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Post by The Akiha on Sat Aug 04, 2012 2:24 am

General Information


Name: Akiha Jakirin Hideko (surname first, given name(s) last.)

Nickname/Alias: Shinigami

Age: 20

Gender: Female

Looks:

Standing at a mere one-hundred sixty-two point five centimeters with a slender build of fifty-seven point five kilograms wouldn’t normally say much for a female trying to make it in the ninja profession. Fortunately for her that slender build being packed tight with lithe muscle and lightning-quick reflexes hammers home the saying ‘actions speak louder than words.’ The pale skin holding all this together is a striking contrast to the deep grass colored hair that falls anywhere from between around her hips to a good few inches above the small of her back. With eyes the color of the bright honey gold common to her clan, it’s hard not to attribute feral qualities to her right off the bat. Though on the slim side, the female family genes made sure to pass on hips pleasantly wider than her waist and a cup size to compliment them. From the male side came the full pouting lips that rarely crack a smile and legs that go for miles.

Not everything is perfect, however, and the Akiha’s picturesque countenance is far from an exception. The face with its smooth well defined features on just the softer side of sharp with a timeless classical dramatic beauty holds a single flaw. During a mission in earlier years there was an acquisition of a few centimeters wide scar running horizontally from the apple of her right cheek back along the slightly diagonal line of that same bone and ending at her ear. Inches below that scar are a set of three earrings while in the other ear hang a set of four. Thin shafts of steel in peculiar shapes that at first appear as simple if not unique earrings are actually tools for coaxing cooperation from security of the lock variety. Across the pale expanse of skin on her back the powerful image of a tiger stretching its sleek form from slightly below her left shoulder blade curving a bit to end on the right of her lower back .

Her wardrobe can be summed up in a few words. Everything is either all or a mixture of the following words: dark, form fitting, flexible, functional, and comfortable. Practicality is what this one looks for in clothes and that’s what others will see. At most times Jakirin can be seen wearing dark formfitting pants and shirts of the same saturation. During training and working hours she sports a fitted black bodysuit that stretches from her ankles all the way up to a mandarin collar. Over this suit zippered compartments are littered into which metal plates can be slipped for added protection on those days Jakirin feels extra wary. A belt capable of holding most of her weapons and shinobi paraphernalia is commonly seen secured around her hips whether she is suited or not. Covering her small feet are very flexible black leather shoes with thin yet supportive soles. Puzzled by the current ninja ‘fashion’ to have the toes unprotected, as the absence of any toe results in learning how to walk again, Jakirin’s soft-soled shoes keep her toes covered and protected by a thin curved sheet of steel short enough to allow her foot to bend naturally. These little shoes also have the sweet feature of a mini stiletto. Though activated by the usual heel mechanism, the shafts of steel are not thin but wide and clawed for the dual purpose of climbing or holding onto trees with much less chakra as well as toe to skin damage and the usual ruin-your-face purposes. All the metal on Jakirin’s black combat suit are kept painted a black matte, as early in her creation and use of the ensemble she was injured badly due to her opponent being made aware of her position from the sunlight reflecting off her zippers.

Personality:
Jakirin is an introvert through and through, she dislikes crowds and groups for the most part and keeps to herself. Most often she can be found on her own or with one other person, usually Sheng until his passing. Now she prefers solitude and interacts with others even worse than she formerly did. A conversation with her generally leaves the other person feeling unfulfilled, as Jakirin has a habit of grunting and plain staying silent during the parts where one would usually respond. Not really up on being in touch with her emotions in the first place, Jakirin is even less so now that the only person she ever connected with is gone.

She is quiet by nature, opting to sit back and watch the world rather than be in the middle of the mess, making plans and developing ideas instead of rushing into things. Because of this trait she is able to easily see the strengths and weaknesses of others, making her a relatively good organizer or leader. Despite having talent for this sort of thing, she much prefers to not be responsible for others. However she is more than willing to take control of the situation if a current leader shows themselves to be inadequate to the task of mission completion. Jakirin is relentlessly ruled by logic and rationality, taking in information constantly from her surroundings both animate and stationary. From an early age a drive for knowledge, competence, and intelligence has shown through strongly and it is these qualities that she demands from herself as well as expects from others. Unfortunately Jakirin does have standards that are a little high, but she holds herself to these standards more rigidly than she does others.

Fortunately for her, Jakirin is quick on the uptake of new skills and is an avid scholar, reading being one of her favorite pastimes aside from physical training. Constantly taking in knowledge, she knows a great many things but generally doesn’t care enough to say anything about it unless directly asked. She doesn’t like lies unless working or if the truth would create an obstacle for her. While for the most part Jakirin is generally an even keeled person she isn’t entirely predictable lately, sometimes being extremely rude and brash one moment but in the next exhibiting tortoise like patience. Often this spurt of brashness happens when something or someone gets in her way and makes itself an obstacle as obstacles are a point of intolerance for her.

Usually Jakirin is content with having little to no interaction with other humans, finding the majority of them annoying and not worth interrupting her thoughts to deal with. She doesn’t do well with handling confrontations positively, usually resorting to some kind of violence or plain ignoring the other person and walking away. For the most part Jakirin comes across as cold or rude because of this intolerance for other people’s issues and she’s comfortable enough with that to leave it alone as long as it doesn’t get the way of a goal. Jakirin’s main ambition is for power and she will do all she can to attain more of it, but prefers to do this quietly so as not to attract attention.

Since the death of Sheng Mamoru, Jakirin went from decidedly less pleasant than she had previously been to an experience no one wanted to have. More prone to lashing out and knowing it, she only ventures into the more populated areas of town when work or shopping demands it. Generally she steers away from the crowd and takes paths about her business that are less likely to run her into others. She opts for ignoring anyone she doesn’t actually have to deal with or that she doesn’t need anything from which is most of the population. Whereas in the past Jakirin was more prone to ignore confrontation, she now responds very aggressively though she does draw the line at physically assaulting civilians for the most part. She has no qualms at all in sending other shinobi to the hospital, however, if they prove to be in the way in any sense of the meaning.




KKG Information

Clan Name: Akiha

-Bloodline Description:
Spoiler:

In any Akiha household one would immediately notice something different in the training of the clan younglings. Instead of general roundabout training geared towards persons of so young an age, an Akiha child is relentlessly and sometimes gruelingly educated in the complete and utter control of their chakra. Though seemingly harsh, the reason for this is simple as it is vital to the well-being of both the young Akiha and those around them. The power of the Kashokugen lies in the skin cells that cover the body. With the right amount of friction against these cells, an innocent action could too easily turn into a deadly one. This ability arrives early in life due to Kashokugen cells being produced when the body’s temperature plateaus. After one to many losses from lack of control over this, elders of the Akiha devised and then realized a seal that would allow the fire wielding child to lead a much safer life. Released by clan elders in stages that went right along with how well the Akiha in question could control their chakra, this seal enables the user to develop their Kashokugen at a safe and controlled pace until no longer needed. Not all Akiha members have the immense control of their chakra needed to warrant their seal obsolete and while some users outgrow their seals, many are left sealed according to their ability.

Kashokugen cells start being manufactured at around three years of age when the body temperature starts becoming stable as mentioned earlier. Potency of these cells becomes greater as the Akiha reaches the perfect temperature for their Kekkei Genkai, usually during puberty but sometimes a handful of years early depending on the chakra strength of the child. Each member has an individual heat requirement. During this time there will be ‘flare-ups’ as hormones fluctuate and sometimes an particularly fluctuating adolescent may find themselves sealed down a level. For females, flare-ups may continue to occur during menstruation and again during pregnancy. During pregnancy the mother’s kekkei genkai is usually sealed so as not to endanger the child or herself. The blood of an Akiha blessed with Kashokugen is also quite volatile. Though liquid in form, the right jutsu can cause this substance to explode upon whatever surface it rests on.

Once the fire is ignited using the Kashokugen, it is controlled with that impeccable chakra discipline instilled in every Akiha. A user may only control the fire they themselves create; this automatically excludes fire created by other clan members excepting that of identical twins (two fetuses of the same ovum) because one cannot control chakra with a signature differing from their own. Fortunately for the Akiha, their skin is near impervious to burns from fire. However, near impervious means that a Kashokugen user’s hands and sometimes other body parts bear scars from prolonged use and accidents. Three levels of this ability exist; Hara, Katou, and Hiten. These levels have little to do with the seals. Not all clan members have the same power regarding their gift and thus even a fully unsealed Kashokugen wielder may not be able to achieve what another can.

Hara is what most Akiha possesses, a simple but formidable level with the knack for controlling the lighting, concentration, and direction of their fires. For the talented is the Katou level in which the member is able to manipulate their chakra fed orange beasts into whatever form suits their purpose and also to concentrate their flames to a superheated temperature. While being the most powerful level, Hiten is rarely reached by an Akiha and is also extremely dangerous when used to its full potential. At Hiten level the user is able to ignite their whole bodies as a human torch. As remarkable as it seems, this form can only be used sparingly and for short periods of time unless the Akiha has no problem with death. Each level consumes more chakra than the last and carries a higher level of personal injury. Few Akiha women ever reach this level, and fewer men. The women of this clan carry the dominant gene for Kashokugen while the men have the recessive. Because of this dominance in the gene pool the females who have this ability are the most skilled.

Village:
Konohagakure

Clan Symbol:
Maple leaf

Clan Traits:
Akiha’s have gold eyes, whether dark or light or tinted slightly another color, it is always identifiably golden. When the kekkei genkai is being used, a red ring will show around the pupil and bleed further over the iris until, at maximum level of use or power, the entire iris will be heavily tinted red if not completely red depending on the natural iris hue. Generally, Akiha clan member have fair skin that doesn’t take to tanning well and as a result of that as well as their skin being part of their clan ability, they usually take very good care of their skin.




Rank Information


Village: Konohagakure
Title Rank: Sannin, but actually works on ANBU team
Skill Rank: S



Skill Information


Skill Specialty:
Main: Ninjutsu
Sub: Kenjutsu
Tertiary: Genjutsu

Elemental Affinity:
Main: Fire
Sub: Lightning
Tertiary: Water

Special Characteristics:

Name: Increased Sensory Input
Rank: Super
Description:
Especially heightened senses such as hearing, sight, smell, and touch. She developed this also as a necessity from her time living out of doors, having to always stay alert to survive heightened her senses. Basically she adapted to her environment.

Name: Creature Tongue
Rank: Super
Description:
This is the ability of very basic communication with fauna. (i.e. generally just single word commands such as: look, go, run, attack, stay, come, hide, stop, etc.) She cannot give them complicated commands (like spying or infiltration), and she cannot force a stubborn animal to obey. This does not work with insects or with ninja trained animals (like Inuzuka canines). Jakirin discovered this during her time living out of doors, though she found out the hard way that it does not work on insects.

Flaws/Weaknesses:
Name: Cold Ultrasensitivity
Rank: Elite
Description:
Jakirin is sensitive to prolonged periods of extreme cold. Generally she can heat herself up using her KKG but after a few hours of doing this, her chakra gets drained. When she can no longer keep her body heated properly, it will shut down system by system until she reaches a state of dormancy/unconsciousness. If left in this state and not heated up to the proper temperature, she will slip into a coma in roughly an hour. The colder it is, the quicker all this takes place and in general the whole process from chakra running out to coma takes about 2-2.5 hours. The only exception would be if she had something else available to keep her body temperature up. Muscle coordination starts becoming affected and movements are slow and labored, accompanied by stumbling and slight confusion. Shivering is hard and involuntary and blood vessels on the surface contract to pull heat to the core and protect vital organs. As the temperature drops the shivering stops and the individual has difficulty speaking and thinking. At this point amnesia starts to appear and the inability to use hands is gone. When the temperature becomes lower the muscle coordination is so bad that walking is usually out of the question and they start becoming irrational and/or incoherent. After this point, the major organs will fail and if not remedied immediately it’s over. Putting a post amount on this is difficult because fights do not actually last for hours, they are very short in reality. Though if the opponent has a long lasting freezing technique and the Akiha's chakra is already gone, it would take about 4-5 posts for the Akiha to pass out and about 6 for them to slip into a coma. 7 posts of complete and utter freezing would result it plain death.

Name: Kashokugen Side Effect
Rank: Super
Description:
While the Kashokugen itself (the thermographic technique) can be a great asset depending on the user’s skill, there is a drawback. If this genetic ability is left activated for too long a period the Akiha will be left in darkness and pain for a time. In other words, overuse of this technique can leave the user blind and with a massive migraine for a while. The blindness generally wears off with adequate rest of the eyes as does the migraine, depending on how long the Kashokugen was used. However, if left unchecked or if the user is careless and reckless too often, the blindness can last much longer. Usually the Kashokugen is only needed for short stints and that is the situation it is adapted for, not for hours on end of activation. Though it is often needed for hours of use in scouting or infiltration and the Akiha simply has to deal with the consequences of the needs of the mission. This side effect of the Kashokugen does not usually result in permanent blindness except in cases of blatant misuse, though this is something the Akiha must be constantly aware of and take exceptionally good care of their optic system. If Kashokugen is used constantly for anything over 3 posts the vision will begin to blur. Beyond 4 posts and the vision is heavily blurred. Beyond 5 and the vision darkens. At over 6 the user is blind until adequate rest is had.




Weapons, Pet, and Jutsu


Weapons
Name: Taiyoushin
Amount: 2
Appearance:
The Akiha katana is an example of Japanese perfectionism. The balance is flawless, as is the design. Pounded into the metal are maple leaves in a scattered pattern over the blade and the clan mons on the collar and guard. The handle and sheath are both black, but the sheath is littered with an ornate maple leaf motif in plated gold. Each katana is exactly the same, rumored to be specially made for a set of twins.
Rank: B
Special Abilities: The only ability, or property really, these katana display is the excellent conduction of fire and chakra.
Origin: This is a family heirloom, bequeathed to Jakirin upon her grandmother’s death.





Pet
Name: Raiden
Nickname:
Age: 2 years
Rank: S
Species: Wolf
Appearance:
Raiden is a rather large black wolf. There’s no real difference in his appearance compared to other wolves excepting his size. He’s about 7 feet from nose to tail tip and around 4 feet from ears to ground.
Personality:
Raiden is a wolf and thus his basic personality is similar to all wolves, though he has many tendencies of domesticated dogs as he was raised by Jakirin. He is fiercely loyal and very protective of what he views as his, mainly Jakirin. She is his alpha and he is very obedient when she requests things of him. Raiden is an extremely intelligent animal and only needs to know who the enemy is, being able to figure out the rest for himself. He enjoys the times he accompanies his alpha and often, if not always, he is found loping alongside Jakirin whether she is in the village or not. Despite his alpha being rather standoffish, Raiden is a pretty friendly animal to those who smell like Konoha. He is particularly fond of children and stops whenever he passes a playground or schoolyard to spend some time being fawned over.

For some reason, Raiden’s thoughts are extraordinarily “loud” when it comes to Jakirin’s particular gift. While this is not the case with other animals, she is able to easily discern Raiden’s wants or needs when he thinks about them. So in the manner of Jakirin picking up his extra loud thoughts, Raiden is able to communicate with her this way when she is focused on him. Perhaps as a side effect of being around an individual who is able to communicate to a degree with him, Raiden’s thought process is more complex than most animals. This allows for much better communication between him and Jakirin.

Could not post jutsu in this application. I got a message in red saying "The posted message is too long." I will post separately.

History and Sample RP

History: Long.
Spoiler:
Morita Kenoro became an alcoholic shortly after getting married to his young wife, Akiha Izako. Said wife went down the same road quick enough, pausing for nine months to give birth to a baby girl and then starting right back up after announcing that the three month old baby girl was a curse from the gods.

Akiha Izako was the only living child of her parents Hideto and Shizuka, her twin brother Hideki having died on his first mission as a genin. Before that she had been quite talented and had even showed her isanshi at an early age, but after Hideki’s passing the Kashokugan virtually disappeared from her. She quit the shinobi life and instead turned to boys and partying to fill her time. Her mother tried to bring her daughter back from this dangerous path but after Hideto died and the girl couldn’t even be bothered to come to the funeral, Shizuko resigned herself to reality. Shizuko watched helpless as Izako became a loose, gambling, drunk and the Akiha line looked as if it would vanish into memories.

Then Izako met Morita Kenoro, the ill-tempered son of a travelling fortune teller from the Land of Forests. Kenoro and his quack (in Shizuko’s opinion) but good natured father settled down in Konoha. Izako and the good natured quack's son fell into a tumultuous relationship and eventually married, then divorced. Upon finding out about her pregnancy, the couple married again and stayed that way. However, Izako was very obviously not suited for child rearing and vehemently did not wish to have anything to do with the tiny quiet bundle.

The child was quickly taken by her grandmother, Shizuko, in the hopes that the child would make up for the clan heir the old woman lost in her son. As soon as the toddler was able to walk on her own, Shizuko began teaching her the way of the Akiha ninja. Before the girl was of even the earliest eligible age, arrangements were made for her to be enrolled into the Academy immediately upon her coming of age. Unfortunately, not long after aforesaid arrangements were made, Shizuko passed peacefully in her sleep and young Jakirin was sent to live with her parents again.

The months passed by featuring the girl sleeping on an old threadbare couch when she could and hiding from the far reaching hands of angry drunks when she couldn’t. Duck and dodge became a game in which to lose meant staying in her hidden cubby space until the ugly purple and brown patches went away. Whereas before she was taught never to steal, cheat, or lie for any reason lest the family honor be tarnished; now she learnt that the choice between family honor and food was incredibly easy when her ribs were poking through her skin. The lesson of survival was carved into every twist and turn of her brain by the time she was five.

Finally the day came for her to attend the academy. It was challenging, at times grueling, and often the other children fled from her. It was heaven. She had the ability and the skill, this she knew within minutes of entering the classroom. Immediately she started siphoning knowledge from the sensei ruthlessly and trained day and night without sleep. Entering the second week the teacher, after seeing the young child march into the room with marks and bruises for the seventh time, asked about her family. Jakirin did not know what to say.

During the preceding weekend the situation between herself and her parents came to a climax. After having been exhausted enough to fall asleep within the dangers of her own home, she had woken to the creeping feelings of large hands sliding over her skin. Looking up to see her father, the feared and revered kekkei genkai of the mighty Akiha clan reared its head in Konoha once more. After a fumbling fight in which her father landed quite a few blows of his own, the man was dispatched. Clothes aflame, his head went flying from his shoulders and into the drunken woman on the floor a few feet away. Her mother awoke groggily at first and then fully once seeing the gruesome sight in her lap. Alas, the woman hadn’t even the time to scream properly as her daughter came at her with eyes blazing. She had buried the corpses herself in the small plot of Earth behind the house.

Faced now with whether to admit her crimes and be punished or to lie and dishonor her clan, she had to think quickly. She could never honor her clan if she were to be publicly punished and forbidden to become a shinobi. The man that had been her father had been a disgrace and his death restored the clan name in her opinion. So lie she did, right to the asking officer’s caring face. That day ended one chapter of her life and began on the next. For on that day she was forced to sit beside the most irritating student in the class. Sheng Mamoru.

He talked too much and listened too little. Jakirin knew of his parents and their prowess as ninja was a thing known throughout the village. Their son however was a great lump of lacking. He lacked drive and appreciation for the profession, the honor of the ninja. Of course that wasn’t as incredibly obnoxious as his relentless jovial disposition. Even when the older boy challenged her and was viciously defeated it didn’t seem to impact him too much other than to serve as fuel for him to keep challenging her. Not that Jakirin minded besting him day after day, but after a while the Sheng showed progress and even later proved to be an actual work out if not a worthy opponent.

Time passed and the only remaining progeny of the Akiha clan graduated the academy earliest in her class, choosing also to forego the lengthy and pointless graduation ceremony. The shiny new forehead protector given as standard graduation allotment was painted black and re-sewn onto a heavy duty black elastic band, as knots weren’t as efficient, and the band was most often seen around one of her thighs. Upon this most momentous occasion Jakirin was contacted by an acquaintance of her late grandmother.

The greasy yet proud looking man took her before a board of rather ancient men and women. She was asked question after question about the deaths of her parents to which she skillfully worked around so as not to reveal the whole truth. She hadn’t seen her parents the entire day before the incident, and previous investigation on the girl’s part had her confident that no one else had either. When she got home from the academy that day it was to find the house burnt to the ground and her parents missing. The board bought it hook, line, and sinker. It was then that they brought out the documents that were her grandmothers will.

After reading the first few paragraphs, Jakirin for the first time needed a moment to get a handle on her emotions. The sweet old warrior woman had left her grandchild the estate and holdings of the entire Akiha clan, to be given into her control after her completion of the ninja academy. Numbly Jakirin accepted this and signed on the necessary lines of the necessary paperwork. She was taken to the grounds of the main Akiha building after which information of the other houses and properties were placed in her possession. Alone in the new and old house that was now hers with the strange walls closing in to remind her of the family she could have had, Jakirin ran.

Perhaps it was a clever twist of fate that she ran to the place the Sheng and she used for training grounds. For Jakirin’s part, she didn’t believe in all that fate and destiny mumbo-jumbo, but when the older boy appeared not long after her own arrival she wondered. After discerning what had happened to distress the usually stoic female ninja, there was a talk. Mostly it was the Sheng who spoke leaving Jakirin to answer and nod and grunt in the appropriate places. Strangely enough, this awkward session made her feel much better and in the end the older ninja, having graduated with his class already, helped her settle into her new home. Perhaps it wasn’t so much a clever twist of fate, however, as the shinobi now thought it natural to plague her with his irritatingly mood brightening presence.

Slowly they fixed up the main Akiha house to the point where it was presentable instead of just livable. To Jakirin, used to living outdoors for multiple years, the place had been perfectly fine. Yet clan pride snuck in and in the end Sheng and she moved all of her late grandmother’s things into the main house and turned it into something the woman might’ve been pleased with. The two young shinobi continued to train with together and after being propositioned to train with someone else, she declined. Later she would think about why, as training with more than one partner is more logical than training with just the one. As it was, she was too busy with the house and asinine missions to notice that Sheng had basically started living with her. Finally after almost a year of such arrangements, Sheng’s parents brought his things from their house to hers. They made her well aware of their pleased state that their son and Jakirin were dating and wished them well. While Sheng, just as odd as his parents, seemed not to be too affected, Jakirin herself was concerned. After all, they had just turned twelve and moving in together seemed to be a little much. She also hadn’t realized they were dating, and immediately dismissed the elder Shengs to discuss the situation with the younger Sheng.

Somehow he convinced her, showing a startling capacity for logical argument and reasoning skills, that they were indeed dating because he had asked her and she’d agreed. He’d also said that he’d been living there solidly for the past four months, only going home to do laundry, and the only difference was that he would have all his things. Jakirin made him wait outside while she considered all these things atop the table she’d first exhibited her bloodline and after quite a while informed him that he could have the room immediately down the hall from her own. That, and he had to also do her laundry as well when he went to his parents’ house.

When the two were assigned the same missions, working together became virtually effortless. Not just because of years of training together but also due to a natural rhythm that they had fallen into while working. Jakirin’s training catapulted forward and when the Chuunin exam rounded the corner, the twelve year old Jakirin came out victoriously undefeated. The next year, Sheng also completed the Chuunin exams and they continued to advance relatively at the same pace.

In the following years the two were placed on most missions with each other when Sheng was sent into the field, one of which earned her the scar on her face. More often than not, however, the male ninja chose to stay behind in the village usually helping with hospital work. Despite not caring in the least about Konoha politics and village pride, things that probably would’ve been instilled in her had her grandmother survived, she did admire the current Kage as a fellow shinobi. Until they sent Sheng and her on a simple and quick escort mission. Or at least it would have been had the client not been a liar, a complete idiot, and a coward to boot. Jakirin came home from that mission alive, barely, and very carefully carrying her most precious possession. Sheng didn’t make it despite the hours worked on him at the hospital. Jakirin blamed the Kage for not doing their job and catching the lie that, if the truth had been ascertained, Sheng would’ve made noodles that night. In the months after, Jakirin threw herself into training day and often night until she was able to pass to Jounin rank. She went through the motions of fulfilling her shinobi duties, the hollow feeling his death left impressed upon her only lessening in the heat of battle.

Doing nothing outside the basic needs of survival but training and missions got her to this rank very quickly. Attaining this position while utterly alone was not enough. So she took missions more dangerous and lived the life of a mechanical shinobi until it earned her a spot on an elite squad. During this time she found a new weapon. In the years since her full maturity she had noticed that both in and outside the village, males seemed to be attracted to her body. This had been a nuisance, because her body was reserved for only one. However, that one was no longer present to make reservations for. So Jakirin removed any that she had placed upon herself. She found that this body of hers could be used for work, and so she used it. Over time she learned to use it so well that it very rarely failed her and became one of her most effective methods. One stipulation was kept on this particular weapon: any upon whom it was used was exterminated without fail and without exception.

Still, her success wasn’t enough. The hollowness never left and her melancholy coldness turned to a ruthlessness and anger so vast her teammates began complaining that she was attempting to take all the glory for herself. Glory wasn’t the reason why Jakirin meticulously slaughtered all opponents available, but that sort of thing was unexplainable. She was transferred to a different squad, one renowned for the type of suicide missions it was assigned and the resulting member turn around. Jakirin blossomed. Every mission was better than the one before it and her expertise grew exponentially. She mastered her specialties and wrought ruin upon every obstacle she faced. This mastery and discipline in her arts won her rank after rank until there were simply so few left, the rank barely mattered. The only problem now was staying in the village.

Every road, shop, and training area held memories she fought against and too often failed. Every face she saw should be someone else's. she avoids people as much as possible, taking back roads and out of the way routes just to avoid coming across another human. The stares at her as she passed and the whispers questioning her sanity had at one point caused her to seriously consider living in the forbidden forest again. Whereas once she had a vague sense of home while there, now the place made her uneasy. Over the years since Sheng’s death she had developed an understanding of the politics she’d never bothered with before. She found she didn’t like them. More than once she had caught herself musing on how best to dispose of the Kage without being caught or having to set out to replace them outright, but then the Hokage was replaced and she had new things to worry about. Needless to say, the village of Konohagakure was not the same to Akiha Jakirin as it had once been.

Now with every villager she came across her fingers itched for the feel of metal or twitched in a subconscious attempt at handsigns. Yet she knows she will have to wed one of these creatures to continue her line. Before, the thought of begetting heirs had been a tolerable and at times, even a comfortable one. Now, she dreads the day she’ll have to give in and continue her clan.


RP Sample: Long.
Spoiler:
“Mamoru…” The words were whispered from her lips, the face around them going pale. Brown eyes looked slowly up at her in shock, then down again at the sword tip coming from his ribcage.

“Jaki?” So small now, his voice was, quiet and soft. She hated it. The silver blade glistened with his blood in a grotesque parody of beauty before it was jerked out and he fell forward.

“Mamoru!” This time the word was a scream as the young woman struggled to move forward.

“It was his own fault, Akiha.” The voice sounded from a few feet away from her as a foot met with the back of her knee. Trying to get up after hitting her knees was promptly stopped by another foot slamming into her back, forcing her to her stomach on the ground.

“Sheng was never strong enough to come against me.” The voice spoke casually from off to the side as hands wrapped around her wrists to wrench her arms behind her back. Realizing the purpose for that particular move had her writhing and trying to evade it. A fist crashed into her ribs and she winced at the pain, stilling for a long enough moment to feel cord being coiled around her wrists. Unable to do much else, she took a chance to look at the shinobi on the ground. His hair had taken on an ugly purple from red blood mixing with his blue hair. She hated the way it looked. Couldn’t stand it. The sight of the disgusting reddish purple made her want to scream but she didn’t have the breath. She couldn’t look away from it despite a cold feeling creeping over her the longer she did.

“Have you found it? It must be on her.” That same voice she had once placed trust as a loyal teammate. Now directing the murder of her lover and betrayal of her home in such a cavalier manner, as if instructing how lunch should be prepared.

“We’ll get it from her.” A voice called from directly behind her to its three companions, who laughed along with it before coming again closer to her ear, “How about you tell us where the scroll is so we can be on our way?”

The creeping cold kept coming and she kept silent. A hand grabbed her by the hair, jerking her up to stand on her knees and then again so her body was arched backward. Her eyes closed as the hand pulled harder on her hair but she still couldn’t find the breath to cry out.

“Boss, we gotta go soon.” Said a different voice, younger and more subdued.
The man it addressed nodded. In response the hand that had a hold of her head shoved her forward and pulled her head back to expose her throat. There was a sound of metal and she strained to look down only to see the traitor slide one of two wakizashi from his back. The one he’d just used.

“I’ve wasted enough time. Your bodies will have to be sufficient.” He said as he moved towards her purposefully.

“Why.” She whispered numbly.

His face soon loomed into view less than a foot away, “The Akatsuki doesn’t let the weak in. Betraying your country and killing your teammates seemed the best demonstration.”

Anger flared through her like fire as the already bloodstained short sword came closer and she grit her teeth, shoving her body forward to get out of the voice’s grip. The fingers in her hair had wrapped around a handful of the grassy green tresses and refused to budge despite her change in position. Sharp pain blossomed through her shoulder as the cold bite of kunai sank into the flesh. Not a word escaped her mouth but a quick intake of breath was enough to show that it hurt. Through the messy curtain of hair covering her eyes she could see him still. Mamoru. Agony stabbed through her entire torso at even the thought of the name. He was alive still if the ever slowing movement of his breathing chest was anything to go by. There was rustling of clothes and the distinct and usually soothing sound of metal sliding slowly against metal behind and above her. It didn’t matter. Nothing penetrated the spell she was in as his ribcage swelled and deflated. Ever slowing as the seconds passed. Then it stopped. His chest stopped moving.

Her eyes widened. He wasn’t breathing! Her own lungs stopped for a moment, a long and pregnant moment. Body rigid, she had lifted her head to stare at him, no, at the body in shock. Gone. Mamoru. He was gone. This thought blared through her mind like a siren over and over. Still, realization hadn’t settled in quite yet. She continued to lie stiffly on the earthen ground unable or unwilling to look away from it. Then it did, slowly settling over her consciousness like a leaf hugs the surface of a river. Gently not breaking the surface. But even this softest touch of it was enough.

It echoed for a long time, her scream. Piercing the cool evening air with its pitch. She didn’t stop until her lungs burned, and then only long enough to draw in enough breath to fuel another. The blood in her veins became like molten magma and she could feel her skin warm before turning hot. Pushing herself up onto her knees, she felt the fabric of her clothing ignite and start to burn. The cord behind her sizzled and in its weakened state she broke it easily. Flames danced around her vision and after awhile she knew it was no longer the clothes on her back. Finally ripping her eyes from the body, from him, she looked down at herself.

Her hands were bathed in flames, the skin remaining smooth without even a blister. The clothes had burnt away and still the flames twisted over her. Her body had completely burst into flame. Her Hiten had finally awoken. She screamed again.

Suddenly, someone was shaking her and calling her name. Jakirin jerked away, subsequently jolting her brain from its rest, and instinctively attacked the shaker. A pale hand grabbed hold of a muscled shoulder and in a ragged but fast movement she had a body pinned beneath her. Blinking and half awake, she zeroed in at where her hand was wrapped white-knuckled around the hilt of her tanto, everything else fading to the background. Following up the column of throat her blade was pressed against revealed a face and one shocked dark eye staring at her from a pale face.

The body was taut and magnificently still, hair haphazardly covering half of their face. Suddenly the tanto was bearing down harder against the throat and they inhaled sharply. She could hear the heartbeat from where she sat on their stomach, ankles hooked over their legs and keeping them stationary. Just a bit further and she would end them but abruptly she noticed something. There should have been more sound than just a heartbeat and her breathing.

The screaming had stopped. She shivered, her body flushed and sweating. A flickering light told her there was a fire near her she hadn’t seen before. Alarmed, she threw her senses out and found a voice and words streamed into her ears rapidly.

“-iha! Come on, Akiha! That’s not an enemy. Are you listening? That’s Hatsukawa. He was waking you up. Your clothes were burning. Akiha don’t move! Can you hear me? Don’t kill him! He’s a teammate!”

The voice was familiar and she blinked in confusion, shaking her head to clear it. Burning and waking up? Looking down at herself she saw indeed that her clothes had seared patches missing through which her skin showed. She also saw the blade shoved hard against her teammate’s throat. The teammate that hadn’t betrayed her, hadn’t murdered Sheng, and wasn’t about to do the same to her. This realization snapped her out of her instinct-driven daze and she immediately threw herself from the tensed male. He sat up quickly and rubbed his neck, she looked away not wanting to see if she had actually drawn blood or not. Instead she glanced over at her other team member currently walking carefully over to this side of the fire. Jakirin looked only long enough at him to make sure he was unarmed before shakily getting to her feet and staring at the ground.

Hatsukawa cleared his throat and began to speak but before he even finished his sentence she was yards away, having uttered a quick excusing of herself. If his throat had been damaged by her lack of control she didn’t want to know. Frustrated, she stopped against a tree and slammed her fist into it. Her chi burning holes in her clothes and her mind in battle mode even after she woke; these were things that had happened before. However, being thrown into a memory dream of Sheng’s murder she had thought was a thing of the past. It had not occurred for months now, yet here she was again, only this time she had almost slit Hatsukawa’s throat because of it.

Calming down, she turned back and made short time on her way back to camp. They still had a mission to complete and she was a shinobi. This was unprofessional. It was unacceptable to allow personal feelings to interfere with a job. She wouldn’t allow it to happen again. Once she was within hearing range she heard whispers and kept going, not caring in the least what they were talking about. This was still business. She walked calmly to Hatsukawa and bowed deeply.

“Hatsukawa-san. Please forgive me. My actions put you at risk as well as the mission. It is unacceptable and I will report the incident myself when we return.”

Glancing up as she straightened, she saw his head tilt to the side and his arms cross over his chest. There was silence for a moment and then he spoke again, “You’re right. They did put me at risk. The mission, too.”

Glad he couldn’t see it in the dark, she narrowed her eyes. Usually Hatsukawa was one man she enjoyed working with. He was quiet and did his job right, rarely making mistakes and she’d not heard of him failing a mission yet. Bur right now, if he was just going to repeat what she’d just said maybe she should have let the tanto slip a little more, regardless of whether he was a teammate. She was sure being a missing nin wouldn’t be that bad of a life. The village wasn’t home anymore as it was. Hatsukawa went on,

“I don’t want you to report it, however. I’m not hurt and you’re too good of a shinobi to have you removed from the team.”

Confusion swept through her mind at his words. It had to be reported so she could be punished properly, this was how things were. Shinobi had to be held at a level above civilians and thus when they made mistakes or errors they must be responded to with severity. Though his reasoning that she was skilled and shouldn’t be removed from the team was sound. The success rate of the team would fall. As she thought these things he continued,

“But these instances can’t keep happening, Akiha. Take care of it. Otherwise you cannot be used.”

Frustrated but agreeing, she straightened and nodded. Of course he was correct; there was no use for someone who could not even master her own issues in her line of work. She was not an exception and she would indeed take care of this. It wouldn’t happen if she was too exhausted to dream.

“Understood. To make up for it, allow me to take the frontal attack position. Your wife is due to have the baby very soon after we are scheduled to return.”

After a few moments, during which she thought he wouldn’t accept it, she received a nod of assent. Though, it was made clear to her that this was only being accepted as part of her apology and not to be done in the future. She agreed. When a ninja was assigned a task it was because his success rate at it was higher than the other team members’. Every member had different skills, but many overlapped. Jakirin also wanted him to have the lesser risk because he was to be a parent so soon. Something she herself dreaded but understood that to him it was of utmost importance.


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Re: Akiha Jakirin -C'est Fini-

Post by Hakai Hozuki on Sat Aug 04, 2012 2:38 am

OK.. pm me your flaws.. they are going to probably be added to your app.
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Post by The Akiha on Sat Aug 04, 2012 3:07 am

I do not want them added to my app. As I stated before, if I add them to my application for anyone to see it allows anyone to meta-game with that. If the moderator approving my weakness knows about it and deems it fine, why is this necessary?


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Post by Nuitari Kouga on Sat Aug 04, 2012 3:39 pm

Let us worry about that. If you feel like your being cheated then simply let one of us know and we will settle it. Thats our job after all.
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Post by The Akiha on Sat Aug 04, 2012 8:58 pm

Thank you, Shishimaru. I have put up both flaws. I also altered the format to make it slightly more easy to read.


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Post by Nuitari Kouga on Sun Aug 05, 2012 8:30 am

Name: Increased Sensory Input
Rank: Average
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Especially heightened senses such as hearing, sight, smell, and touch. She developed this also as a necessity from her time living out of doors, having to always stay alert to survive heightened her senses. Basically she adapted to her environment.
This is a Super not Average.

All things that take time to go into effect need to be elaborated on. Replace hours with simple post lengths. How many post do certain effects last sct.
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Post by The Akiha on Sun Aug 05, 2012 1:31 pm

Fixed. Please check.


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Akiha Jakirin Jutsu

Post by The Akiha on Mon Aug 06, 2012 6:39 am

Again, site would not let me post this in my char app. So I posted it here.

General Ninjutsu
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Name: Body Replacement
Rank: E
Range: M
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:N/A
Handsigns:5
Description: With this technique, one replaces their own body with a block of wood or some other object, the moment an attack lands. This creates an optical illusion, making the enemy think the attack was successful. From this, the user can use the lapse in the enemy's attention to attack or flee from the battlefield. Explosive tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise.

Name: Body Flicker
Rank: D
Range: L
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:N/A
Handsigns:1
Description: a high-speed movement technique, allowing a ninja to move short to long distances at an almost untraceable speed. To an observer, it appears as if the user has teleported. A puff of smoke is occasionally used to disguise the user's movements. It is accomplished by using chakra to temporarily vitalize the body and move at extreme speeds. The amount of chakra required depends on the overall distance and elevation between the user and the intended destination.

Name: Generic Sealing Technique
Rank: D
Range: S
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:N/A
Handsigns:None
Description: This technique is a standard ninja skill which allows a ninja to summon an assortment of items that have been stored using fuuinjutsu. Scrolls are the most common choice for item storage. When needed, the owner will activate the seals releasing their item or weapon of choice.

Name: Transformation
Rank: E
Range: S
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:N/A
Handsigns:3
Description: It is typically used to change into people other than oneself, but one also has the ability to change into animals, plants, and even inanimate objects like weapons. This gives this technique an abundance of uses. The transformation of a skilled shinobi will be exactly like the genuine article, so it will be impossible to tell the two apart.

Jutsu Name: Kashokugen
Rank: D
Element: N/A
Range: However far user can see normally
Type: Doujutsu
Handseals None
Description:
An inherent ability of the Akiha, one every child is born with. Utilizing a much better version of infrared, the Kashokugen ninja is able to shift their sight to sense heat rather than objects. This is very useful both at night and during the day because it renders body replacement techniques and genjutsu less effective (no body heat, won’t show up), also helpful during infiltration and for scouting. While this is automatic to the Kashokugen wielder, the sensitivity to heat (how much it will actually show up) depends on how skilled the user is.

Fire Ninjutsu
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Name: Fire Circle Technique
Rank: C
Element/'s: Fire
Range: 5 meters
Type: Doujutsu or Ninjutsu
Hand seals: Tora, ushi, ne, mi
Description: Though it might be fancy in form, this jutsu is more to distract and stall the opponent than to cause actual damage, though some singing is inevitable. The user will make all but the very last seal and draw the circle on the ground and wait until their quarry steps into it and ignite it by making the last seal. The circle, only up to 5 feet in diameter, will shoot up fire around the entire circumference of the circle. While the flames can reach as far as the user is able to control their Kashougan, this jutsu is escaped by simply jumping out of it through the circle’s flame walls.

Name: Fire: Enhancer Technique
Rank: D-S
Element/'s: Fire
Range: N/A
Type: Ninjutsu
Hand seals: Tora, Usagi, tatsu, uma
Description: Performed right before a jutsu, this increases the strength of the next katon based jutsu. Most users are able to increase the strength of the next jutsu by about a rank (D to C, C to D, etc.), Jounin and ANBU are able to push their lower rank jutsu up two ranks depending on how much chakra they expend on this (D-B usually, C-A if they pour chakra into it, and A-S if they go all out). For use with already high ranked jutsu (B+) the chakra needed to increase the rank of the already powerful jutsu is quite a bit and expending this amount is dangerous, therefore is used as out of desperation. Most S rank shinobi don't really need this because they have more powerful attacks at their disposal but can use it to boost an attack and the same rules would apply as to Jounin or ANBU. This must be performed right before the jutsu the user wants to increase. While this may be used by anyone with fire affinity, it works best with the Akiha clan because it takes heat from the body and if there is not enough chakra to keep the body sufficiently heated until it heats up again naturally, or if the user is unable to manipulate their chakra this way, it can become dangerous if used too often or in the wrong circumstance. Only works on fire jutsu, whether clan related or not.

Name: Burning Touch Technique
Rank: B
Element/'s: Fire
Range: N/A it is touch based. So I guess 0 meters.
Type: Ninjutsu
Hand seals: Tora
Description: More of a defensive ability, it is perfect for close contact fighting. Once the seal is made to focus chakra, the skin of the user’s hands become enveloped in flame. While not at all an inconvenience to the ninja using this jutsu, anyone coming into contact with these hands will be seriously burnt. The degree of the burn depends on how long the contact is sustained. This would last for awhile since it’s just the hands aflame unless the fire is put out with water jutsu (not ice, ice affects temperature and the temp of this fire is fueled by the user), about three turns for Hara, four or five for Katou, five or six for Hiten.


Name: Blood Reaction Technique
Rank: B
Element/'s: Fire
Range: Varies. User must be in control range. 0-50m
Type: Ninjutsu
Hand seals: tora, inu, ne, ushi
Description: To use this jutsu, one would have to use an injury that's already bleeding or injure themselves to get the blood needed. Then they would throw droplets at, or smear it onto whomever or whatever they want. Even if the opponent got the Akiha’s blood on themselves accidentally, with the Chi Gyakusayou, it combusts. Wherever the blood is, it will burst into flame when this jutsu is used and is put out only when the blood has been burnt away or removed. If the blood is on clothing this makes it slightly more difficult for the victim as the fire will spread over cloth as is normal for fire to do.


Name: Fire Whip Technique
Rank: C
Element/'s: Fire
Range: 1-5 meters
Type: Ninjutsu
Hand seals: tora, mi, I, saru
Description: A jutsu in which the fists are put together after using the necessary hand seals and pulled away from eachother forming a tapering string of chakra infused fire. The hand holding the thickest end is then jerked, severing the connection to the other hand resulting in a long whip of fire ready to be used against the enemy. This whip will hold up its shape as long as the user feeds their chakra into it and is able to control it. The range depends on how long the whip is made, it would be different each time. To first use this jutsu would be the cost of a C rank, every turn after that would be about the cost of an E rank to keep the chakra going into the whip.


Name: Fireball Technique
Rank: B
Element/'s: Fire
Range: 0-50 meters. User must be in control range.
Type: Ninjutsu
Hand seals: tora, hitsuji, tatsu
Description: After the correct seals are used, the Kashogan uses a basic application of their bloodline. Igniting their hands on fire, the ninja will expand the flames into a swirling sphere of heat. If fighting in close range, the user can shove the fireball into an enemy or, if at longer range, shoot it off like a projectile. The practice of this Jutsu is basic and elementary, though practice and experience will allow the Akiha to enlarge the fireball or use it in a multitude of ways as opposed to a strict projectile or a desperate melee strike.


Name: Fire Arrow Technique
Rank: B
Element/'s: Fire
Range: Depends on user’s skill with a bow and range of bloodline control.
Type: Ninjutsu
Hand seals: tora, tori, u
Description: After firing off a series of hand seals, the Kashogan adept will let their hands burst into flames, fire consuming them as the Chakra-fed fire can be formed to the user’s will. This particular Jutsu has the Akiha ninja use the bloodline limit to create a normal sized arrow of fire that can be pulled back like it was prepped in a bow, the user releasing it as the weapon flies toward the enemy. The target can be as far as the level at which the user is will allow them to keep the fire burning with Kashogen. Otherwise the arrow would dissipate. A full through and through or a wicked burn on their flesh is to be expected as the distance effects the outcome.


Name: Forest of the Sacred Flame Technique
Rank: A
Element/'s: Fire
Range: 0-50 m. User must be in control range.
Type: Ninjutsu
Hand seals: tora, tatsu, tori
Description: In the heat of battle, the Akiha will shower the enemy with a storm of as many senbon as they are normally able to throw at once, something simple and easily dodged, but a twist seems to always ruin that course of action. Having performed the seals, the senbon aren’t necessarily meant to hit the enemy, at least the Akiha isn’t seriously counting on it and instead rely on them striking the ground. Once the needles have landed, columns of fire burst from the weapons and blaze angrily upward in little pillars. These mini pillars of fire stand as high as the Kashogan user can control them and only about 3 to 5 inches in diameter. Obviously dodging and jumping over the senbon would be a bad idea if one didn’t want to be cooked alive. If the user sends these flaming senbon out and retreats, the fires will only last as long as the user is in control range.


Name: Heat Seeking River Technique
Rank: A
Element/'s: Fire
Range: 0-50 meters. User must be in control range.
Type: Ninjutsu
Hand seals: Tora, Mi, Ne, Hitsuji
Description: A rather impressive technique of the Akiha, the users will perform the correct seals for this particular Jutsu and slap the ground with Chakra charged hands. The result is a path of fire rolling underground towards the closest heat source of the enemy, the earth barely restraining the explosive force and building heat as it travels towards the unsuspecting victim. Upon contact, the ground will burst with the focused combustion that hopefully kills or at least severely burns the target. Very similar to a mine, only it is heat seeking.


Name: Pillar of Flame Technique
Rank: S
Element/'s: Fire
Range: N/A
Type: Ninjutsu
Hand seals: Tora
Description: User makes the same hand seals as in the burning touch and instead of the skin just getting hot enough to burn their opponent, the user will feed their chakra into the jutsu until their skin is so hot it combusts. Any substance within 6 inches of the user’s skin will burst into flames from the heat and the user can control the flame of their own body to flare out up to 7m if the user it extremely skilled, but generally around 4m. At this temperature the user is able to melt some metals and heat others to be able to bend them and render them useless on contact if desired. This is very dangerous to the user if used too often, if they are tired, or if they are older as the imperviousness of the skin to fire is lessened. For hara this would last for two turns, for katou three, and for hiten about four. Again, this type of fire is not put out by ice, only water.



Name: Blazing Shuriken Dance
Rank: D
Range: M
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Fire
Handsigns:1
Description:User feeds chakra into a series of shuriken and throws it at the enemy. The flame dissipates when the user posts again or the victim puts them out.

Name: Ash Pile Burning
Rank: B
Range: M
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Fire
Handsigns:4
Description: The user spews a stream of chakra infused gun-powder from their mouth, which surrounds the region. As the gunpowder is composed entirely of ash, it stays in the air around the victim like a cloud, which can be used like a smokescreen. After surrounding the enemy with the ash, the user can ignite it with a flint placed on their teeth beforehand to create a spark, resulting in a violent explosion, burning the enemy. However, this technique requires keen senses to read the air currents, the insight to read the movements of the enemy, the tactical experience to not also enfold one's allies in the flames, and careful attention for the timing of the ignition.

Name: Dragon Fire
Rank: C
Range: M
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Fire
Handsigns:4
Description: The user breathes fire along a cord or any other type of long object, which rushes forward in straight line catching the enemy on fire. A line of enemies can be used as the conductor as well. The flames are meant to target, and assault the enemy's upper body just like a projectile weapon.

Name: Great Fireball
Rank: C
Range: S
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Fire
Handsigns:7
Description: A technique where chakra kneaded inside the body is converted into fire, and expelled from the mouth either as a massive orb of roaring flame or as a continuous flame-thrower. The scope of the attack is altered by controlling the volume of chakra that is mustered. The released flames will engulf their target, and leave a crater on the ground's surface.

Name: Phoenix Sage Fire
Rank: C
Range: S
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Fire
Handsigns:6
Description: This technique creates a volley of small fireballs, which are sent flying in an unpredictable manner assaulting the enemy. In addition, the flames are controlled one by one with chakra, so avoiding them all is extremely difficult. Shuriken can also be concealed within the flames, creating an unexpected secondary surprise attack. Like the flames, the shuriken can be controlled with chakra. For the most part, however, this technique is used as a distraction.

Name: Small Fire Stream
Rank: C
Range: S
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Fire
Handsigns:None
Description: User releases a small short ranged stream of flame at the opponent, causing them to become dizzy and then collapse.

Water Ninjutsu
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Name: Gushing Prison
Rank: C
Range: S
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Water
Handsigns:2
Description: Creates a flow of gushing water under the opponent which traps them in a sphere of water. The user can perform an attack while the opponent is trapped. This technique is similar to Water Prison Technique, though the user doesn't need to keep their arm in the sphere of water

Name: Obliterating Water
Rank: C
Range: M
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Water
Handsigns:5
Description: The user gathers a larger amount of water from the air and surrounding environment and forms them into more than a thousand needles. They then direct the needles to a specific target, and leaps back to avoid damage to themselves.

Name: Black Rain
Rank: C
Range: S
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Water
Handsigns:3
Description: This jutsu creates a flammable black mist that forms a small cloud. The user can then move the cloud above their target and disperse it, covering the target in flammable oil. This oil can then be lit at the user’s will.

Name: Water Shark Bullet
Rank: B
Range: M
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Water
Handsigns:10
Description: The user shapes water into the form of a large shark and thrusting their hand forward, sends it hurtling towards the opponent at high-speeds, resulting in a powerful impact. The user can also ride inside the water shark to dramatically increase their swimming speed.

Name: Snake’s Mouth
Rank: C
Range: L
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Water
Handsigns:6
Description: The user generates a spinning column of water which takes the form of a snake with a gaping jaw. This snake can twist and follow its targets and swallow them. After it has swallowed them, it turns into a river that carries the enemy away.

Name: Tearing Torrent
Rank: C
Range: M
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Water
Handsigns:3
Description: This technique draws water from the surrounding area that spirals in the user's hand which fires at a high speed towards the enemy. The overall amount of water formed is large enough to help extinguish even large-scale fire release techniques.

Name: Water Wall
Rank: B
Range: S
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Water
Handsigns:5
Description: This defensive technique creates a wall of water around the user. Enemy attacks are completely intercepted by a fence of water blown out from the mouth, and is raised from below with tremendous might. The water is blown out in the form of a circle around the user, and it makes for a defense without openings. It is also possible for the user to control the amount of water and duration at will. The wall's strength and resistance change following the quantity of chakra poured down into the water, so a skillful shinobi will be able to build a sturdy one. Furthermore, because the field of vision is maintained even while defending one can easily go on to the next move, which is a great advantage. The wall can also be formed from a pre-existing water source.

Lightning Ninjutsu
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Name: Lightning Conduit Sword
Rank: A
Range: L
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Lightning
Handsigns:3
Description: By drawing one or two swords, the user can create lightning strikes. If only one sword is used, the user can point the other sword (must be in hand) at the victim and lightining will shoot from the sword to the victim. If two are used then the user can aim a lightning strike without needing to point at the victim, simply sending arcs of lightning at the opponent.

Name: Static Cannonballs
Element: Lightning
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Handseals:4
Description: The user will summon their chakra into one arm. Outstretching their arm and holding it steady with the other the user will then be able to shoot off Static balls of electricity the size of cannon balls filled with concussive force. These cannon balls are quite powerful and can break apart rock.

Name: Lightning Leopard
Rank: A
Range: M
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Lightning
Handsigns:5
Description: After generating lightning from their body which takes the form of a large cat, the user can manipulate it to affect multiple victims at once by electrocuting them. Like various other Lightning Release techniques, the potency of this ability can be increased through the application of water. from their body which takes the form of a panther, the user can manipulate it to affect multiple victims at once by electrocuting them. Like various other Lightning Release techniques, the potency of this ability can be increased through the application of water. techniques, the potency of this ability can be increased through the application of water.

Name: Lightning Clone
Rank: A
Range: M
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Lightning
Handsigns:5
Description: This technique allows the user to make This technique allows the user to make a shadow clone infused with lightning. Because it is a shadow clone, it is able to perform techniques and interact with the environment due to it having physical substance; and also evenly distributes the user's chakra to each clone. If the clone is injured, it will revert to its natural lightning-state, at the same time electrocuting whatever it is touching

Name: Flashing Serpent
Rank: C
Range: S
Type:Nin
Element:Lightning
Handsigns:4
Description: This attack allows the user to attack the opponent with lightning that spreads from their hands to under the victim. The lightning travels along the ground, resembling a snake.

Name: Spears of Heaven
Rank: B
Range: L
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Lightning
Handsigns:4
Description:The user creates spears of lighting of about an arm’s length and hurls them at the opponent. This attack only allows 4 lightning spears to be made with a single jutsu.

Name: Electromagnetic Murder
Rank: B
Range: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element:Lightning
Handsigns:5
Description: This technique allows the user to create a wave of electricity from their hands. The user can vary its power from a small surge to shock an opponent to a powerful stream of lightning capable of ripping through solid rock. It is ideal to use in conjunction with a water technique.

Kenjutsu
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Name:Flaming Blade
Rank: C - A
Range:S
Type:Kenjutsu
Element:Fire
Handsigns:4
Description: This technique involves the user pushing fire chakra into the blade (katana, kunai, tanto, etc. MUST be an actual blade. No shuriken or senbon.)The blade becomes extremely hot depending on the amount of chakra infused. At low levels this is helpful to cauterize wounds, make navigational markings, and to cause a bit more damage with a blade. At high levels the blade will be engulfed with flames and can produce arcs of fire when it is swung that can be aimed. This flame lasts for 3 posts.


Name: Mirror Blade
Type: Kenjutsu
Rank: B
Range:M
Element:N/A
Description:This skill allows the user to wield two blades with concentration on only one. The reason is that the dominant arm is exactly mirrored by the other arm. The movements are the exact same without the user having to focus on both. This is very advantageous if one arm is numb or injured. However, using an injured arm is pretty dangerous as it can further damage the arm. Use of this technique in such a situation is up to the discretion of the user.


Name: Cloud Style Flame Beheading
Rank: A
Range: M
Type:Kenjutsu
Element: Fire
Handsigns:1
Description: The user first imbues their blade with fire, before slashing in the direction of the desired enemy, resulting in the creation of large arcs of intense flame that follow the trajectory of the previous swing. A skilled user of this technique is capable of surrounding their immediate area with a circular wall of flames, incinerating multiple targets even if they approach from numerous angles simultaneously.

Name: Dance of the Crescent Moon
Rank: A
Range: S
Type:Kenjutsu
Element:N/A
Handsigns:None
Description: The user creates three shadow clones, and each one of them assaults the enemy from a blind spot. The attack occurs on three fronts simultaneously, so it's almost impossible to catch them flat-footed. Furthermore, the mighty attacks are so severe that receiving a blow even from one among the three will inevitably result in a fatal wound. In addition, because of the magnificence this ninjutsu projects as they jump at the opponent's upper body in an orbital pattern, the elegance of which is reminiscent of the shape of a crescent moon.
Name: Flying Sparrow
Rank: C
Range: S
Type:Kenjutsu
Element:N/A
Handsigns:None
Description: User channels enormous amounts of chakra into their chakra conducting weapon and repeatedly strikes the opponent. With the finishing blow they make a great big slash. Then, the opponent falls, and out of nowhere another blinding slash comes.

Genjutsu
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Name: llusion Binding Technique
Rank: B
Range: M
Type:Genjutsu
Element:N/A
Handsigns:None
Description: the user binds the opponent in a genjutsu, rendering them incapable of movement. This genjutsu can be used on more than one person at a time. Once the target is bound, either the user or an ally can attack the victim at will. This lasts about 1 post. I don’t want to be a punk.

Name: Dusk Crow
Rank: C
Range: S
Type:Genjutsu
Element:N/A
Handsigns:None. Must point, though
Description: When activated this genjutsu traps a victim in an illusion with no eye contact, The genjutsu traps the victim in a torrent of violent crows attacking them, leaving the victim at the user's mercy.

Name: Demonic Illusion: Tree Binding Technique
Rank: B
Range: S
Type:Genjutsu
Element:N/A
Handsigns:5
Description: The user first disappears from plain sight in a mist-like fashion in order to approach the target without being detected. Once close enough, the target will then be completely robbed of their mobility as they see the mirage of a fast-growing tree coiling itself around them. Given that the subject remains conscious, this technique proves extremely efficient for information-gathering. Once the target is immobile, the user can then attack the enemy, usually after emerging from the trunk of the tree.

Name: Demonic Illusion: Hell Viewing Technique
Rank: D
Range: S
Type:Genjutsu
Element:N/A
Handsigns:2
Description: This is a genjutsu that reveals the fears that dwell inside people's hearts. Everyone has an image of the one thing they wouldn't want to ever see. This genjutsu is a technique that draws forth such an image from within the heart and has one mistake it for reality. First, an imaginary circle of leaves will spin around and envelop the target, falling away shortly after. After a short period, the illusion will begin. This is to make the illusion more convincing, since the user will likely have moved before the illusion sets in. If the mental image is a gruesome one, the shock will be accordingly great.

Name: Mental Barricades
Rank: C
Range: S
Type:Genjutsu
Element:N/A
Handsigns:None
Description: The user can use this technique to place mental blocks in the target's mind that contains valuable information in case the one with the information is captured and interrogated. The barricades look like stylized traditional Japanese sliding doors. It is very effective against truth serums

Name: Time Reversal Technique
Rank: D
Range: S
Type:Genjutsu
Element:N/A
Handsigns:5
Description: This technique puts the target in a state of reverse hypnosis, allowing them to remember details that they otherwise would not. The target will comply with interrogation, but seems to retain his or her personality while under hypnosis.

Name: Crushing Snake Constriction
Rank: C
Range: M
Type:Genjutsu
Element:N/A
Handsigns:3
Description: User puts the opponent into a genjutsu which has snakes appear beneath the opponent to constrict them and with the user’s command, they crush the opponent.

Name: Bringer of Darkness
Rank: A
Range: M
Type:Genjutsu
Element:N/A
Handsigns:1
Description: This technique exerts an hallucinatory effect upon the eyesight, effectively blinding the opponent. No matter how skilled an opponent may be, they are forced to wait helpless in this world of darkness, as this technique allows the user to attack unseen. Although it negates sight, it does not stop the other senses.

Name: Sly Mind Affect
Rank: C
Range: L
Type:Genjutsu
Element:N/A
Handsigns:None
Description: This technique allows the user to change the enemies sense of direction as they see fit. When this technique was evoked, the enemy was forced to walk around continuously in circles by making it seem as if they're walking straight to their desired destination.

Name: Soulbane
Rank: A
Range: S
Type:Genjutsu
Element:N/A
Handsigns:3
Description: It targets the mind and causes the target to believe that anyone is a foe. While under the effects of the genjutsu, anyone affected will attack those who they believe to be enemies, even their closest friends. They will act completely coherent, however, almost as if it is of their own volition, but they will not listen to reason. Once defeated, they return to normal with no memory of the events.

Name: Projection Technique (Tyrant’s Calling)
Rank: B
Range: All
Type:Genjutsu
Element:N/A
Handsigns:None
Description: This technique enables the user to project an image of themselves in the sky in order to send a message. Obviously this would not be used except in cases of emergency.

Name: Flash Illusion
Rank: A
Range: M
Type:Genjutsu
Element:Lightning
Handsigns:4
Description: This genjutsu blinds the enemy with an extremely bright light that appears to emanate from the user's body. A secondary genjutsu can then be used within this genjutsu.

Name: Blazing Petal Escape
Rank: C
Range: S
Type: Genjutsu
Element:N/A
Handsigns:5
Description: When trapped inside of a genjutsu or wishing to appear trapped, Kurenai uses this technique to dissolve her body into many flower petals which then consume her enemy's body and burst into flame. Flame lasts for about 5 seconds unless it catches opponent’s clothing on fire.

Name: Temple of Nirvana
Rank: A
Range: L
Type: Genjutsu
Element:N/A
Handsigns:1
Description: A powerful genjutsu that generates a fluttering rain of sleep-inducing, illusory white feathers. Whomever sees them as they fall, piling up and covering the whole target area will experience Eden-like bliss and fall into a state of tranquil slumber. No matter how much one resists the hypnotic spell, the desire to sleep is instinctive, and there's no fighting it. However, an experienced shinobi will be able to dispel the genjutsu before it takes effect.


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Post by Kaira on Mon Aug 06, 2012 7:51 pm

YOu have your water jutsu as well in your fire jutsu remove the ones that are twice

Name: Fire: Enhancer Technique
Rank: D
Element/'s: Fire
Range: N/A
Type: Ninjutsu
Hand seals: Tora, Usagi, tatsu, uma
Description: Performed right before a jutsu, this increases the strength of the next katon based jutsu. Most users are able to increase the strength of the next jutsu by about a rank (D to C, C to D, etc.), Jounin and ANBU are able to push their lower rank jutsu up two ranks depending on how much chakra they expend on this (D-B usually, C-A if they pour chakra into it, and A-S if they go all out). For use with already high ranked jutsu (B+) the chakra needed to increase the rank of the already powerful jutsu is quite a bit and expending this amount is dangerous, therefore is used as out of desperation. Most S rank shinobi don't really need this because they have more powerful attacks at their disposal but can use it to boost an attack and the same rules would apply as to Jounin or ANBU. This must be performed right before the jutsu the user wants to increase. While this may be used by anyone with fire affinity, it works best with the Akiha clan because it takes heat from the body and if there is not enough chakra to keep the body sufficiently heated until it heats up again naturally, or if the user is unable to manipulate their chakra this way, it can become dangerous if used too often or in the wrong circumstance. Only works on fire jutsu, whether clan related or not.

For rank of jutsu put D-S


Name: Lightning Armor
Rank: A
Range: S
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Lightning
Handsigns:4
Description: The user wraps their body in a layer of lightning chakra that, instead of being used offensively, is used to electrically stimulate the user's nervous system. The technique speeds up neural synapses to react faster to danger and to push physical prowess to the absolute limit, allowing for tremendous raw speed. When under the influence of this technique, it is difficult for Genjutsu user’s to keep up with the Lightning Armor user so as to cast a genjutsu.

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Name: Lightning Clone
Rank: B
Range: M
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Lightning
Handsigns:5
Description: This technique allows the user to make This technique allows the user to make a shadow clone infused with lightning. Because it is a shadow clone, it is able to perform techniques and interact with the environment due to it having physical substance; and also evenly distributes the user's chakra to each clone. If the clone is injured, it will revert to its natural lightning-state, at the same time electrocuting whatever it is touching


A rank

Name: Ephemeral Technique
Rank: C
Range: S
Type:Genjutsu
Element:N/A
Handsigns:None. Must point, though
Description: When activated crows flock from the user’s body and turned into shuriken that bombard the victim, and then attempt to put them to sleep. If they resisted the sleep command, they then experience the sensation and illusion of their body parts turning into their closest friends who then tortured them psychologically.

remove this

Name: Flower Petal Escape
Rank: C
Range: S
Type: Genjutsu
Element:N/A
Handsigns:5
Description: When trapped inside of a genjutsu or wishing to appear trapped, Kurenai uses this technique to dissolve her body into many flower petals which then consume her enemy's body.


remove canon name

Name: Crushing Snake Constriction
Rank: C
Range: M
Type:Genjutsu
Element:N/A
Handsigns:None
Description: User puts the opponent into a genjutsu which has snakes appear beneath the opponent to constrict them and with the user’s command, they crush the opponent.

need the way you activate or put the enemy into the genjutsu

Name: Lightning Illusion
Rank: C
Range: M
Type:Genjutsu
Element:Lightning
Handsigns:4
Description: This genjutsu blinds the enemy with an extremely bright light that appears to emanate from the user's body. A secondary genjutsu can then be used within this genjutsu.

this is a canon technqiue http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Lightning_Illusion_Flash_of_Lightning_Pillar

and it is A rank change the name of the jutsu and its rank.










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Post by The Akiha on Mon Aug 06, 2012 9:24 pm

Fixed.


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Post by Kaira on Mon Aug 06, 2012 9:29 pm

Name: Lightning Mask
Rank:B
Range:S
Type:Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Handsigns: 4
Description: User creates a mask of lightning over one or two (2 max) limbs and attacks with these limbs. The lightning mask only goes up to the elbow or the knee, not past. Mask does encompass the hands or feet. It can only be done on the user, they cannot put this mask on anyone else. This lasts for 2 posts only.


Name: Lightning Strike
Rank: B
Range: S
Type:Ninjutsu
Element:Lightning
Handsigns:4
Description: The user covers themselves with electricity and attacks their opponent while the body is charged. A very simple, but effective technique that lasts only about 2 posts before dissipating.

these are nintaijutsu you dont have taijutsu as a spec so remove them

Reason: you have element with you attack them with it with Limbs and attack while in a charge state


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Post by The Akiha on Mon Aug 06, 2012 10:28 pm

Fixed!


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Post by Makina Hoshimura on Mon Aug 06, 2012 10:52 pm

Name: Flying Sparrow
Rank: C
Range: S
Type:Kenjutsu
Element:N/A
Handsigns:None
Description: User channels enormous amounts of chakra into their chakra conducting weapon and repeatedly strikes the opponent. With the finishing blow they make a great big slash. Then, the opponent falls, and out of nowhere another blinding slash comes, killing the enemy.

All i say with this one just edit it for it dont seem like its a instant kill jutsu<3 then your good to go sweetheart


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Post by Makina Hoshimura on Mon Aug 06, 2012 11:23 pm

I Suppose That Will Do Sooooo

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Post by Hakai Hozuki on Wed Aug 08, 2012 7:45 am

Name: Beta HAWTNESS sword seal
Rank: S
Appearance: none
Description: Beta Hawtness is a very rare and one of a kind sword seal. It was created by a master sword smith and katon (Fire) user. He spent much of his life finding the perfect combination of metal and chakra. In the end he died a successful man, fusing his elemental powers into the blades of Akiha. The blades itself is elegant and swift to pass judgement, with its razor sharp fury. The blade is razor sharp and can slice a human in half with ease, made from the finest steel. But that is not what makes this blade so special, for it is the seals that were imbedded into the blade itself upon its forager. The element of fire, there are the beginning of all metal weapons birth, stayed with this blades. For this blade is forever heated by fire chakra, hot to the touch the blade is a hot as fire. It can cause second degree burn just by touching the blade, and third degree burns if contact with the blade is constant. (1 post) The sword can also act as an fuse for flammable items. Such as oil or dried leaves, if the blade comes in contact with these items it will ignite them. It can start fires with kindling and smolder into leaving trees. The blade is truly fearsome in the hands of someone who loves fire. This seal has turned her two standard swords in to super heated blades of death.
Origin: Creation in description, this blade seal came into the possession of Akiha after she , feel down a flight of stairs. She was unconscious and found by the sword maker. The sword maker made her blades far more powerful out of pity. For he thought this girl was a bumbling oaf.
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