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Post by Zenkichi on Mon Jan 02, 2012 12:38 am


Name: Riku Burke
Nickname/Alias: The Silver Oni
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Looks:

He stands at about 5'11", weights about 191 of pure muscles and has a toned body. His eyes are silver and his hair white, which is why he recieved the name "Silver Oni" along with his silver blades. Riku has about 5 blades armed to his equipment and a couple tattoo's spread across his body.

Personality: Riku is abit of a hothead, though by his lack of words you'll never know. He rarely talks to strangers, but when he does his words can be seen as offensive to most. His vocabularity is composed of mostly curse words and slang making everybody over 28 completely confused on whatever he's saying. He's a very nice and compassionate person and lacks the ability to be mean for no reason, though has fun toying with people at time or playing emotions. He's very smart and comes up with plans and strategy's very fast, making his friends and family confused how he could say the dumbest things and come off as a genius. He's also very easy to get along with, if you have a tolerance for young blood... He's always eager to show off his skills. The man can be seen as a warrior and despite his high IQ he's kinda slow at noticing things and even slower when it comes to women. Like every straight man he enjoys the presense of a woman, though he's not to good at talking to them. Though the man is never shy and will ask anyone almost anything. He also eats large amounts of food, though is able to keep his small, musclar frame.

Likes & Dislikes: Likes: Randomness, beautiful women, good spars, good food and good fun, killing people he dislikes. And most of all drinking. Dislikes: Assholes, getting sick, people with big egos, people who fight like peasants, Hangovers.
Catch Phrase: "True" and "Really?"




Family Name: Burke
Kekkei Genkai: None
KKG Jutsu: None




Province: Free Lands
Title Rank: Wanderer
Skill Rank: A




Skill Specialty:
Main: Ninjutsu
Sub: Kenjutsu
Tertiary: Genjutsu (When unlocked)

Elemental Affinity:
Main: Lightning
Sub: Earth
Tertiary: Wind (When Unlocked)

Special Characteristics: One Handed Jutsu: Yes, being a kenjutsu user Riku has to sometimes create jutsu while parrying attacks with a sword. For this reason he has trained and gained the ability to cast one handed jutsu. (Super)

Stupid Endurance: Kind of like Zaraki Kenpachi, Riku is able to tak large amounts of damage and continue fighting as if nothing happened. It's more than just pain tolerance, he's able to shake of wounds and even infections as if nothing happened. Large wounds like losing a limb will slow him down, and leave him encapable to fight at 100 percent, but he'd still press on. (Elite)

Red Lightning: Only the hue of the lightning is changed, not the power or ablility (Average I guess)

Flaws/Weaknesses:

Taijustu Failure: Not much can be said about a ninja that can hardly fight with his fist. He just can't do it basically, thus why he uses a sword. (Super)


Hangovers: Riku is wasted like... everyday all day. He still hasn't gained much of a tolerance to drinking, so the next morning he's usually in trouble. If Riku drinks a night before he'll wake up sluggish, slow and barely able to make good decisions and reasoning. (Average)

Poison: Although his body is resistance to many sicknesses and he has a strong immune system, it's not able to handle poision at all. Even a weak C-Ranked poision can leave him dizzy and barely able to fight. If he were to be poisioned at S-Rank, he'd have 50 percent more intolerance than the normal person. (Elite)




Name: Gin Blades
Appearance:
Spoiler:
Rank: A
Special Abilities: Lightning Harness
Origin: The twin blades are very special to Riku since they were created perfectly for him. While Black Tidal is mainly for defense and offesive kenjutsu, these blades are meant for element jutsu and chakra control. Both blades are able to easily control and harness lightning and able to counter A-Ranked lightning ninjutsu used against Riku. The lightning used against him travels through the blades and is discharged through the other side, making anything behind them in range of an attack. This works because the handles are rubber and the tang protrude from the other end of them so that the lighting doesn't just flow right into his body. They are also very hard, though the blades are lighter and able to be used quickly and swift.

Name: Black Tide
Appearance: Name: Black Tide
Appearance:
Spoiler:
Rank: S
Special Abilities: Near Unbreakable and VERY powerful when used with chakra
Ability Description: The black tidal is special because it's made of Adamantium metal, making it one of the most powerful and unbreakible metals on earth. The hardness of the metal is able to slice and crush diamond when used with extreme skill. It's said that even the sharpest blade in the world would be unable to pierce the blade if enough chakra is added to it, putting mystical weapons in their place. This katana lies on the back of Riku and is all black, and about 15 pounds, making it a heavier sword.
Origin: This blade has been passed down the family line and is estimated to be over 100 years old.

[*] Kunai
[*] Shuriken
[*] Holster
[*] Makibishi Spikes
[*] Exploding Tags
[*] Smoke Pellets
[*] Backpacks
[*] Shinobi Belt
[*] Sealing Scrolls
[*] 32-Inch Katana (Tidal Blade)
[*] 35 Feet Wire
[*] Two 24-Inch Wakizashi's (On back of pants)
[*] Two 38-Inch Katana (Gin Oni Blades)
[*] Titanium Metal Gloves
[*] Altered Sunglasses (Blocks out bright lights and flashbombs)
[*] A 6 Foot Yari (Spear) ~has to be summoned~
[*] More kunai, shuriken, wire, bombtags and smoke pellets ~has to be summoned~




Ninjutsu:

Lightning:
Spoiler:
Name: Lightning Release: Electromagnetic Murder
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: Raiton
Description: This technique allows the user to create a wave of electricity from their hands. The user can vary its power from a small surge to shock an opponent to a powerful stream of lightning capable of ripping through solid rock. It is ideal to use in conjunction with a water technique.

Name: Lightning Release: False Darkness
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: Raiton
Description: The user emits lightning in the shape of a spear from its mouth, which then pierces the enemy. Its destructive power is great enough to even pierce through rock; meaning it has a high killing potential. The user can increase the number of spears to attack multiple enemies. This makes it nearly impossible to evade.

Name: Raiton Senbon
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Mid
Element: Raiton
Description: Riku is able to turn the lightning element chakra into 1000's of lightning senbon and fire them lightning fast at his targets. The needles are able to pierce light armor and flesh with ease and if hits an opponent it stuns them for 2 turns.

Name: Raiton Bunshin no Jutsu
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: Raiton
Description: Raiton Kage Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes lightning to create a Kage Bunshin clone. Because it is a Kage Bunshin, the Raiton version shares the ability to interact with the environment due to it having physical substance. This allows the clone to carry out limited attacks on its target. If the Raiton Kage Bunshin is injured, the clone will revert into its natural lightning state. Like in other Lightning Element attacks, should the target come into contact with the electricity, they will be momentarily stunned.

Name: Red Lightning: Infamous
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description: A large red beam of lightning is fired from the users fingers, hands or fist in at an extremely face pace. It has to destructive power to incenorate concrete to ash and gives off a shocking pulse.

Name: Lightning Release: Electric Discharge
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description: After a couple handsigns the user is able to emit lightning throughout an object, giving it a powerful electric discharge. The object can then be thrown or used in attempts to shock or stab an opponent. Whoever is struck by the jutsu is paralyzed for 2 post, though if stabbed the opponent is paralyzed for 3 post and receieves painful 3rd degree burns on the area struck.

Name: Raiton Engai no Jutsu
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 6 inches around skin
Element: Raiton
Description: The user’s body is surrounded by an electric shield from the user’s, which can protect the user from Taijutsu. Any one who tries to hit him will be electrocuted and sent back. However, if the Taijutsu is powerful enough, then it can break through. Also, Hyuuga techniques can penetrate this shield. This will last for one post, due to the nature of the technique, and the user is rendered immobile.

Name: Raiton Ookami
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 10 meters
Element: Raiton
Description: This unnamed Ninjutsu technique utilizes the Lightning Element. After creating Raiton in his hand, a ninja will send out a wolf made of lightning to attack his target. Lightning will run from a ninja's hand to the wolf itself, limiting its range.

Name: Rei
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 100 Meters
Element: Raiton
Description: This jutsu requires no handsigns, just a crapload of chakra and time to build. The user gathers Lightning Element throughout their bodies into one concentraited point and rapidly fires it in a beam like blast towards their target. The Attack has the power to turn almost anything in it's path into ash and is just as fast as lightning.

Earth:
Spoiler:
Name: Dochuu Senkou - Underground Submarine Voyage
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range:
Element: Doton
Description: Doton • Dochuu Senkou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. After forming the needed hand seals, a ninja can sink below ground and quickly travel through the earth, extending a weapon or hand above the earth to appear as a shark or submarine fin.

Name: Moguragakure no Jutsu - Mole Hiding Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 10 meters
Element: Doton
Description: Doton • Moguragakure no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. This technique allows the ninja to burrow into the ground and hide out of sight. This allows them to avoid attack or travel underground.

Name: Retsudo Tenshou - Revolving Split Earth Palm
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 5-10
Element: Doton
Description: Doton • Retsudo Tenshou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. This technique allows the ninja to control nearby stone and rock. When the ninja forms the needed handseals and slams their palm to the ground, surrounding rock will begin to churn and twist up crushing all those trapped within it.

Name: Domu - Earth Spear
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Body
Element: Doton
Description: Doton • Domu is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by a ninja. After forming the needed Snake handseal, a ninja will harden his/her body using the Earth Element. This provides greater defense against attack and will also strengthen his/her arm to increase his striking ability. Like other Doton based jutsu, it is weak against Raiton attacks.

Name: Earth Step
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Range: 50 Meters of the user
Description: The user closes their eyes, adds chakra into their foot and stomps pretty hard into the ground. A shockwave travels through the earth and bounces off of an object, then travels back towards the user like a sonar. This is used to find an opponent and predict their movements. The jutsu only works if an opponent is on the ground though, if their in the air or in a tree than the jutsu is useless. This jutsu basically makes Riku feel the earth and sense his surrounding effectively. The closer the opponent, the better the tracking. Also the shockwave is small, so an opponent would have no idea of the jutsu's abilities or effects.

Name: Doryuu Heki - Earth Style Wall
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 5-10 meters
Element: Doton
Description: Doton • Doryuu Heki is a defensive Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. The ninja will do the necessary hand seals and then spew a line of mud onto the ground. The mud will then grow into a large mud wall to help defend against incoming attack.

Name: Doton Kekkai • Dorou Doumu - Earth Barrier • Earth Dome Prison
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 10 meters
Element: Doton
Description: Doton Kekkai • Dorou Doumu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. After striking the ground with his hands, a ninja is able to overturn the earth and cause it to rise up around his opponents. Placing his/her hands against the dome he/she is able to suck out the chakra from the people trapped inside and bring it into his own body. At the same time the user will use his own chakra to spread throughout the dome, this allows him to repair any damage his opponents manage to inflict on the inside. The chakra is not evenly spread out though, as the chakra flows away from the user, it becomes more and more weak allowing the dome to be broken on the far side if hit by a hard enough force.

Name: Doryuu Katsu - Earth Style Split
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Range:5-15 meters
Element: Doton
Description: Doton • Doryuu Katsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. The ninja will do the necessary hand seals, then place their hand to the ground. This will cause the earth to rise up and split apart. Once the ninja removes their hand from the ground, the earth parting will end.

Name: Earth Step: Form 2
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Range: 1 Mile
Description: The user can effectively trace everything with chakra, no matter where it is, up to a mile away. This is stronger than the first form, since it can track chakra sources in the air and trees, even on the surface of water. The technique can even track chakra signatures, for fast moving ninja and emits a constant shockwave of chakra, rather than one wave.

Name: Yomi Numa - Swamp of the Underworld
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 5-15 meters
Element: Doton
Description: Doton • Yomi Numa is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth element. After forming the needed handseals, a vast swamp can appear beneath a target to sink and kill it.

Name: Earth Release: Mountain Sandwich Technique
Rank: S
Range: Long
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Description: The user creates two enormous rock formations that close in on the opponent from two opposing sides with tremendous force, smashing everything caught in between. Both of these formations are capable of dwarfing even the Demonic Statue of the Outer Path in size, and each one has the symbol of Iwagakure inscribed upon it. Kitsuchi stated that this was his strongest technique, standing as a testament to both this ability's destructive potential and its difficulty.

Basic:
Spoiler:
Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range:10m away from original place.
Element: N/A
Description: This jutsu lets the user quickly switch places with another nearby object, such as a plant (normally a section of a log), an animal, or even another person within reach, leaving the opponent open to a counter-attack. Explosive tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise. Fundamentally, all ninja know this technique.

Name: Henge no Jutsu
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range:N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This jutsu allows the user to assume the appearance of another person, animal, or object. This is one of the basic jutsu taught at the Konoha Ninja Academy. Fundamentally, all ninja know this jutsu. The transformation jutsu is considered to be among the more difficult E-ranked techniques, since it requires constant emission of chakra while mentally maintaining the form. On top of that, the user would be, most likely, interacting with the environment. This puts much mental strain on the inexperienced ninja.

Name: Bunshin no Jutsu
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range:N/A
Element: N/A
Description: This technique creates intangible copies of the user. The clones are simply illusions and will dissipate when they come into contact with something. The illusions can be seen through by the Byakugan and the Sharingan. A person with normal eyes can also distinguish the clones from the original, since the clones will not disrupt the area around themselves with their movement (won't kick up dust, crush grass, etc.).

Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range:N/A
Element: N/A
Description: A basic jutsu taught at the Konoha Ninja Academy, this jutsu allows a ninja to free themselves if they have been tied up.

Name: Genjutsu Kai
Rank: E-S
Type: Ninjutsu
Range:10m (Genin) 50m (S-Rank)
Element: N/A
Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.

Name: Shunshin no Jutsu
Rank: D-S
Type: Ninjutsu
Range:10m (Genin) Land to Land (S-Rank)
Element: N/A
Description: This jutsu is a high-speed movement technique, allowing a ninja to move short to long distances at an almost untraceable speed. To an observer, it appears as if the user has teleported. A puff of smoke is occasionally used to disguise the user's movements. It is accomplished by using chakra to temporarily boost the user's reflexes. The amount of chakra required depends on the overall distance between the user and their intended destination.

Name: Kinobori no Waza - Act of Tree Climbing
Rank: N/A
Type: Ninjutsu/Chakra Control
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: Kinobori no Waza, the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. Taking part in Kinobori Shugyou (Tree Climbing Training) helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra. It also teaches the ninja how to run up trees and walk on vertical walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are regarded as the hardest location to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will have any jutsu available (theoretically) because they will be able to focus their chakra as needed.

Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza - Act of Water Surface Walking
Rank: N/A
Type: Ninjutsu/Chakra Control
Range: N/A
Element: N/A
Description: A variation on the Kinobori no Waza (Act of Tree Climbing), the art of water surface walking allows a ninja to walk on water as if it was a solid surface. Focusing an even amount of chakra out of the soles of their feet, they can balance themselves on the very surface of the water.

Name: Ayatsuito no Jutsu - String Reeling Technique
Rank: N/A
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Depends on wire
Element: N/A
Description: Ayatsuito no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing wire. This string can be used in rappeling, or as a method to tie down and restrict the movement of an opponent. The Uchiha clan also utilizes the wire in their Sharingan Soufuusha Sannotachi technique. The wire allows the clan member to pin down an opponent, and then unleash a torrent of fire upon them.

Name: Bikou Ninjutsu - Shadowing Stealth Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 10m away from target
Element: N/A
Description: Bikou Ninjutsu is the technique ninjas use to follow their targets covertly. The manner in which the ninja shadows their target can differ, from the basic hiding under a nearby object, to using a jutsu to turn oneself invisible.



Kenjutsu:

Mujushin Kenjutsu:

Spoiler:
Name: Mujushin Kenjutsu
Rank: E-S
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: Water and Earth
Description: Mujushin uses orthodox Kenjutsu moves. Unlike Champuru, which uses improvisation and adaptation to win, this style seems to rely on technical skill, which is extremely proficient. Mujushin is a clinical approach that leaves very little margin for errors in observation and anticipation. The user must basically sense where their opponent is and the almost predict their moves and create a counter all in a small amount of time. While this style has a large amount of speed, the power of the style is stronger than Champuru.

Champuru Kendo:
Spoiler:
Name: Champuru Kendo
Rank: E-S
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description: Highly unorthodox swordplay and a fighting style based on breakdancing - dubbed "champuru kendo" and ostensibly developed by one of Riku's master - taking bits and pieces from all forms of martial arts and making up the rest as he fights his opponents, make him a force to be reckoned with although it looks like capoeira. The limitations of the style is his inability to fight well in small areas. The style is very rapid and almost impossible to predict or copy since all the moves are usually freestyled. While this style has a large amount of force, it realize on more speed that Mujushin, making it a flash like style.

Spoiler:
Name: Mujushin Counter: Form 1
Rank: C
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: To use this jutsu 2 swords are needed. When the user is attacked in anyway by any close range weapon, the user will deflect the attack with one sword and in the same time slash the opponent with the other sword. Timing in this jutsu is everything and it's almost impossible to avoid it since the counter attack is immediate.

Name: Champuru: Reverse Beheading
Rank: C
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: None
Description: The user does a powerful spin, generating the momentum needed to slash at any opponents behind them. The user can also utilize this spinning motion to trick an enemy that's in front of them. The enemy is fooled into thinking the user will attack them, but instead the user attacks the targets behind the user.

Name: Champuru: Crescent Moon Beheading
Rank: B
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: None
Description: The user utilizes a large extent of their physical capabilities to swing their sword in a single large arc, which occurs with such ferocious velocity that the technique can be employed in situations where only a very limited time to react is available. The swing can be used to counter attacks from multiple opponents simultaneously. The technique receives its name due to the entire movement being reminiscent of a crescent moon.

Name: Samurai Saber Technique
Rank: B
Type: Kenjutsu
Element:
Description: Unique to Samurai, this technique employs the concept of Chakra Flow similar to the Flying Swallow and Sword of Kusanagi: Chidori Katana techniques. Through the use of chakra flow, the user channels their chakra through their swords. This extends the reach and the cutting ability of the blade, and also allows the user to fire crescents of chakra whenever the blade is swung. This released chakra is capable of great destruction as shown from how it destroyed a stone pillar. The samurai have also shown the ability to use shape transformation, as they can form their chakra blades into giant buzz-saws, broad swords, spiked shafts, and axes. This ability allows them to rely on smaller swords while retaining greater reach, damage, and surprise attacks as needed.

Name: Champuru: Frontal Tornado
Rank: B
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: None
Description: Requires two swords. The user puts the blunt end part of the swords together, with the blade parts sticking outwards. They then rush towards the target with rapid speeds and basically spin like a fang over fang, though with more furious speeds and force along with the added boost of the blades. Which adds a very sharp tone to them that are able to demolish almost everything in it's path. While most might think just attacking the flesh or open parts of the user will make the jutsu absolite, the spinning speed makes finding a opening hard, unless the opponent has something like the Sharnigan.

Name: Mujushin Counter: Form 2
Rank: B
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: The user has to use one sword for this technique. When the opponent attacks with a close ranged attack, the user blocks with their sheath and instantly rips out there katana and attacks any open part on the opponents body. The most common part is usually the throat of the opponent, and the counter is usually a slice rather than a stab. This jutsu is very fast and defensive, countering most B-Ranked jutsu and even able to counter an A-Ranked Taijutsu or Kenjutsu/Weapontry.

Name: Champuru: Lightning Beheading
Rank: A
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description: The user first imbues their blade with Lightning, before slashing in the direction of the desired enemy, resulting in the creation of large arcs of intense electric beams that follow the trajectory of the previous swing.

Name: Mujushin Style: Iaidō
Rank: A
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Iaidō (居合道) is a samurai-skill where the user quick draws the blade extremely fast to strike, then re-sheathing it. This prevents enemies from using hand seals and thus ninjutsu, making it highly effective against ninja. Mifune is a master of this style, making him highly effective against ninja of Hanzō's calibre.




History:

History: History

Birth:

Riku was born on July 21 in a small hospital in the wealthy parts of Sora no Sato. His father was apart of a small Burke family which basically owned the village. His mother was apart of a family of powerful Fuinjutsu users.

Childhood:

When the young boy was 3 his older brother Drake became a Chuunin, while his younger sister was already rated Genin of the Year twice. His father was a very powerful man when it came to politics and power over the family, giving the family the very high-class life of the most powerful people in the country. Riku himself was always into enjoying himself while he was young, completely different from his siblings who were already interested in being warriors at age three. His father saw this as a curse, while his mother saw this as a blessing. Growing up Riku would spend countless hours with his mother, playing, having fun and being completely babied by her. This ceased when he entered the academy at age 7, his father had to cut the cords and make his son a warrior like the rest.

Academy:

Being of High-Class, Riku's academy was abit better than the common folks. He was taught more than the basic Nin, Gen and Tai. The teachers would instruct their students on many different things such as; War Tactics, Fuujutsu, Weapontry and weapon making, explosives, different stealth techniques and politics. Riku wasn't the class clown, though he wasn't the best student in the class. He usually barely passed everything, making the rich snobs that excelled in the class look down on him and bringing dishonor to his family. His father would constantly push him to be better and sometimes beat him until he worked harder. This made Riku distant from his father and hate him, though his skills were improved everytime his father forced him to become better. Riku Graduated from the academy at 9 and began his life as a Genin.

Genin:

Since his family was so rich they were able to hire a Jounin teacher that would train Riku in advanced skills and bring him on dangerous missions. At age 10 Riku received his first A-Ranked mission with his teacher Hibari-san, which was to transfer a prisoner to somewhere. On the way though, Riku, his teacher and another Jounin were attacked by the prisoner's dishonored clan and had to fight their way to the checkpoint. Riku was only a genin so his skills lacked the ability to harm the ninja to much, though he was able to kill a single enemy, though while the ninja was dying Riku couldn't look away from the dying stare of the man.... that was enough to distract him long enough to be stabbed in the stomach. After the enemies were killed his teachers rushed him to a hospital where medical ninja were able to heal and save him. This required trasport on a giant bird through the air... you can see how his fear of heights came into play here Once the mission was completely his father began to beat him again for almost costing the mission, though his mother pushed his father away and threatened to leave him if he ever hit Riku again. For the time being his father stopped, not ready to dishonor his family with a divorce. Though his father didn't have to beat him, his siblings did the moment his mother left....this is when the sleeping demon inside of the boy woke up. From then Riku spent all his time training, ignoring everyone, including his mother.

Chuunin:

Drake and Aoi were now both Jounin once Riku turned 12 and were constantly being praised by there father, while the boy was still putting himself through intense training. Though Hibari-san was trying to put his student through the Chuunin exam, the boy kept refusing stating "I ain't ready yet..." over and over again. This angered his father and worried his mother, Riku's happy attitude was shifted into this cold, almost hate filled person. Riku ran away from his parents home for 6 months were he found a traveling swordsman duo. At first the two resisted the idea of training Riku, but when they saw the scars from his training and beatings from his dad they agreed and began teaching him in their two seperate styles. 'Rooster-san' was adept in this wild sword style that basically read the attacks of an opponent and would add it into his own style, which freestyling the rest making this crazy erratic style. While 'Koi-San' was a powerful kenjutsu master that had control over his attacks and techniques and read attacks, finding openings and ways to overcome the opponent's defense. After the 6 months of training Riku returned home and immediantly entered the Chuunin exams. He passed without even using a single jutsu, impressing his dad to the point where he was given the family's Black Tide katana. His siblings were pissed.

Jounin:

After the exam his personality returned to it's happy, peaceful state making his mother extremely happy again, though he ignored his father and siblings completely. His father saw his son's power and constantly attempted to reach out to him, though was shunned everytime. Drake and Aoi instead saw him as a threat and planned to put him in his place. At age 14 the three siblings engaged in a powerful battle, where the two Jounin joined forces and attacked him. After the bloody battle was over, Drakes' left arm was cut off and Aoi's right eye was blinded leaving Riku as the winner, though the broken ribs would prove otherwise. The leaders of the village found out about this battle and quickly promoted Riku to Jounin rank. His father was mixed about the fight, though his son was now a famous ninja, his other two children were badly injured. This brought to life his hatred of his father and siblings which made the powerful man actually weep of his bad deeds, while his mother was completely distrought. Riku apoligized to his parents, his siblings and moved out. Over the years, Riku's powerful swordskills, speed and Fuinjutsu techniques have earned him a title in the village.

Wanderer: Once Riku turned 18 he finally had enough of the corrupt government of Sato, he fled in mid-day, escaping his village and leaving his family behind. Now he roams around looking to build his own empire.



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Re: Riku Burke Complete

Post by Unagi on Mon Jan 02, 2012 5:16 am

Nice app, can't see anything wrong here.

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Re: Riku Burke Complete

Post by The Blainiest on Mon Jan 02, 2012 2:03 pm


: Unbreakable and VERY powerful when used with chakra

Try again we do not allow unbreakable items.



Cheshire Cat: Oh, by the way, if you'd really like to know, he went that way.
Alice: Who did?
Cheshire Cat: The White Rabbit.
Alice: He did?
Cheshire Cat: He did what?
Alice: Went that way.
Cheshire Cat: Who did?
Alice: The White Rabbit.
Cheshire Cat: What rabbit?
Alice: But didn't you just say - I mean - Oh, dear.
Cheshire Cat: Can you stand on your head?
Alice: Oh!

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Post by Zenkichi on Tue Jan 03, 2012 3:25 am

Edited.

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Re: Riku Burke Complete

Post by Rowan on Tue Jan 03, 2012 5:08 pm

There are mentions of hidden villages (suna) in your history, so get rid of those, and you'll be set ^^
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Re: Riku Burke Complete

Post by Zenkichi on Tue Jan 03, 2012 7:11 pm

Does it really matter -___- just say another village or something. I'm not the only person with a histroy like this.

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Re: Riku Burke Complete

Post by Rowan on Tue Jan 03, 2012 8:06 pm

Well sooorrry I'm trying to follow the rules -_-

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