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Post by Takeshi on Tue Jul 31, 2012 5:42 am


Name: Beelzebub Jigoku
Nickname/Alias: Reincarnation of the Demon
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Lookes:

Beelzebub was born with yellow and spiky hair. This was a trait he inherited from his parents; the yellow hair from his mother, and the spiky hair from his father. This trait would make him look like a rebel if he weren’t from his royal family. This yellow, spiky hair of his leans towards the right, which usually covers his hair. Beelzebub’s skin is rather pale, making him different from the other Suna members. This is because he spends a lot of time indoors training and studying. His skin is also rather smooth; he has no pimples, unlike all his other friends who are going through the dreaded process of adolescence. He has neither facial nor body hair. Not only is BL shorter than his peers, his body size is also smaller. He is rather thin and about few inches shorter than his peers.

Personality: Being a son of a very wealthy family, Beelzebub acts in an aristocratic manner — he always seems serene and apathetic towards other people, even while actually deeply conflicted. He is also notably calm, even in battle. He generally acts indifferent, bordering on arrogance, to most situations that he is faced with as shown from how he rarely views his opponent as being worth his time. Beezebub is easily offended if his name is not used properly. Beelzebub is a person who calls everyone by their full name. Beezebub is very perceptive and is fully aware of the limits of his abilities and usually anything he states in comparison to an opponent is justified. However, when he was younger, he was quick to anger and very hot-headed.

Beelzebub is a very quiet person. He would not speak unless prompted. He would love keeping everything to himself, since he wouldn't want to reveal himself too much to anyone, due to his great distrust. BL hates playing or underestimating people when he fights them. Instead, he overestimates them so that he'll never be caught off guard. BL has a strong sense of justice. He knows that no matter what happens, evil will still continue to exist. Therefore, he is patient, waiting for the day where he'll destroy evil with his own hands, and place his own justice over the whole ninja world.
Likes & Dislikes:

Likes:
Being a person who loves peace and serenity, BL loves night walks. This is because during the night, there would be only silence. This would permit BL to think without any obstruction or distractions. This would also allow him to release all his emotional, physical, and mental stress he receives throughout the day.
Well, like every normal person, BL has a favorite food, and his favorite food is ramen. The taste of the soup, the fragrance of the soup; it makes him feel as if it was from heaven. He developed this craving for ramen due to his mum, who only knows how to cook ramen. Ramen reminds him of his wonderful and caring mother.
Just like everyone else, BL loves to succeed in whatever he does. This should be obvious, since no one likes to fail, but BL enjoys succeeding more than any other average person. He will use any means necessary to accomplish his goals, though he doesn’t cross the line and kill his comrades.
BL also loves drinking tea. Some of his favorite teas are green tea, iced peach tea and iced lemon tea. But he likes green tea most. Drinking tea reminds him of the time where his parents and him would gather in the gazebo and drink tea together every morning. Every sip of tea reminds him of this happiness, and the non perishable tie between him and his parents.
BL likes testing his knowledge and IQ. He loves playing mind-testing games, such as chinese chess, sudoku, and reversi, just to name a few. These games help BL train his thinking abilities. It would help sharpen his ability to plan strategies.

Dislikes:
One thing Beelzebub despises are people who brag and throw empty threats. Although Beelzebub overestimate everyone, those who boasts are like ants who think they can survive even after being thrown into fire. This people are those who think they can do everything. To some extend, those who thinks too highly of themselves would end up becoming dictators or rebels who would want to take the world for themselves.
Being a person with a strong sense of justice, BL compares people from break the rules to scum. BL thinks that his purpose on earth is to get rid of people who dares to break rules. These type of people are those who cause chaos.
Since everyone has a favorite drink, likewise, everyone should have a drink they despise. BL hates coffee. BL would describe the appearance of coffee as “black beans that creates murky and disgusting liquid”. He would then continue and describe the taste of coffee as “horrible, revolting, and bitter piss.”
Motivations: One motivation BL has is to create a utopia; a world with no chaos nor pain. After feeling the death of his mum, he decided he didn't want such pain to happen to anyone. Therefore, this motivation drives his will to train to be the very best. He would want to bring judgement to all evil. He wants to get rid of all the evil people, since all those people only bring suffering pain and sadness to the world.
Another motivation BL has is to bring glory to both his family and country, Suna. His family has been glorifying and helping Suna since long ago, and BL doesn’t want to be the one who breaks this tradition. BL will give his life for Suna like all his family and clan members have done. Through this act, he would glorify his family’s name, so that his descendants would look up to him as a role model.

Catch Phrase: "Die Twice!"




Clan Name: Jigoku
-Bloodline Description: The Jigoku clan possesses a unique power bestowed upon only a few members. They are given an eye power. This eye power was originally not part of the clan until one member went to another realm. From then on this Kekkei Genkai of sorts has been hereditary but also very rare. This power isn't like other eye powers as it can not be taken by medical jutsu. If this eye leaves the body of the possessor then the eye turns black and becomes unusable by anyone. Along with chakra this clan has the power of the nether realm running through their body as well. Those of this clan are able to use this power only if they possess the Jigokugan.
Village: Konohagakure
Clan Symbol: Check the clan
Clan Traits: Check the clan
Secret Clan Jutsu: Check the clan
History: Check the clan




Village: Suna
Title Rank: Sannin
Skill Rank: S




Skill Specialty:
Main: Ninjutsu
Sub: Genjutsu
Tertiary: Kenjutsu

Elemental Affinity:
Main: Fire
Sub: Lightning
Tertiary: Wind

Special Characteristics:



Name: Tattoo Bending
Rank: Average
Description: BL has this special ability called "Tattoo Bending". He had it ever since he was born. He can make tattoos anywhere on his body and of whatever design. He can also create tattoos on his eyes. This tattoos do not do anything, other than design or to make others afraid.(Like making tons of dragon tattoo on his body making him look like a Yakuza. Bet people'll be afraid.)

Name: Pokerface
Rank: Average
Description: No matter what happens, from a funny joke to the death of a close friend/family member, BL still has his pokerface on. He has a pokerface that will not falter.

Name: Flash
Rank: Elite
Description: This ability gives BL a 30% speed boost for all his movements(body movements, weapon slicing movements, etc.). He had weights attached on his body ever since he was young. Every time his body is used to it, he'll place more weights on his body.

Name: One handed Menice
Rank: Elite
Description: BL is able to use one handed seals for his jutsu that he preforms.


Drawback:
Name: Always tired
Rank: Elite
Description: BL was always too lazy so he developed to have less stamina than others of his rank - 30 percent


Name: Weak Physics
Rank: Elite
Description: BL's physical attacks are reduced by 30%. Ever since he was young, BL never trained in physical attacks, such as punches and kicks. This made his physical attacks weak. Furthermore, due to the weights he placed on himself, it drastically lowered it. He has been focusing so much in speed that his training for physical attacks are neglected.

Name: Lower chakra Pool
Rank: Super
Description: Has 15% less chakra.

Name: Arachnophobia
Rank: Elite
Description: When BL sees a spider, he'll freeze for 3 turns. To break free from this spell, another person must cause damage on him, like a slap, or even a stab.






Name: Sword of the Thunder God
Amount: 1
Appearance:
Rank: S
Special Abilities: The blade glowed bright yellow and was apparently infused with pure electrical energy, hence its name. The blade was unusual in that, though it appeared to retract into or emanated from the hilt or crossguard like a lightsaber (and producing the same sound), it was apparently solid and subject to stressing and being shattered when sufficient force was applied.

In order for The sword of the lightning God to break it has to take two full hits on the same spot made by an A-rank or higher jutsu that can cause a powerful impact on a small surface.

When the blade made contact with the enemy, it would give them a strong electrical shock. The sword was capable of producing electrical rings energy that can hold the enemy in mid-air while shocking them. The wielder of the blade can use this to throw the enemy a good distance away.

It costs a D rank to activate the lightsaber. In order to grab an opponent with electrical rings and shock you them you must pay an amount of chakra based on their rank; D = E, C = D, B = C, A = B, S = A. If the user wants to hold the target for another post, they must pay the same amount of chakra again.
Origin: This weapon has an unknown origin. It was a gift from his father to him. His father told him that this sword was given to him by a legendary swordsman.

50x Shurikens
50x Kunai
50x Ninja Wire
50x Explosive Tags
50x Makibishi
50x Smoke Bomb
50x Flash Bomb



Name: Kuchiyose no Jutsu (Summoning Jutsu)
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Element: N/A
Range: Where palm hits ground
Description: A jutsu that allows the user to summon objects, but more commonly, animals and summons to his location to fight with him or for a variety of other uses. The user must first sign a summoning contract with an animal that they wish to summon, and can only have one summoning contract at a time.

Name: Bunshin No Jutsu
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: E
Element: None
Type: Ninjutsu
Range:
Description: Hand Seals; Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. The Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja without substance and thus this clone can do absolutely no damage at all in any way. The copy resembles the ninja in every way. This clone can function as a distraction or as means to confuse one's opponent. As soon the Bunshin gets attacked or comes into contact with an opponent, it will disperse. The number of clones able to be produced is determined by the user's rank as follows. D Rank; 2 Clones. C Rank; 3 Clones. B Rank; 4 Clones. A Rank; 5 Clones. S/SS Rank; 6 Clones. 4 round cool down.

Name: Henge no Jutsu
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: E
Element: None
Type: Ninjutsu
Range:
Description: Hand Seals; Henge no Jutsu is a ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents. However, while transformed only the user's shape and appearance changes. Meaning that if say the host turns themselves into a sword they won't be able to cut anything unless their body could do so naturally. This technique lasts for 4 posts with a cool down of 2.


Name: False Chakra Field
Rank: E
Element: n/a
Type: Genjutsu
Range: n/a
Description: No hand seals. The user is able to create an aura of chakra around them which has a chosen elemental "theme" which is decided upon the start of the use. This theme is simple enough, the fire theme is fire burning off the user's skin, waater is a flowing splash around the user, earth has stones flying around them, wind picks up leaves or other things from the area and has it fly around the user and lightning is shown by sparks flying off of them in a large field. Though these auras seem real they are a simple illusion used for intimidation purposes as well as to fool someone into thinking that the user specializes in an elements they might not have. Lasts for 4 posts.

Name: Walking Dead
Rank: E
Element: n/a
Type: Genjutsu
Range: n/a
Description: No hand seals. The user's body takes on a very dead appearance with rotting skin and feverish wounds that are possibly still bleeding and/or spilling entrails. Exact descriptions are different from user to user but in the end they look like zombies.



Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu No Jutsu
Rank: E
Range: 50 feet
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: /
Handsigns: N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themself with another nearby object, this object must be something like a log or stone roughly the same size as the user. The size doesn't have to be exactly the same as the user but what this means is a person can't replace themselves with a leaf or a twig, nor could they replace themselves with a giant boulder, if questions arise over uses of this technique contact an admin but any decision they make is final. In addition this can not be another person unless that person is willing. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack. These objects or other people must be within 50 feet of the user when the technique is performed.

Name: Hell Fire
Rank: S
Range: Long Diameter
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire
Handsigns: /Yes
Description: This technique is a very advanced technique. After charging for one post, the user sends a big fire that surrounds a big diameter of the place around him. This fire would cover the whole area, the only place not affected by this is a 5 meter round diameter around the user. This fire can cause 3rd degree burns. It might even burn the opponent to death.


Name: Genjutsu Kai
Rank: E-S
Range: /
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: /
Handsigns: /
Description: The ability to break from a genjutsu. The user must stop the flow of chakra in their body, and then apply an even stronger power to disrupt the flow of the caster's chakra. This can also be done by an unaffected ninja by applying a sudden surge of chakra into the affected person. When the user breaks out of a genjutsu, the amount of chakra used will match the rank of which the genjutsu is.

Name: Body Flicker
Rank: C
Range: Short-Long
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: /
Handsigns: Yes
Description: This jutsu is a high-speed movement technique, allowing a ninja to move short to long distances at an almost untraceable speed. It is accomplished by using chakra to temporarily vitalise the body and move at extreme speeds. The amount of chakra required depends on the overall distance and elevation between the user and the intended destination.

Name: Demonic Illusion : Hell Viewing technique
Rank: D
Range: Eye-contact
Type: Genjutsu
Element: /
Handsigns: /
Description: This illusion best works in surprise attacks. The target will first see something swirling around them common to the area, leaves, loose snow, sand. On their next post, they will begin to see and hear something that they would never want to see, the death of a loved one, old people making love, it ranges. It shows them their worst fears. Can be broken by kai, pain, etc. Pain in the genjutsu does not break it (given their worst fear is something like fire).

Name: Mist Servant Technique
Rank: D
Range: Eye-contact
Type: Genjutsu
Element: /
Handsigns: Requires Handseals
Description: This genjutsu starts after the opponent hears the clap after the handseals. The user can creates clones of themselves much like bunshin no jutsu. However, when hit by an attack, rather then puffing away, they act as if they were made of a blackish oil-like liquid, repairing themselves even if fully destroyed. They are able to imitate attacks, though they are only illusions and can’t actually affect their surroundings, and are often used to hide projectiles of the user amongst their own. The user can create far more clones with this then using bunshin no jutsu, able to create over a dozen clones at once even as an Academy Student, and the average Chuunin can create hundreds at once, filling up an entire battlefield with them.

Name: Kage Bunshin
Rank: B
Range: /
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: /
Handsigns: Required
Description: The normal Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja that lacks any substance. The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. This makes Kage Bunshin an excellent training method if the ninja has the chakra capacity and stamina to maintain the Kage Bunshins for an extended period of time. This allows the ninja to essentially reduce the time it takes to train and learn with each clone added. A genin can have 1 clone, a chuunin can have 2 clone, and so on.

Name: Lightning Clone
Rank: A
Range: /
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Handsigns: Required
Description: Similar to the original Kage Bunshin, this jutsu creates a copy of the ninja. This variation has all the ability of a normal kage bunshin. This jutsu is easier to perform, since it uses lightning as a medium. This clone can utilize any lightning jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone is destroyed, it will shock the opponent and cause a one-post long paralysis.

Name: White Sabre Technique
Rank: A
Range: /
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: /
Handsigns: /
Description: Through the use of chakra flow, the user channels their chakra through their swords, extending both the reach and cutting ability of the blade to twice their normal level, while allowing the user to fire crescents of chakra whenever the blade is swung. These released chakra crescents are five feet long and are capable of great destruction, as shown from how these projectiles completely penetrated a considerable stone pillar, before continuing to damage the immediate surroundings.

Users can also use the ability to use shape transformation during the implementation of this technique, sculpting their respective chakra blades into various rudimentary weapons that extend beyond the natural dimensions of their original swords; such as broadswords, spiked shafts and even axes. This capability allows them to rely on smaller swords while retaining greater reach, damage and the possibility of conducting surprise attacks as necessary.

This transformational quality also appears to extend to even the crescents of chakra launched from the blade, forming a diverse range of projectiles that includes giant buzzsaws and shafts of chakra, the shape of which are seemingly dependent on the structure of the previously formed weapon. The chakra coating lasts five rounds with a five round cool.

Name: Lightning Beasts Running Technique
Rank: A
Range: Long
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Handsigns: Yes
Description: The user creates a hound composed of lightning chakra standing four feet tall at the shoulder. This beast is connected to a leash also made of lightning chakra held in the user's hand that allows them to control it but prevents the user from doing hand seals for the duration of the technique. The hound is able to run around at the user's command for the length of it's leash (50 feet) at a max speed of 30 mph, when it hits something it can either explode and cause second degree electrical burns to everything within five feet of it, or try to maul them with it's claws and fangs which paralyze for a round on contact and can cut through iron. The maximum number of rounds this hound can remain is three, after that it automatically explodes and then dissipates.

Name: Slow reaction
Rank: D
Range: Eye contact
Type: Genjutsu
Element: /
Handsigns: N/A
Description: After having eye-contact with the target, the illusion begins. This illusion gives the opponent a lag time in all senses. Therefore, the user might already punched the opponent and run away, but the opponent would think that the user is still running to him. This lasts for 4 posts.

Name: Electric-Blast of the swordsmen
Rank: C
Range: Blade’s Length
Type: Ninjutsu/ Kenjutsu
Element: Lightning
Handsigns: /
Description: The user channels some of his lightning chakra into his sword, allowing it to be endowed with a slight bit of electricity, before slamming it into an opponent and giving them an electric shock as well as a cut wound. The cut wound acts like a normal wound, and the electricity causes the affected limb to go into spasms for one post per hit.

Name: Hydra Clone
Rank: B
Range: Short
Type: Genjutsu
Element: /
Handsigns: /
Description: The genjutsu is created by looking in the victim's eyes. This genjutsu is extremely similar to Shadow Clones, but at the beginning only creates two other ones. When a Hydra clone is "destroyed" two more pop up in it's place. This is only usable as a distraction or to wear the enemy out as it is only a mental trick, and in reality there's only one physical one that can cause damage(The real person). The sight, smell, touch and hearing is altered in this. However, the taste isn't so if the victim bites a clone, they taste nought but air. Damages caused by these clones will not have any marks, although the victim will still feel the pain. This lasts for 6 posts.

Name: Air Bullets
Rank: B
Range: Medium
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wind
Handsigns: Yes
Description: This Jutsu creates large bullets of condensed wind around the user, 4 in
total,around the body in a circular form. These bullets of condensed wind are 4 inch spheres in diameter. These bullets,when fired,fly as fast as an arrow,at 70 m/s. These bullets can be moved anywhere within the circle the bullets are created. Once it fires however it goes straight until it reaches its limit or is blocked by something that could actually stop its movement. When hitting an
opponent it can cause severe cuts upon the location of impact. This technique creates four bullets of
condensed wind form,on the circle of creation. (These bullets can be fired at any direction the user pleases,once fired however it will continue straight)
* The circle of creation is a circle where the 4 bullets form. This circle is from above the user's head by 3 inches to waist level.

Name: Vacuum Blade
Rank: B
Range: Casted on weapon
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: Wind
Handsigns: /
Description: The user exhales wind-infused chakra onto a weapon in order to increase its sharpness, range and lethality. For example, the user can infuse a kunai to resemble a makeshift scimitar or infuse shuriken to increase their range and cutting power by a maximum of 200%. Lasts for 3 posts

Name: Vacuum Sphere
Rank: A
Range: Medium
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wind
Handsigns: Yes
Description: The user takes a deep breath and then exhales several small blasts of wind chakra in such a manner that they are dispersed over an expansive range, enough to make it difficult to avoid them entirely without taking any damage. Due to the properties of this technique, the expelled blasts are capable of piercing into and potentially through an opponent's flesh when they collide, in a similar manner to how bullets function. The closer the enemy to the user, the higher the chance of full penetration; with someone within 15 feet being the most susceptible to this effect. Baring a strong enough body armor, a hit could prove fatal if taken near (Within 2 inches) of a vital organ or major artery.

Name: Temporary Paralysis
Rank: D
Range: Medium
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: /
Handsigns: Yes
Description: A technique that physically restrains an opponent, as if the opponent had been tied in invisible steel ropes. It debilitates the victim for a short period of time, which allows the user to either strike again, or take the target into custody. This is a D-rank ninjutsu where the intensity will vary greatly according to the user's level of skill. This jutsu will only work on people who are your rank or lower. If used on someone of your rank, there is only a 50% chance of the jutsu succeding. The technique can also be cast on every target at once, depending on the user's skill, and won't fail a shinobi during his missions. This jutsu lasts for 3 posts.

Name: Dragon Breath
Rank: C
Range: Medium
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Katon
Handsigns: Yes
Description: As the user opens his mouth and wherever he breaths, a horrible stench is overcoming that area. This breath can kill plants from it's heat and disturbing smell. When breathed on a regular person, the jutsu can burn clothes, blister skin and give first degree burns, and clog nostrils. If blown in their eyes, this jutsu can make their vision blurry and maybe even reduce their eyesight capabilities for 2 posts. It can also heat up metal, and, if breathed on long enough, render someone from being able to hold onto it any longer. The only thing that stops it's terror is Katon-resistant clothes. If hit against another Katon jutsu, the attacks will resist each other, and will not backfire or anything. Lasts for 4 posts. Cool down 5 posts.

Name: Phoenix Fire
Rank: C
Range: Medium
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Katon
Handsigns: Yes
Description: The ninja does the necessary hand seals and then emits a series of small fire balls about as big as soft balls. The ninja can also hurl a projectile which is covered in these same flames. To the opponent the attack appears to be only the balls of flame, they do not see the hidden threat within the flames. Meaning that even if the flames are put out, the projectiles still converge on the target. The flames can be used to cover different projectiles like shuriken or kunai. There can be a maximum of 10 fireballs, and each one causes second-degree burns. Cool down four posts.

Name: Great Shadow Clone explosion
Rank: A
Range: Where Bunshin is
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire
Handsigns: Yes
Description: This jutsu allows the user to detonate his/her clones. The size of the explosion is considerably large, sixteen feet.

Name: Chidori
Rank: A
Range: Short
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Handsigns: Yes
Description: This technique channels a large amount of lightning chakra to the user's hand. The amount of chakra is so great that it becomes visible. The high concentration of electricity produces a sound reminiscent of many birds chirping, hence the name. Once the technique is completed, the user charges forward and thrusts the Chidori into the target. This produces heavy amounts of damage that is usually fatal. This technique is classified as an assassination technique because of the speed at which it is performed, despite the loud noise it produces. This technique has a major drawback, however. The speed at which the attack must be done, combined with the fact that the user must run in a straight line, causes a tunnel vision-like effect for the user. When the technique is activated the user has two chances to hit their opponent, one in the post it is activated and one the round directly after, however if you miss the first time and have to use your second shot the power is considerably lower. If you land a hit the first time the Chidori dissipates and the second shot is unusable.

First Strike
After the activation of the technique the user charges forward and thrusts the technique into their opponent, the slicing power of the Chidori is enough to cut trough any material with ease. When the technique hits the opponent the shock is enough to light up their insides with third degrees burns, rupturing organs and frying muscle and nerve tissue. This level of damage will normally kill someone within one to two posts. Due to the power level of the first strike the user is able to, and normally will, send their hand straight through their opponent's body to leave the lightning behind in the "sealed abdomen". When this happens the user is required to remove their hand from the opponent's body in their following post.

Second Strike
Exactly like the first strike the user charges towards their intended target and thrusts their hand into the target. The second strike is made possible however by using the energy that would have caused the condensed lightning storm inside to rupture organs and burn the insides, thus this effect can not be achieved on the second chance. In addition due to the losing of power the user is unable to send their hand all the way through an opponent, they are only able to make an attack deep enough to go halfway through the chest cavity. In addition since the mini storm isn't there only the reduced version of the cutting power is left, so the insides can't be lit up. This results in only the area actually hot by the hand being damaged.

Name: Lightning Cutter
Rank: S
Range: Short
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Handsigns: Yes
Description: The Lightning Cutter is an enhanced and concentrated form of the Chidori with the same effects and drawbacks. Because the Chidori is already powerful on its own, the Lightning Cutter requires better chakra control, which is exemplified in its appearance. The Chidori appears as simply a mass of white electrical chakra in the user's hand, while the Lightning Cutter is more focused and blue.

Name: Chidori Senbon
Rank: A
Range: Short to Mid
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Handsigns: Yes
Description: This is one of many variations of the Chidori that uses shape transformation. It is specialised in more speed, by being transformed into countless sharp senbon, all aimed at the enemy. By increasing the amount of chakra used, the number of senbon also increases. It can become even more effective by using it together with the Sharingan, allowing the user to precisely shoot for the enemy's vital points. These senbons can pierce about 2 cm deep into the skin. They can also cause numbness for 2 post.

Name: Chidori Sharp Spear
Rank: A
Range: Short to Middle
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Handsigns: Yes
Description: The original Chidori gained its power by shaping it into a form sufficient for an electrical discharge and using it together with the user's own "thrust". This technique uses Shape Transformation to form the original Chidori into a spear or blade-shape, adapting it for mid-range attacks with a maximum range of about five metres.[2] Although it's less powerful than the Chidori, its increased range means there is less of a risk to the user. It also has the advantage of being able to be used for surprise attacks and capturing.
When the enemy's body is pierced, the user can alter the spear's shape into multiple additional blades, increasing the number of wounds. The blade can also be swung in order to cut things as well as cause fatal injuries.


Name: Memory Lurker
Rank: B
Range: Eye-Contact
Type: Genjutsu
Element: /
Handsigns: N/A
Description: This genjutsu allows the user to view the target’s memory. As he lurks in the target’s memory, both him and the target can view this memory. The caster can also alter the memory, although not in a big scale. Lasts for 3 posts.

Name: Demonic Illusion : Paper Body
Rank: C
Range: [Short (5 meters), Medium (5 - 10 meters), Long (10+ meters).]
Type: Genjutsu
Element: Fire
Handsigns: /
Description: The illusion traps the victim in a dark empty space where their body is made of paper that burns from toe to head while the user is watching. The technique will make it harder for the target to move properly. This lasts for 3 posts.

Name: Rapid Fire
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire
Handsigns: Yes
Description: After the handseals are performed, the user shoots out a series of fireballs(About 30 of them), the size of tennis balls, at the opponent. This balls travels at the speed of 50kph. This balls are shot out in waves. These balls can cause bruises and second degree burns


Name: Lightning Strike
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Handsigns: Yes
Description: The user will create a large, several feet in diameter, ball of lightning in their hands. This ball can then be launched at a target and will travel at average speed, as fast as an average running person. When it comes in contact with something, it will burst, damaging and shocking anyone it touches and also slightly shocking anyone within three feet of its edge at the moment of impact. Direct hit may cause the opponent hefty burning damage as if hit by a lightning bolt. Outer damage from being close, can cause a very uncomfortable sensation as well as light numbness

Name: Lightning Release: False Darkness
Origin: Canon
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Class: Ninjutsu
Range: All ranges
Description: Law emits lightning in the shape of a spear from its mouth, which then pierces the enemy. Its destructive power is great enough to even pierce through rock; meaning it has a high killing potential. The user can increase the number of spears to attack multiple enemies. This, coupled with the sheer speed of the lightning, makes it a difficult technique to evade. This technique is capable of being focused into a straight beam, similar to a laser.

Name: Lightning Release: Electromagnetic Murder
Origin: Canon
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Class: Ninjutsu
Range: Short-range
Description: This technique allows the user to create a wave of electricity from their hands. The user can vary its power from a small surge to shock an opponent to a powerful stream of lightning capable of ripping through solid rock. It is ideal to use in conjunction with a water technique.

Name: Wind Release: Great Breakthrough
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: D-S
Type: Offensive, Defensive
Element: Wind
Range: Short(0-5m), Mid(5-15m)
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: /
Cooldown: 3 post D-C, 5 posts B-A, 7 post S
Description: This is a relatively simple technique that creates a sudden gust of wind, but its scale varies greatly depending on the user. If used by a superior shinobi, it has enough destructive power to knock down a large tree. The wind from the squall can blow away all things in the user's line of sight. At D and C rank, this jutsu is merely a distraction, as well as able to deflect a small number of small weapons (Kunai, Shuriken, Senbon, not to exceed 5 altogether). B-A causes a knock back effect of 10-30 feet, depending on the terrain, as well as being able to deflect up to 15 small projectiles at a time. May also uproot small trees and damage the user significantly with large areas of bruising and a large number of shallow lacerations; if used at close enough range. S rank will Uproot all but the oldest and best rooted trees, as well as deflect nearly any weapon or projectile, while causing major damage and a massive knock back effect. If the enemy isn't sent flying, the debris flying will definitely cause some injuries. If a direct hit at close enough range (0-20 feet), The force of the blast may be enough to pierce flesh itself, up to several inches. Severed bruising and laceration are guaranteed, and the chance for dislocations of joints and bone fracture is extreme.

Name: Gangbang
Rank: B
Range: Eye-contact
Type: Genjutsu
Element: /
Handsigns: /
Description: The moment the target and user gets eye-contact, the horrible illusion begins. 10 naked man with 10 inches long cocks would start to strip the target. The target would then be fucked by all the men at once, maybe some forcing down theirs in the target’s throat, some stuffing their cocks up the target’s ass, or maybe even just jizzing on him. This illusion only gives the target the feeling, it doesn’t really make the target naked. However, the taste and the smell will still exist. Lasts for 4 posts.




History: Pre-academy arc-
BL was conceived by a woman named Mia on December 21. He was born into a wealthy and prestigious family. Being the only son and the only heir of his family's fortune and name, he was trained ever since he was small. He was trained heavily in ninjutsu. He was taught by a very well known teacher in ninjutsu knowledge. Due to this, he has a vast knowledge on ninjutsu. By the age of 5, he was recognized as a prodigy by the Kazekage.

Academy arc-
When he reached the age of 6, BL was sent to a private academy. Since he has been taught by a prestigious teacher before he came to the academy, he rarely pays the teacher attention. Instead, he would just read his own books, or try inventing his own ninjutsu. While in school, he befriended a student named Kaito Uchiha. They developed a strong bond together. Kaito taught Beelzebub a few genjutsu, which then gave him the strong interest in learning genjutsu too. By the age of 7, BL and Kaito graduated with flying colors. They were then assigned to the same genin squad.

Genin arc-
After graduating at 8, BL was assigned into the same team as his 10-year-old friend, Kaito and a girl named Sakura with their sensei, Matt.Together, they went out on missions. Although Kaito and BL were best friends, they were also rivals. Most of their fights would end up a draw; both of them would be too tired or injured badly. One of the last missions they shared was a mission to escort a merchant from Suna to Konoha.

Their whole team headed by a carriage. Halfway during their journey, they were ambushed by two rogues. Their sensei and Sakura handled one person while Kaito and BL handled the other. "BL, I'll trap him in a genjutsu and you take care of him, 'kay?" said Kaito to Night before they faced their enemy. BL smiled and nodded. Kaito went to the man and did a genjutsu. He then gave BL the signal. BL then charged to the man with a kunai in his hands. Just before he could do a slash movement at the rogue, the rogue casted Kai. The rogue then casted a wind jutsu. This wind jutsu threw BL off the ground. Kaito, who was surprised due to this, started fighting with the man with strong fire jutsu than he himself have never seen. "After all this time, Kaito knew such strong jutsu? Why didn't he ever used this jutsu against me? I gave him my all, yet he didn't think of me as a worthy opponent?" thought BL. BL then got up from the ground. As he started performing some handseals, he then shot a lightning beam. Since the rogue was too occupied fighting Kaito, he did not see the lightning beam. The beam injured the man's right hand. Kaito took this opportunity and attacked the man consecutively without stopping. Right after the man fainted, their sensei came, caught the man, and tied him up. They then continued their journey, where BL spent thinking of how weak he was.

Chuunin Exam Arc-

After that unforgettable mission, BL began to train harder. He would train for 12 hours a day. One day, as he was training, he got a message from their sensei, a message about the Chuunin exam. After hearing about it, he went off to meet his sensei and squad. His sensei explained everything to him. They would be heading to Konoha for the exams. There'll be three courses, two would be individual events, while the other one would be a team course.

After hearing about the test, BL decided to prove that he's better than Kaito. He started training vigorously until the day they were suppose to depart. He packed his things and headed off to the caravan together with his squad. During the trip, Kaito and Sakura were sleeping. His sensei went off flirting with other girls. BL was then studying and reading. When they reached Konoha, BL went and fell asleep, hoping to regain all his strength to give his all at the test.

The next morning, BL woke up. After bathing and eating, he and his team headed off to the academy, where the first task will take place. Over there, they were given a test. BL easily finished the test and passed it up, before heading out to continue his beauty sleep. On the second course, his team had to survive in the jungle and steal flags from other teams. As they were searching for a flag, they came across a team. "Hey guys, look! We found some small fry!" said a big kid from the squad. Kaito, without saying a word, charged and spat out a fireball at the guy. BL, who wanted to show that he has improved, charged at another big guy and threw a lightning ball. Sakura then handled another girl in that team. As Kaito and BL tried to show that they were better than the other, both of them continued attacking the team until their opponents became unconscious. As the team has finished the fight, BL's Squad took the flag and went to the tower. They then passed their second course.

At the last course, they had to have a duel with another shinobi. They had to slowly duel with one person after another, until they reached the final. Whoever makes it to the top will be promoted to a Chuunin. As they fought, BL won every match. Unfortunately, Kaito was killed by a shinobi. Kaito, who did not want to give up even though he was outmatched, was beaten terribly by his opponent. The doctor who was suppose to help Kaito failed to save him. That opponent was then disqualified. Angered by this, BL won every single match. He was then promoted to a Chunin. After the Chunin exam, BL went and attack Kaito's opponent. BL attacked the guy badly, and after beating the guy up, BL took a sword and placed a lifelong scar on the man's chest. After that, his squad and him went home sadly.

Chuunin-Jounin arc - After becoming a Chunin, BL decided to leave his squad and start to be a sensei on his own. He took up a squad on his own. He then did some missions alone and with his squad. Slowly, he was promoted until he became what he is today; a Jounin.
RP Sample: "Hehehe! If it ain't Kiki! I ain't gonna let you pass the Chunin exam! Finally, a chance to rip you up in to shreds!" ,said Gary, his rival. Gary then took out 5 kunais on each hand and threw the kunais at Yoshi and his friends. His team quickly dodged the kunais. "Myo! You take that girl! Kakashi! That tall guy! I'll handle Gary!" , shouted Yoshi. His friends then nodded and charged to their assigned enemies.Yoshi then did some hand-seals and shouted, "Lightning Beast Running Technique!". At once, one lightning beast appeared with a leash held by Yoshi. The beast then charged towards Gary. Gary then did some handseals and destroyed the beast. Yoshi, who knew this technique would be defeated easily by his rival, did some handseals immediately and shouted , "Water Release: Great Water Arm!". At once, a large water arm appeared on his right hand. He then attacked Gary with it. Gary, grinning casted a lightning jutsu at it, shocking Yoshi, who then fell on his knees. Gary then did some jutsu that tied Yoshi up. "Idiot. I thought you would be a nicer opponent than all those junks. You disappoint me.", said gary as he pulled out a kunai. "Goodbye..", said Gary as he stabbed the kunai at Yoshi's head. "What a joker you are, Gary...", said Yoshi, "...didn't you learn about this technique called Kage Bunshin..?", said v as he stabbed Gary at his back. Gary, who spat out blood after being stabbed then said,"Shit.... I forgot....about.....that.....".


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Post by Hakai Hozuki on Tue Jul 31, 2012 6:01 am

A few things you need to add negatives to your positive special characteristics so they are even.

Also you are A rank so you only get two elements and specialties. You can easily become S rank by being Sanin or Anbu. You age will have to be alter however.
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Re: Beelzebub Jigoku

Post by Takeshi on Tue Jul 31, 2012 6:23 am

Changed

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Post by Takeshi on Tue Jul 31, 2012 6:27 am

Uh, I'll be changing clans.

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Post by Hakai Hozuki on Tue Jul 31, 2012 6:40 am

please review SC you need to have equal negative and positive.. including your clan/KKG.
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Post by Hakai Hozuki on Tue Jul 31, 2012 7:02 am

Raijin's Lightsaber
-change name so its not talking about another character
-remove all canon references, please
-remove the chakra system reference which I assume are from another site. You need to state how much letter rank chakra, its going to cost to sustain the blade. Also how much chakra it cost to electrocute people with it.

Remove the summoning those are suppose to be done after you are approved not in your app.
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Re: Beelzebub Jigoku

Post by Takeshi on Tue Jul 31, 2012 7:39 am

Can I get an approval first and only make my jutsu after my approval? Or must I hand it in together with my app and get approved together in one shot?

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Post by Suijin on Tue Jul 31, 2012 2:40 pm

If you wait until AFTER approval then you will have to train any and all jutsu you apply for...
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Re: Beelzebub Jigoku

Post by Takeshi on Wed Aug 01, 2012 4:36 am

Done

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Post by Takeshi on Wed Aug 01, 2012 8:54 am

Added my familiar.(With DS' permision)

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Post by Uchiha Alexis on Wed Aug 01, 2012 9:46 am

ANBU Are allowed 2 Elements change that.

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Post by Takeshi on Wed Aug 01, 2012 11:00 am

Changed my rank.

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Post by Hakai Hozuki on Wed Aug 01, 2012 5:15 pm

Name: Lightning Strike
Rank: D
Range: Short-Mid
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Handsigns: Yes
Description: The user will create a large, several feet in diameter, ball of lightning in their hands. This ball can then be launched at a target and will travel at average speed, as fast as an average running person. When it comes in contact with something, it will burst, damaging and shocking anyone it touches and also slightly shocking anyone within three feet of its edge at the moment of impact. Direct hit may cause the opponent hefty burning damage as if hit by a lightning bolt. Outer damage from being close, can cause a very uncomfortable sensation as well as light numbness

Name: Gangbang
Rank: D
Range: Eye-contact
Type: Genjutsu
Element: /
Handsigns: /
Description: The moment the target and user gets eye-contact, the horrible illusion begins. 10 naked man with 10 inches long dicks would start to strip the target. The target would then be fucked by all the men at once, maybe some forcing down theirs in the target’s throat, some stuffing their dicks up the target’s ass, or maybe even just jizzing on him. This illusion only gives the target the feeling, it doesn’t really make the target naked. However, the taste and the smell will still exist. Lasts for 4 posts.

Name: Rapid Fire
Rank: C
Range: Short-Mid
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire
Handsigns: Yes
Description: After the handseals are performed, the user shoots out a series of fireballs(About 30 of them), the size of tennis balls, at the opponent. This balls travels at the speed of 50kph. These balls can cause bruises and first degree burns

1. A rank.. power of a lightning bolt is not D rank

2. B rank.. edit it for younger members, just change the work **** to cock.

3. B rank, explain how they are fired.. in a straight line.. in a waves of small fire balls. This seems like phoenix flower jutsu.. but w/e
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Re: Beelzebub Jigoku

Post by Takeshi on Fri Aug 03, 2012 3:30 am

edited

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Post by Hakai Hozuki on Fri Aug 03, 2012 11:20 pm

If you do your summonings later, I can approve you right now.
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Post by Takeshi on Sat Aug 04, 2012 5:25 am

Ok. Approval, please, good sir.

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Post by Nuitari Kouga on Sat Aug 04, 2012 8:43 am

Approved. Assuming all the adjustments were made.
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Re: Beelzebub Jigoku

Post by Kaira on Sat Aug 04, 2012 9:33 am

Approval Item

Name:Yosozume Black Sparrow
Element: None
Rank: A
Appearance:
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Made out of tempered black steel, this sword as well as its sheath is used as a weapon.
Ability's: This blades is extreamly sharp blade and is capableof cutting through serval types of well know metals including Steel and Plate. It can also have different elements channeled within it to use on enemys, it can only have elements channeled that the user currently has.





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Re: Beelzebub Jigoku

Post by Hakai Hozuki on Sat Aug 04, 2012 10:24 pm

UNapproved a few problems..


You need one more flaw to counter you KKG.

These jutsu need to be removed because they either are SC/KKG/OPED or just retarded for a naruto rp.

Name: Ikimuno Benkuo
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: E
Element: None
Type: Ninjutsu
Range:
Description: This technique requires a one post charge of chakra in the throat in order to be activated; Ikimuno Benkuo is an academy level technique which allows human shinobi to communicate with non-human animals as easily as if they were both speaking the same language. This does not allow the user to learn the language of an animal nor does it allow the animal to actually speak, this technique simply takes barks, hisses and other forms of animal noises and translates them into versions that the user is able to completely understand in their head and in turn do the same to animals the user speaks to. Lasts 5 posts with a 2 round cool.

ame: Nose of the Hound
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: E
Element: n/a
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: self
Description: The user's sense of smell is higher than that of the average person and is able to pick up on scents in the near by area extremely easily. Note that the strength of this technique is not strong enough to be used as a plausible way to track someone by scent unless the odor is extremely strong and even then it is not overly effective or useful. Lasts for 10 posts.


Name: Eyes of the Hawk
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: E
Element: n/a
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Self
Description: The user's sense of sight is higher than that of the average person and is able to see details in the distance extremely easily. The detail at which a person can pick up on is increased as though they were staring several feet away when they are actually up to one hundred feet away, passed that mark the jutsu is not effective and grants no benefits. Lasts for 10 posts.

Name: Ice Cream Lovers Delight
Rank: E
Element:
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Non-battle
Description: Handseals. This jutsu allows the user to turn any inanimate object he desires into Ice Cream. THe can turn it into any flavor; Vanilla, Chocolate, Strawberry, Rocky Road, Mint, Dulce De Leche, Peanut Butter Chocolate, and Cookie Dough, just to name a few. It does not work on humans or animals, as it only lowers their body temperature slightly.

Name: Karma Art : Mirror damage.
Rank: S
Range: 50 meters
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: /
Handsigns: Yes
Description: After performing the handseals, the user forms a "kage bunshin" of the opponent. This kage bunshin of the opponent has the exact jutsu of the opponent. However, this clone's mission is to only defend the user. Whatever damage done on this bunshin will be transferred to the user at the original damage and twice the damage at the opponent. If a 1 cm cut is done on the clone, a one cm cut will appear at the exact spot on the user(including the pain) and a 2cm cut will appear on the opponent with twice the pain. This bunshin takes the original S rank cost to start and D rank cost to continue it.

Also remove your lion summoning as well.
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Re: Beelzebub Jigoku

Post by Takeshi on Sat Aug 04, 2012 11:10 pm

My Lion is a pet. Ikimuno is a jutsu used to speak to animals. For Ice Cream Lovers Delight, it'll help me in my RP.

Removed the rest

And also, I do not need an extra flaw because Weak physics counters Flash, and arachnophobia counters my KKG.

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Post by Rizuma Jigoku on Sun Aug 05, 2012 12:08 am

Arachnophobia is a personality trait not a flaw.


Name: Jigokugan [Cancer Hell]
Rank: C
Type: Kekkei Genkai
Description: Raises the perception of the user allowing them to see clearer and react 5% faster. Also allows the user to use their Nether chakra. this is only on one eye and the image in the eye will never leave, whether the Jigokugan's abilities are active or not. The user can also mimic the handsigns of the opponent only, not the jutsu.

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Re: Beelzebub Jigoku

Post by Hakai Hozuki on Sun Aug 05, 2012 12:37 am

@Rizuma. -_-'

@beelzebulb: So many things wrong with the lion so just remove it and put it through creature creation. Also you yes those flaws block those out but you still need another elite or balance out your other flaws. The system is easy to understand, idk why I keep having to explain it.

Also remove the other two, talking to animals like that would be a super SC. Its not a canon jutsu and its not being allowed. Also being able to create ice cream is physically impossible, remove them both. It has nothing to do with rping, you want to have Ice cream with people buy it for them. RP in an Ice cream shop, its up to you. But you can not, I mean not change the molecular structure of something with a simple E rank jutsu.
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Post by Takeshi on Sun Aug 05, 2012 2:26 am

But you can not, I mean not change the molecular structure of something with a simple E rank jutsu.

What rank would the Ice cream lover delight jutsu be? I'll change it.

Removed Ikimuno.

So, here's my flaw vs. SC=

Weak Physics destroys Flash

Coolness breakdown destroys Tattoo bending and pokerface

Arachnophobia destroys my KKG.

What would the other flaw "destroy"?

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Post by Hakai Hozuki on Sun Aug 05, 2012 2:45 am

Name: Coolness breakdown
Rank: Super
Description: Although he has a very strong pokerface, he tends to show his real expression to those who he is close to. Also, when he starts losing, he'll start attacking without thinking. He wouldn't even think of the consequences and just spam out jutsu and attacks.

Isn't a super flaw.

Also I made the mistake please seperate your flaws and extras. That was it is easy to tell which one is which.

Also you need to say on your phobia that you must be stunned for three turns minimum.
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Post by Takeshi on Sun Aug 05, 2012 2:57 am

Edited

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