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Akimitsukai Clan

Post by Katya on Sat Aug 04, 2012 9:50 pm

Clan Name:Akimitsukai

-Bloodline Description:
The Bloodline of the Akimitsukai is within their own bodies. Members of this clan are born with more ‘potential’ than the average ninja. Their chakra is more than double the size of the average ninja. Each member wears a ‘tattoo’ or a seal on their bodies to keep lock away this surplus for the sake of their own life. As such every member is knowledgeable about sealing jutsu.

Village: Otogakure No Sato

Clan Symbol:

(This mark always appears on the back of the member’s neck, and often is sewn into the clothing of some members. Clan Elders will have this mark tattooed on both shoulders as well.

Clan Traits:
- Most members have bright blue eyes and white-blonde hair, most keep it long and flowing, only the rarest member keeps it short.
- Their greatest strengths are in ninjutsu, some know basic taijutsu but their ninjutsu and seal knowledge are their greatest assets.

Secret Clan Jutsu:

Name: Little Scream : Kinshou Sakebigoe
Rank: E
Range: Short (5 meters)
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A – Akimitsukai Clan Technique
Handsigns: None
Description: This jutsu is just a small jutsu used to begin training academy students as most of the Akimitsukai Clan Jutsus are based on screams. The only effect of this jutsu is a ringing of the ears in the opponent.

Name: Keen : Tsuusetsu
Rank: D-B
Range: Varies by Rank/Ability (Short Range for D Rank, Medium Range for C Rank, Long Range for B Rank)
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A – Akimitsukai Clan Technique
Handsigns: None
Description: This is a simple jutsu used by the Akimitsukai Clan for tracking purposes. Using the sound vibrations they can find tracks, people and the like. With more training/rank increase the stronger the jutsu. The user will scream using sounds either low or high in nature to detect the differences to figure out the information necessary.
D Rank: Can find people hiding behind trees, deep footprints (i.e. in the mud)
C Rank: Same as D Rank and shallow footprints (i.e. in sand, soft dirt) and sense the vibrations bouncing off other sounds, like voices, within 10 feet.
B Rank: Same as both D & C Rank plus sounds within 20 feet or more.

Name: No More Tears : Iiya Motto Nakigoe
Rank: D
Range: Short (Touch is required)
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Element: N/A – Akimitsukai Clan Technique
Handsigns: None
Description: This jutsu is a right of passage for a member of the clan. This is a single small seal they earn when they pass their chunin exam. A small cut is made from the outside edge of the eyebrow, curving to the corner of the eye, three fingertips placed over that line and the name of the jutsu is spoken distinctly. The cut heals instantly into a red scar, the edges come out to a point from which three teardrop scars appear, one blue, one black, and one white, symbolizing that the clan member will never again be able to cry.
This technique is usually performed by a family member or elder.

Name: Primal Scream : Ikimono Sakebigoe
Rank: C
Range: Short (Can only be done on oneself)
Type: Taijutsu
Element: N/A – Akimitsukai Clan Technique
Handsigns: None
Description: This simple jutsu is used only by members of the Akimitsukai Clan who use taijutsu. As this jutsu is less about the scream itself, but about the fact that the scream is a sign of the effect of this jutsu. It causes the muscles of the user to become more dense. It's name comes from the scream that is a result of the amount of pain caused by the jutsu, but the pain is quickly followed by an adrenaline rush to keep the user fighting as if there was no pain at all.
*Requirement: User must be a taijutsu user with at least two Taijutsu of equal or higher rank (C rank and above).
*Note: Lasts for no more than 5 posts and can be used by any Taijutsu user no matter whether Taijutsu is their Primary, Secondary, or Tertiary so long as the above requirements are met.


Name: Healing Song : Chiyu Kashou
Rank: B
Range: Short
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A – Akimitsukai Clan Technique
Handsigns: None
Description: This jutsu is exactly what it sounds like. A gentle song used by the members of this clan that can heal most wounds. The sound is a series of gentle melodies, a song similar to a lullaby. This cannot heal mortal wounds and cannot heal internal bleeding though may be able to slow the progress of either.
*Note: Healing takes 2-4 posts, depending on wound severity.

Name: Death's Cry : Oujou Nakigoe
Rank: A
Range: Short
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A – Akimitsukai Clan Technique
Handsigns: None
Description: Death's Cry is a jutsu used by the Akimitsukai Clan consisting of what seems to be just a high pitched scream. The user will arch their back and let out this scream that will cause physical harm to the opponent. Range is 15 feet. If the opponent can get out of this range before the scream is complete, effects go no further than those listed as the fourth post.
Effects:
second post: slight bloody nose
third post: migraine
fourth post: blood in the ears
fifth post: blood from corners of eyes
sixth post: Death


Name: The Child’s Shield : Youji Shi-Rudo
Rank: A
Range: Short
Type: Fuuinjutsu
Element: N/A – Akimitsukai Clan Technique
Handsigns: None
Description: The child’s shield is a jutsu used by the Elders only to bind the extra chakra energies within a young member of the clan in order to keep their life safe from their own gift. Only an Elder can perform this jutsu as it is considered ceremonial by the members of the clan. This seal is an ugly twisted thing, that the elders have learned to form into the beautiful flower mark that is now the clan’s symbol. This symbol always appears on the back of the clan member’s neck.

Name: Soul Seal : Kontan Gokuin
Rank: SS
Range: Short (Requires touch)
Type: Kinjutsu
Element: N/A – Akimitsukai Clan Technique
Handsigns: None
Description: Soul Seal is a justu used by the Akimitsukai Clan. To use this jutsu the user must have two free hands and usually this is only used the target is already wounded or as a final desperate attempt. With one hand the user grabs their target by the neck, slamming the heel of their other hand into the sternum of the target, seeming to dig their nails and fingertips in slightly. This jutsu literally removes the soul of the target, killing them. The user, as the soul is removed, pieces of the seal crawl up their fingertips, across their hand, and up their arm. The result is a seal on their back or shoulders. This seal serves no real purpose but to seal the soul of the target and is a mark of pride for the user.
This jutsu can only be used once in a fight, they must have a full rest before they can use it again as this is the only jutsu that breaks through the Child’s Shield into the clan members extra chakra reserves. It cannot be used repeatedly, most can only use it five times, the greatest record seen is seven, and that user was driven mad.
By taking the soul of another into themselves, the user is committing themselves to a life bound to their own, hearing their voice for all their days. One can only take so many souls before they will go mad or die from it.
*Note: The Target should be restrained or it will be a complete waste of chakra.

History:
The Akimitsukai is an old clan, existing long before Otogakure discovered them and named them. When they were found, their life expectancy was much shorter, members were lucky to live until they came of age, usually dying between 13 and 16 years of age. Their mass stores of chakra destroyed them as they matured. It’s not until they reach an age of maturity that these chakra stores come to full potential, a potential the body cannot contain.

With the help of the Otokage, clan ‘elders’ (such as they were at the time, only teenagers) came up with strong seals to lock away the extra chakra and preserve the life of the clan member. This seal is placed before a child’s fifth year, cutting them off from the extra chakra, and making it impossible for them to access that chakra.

As time went on, and their life expectancy lengthened thanks to this new seal, the clan grew a reputation for its seal knowledge, and its ability. In recent years they have become known for their cold calculation, and lack of emotion. After the rank of Chunin they dedicate themselves to the way of the ninja, cutting off their ability to cry, as a symbol of their giving up of emotion for the sake of the mission and its completion alone.

In the last twenty years the clan has finally completed the perfection of their strongest jutsu, a jutsu that robs the enemy of their very soul, leaving a breathing body, with no one home, laying on the ground, a fate worse than death. Only their strongest ninja know this jutsu, usually only their elders.

The clan is a tool of Otogakure, and its members are often shunned by the general populace for their strangeness.



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Re: Akimitsukai Clan

Post by Rizuma Jigoku on Sat Aug 04, 2012 10:00 pm

One thing, I find it hard to read your jutsu in this layout. Could you convert them to the template on this site first?


Code:
[b]Name:[/b] [the name of your jutsu; if in Japanese, provide English translation]
[b]Rank:[/b] [E, D, C, B, A, S, or SS. Consider chakra consumption and power.]
[b]Range:[/b] [Short (5 meters), Medium (5 - 10 meters), Long (10+ meters).]
[b]Type:[/b] [what category does your technique fall under? Ninjutsu, Genjutsu, etc.]
[b]Element:[/b] [the element of your technique. Fire, water, wind, earth, lightning, etc.]
[b]Handsigns:[/b] [whether or not they're required and how many. Specifics optional.]
[b]Description:[/b] [describe the effects, strengths, and drawbacks of your technique.]
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Re: Akimitsukai Clan

Post by Katya on Sat Aug 04, 2012 10:27 pm

Done. Converted the format over for the jutsu, sorry it took so long.


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Re: Akimitsukai Clan

Post by Rizuma Jigoku on Sat Aug 04, 2012 10:51 pm

Name: Keen : Tsuusetsu
Rank: D
Range: Varies by Rank/Ability (Short Range for Genin, Medium Range for Chunin, Long Range for Jounin)
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A – Akimitsukai Clan Technique
Handsigns: None
Description: This is a simple jutsu used by the Akimitsukai Clan for tracking purposes. Using the sound vibrations they can find tracks, people and the like. With more training/rank increase the stronger the jutsu. The user will scream using sounds either low or high in nature to detect the differences to figure out the information necessary.
Genin: Can find people hiding behind trees, deep footprints (i.e. in the mud)
Chuunin: Same as Genin and shallow footprints (i.e. in sand, soft dirt) and sense the vibrations bouncing off other sounds, like voices, within 10 feet.
Jounin: Same and Genin and Chuunin plus sounds within 20 feet or more.

Can you make it D through B, And can you separate the effects by jutsu rank, not ninja rank?

Name: No More Tears : Iiya Motto Nakigoe
Rank: D
Range: Short (Touch is required)
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A – Akimitsukai Clan Technique
Handsigns: None
Description: This jutsu is a right of passage for a member of the clan. This is a single small seal they earn when they pass their chunin exam. A small cut is made from the outside edge of the eyebrow, curving to the corner of the eye, three fingertips placed over that line and the name of the jutsu is spoken distinctly. The cut heals instantly into a red scar, the edges come out to a point from which three teardrop scars appear, one blue, one black, and one white, symbolizing that the clan member will never again be able to cry.
This technique is usually performed by a family member or elder.

I don't even know about this one. Could it be a variation of your healing jutsu? If not, it'd a fuuinjutsu not ninjutsu.

Name: Primal Scream : Ikimono Sakebigoe
Rank: C
Range: Short (Can only be done on oneself)
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A – Akimitsukai Clan Technique
Handsigns: None
Description: This simple jutsu is used only by members of the Akimitsukai Clan who use taijutsu. As this jutsu is less about the scream itself, but about the fact that the scream is a sign of the effect of this jutsu. It causes the muscles of the user to become more dense. It's name comes from the scream that is a result of the amount of pain caused by the jutsu, but the pain is quickly followed by an adrenaline rush to keep the user fighting as if there was no pain at all.
*Requirement: User must be a taijutsu user

if only taijustu users can use this jutsu then it would be a taijutsu and how many posts does it last?

Name: Healing Song : Chiyu Kashou
Rank: B
Range: Short
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A – Akimitsukai Clan Technique
Handsigns: None
Description: This jutsu is exactly what it sounds like. A gentle song used by the members of this clan that can heal most wounds. The sound is a series of gentle melodies, a song similar to a lullaby. This cannot heal mortal wounds and cannot heal internal bleeding though may be able to slow the progress of either.

How many posts does the healing take?

Name: Death's Cry : Oujou Nakigoe
Rank: A
Range: Long
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A – Akimitsukai Clan Technique
Handsigns: None
Description: Death's Cry is a jutsu used by the Akimitsukai Clan consisting of what seems to be just a high pitched scream. The user will arch their back and let out this scream that will cause physical harm to the opponent. Range is 15 feet. If the opponent can get out of this range before the scream is complete, effects go no further than those listed as the fourth post.
Effects:
second post: slight bloody nose
third post: migraine
fourth post: blood in the ears
fifth post: blood from corners of eyes
sixth post: Death


15 feet would be in range and it would be short range.

Name: The Child’s Shield : Youji Shi-Rudo
Rank: A
Range: Short
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A – Akimitsukai Clan Technique
Handsigns: None
Description: The child’s shield is a jutsu used by the Elders only to bind the extra chakra energies within a young member of the clan in order to keep their life safe from their own gift. Only an Elder can perform this jutsu as it is considered ceremonial by the members of the clan. This seal is an ugly twisted thing, that the elders have learned to form into the beautiful flower mark that is now the clan’s symbol. This symbol always appears on the back of the clan member’s neck.

It'd be fuuinjutsu.

Name: The Child’s Shield : Youji Shi-Rudo
Rank: A
Range: Short
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A – Akimitsukai Clan Technique
Handsigns: None
Description: The child’s shield is a jutsu used by the Elders only to bind the extra chakra energies within a young member of the clan in order to keep their life safe from their own gift. Only an Elder can perform this jutsu as it is considered ceremonial by the members of the clan. This seal is an ugly twisted thing, that the elders have learned to form into the beautiful flower mark that is now the clan’s symbol. This symbol always appears on the back of the clan member’s neck.

You have this jutsu repeated.

Name: Soul Seal : Kontan Gokuin
Rank: S
Range: Short (Requires touch)
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A – Akimitsukai Clan Technique
Handsigns: None
Description: Soul Seal is a justu used by the Akimitsukai Clan. To use this jutsu the user must have two free hands and usually this is only used the target is already wounded or as a final desperate attempt. With one hand the user grabs their target by the neck, slamming the heel of their other hand into the sternum of the target, seeming to dig their nails and fingertips in slightly. This jutsu literally removes the soul of the target, killing them. The user, as the soul is removed, pieces of the seal crawl up their fingertips, across their hand, and up their arm. The result is a seal on their back or shoulders. This seal serves no real purpose but to seal the soul of the target and is a mark of pride for the user.
This jutsu can only be used once in a fight, they must have a full rest before they can use it again as this is the only jutsu that breaks through the Child’s Shield into the clan members extra chakra reserves. It cannot be used repeatedly, most can only use it five times, the greatest record seen is seven, and that user was driven mad.
By taking the soul of another into themselves, the user is committing themselves to a life bound to their own, hearing their voice for all their days. One can only take so many souls before they will go mad or die from it.

Rank SS Kinjutsu please and the target would have to be restrained.
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Re: Akimitsukai Clan

Post by Katya on Sat Aug 04, 2012 11:04 pm

Edits have been made, one of them confused me a bit but hopefully I've made the change to your satisfaction. Next?


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Post by Rizuma Jigoku on Sat Aug 04, 2012 11:22 pm

Name: Keen : Tsuusetsu
Rank: D-B
Range: Varies by Rank/Ability (Short Range for Genin, Medium Range for Chunin, Long Range for Jounin)
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A – Akimitsukai Clan Technique
Handsigns: None
Description: This is a simple jutsu used by the Akimitsukai Clan for tracking purposes. Using the sound vibrations they can find tracks, people and the like. With more training/rank increase the stronger the jutsu. The user will scream using sounds either low or high in nature to detect the differences to figure out the information necessary.
D Rank: Can find people hiding behind trees, deep footprints (i.e. in the mud)
C Rank: Same as D Rank and shallow footprints (i.e. in sand, soft dirt) and sense the vibrations bouncing off other sounds, like voices, within 10 feet.
B Rank: Same as both D & C Rank plus sounds within 20 feet or more.

Could you get rid of the part about the ranks in the range section?

Name: Primal Scream : Ikimono Sakebigoe
Rank: C
Range: Short (Can only be done on oneself)
Type: Taijutsu
Element: N/A – Akimitsukai Clan Technique
Handsigns: None
Description: This simple jutsu is used only by members of the Akimitsukai Clan who use taijutsu. As this jutsu is less about the scream itself, but about the fact that the scream is a sign of the effect of this jutsu. It causes the muscles of the user to become more dense. It's name comes from the scream that is a result of the amount of pain caused by the jutsu, but the pain is quickly followed by an adrenaline rush to keep the user fighting as if there was no pain at all.
*Requirement: User must be a taijutsu user
*Note: Lasts for no more than 8 posts.


8 posts would be B rank

Name: Death's Cry : Oujou Nakigoe
Rank: A
Range: Long (15 feet)
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A – Akimitsukai Clan Technique
Handsigns: None
Description: Death's Cry is a jutsu used by the Akimitsukai Clan consisting of what seems to be just a high pitched scream. The user will arch their back and let out this scream that will cause physical harm to the opponent. Range is 15 feet. If the opponent can get out of this range before the scream is complete, effects go no further than those listed as the fourth post.
Effects:
second post: slight bloody nose
third post: migraine
fourth post: blood in the ears
fifth post: blood from corners of eyes
sixth post: Death


15 feet is about 3 meters which is short range

Name: Soul Seal : Kontan Gokuin
Rank: SS
Range: Short (Requires touch)
Type: Kinjutsu
Element: N/A – Akimitsukai Clan Technique
Handsigns: None
Description: Soul Seal is a justu used by the Akimitsukai Clan. To use this jutsu the user must have two free hands and usually this is only used the target is already wounded or as a final desperate attempt. With one hand the user grabs their target by the neck, slamming the heel of their other hand into the sternum of the target, seeming to dig their nails and fingertips in slightly. This jutsu literally removes the soul of the target, killing them. The user, as the soul is removed, pieces of the seal crawl up their fingertips, across their hand, and up their arm. The result is a seal on their back or shoulders. This seal serves no real purpose but to seal the soul of the target and is a mark of pride for the user.
This jutsu can only be used once in a fight, they must have a full rest before they can use it again as this is the only jutsu that breaks through the Child’s Shield into the clan members extra chakra reserves. It cannot be used repeatedly, most can only use it five times, the greatest record seen is seven, and that user was driven mad.
By taking the soul of another into themselves, the user is committing themselves to a life bound to their own, hearing their voice for all their days. One can only take so many souls before they will go mad or die from it.
*Note: If not being used in desperation prior to death, Target should be restrained

Can you say that it's recommended that the target be restrained otherwise it'd be a waist of chakra?
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Re: Akimitsukai Clan

Post by Katya on Sat Aug 04, 2012 11:36 pm

Changes made, instead of 8 posts I made that jutsu last only five posts. Made all other changes, sorry about the confusion, for some reason I thought that I had put 15 meters, not feet.


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Re: Akimitsukai Clan

Post by Rizuma Jigoku on Sat Aug 04, 2012 11:53 pm

Thank you!

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