if I can give you x2, would you be fine with + 30%?
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Re: Kazuya, Ushima(Complete)

Post by SUN on Mon Aug 27, 2012 4:12 pm

Indeed, Mate. Nice suggestions. You're very easy to work with. All edits made.
Sidenote: You aint comment on the theme music yet ._.
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Re: Kazuya, Ushima(Complete)

Post by Rizuma Jigoku on Mon Aug 27, 2012 4:45 pm

Ugh the most dreaded part of the evaluations: The jutsu

I hope you don't mind if i take it one spoiler at a time.


Academy Jutsu


Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range:10m away from original place.
Element: N/A
Description: This jutsu lets the user quickly switch places with another nearby object, such as a plant (normally a section of a log), an animal, or even another person within reach, leaving the opponent open to a counter-attack. Explosive tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise. Fundamentally, all ninja know this technique.

Name: Henge no Jutsu
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range:N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This jutsu allows the user to assume the appearance of another person, animal, or object. This is one of the basic jutsu taught at the Konoha Ninja Academy. Fundamentally, all ninja know this jutsu. The transformation jutsu is considered to be among the more difficult E-ranked techniques, since it requires constant emission of chakra while mentally maintaining the form. On top of that, the user would be, most likely, interacting with the environment. This puts much mental strain on the inexperienced ninja.

Name: Bunshin no Jutsu
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range:N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This technique creates intangible copies of the user. The clones are simply illusions and will dissipate when they come into contact with something. The illusions can be seen through by the Byakugan and the Sharingan. A person with normal eyes can also distinguish the clones from the original, since the clones will not disrupt the area around themselves with their movement (won't kick up dust, crush grass, etc.).

Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range:N/A
Element: N/A
Description: A basic jutsu taught at the Konoha Ninja Academy, this jutsu allows a ninja to free themselves if they have been tied up.

Name: Genjutsu Kai
Rank: E-S
Type: Ninjutsu
Range:10m (Genin) 50m (S-Rank)
Element: N/A
Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.

Name: Shunshin no Jutsu
Rank: D
Type: Ninjuts
Element: N/A
Description: This jutsu is a high-speed movement technique, allowing a ninja to move short to long distances at an almost untraceable speed. To an observer, it appears as if the user has teleported. A puff of smoke is occasionally used to disguise the user's movements. It is accomplished by using chakra to temporarily boost the user's reflexes. The amount of chakra required depends on the overall distance between the user and their intended destination.

Name: Kinobori no Waza - Act of Tree Climbing
Rank: N/A
Type: Ninjutsu/Chakra Control
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: Kinobori no Waza, the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. Taking part in Kinobori Shugyou (Tree Climbing Training) helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra. It also teaches the ninja how to run up trees and walk on vertical walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are regarded as the hardest location to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will have any jutsu available (theoretically) because they will be able to focus their chakra as needed.

Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza - Act of Water Surface Walking
Rank: N/A
Type: Ninjutsu/Chakra Control
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: A variation on the Kinobori no Waza (Act of Tree Climbing), the art of water surface walking allows a ninja to walk on water as if it was a solid surface. Focusing an even amount of chakra out of the soles of their feet, they can balance themselves on the very surface of the water.

Name: Ayatsuito no Jutsu - String Reeling Technique
Rank: N/A
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Depends on wire
Element: N/A
Description: Ayatsuito no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing wire. This string can be used in rappeling, or as a method to tie down and restrict the movement of an opponent. The Uchiha clan also utilizes the wire in their Sharingan Soufuusha Sannotachi technique. The wire allows the clan member to pin down an opponent, and then unleash a torrent of fire upon them.

Name: Bikou Ninjutsu - Shadowing Stealth Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 10m away from target
Element: N/A
Description: Bikou Ninjutsu is the technique ninjas use to follow their targets covertly. The manner in which the ninja shadows their target can differ, from the basic hiding under a nearby object, to using a jutsu to turn oneself invisible.


I like how you put this down, but you don't have to put fundamentally known justu here. If you want to keep these then no problem, but if you do, you have to translate it all.
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Post by SUN on Tue Aug 28, 2012 3:08 am

Uh, it was already translated ._.
But I removed them since I don't need to have them.
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Post by Rizuma Jigoku on Tue Aug 28, 2012 5:24 am

The clan was already approved so those jutsu are fine, now down to these ones. Also I meant to comment on the music last time. It was kinda laggy on my computer since i always have my music on at the same time. Now i heard it for real and i like it.

Kenjutsu

Name: Shadow Edge
Type: Kenjutsu
Rank: B
Element:
Description: Ushima instantly moved forward forty meters attempting to slash his opponent in whatever angle he likes, however when his slash or cut attempt is made the force of the strike instantly propels Ushima back exactly forty meters allowing him to attack swiftly and retreat back to his location instant. He does this with a variation of the body flicker, and it happens so fast that it appears that he has never moved from his location.

The and high range and the retreating part will force this to be an A rank jutsu.

Name: Sky Dance
Type: Kenjutsu
Rank: A
Element: Quake
Description: Ushima will preform an eye blinding upward slash with extreme force. If the enemy manages to block his blade it will lift the upward 35 meters into the sky from the force of the shock wave.

Imagining this happening right now... I just gotta say it: Poof....... This one's good though.

Name: Dance of Crescent Moon
Type: Kenjutsu
Rank: A
Element:
Description: The user creates three shadow clones, and each one of them assaults the enemy from a blind spot. The attack occurs on three fronts simultaneously, so it's almost impossible to catch them flat-footed. Furthermore, the mighty attacks are so severe that receiving a blow even from one among the three will inevitably result in a fatal wound. In addition, because of the magnificence this ninjutsu projects as they jump at the opponent's upper body in an orbital pattern, the elegance of which is reminiscent of the shape of a crescent moon.

I can give near fatal, and could you make it an S rank, because it's so difficult to dodge.

Name: Samurai Sabre Technique
Type: Kenjutsu
Rank: B
Element:
Description: Unique to Samurai, this technique employs the concept of Chakra Flow similar to the Flying Swallow and Sword of Kusanagi: Chidori Katana techniques. Through the use of chakra flow, the user channels their chakra through their swords, extending both the reach and cutting ability of the blade, while allowing the user to fire crescents of chakra whenever the blade is swung. This released chakra is capable of great destruction, as shown from how these projectiles completely penetrated a considerable stone pillar, before continuing to damage the immediate surroundings.

The samurai have also shown the ability to use shape transformation during the implementation of this technique, sculpting their respective chakra blades into various rudimentary weapons that extend beyond the natural dimensions of their original swords; such as broadswords, spiked shafts and even axes. This capability allows them to rely on smaller swords while retaining greater reach, damage and the possibility of conducting surprise attacks as necessary.

This transformational quality also appears to extend to even the crescents of chakra launched from the blade, forming a diverse range of projectiles that includes giant buzzsaws and shafts of chakra, the shape of which are seemingly dependent on the structure of the previously formed weapon

The things you could do with this technique calls for an A or S rank. I'll let you pick.

Name: Iaido
Type:Kenjutsu
Rank: A
Element:
Description: The term Iaidō (居合道) refers to a specific style of kenjutsu that is concerned with the smooth, controlled movements of drawing the sword from its scabbard, striking or cutting an opponent, removing blood from the blade, and then replacing the sword in the scabbard. The linear motion and force applied to draw the sword from its scabbard result in much faster slashes than ones realised with the sword already drawn.

The speed at which these techniques can be executed — the initial strike in particular — is such, that when performed by a skilled user, it can prevent enemy shinobi from forming hand seals (and thus ninjutsu), by exploiting the small opening that these movements create. This makes them highly effective against most shinobi and potentially.

I like how you but this down too, but this skill is fundamentally known to practically all samurai. I'll leave the choice to remove it or not up to you again.
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Post by SUN on Tue Aug 28, 2012 6:21 am

I've edited all excluding Dance of Crescent Moon. That is a Canon technique that is ranked A-Rank in the Data book. Used by that sick guy who was the chunin exams referee. He was latered killed by Baki, but anyway, if you want me to remove that jutsu I will do so. I'll keep the Iaido. That way I have a style.
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Post by Rizuma Jigoku on Tue Aug 28, 2012 5:57 pm

To the non-elemental now! X3

Name: Welcome Approach 1000 Armed Murder
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Element:
Description: The technique is activated when the user takes a specific stance with their left hand making a half-ram and then extending their right hand down with his palm parallel to the ground. Once the stance is taken, the spirit of the Thousand-Armed Kannon is summoned to defend the user, or attack their enemies. The spirit is normally calm, angelic and looks peaceful. However, whenever the user gets angry, the spirit turns red and transforms into a demonic-looking creature. Kannon then attacks the user's target with its 1000 spirit fists. The size and power of the spirit is dependent upon the skill of the user.

How long will this spirit stay in play?

Name: Flight Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Element:
Description: This technique grants the user the ability to fly. Ushima is able to transfer this technique to others through physical contact with them for an unspecified amount of time.

O_O a little... Peter Pan-ish here. So, Tinker Bell, just kidding though, we kinda need a specified maximum time the technique can be used in general, if not we might get complaints from other members.
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Post by SUN on Wed Aug 29, 2012 4:04 am

Made edits
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Post by Rizuma Jigoku on Wed Aug 29, 2012 5:49 am

Great, almost done.

Taijutsu

Name: Final Song
Type: Taijutsu, Kinjutsu
Rank: C-S
Element: Quake
Description: Ushima's most powerful and versatile jutsu. He stores up chakra inside of his vocal cords, and releases it by speaking. When speaking it releases a shock wave

C-Rank:Releasing the chakra in his voice at C-Rank will deafen and disorient victim to the area with in the range of 40 meters. This last for 2 post
B-Rank:Releasing the chakra in his voice at B-Rank will cause physical trama to the brain to anyone with in the area with in 80 meters. This will knock out the victims in for 2 post.
A-Rank: Releasing the chakra in his at A-Rank will push anyone with in the area of 160 meters breaking their bones. This has enough force to break steel.
S-Rank: Rleasing the chakra in his voice at S-Rank will complete destroy, and incinerate anything with in the area of 220 meters. This technique will strip the flesh of the human to the bone reducing them to a skeleton. This is his Forbidden technique.

I can't really have the last S rank one, It's an insta-kill. Also the range is kinda high for the effects, I'll have to ask you to half them. Also might i suggest that A rank has it's original effect at 40 meters and has B ranks effect past that 20 meters and C's effect 10 meters past, and do the same with B and C?

In case you get confused, here's what i mean:

"A-Rank: Releasing the chakra in his at A-Rank will push anyone with in the area of 40 meters breaking their bones. For the next 20 meters, this does the equivalent of his B-Rank version, for the next 10 meters, this does the equivalent of his C-rank version."

Yeah, something like that. I Also have to ask, is the range is in radius, or limited to what's in front of Ushima?


Name: Sky Piercer
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: A
Element: Quake
Description: Raising his fist into the air parting the clouds. Ushima uses this jutsu in order to remove an oncoming thunderstorm, or any heavy clouds to part the area from the rain or ect.

A force like such is an insta-kill if used on a person. I'm sorry, I can't let you have it.

Name: Burst Arc
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: D
Element: Quake
Description: Ushima releases a little bit of chakra as he jumps into the air he unleashes a shockwave underneath him. Allowing him to propell himself up. The shockwave acts as a secondary platform. The shockwave is capable of being used vertically as well. The range of the distance is about 25 meters.

I might have to correct "vertically" to "Horizontally" because the first part was vertical; jumping up into the air with a shockwave.

Name: Shockwave Bullet.
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: C
Element: Quake
Description:By flicking his fingers, with a small amount of stored chakra. A tiny burst of vacuum erupts from the action and leaves bullet-shaped holes in whatever it hits.

Could you explain this differently? I can't make logical sense of it.

Name: Wall of Force
Type:Taijutsu
Rank: A
Element: Quake
Description: By swinging his fist openly. Ushima will produce an expanding shockwave in the form of a dome. This will technqiue acts as a defense and offense at the same time. It forms a very powerful shockwave that is capable of blocking other A-Rank attacks from all directions. Whatever hits the dome will be thrown back from the force. The force is strong enough to uproot trees.

What is the range of this attack?

Name: Iron Body
Type: Taijutsu
Rank: A
Element: None
Description: Do to Ushima's training in taijutsu he has developed exceptional skill to the point of blocking Steel Swords with his bare hands or deflecting or catching kunai. Ushima is also able to punch holes in his opponents body with the tips of his finger using his kinetic energy.

I can give you the first part as long as you say he uses his chakra to re-enforce his skin or something, but I can't give you that last part. Sorry.

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Post by Rizuma Jigoku on Wed Aug 29, 2012 7:32 am

That wasn't so bad, was it? Finally......

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