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Post by Elendril on Tue Jul 31, 2012 12:34 am

Clan Name: HebiKodomo

-Bloodline Description:
Body
The members of this clan have a unique body it's very different from that of a human body. They are able to manipulate their bones. This allows for them to move their bones to different parts of the body thus making themselves bigger, smaller, and even with no bones at all. Because of this, the clansmen’s are like snakes. They have even come to be able to transform their bodys into that of large snakes. Their bodies become boneless thus can stretch up to long ranges and move faster than normal humans while in snake form. In this snake form they look exactly like a snake thus they have bodies like a snake. This is similar to Orochimaru's technique when he transform into the large snake. As the user ranks up the user will be able to increase his own body length in human form as well as their snake form. So in every point of their lives they are growing every rank up. A genin will be only able to manipulate his bones to somewhat extend his body longer, though they aren't able to transform their bodies parts into snakes. A chuunin will be able to 'draw out' his bones out of his body to turn his whole body boneless and become like a snake. Their bodies are very scaly like a snake, and will approximately have a length of about 7 feet long. In normal human form they will be an average height of about 6'2. A Jounin will have the same as the chuunin abilities except that it will have a length of about 12 feet long. And in human form he will be about 6'7. Because their bodies are very scaly when they are hurt they are able to regenerate and cover minor wounds. This means basically wounds that you would put small bandages on. ( because they can re arrage their bones, they are able to make their bodies stretch to long ranges)

Poison
Another very common of the clansmen of this family is their blood. Their blood are different. Meaning their blood has a very large portion of poison in it (snake Poison). Just like snakes they are able to pass this poison on their bodies throughout their teeth. Because of that any clansmen are immune to any snake poison that is used against them. A simple bite from any clan member of this clan can be fatal. An academy student poison would take about 8 post of medical treatment on the person to extract the poison and it will take about 8 minutes for the poison to kill. Some other genin who bit someone else would need to have about 5 post of medical treatment to extract the posion and would take about 5 minutes to kill. A chuunin 7 post of medical treatment and would take about 3 . And a Jounin poison can take about a minute before it goes though the whole body. After this poison gets throughout your whole body it cannot be extract in time thus causing death to whomever has been bit. Though not all clan members have the same poison. As some of the people have different poison effects. Like some members of the clans poison might have a stunning effects while others may be a deadly poison. (Each clan member will need to make their own poison)

Manipulation
Because members of the clan are so close to snakes in many ways. They are able to manipulate snakes. More often they have them connected to their bodies and use them as weapons. The reason they have some snakes with them is because when they are little their blood cells are mixed with that of snakes blood cells. Since then they have snake characteristics as well as some snakes can even possible grown inside their bodies. They use these snakes to attack by taking them out from their sleeve etc. This is similar to what Orochimaru and Kabuto do with their snakes.

Village: Sunagakure

Clan Symbol: N/A

Clan Traits: Read KKG

Secret Clan Jutsu:
Spoiler:

Name: Snake Taste Technique
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: None
Description: A ninjutsu technique that helps them very much in every occasion. because they have almost every characteristic of a snake. They are able to use their tongue to gather particles from the air to locate enemies that are around the area via heat. They are able to locate an enemy that is about 20 feet from himself.

Name: Snake Body Binding Technique
Rank: D - S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element:
Description: After performing a hand sign the user will be able to stretch their necks up to a long range close to their opponents. They are able to stretch out limbs or any part of their bodies to reach to opponents or to bind them. An academy student would be able to strecth any part of their bodies to about 4 feet longer. A genin is 6 feets, chuunin would be 10 feets and A rank would be about 15 feet in length. An S rank would be able top stretch up to about 20 feets.

Name: Snake Skin Replacement Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: None
Description: A Heboushi clan technique. This technique its used without the use of hand signs. Just like the replacement technique the user will be able to replace himself with any other snake nearby. The snake must be on sight from the user, and one can only replace himself up to about 50 meters away from his current location.

Name: Snake Clone Technique
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: None
Description: After peforming the neccesary hand signs the user will manipulate snakes to form into clones made out of snakes. As usual this clone its very different and can be seen that it is different. The clone has just a little less strength than the user and can pack punches and kicks. After the clone is hit about the least of 2 times the clone will release long snakes from it attaching to the opponent in contact or upon dispersion. THe snake will gather around them and tie them up.

Name: Dual Snake Attack
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: None
Description: . After peforming the necessary hand signs the user will summon two large snakes that length in about 10 feet from his sleeve. The snakes will shoot out aiming for their opponent. Upon contact they will wrap around the opponent and squeeze them cutting their air away and causing breathing problems. The snakes will then carve their long sharp teeths on anything they can catch as much as they can. (Note not an actual summon just the taking of snakes growing in the body)

Name: Posion Needle barrage
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: None
Description: A jutsu that the user will spit out several small needles. These needles are dipped on the clansmen own posion and are very fatal. After the needle is carved into the opponent skin the posion will travel around the body for a day maximum, if the posion isn't extracted at that point the person will die. This also causes 5 post of paralyzation to the opponent. A clansman is able to shoot up to 30 needles up to 10 meters away. These needs are made up of a solid poison in the body that do not take the natural poison of the user. And once a person is hit by the needle the poison will start to expand to the whole body paralyzing them.

Name: Posionic Spray Technique
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: None
Description: The user will expel a spray of poison at the target from his mouth. If it hits, the target will be poisoned. The poison will continuously harm the target's body until it is removed, and will cause death in 24 hours. After 4 posts or two hours, the target will be completely paralyzed. This spray can only go up to 10 meters

Name: Snake Arm Technique
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: None
Description: A technique that doesn't require hand signs the user will manipulate his own bone structure to create his arm to form into a snake shaped hand. The user will use this hand to defend them to shield from attacks. But it can also be used as a way to attack people from a range or even close distance. By using the snake to bite and transfer poison, as well as getting bitten fucking hurts

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Re: Snake clan

Post by Hakai Hozuki on Tue Jul 31, 2012 7:51 pm

OK just re-read this and fix grammar mistakes and wording errors. When you are done post in here and I will mod it.
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Re: Snake clan

Post by Kaira on Wed Aug 01, 2012 4:03 pm

The body part of your KKG when you recover minor wounds it will use chakra to do so or acertain Rank probably D will do it.


Another very common of the clansmen of this family is their blood. Their blood are different. Meaning their blood has a very large portion of poison in it (snake Poison). Just like snakes they are able to pass this poison on their bodies throughout their teeth. Because of that any clansmen are immune to any poison that is used against them. A simple bite from any clan member of this clan can be fatal. An academy student poison would take about 8 post of medical treatment on the person to extract the poison and it will take about 8 minutes for the poison to kill. Some other genin who bit someone else would need to have about 5 post of medical treatment to extract the posion and would take about 5 minutes to kill. A chuunin 7 post of medical treatment and would take about 3 . And a Jounin poison can take about a minute before it goes though the whole body. After this poison gets throughout your whole body it cannot be extract in time thus causing death to whomever has been bit. Though not all clan members have the same poison. As some of the people have different poison effects. Like some members of the clans poison might have a stunning effects while others may be a deadly poison. (Each clan member will need to make their own poison)


The stuff you have wrote about the posien effect of killing time should be removed as it is down to the indivdual poisen that is created for its effect to be determined per user that is in your clan.

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Jutsu


Name: Snake Taste Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: None
Description: A ninjutsu technique that helps them very much in every occasion. because they have almost every characteristic of a snake. They are able to use their tongue to gather particles from the air to locate enemies that are around the area via heat. They are able to locate an enemy that is about 20 feet from himself.


D rank


Snake Clone Technique B Rank

Name: Dual Snake Attack
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: None
Description: A ninjuytsu technique of the HeBoushi clan. After peforming the necessary hand signs the user will summon two large snakes that length in about 10 feet from his sleeve. The snakes will shoot out aiming for their opponent. Upon contact they will wrap around the opponent and squeeze them cutting their air away and causing breathing problems. The snakes will then carve their long sharp teeths on anything they can catch as much as they can.

You say in your jutsu Summon two large snakes we dont have summons here only animal familars, so maybe your should make the item or something when the time comes like a summon scroll seperate with some snakes in-- This is a suggestion.


Name: Posion Needle barrage
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: None
Description: A jutsu that the user will spit out several small needles. These needles are dipped on the clansmen own posion and are very fatal. After the needle is carved into the opponent skin the posion will travel around the body for a day maximum, if the posion isn't extracted at that point the person will die. This also causes 5 post of paralyzation to the opponent. A clansman is able to shoot up to 30 needles up to 10 meters away.

How are the needles formed. Also describe the paralyzation some more what areas does it affect the part that it hit explain more, do the needles perice materals etc.


Name: Posionic Spray Technique
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: None
Description: The user will expel a spray of poison at the target from his mouth. If it hits, the target will be poisoned. The poison will continuously harm the target's body until it is removed, and will cause death in 24 hours. After 4 posts or two hours, the target will be completely paralyzed. This spray can only go up to 10 meters

does the poisen spray that of your own posien that you design. Cause if it is it will depends on the effects of this jutsu as different posiens dont all have the same effects.

Name: Snake Arm Technique
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: None
Description: A technique that doesn't require hand signs the user will manipulate his own bone structure to create his arm to form into a snake shaped hand. The user will use this hand to defend them to shield from attacks. The hand gets pretty big and is able to deflect b and lower rank jutsu

What about blades, weapons etc and it should deflect all attacks depends what is used. What about elemental jutsu.













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Re: Snake clan

Post by Kaira on Wed Aug 01, 2012 4:23 pm

The body part of your KKG when you recover minor wounds it will use chakra to do so or acertain Rank probably D will do it.


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Re: Snake clan

Post by Hakai Hozuki on Wed Aug 01, 2012 4:25 pm

Name: Snake Arm Technique
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: None
Description: A technique that doesn't require hand signs the user will manipulate his own bone structure to create his arm to form into a snake shaped hand. The user will use this hand to defend them to shield from attacks. The hand gets pretty big and is able to deflect b and lower rank jutsu

Remove the ability to block B rank and under jutsu. It doesn't even make sense how you can do this.. oh I made my hand giant and slapped a jutsu away? It can block attacks, but you need to say "The hand is hard of steel or rock"
Not that all B rank and under attacks no matter what they are can be blocked.
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Re: Snake clan

Post by Kaira on Thu Aug 02, 2012 3:04 pm

APPROVED


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Re: Snake clan

Post by Hakai Hozuki on Fri Aug 03, 2012 5:26 pm

A member pointed this out to me and it needs to be fixed on the app.


Just like snakes they are able to pass this poison on their bodies throughout their teeth. Because of that any clansmen are immune to any poison that is used against them.

Just like snakes you are not immune to all poisons. Even Hanzo who had the one of the most deadly poisons inside his body is not immune to all poisons and their effects. You can put you're immune to all snake poisons, but you can't state that you are immune to all poisons. As they almost infinite, people can create new poisons with various chemicals and natural ingredients that your immune system has never come in contact with. You can even say immune to all standard shinobi poisons, but you can't generalize this ability.
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Re: Snake clan

Post by Elendril on Fri Aug 03, 2012 10:47 pm

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Re: Snake clan

Post by Hakai Hozuki on Fri Aug 03, 2012 11:12 pm

reapproved.
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