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Post by Akki Kumori on Sun Jan 01, 2012 2:57 am

Ninja Clan Information

Clan Name: Kumori

Village:

Kekkai Genkai: Demonic/Darkness release (this is not like dark element, this does not involve draining of chakra from enemy jutsu and stuff)

Kekkai Genkai Information: The control of dark molecules (a.k.a. darkness)

History: The clan originated in a valley that only got half an hour of light per week, if they were lucky. The rest of the week the whole village was surrounded in darkness, having to use candles to see. Because of the lack of light you couldnt see two feet in front of you. Every time the sun came out the people noticed how light they felt. They seemed uplifted, but because of the lack of sun they were always paler then normal. This place was always being ransacked and stolen from, being the major attack by the group that sacrificed to Jashin. A group of villagers got sick of being so defenseless. They found out through study and meditation that darkness had weight. That there were molecules that were heavier in darkness than in light. They found a way to seperate these molecules to concentrate and focus them into their chakra, making a specific jutsu. They learned how to make the dark solid and hard, how to see with the darkness, how to fuse the darkness into things to make it different. They fused it into a dog, and the dog mutated. Its eyes turned red and its fur went black, its teeth sharpened and a black mist-like substance came out of its mouth when it exhaled. Its claws extended and became sharper. The dog looked like a demon. But there was a downfall, darkness has evil intent. The dog got loose and started to kill people, randomly, any age. When a child was found missing an arm and a leg that was the last straw. They killed the dog and stopped infusing darkness into animals. The group thought the reason why was because the dog was too instintual. No one in the group was attacked, so this looked somewhat suspicious. Next they decided to fuse the darkness into a person. The transformatiopns came in four stages. 1st stage appearance the eyes became all black, they emanate black chakra, their finger nails became black and pointed. 2nd stage appearance their body became shade darker, slight horns grew on their forehead, white irises formed, four dark tentacles sprouted out of their back. 3rd stage appearance their body bulged slightly, their shadow stays in constant solid form near their body, spikes protrude from their elbows and knees and heels and shoulders, their body became even darker. 4th stage appearance their body became all pitch black, they had no shadow, the tentacles move rapidly and can form things, their body can shift shape and take the form of something else being all black. Only a couple people survived, and when they did only one could control his urge to kill. The darkness runs throughout the whole clan's blood, so they still have that inner voice trying to get them to let it out and be bad, like another personality always conscious. The clan moved away from the valley, because things got out and thrived in the dark, making it a very unsafe place to live, even for the most experienced shinobi.

Unique Insignia:

Clan Jutsu-

Name: Umbraragan
Rank: C-S
Type: Visual
Element: N/A
Description: The user's eye turns black, because the user is no longer using just their eyes to see. The user is also seeing out of every shadow in a certain radius, which increases with each rank. If the user is unskilled in this jutsu the sight can become disorienting, because of the onslaught of images being sent to their brain. After awhile of practicing the user can depict and pick out the images they need for whatever they are doing. (genin=20 foot radius, chuunin=40 foot radius, jouinin=80 foot radius, Anbu and up=160 foot radius)
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Name: Demon Synthesis
Rank: C
Type:
Element: N/A
Description: The user fuses their specific chakra with their kekkai genkai into an object, changing its physical form. This is mainly used on non-living objects, because if this is used on a living object it can corrupt its mind causing the object to attack the user's allies as well as the enemy.
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Name: Demon Hands
Rank: C-A
Type:
Element: N/A
Description: The user forms hands of darkness that look demonic in nature. These hands float next to the user. Then the user can can attack, lift, form handsigns with the hands. The stronger the user the farther they can extend the hand and the harder it can hit and last. (its the hand and forearm)
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Name: Dark Tentacle
Rank: D
Type:
Element: N/A
Description: The user forms a tentacle of darkness either from there back, forearm, or palm. The tentacle can pierce objects and wrap around them to lift them up. The stronger the user the heavier and harder the tentacle can peirce and lift up.
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Name: Solid Darkness
Rank: D-S
Type:
Element: N/A
Description: The user is able to take darkness and form solid objects out of it. E.G. shuriken, kunai, a large arm and hand, a figure. The stronger the user the longer it can last and the harder the object is. (kind of like Gaara's sand)
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Name: Oragakumi
Rank: A-S
Type:
Element: N/A
Description: The user sends a wave of darkness at the enemy, when it reaches the darkness causes damage by attacking and infecting the enemy with the darkness, breaking down the opponents structure. (kind of like ameratsu)
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Name: Unnoticeable
Rank: B
Type:
Element: N/A
Description: The user is able to use the darkness molecules in the air to seperate the light, making them unseen. The downfall to this is the brighter it is more chakra is needed to use the jutsu, and the chakra is used as long as the jutsu is active.
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Name: Phasing (not like Madara)
Rank: B
Type:
Element: N/A
Description: The user turns into a black-like mist substance and is able to move through solid objects, unforming before entering and reforming when exiting the object. This jutsu uses chakra as long as you are phased, so if you are hiding in the wall your chakra drains at a considerable rate.
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Name: Darkness Transformations
Rank: S
Type:
Element: N/A
Description: The user fuses their all of their cells in a level of saturation of four stages with darkness. The downfall to this is the fourth stage is almost never achieveable, and when it is it is almost impossible to control, as the fact the closer you get to the fourth stage the more the darkness seeps into your mind, trying to corrupt the user.
1st form appearance: eyes become all black, emanate black chakra, finger nails become black and pointed,
2nd form appearance: body becomes shade darker, slight horns on forehead, white irises; four dark tentacles come out of back,
3rd form appearance: body bulges slightly, shadow stays in constant solid from near body, spikes protrude from elbows and knees and heels and shoulders, even darker
4th form appearance: body becomes all pitch black, no shadow, tentacles move rapidly and can form things, body can shift shape,

Limitations: The clan's kekkai genkai works better when it is darker and less when it is lighter. More chakra is needed the lighter it is.

Clan Physical Attributes: The clan members' skin is paler then normal, even if they are black the member still has a sense of paleness to them.



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Post by Kento on Sun Jan 01, 2012 3:27 am

Name: Umbraragan
Rank: C-S
Type: Visual
Element: N/A
Description: The user's eye turns black, because the user is no longer using just their eyes to see. The user is also seeing out of every shadow in a certain radius, which increases with each rank. If the user is unskilled in this jutsu the sight can become disorienting, because of the onslaught of images being sent to their brain. After awhile of practicing the user can depict and pick out the images they need for whatever they are doing. (genin=20 foot radius, chuunin=40 foot radius, jouinin=80 foot radius, Anbu and up=160 foot radius)

Well this is obviously a Dōjutsu as it utilise the eyes, granting the wielder ocular abilities. As shown below:

[02:09:21] @ Hayato : Roxas do Dojutsu take up the entire KKG slot or are they simply an add-on?
[02:09:59] @ .Sokora : Hayato, they should pretty much take up the entire KKG slot.

So this would be a no.
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Name: Demon Synthesis
Rank: C
Type:
Element: N/A
Description: The user fuses their specific chakra with their kekkai genkai into an object, changing its physical form. This is mainly used on non-living objects, because if this is used on a living object it can corrupt its mind causing the object to attack the user's allies as well as the enemy.

This is a no because you can turn anything into a demonic shadow by mere touch.
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Name: Oragakumi
Rank: A-S
Type:
Element: N/A
Description: The user sends a wave of darkness at the enemy, when it reaches the darkness causes damage by attacking and infecting the enemy with the darkness, breaking down the opponents structure. (kind of like ameratsu)

This is alright to keep as long as you remove the final part about "breaking down the opponents structure." However, you may alter this technique to shoot waves & crescents of dark chakra at your opponent.
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Name: Unnoticeable
Rank: B
Type:
Element: N/A
Description: The user is able to use the darkness molecules in the air to seperate the light, making them unseen. The downfall to this is the brighter it is more chakra is needed to use the jutsu, and the chakra is used as long as the jutsu is active.

This should be an A-Rank technique, as it is the same as the Chamelion Jutsu
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Name: Phasing (not like Madara)
Rank: B
Type:
Element: N/A
Description: The user turns into a black-like mist substance and is able to move through solid objects, unforming before entering and reforming when exiting the object. This jutsu uses chakra as long as you are phased, so if you are hiding in the wall your chakra drains at a considerable rate.

This is just a flat out NO!
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Name: Darkness Transformations
Rank: S
Type:
Element: N/A
Description: The user fuses their all of their cells in a level of saturation of four stages with darkness. The downfall to this is the fourth stage is almost never achieveable, and when it is it is almost impossible to control, as the fact the closer you get to the fourth stage the more the darkness seeps into your mind, trying to corrupt the user.
1st form appearance: eyes become all black, emanate black chakra, finger nails become black and pointed,
2nd form appearance: body becomes shade darker, slight horns on forehead, white irises; four dark tentacles come out of back,
3rd form appearance: body bulges slightly, shadow stays in constant solid from near body, spikes protrude from elbows and knees and heels and shoulders, even darker
4th form appearance: body becomes all pitch black, no shadow, tentacles move rapidly and can form things, body can shift shape

This is alright by me, however it might need a second opinion. If I can make a sudgestion, I think this technique could be more badass. Where the user has more feral behavior in which they run about on all fours and attack with shadow claws on their hands. Aesthetically, the user's skin and hair would become ink black and their clothes become black with blue accents. Furthermore, they could constantly emit Darkness from their arms and back in the form of misty black and violet wisps in exchange for having no shadow
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Post by Akki Kumori on Sun Jan 01, 2012 3:34 am

okay, could umbraragan just be a jutsu then? not a dojutsu? i can make demon synthesis to non intelligent things like people and such. Why no phasing? Obvious weakness..and ya i like the idea



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Post by Kento on Sun Jan 01, 2012 3:38 am

yeah, but umbraragan would require an amount of chakra to maintain as well as the removal of "The user is also seeing out of every shadow in a certain radius, which increases with each rank."

demon synthesis would only work on inanimate objects and absolutely no living creatures.

Phasing is just OP in general due to the fact that it is basically a free dodge with no drawback.
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Post by Akki Kumori on Sun Jan 01, 2012 3:42 am

it can be done

it would be changed

and its only physical onjects. Anything chakra based it doesnt do. So its not a free dodged.



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Post by Kento on Sun Jan 01, 2012 3:45 am

ok on the first two, but Phasing is a no unless u talk to Roxas about it
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Post by The Blainiest on Mon Jan 02, 2012 3:16 pm

LOL



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Alice: Went that way.
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Alice: The White Rabbit.
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