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Hayato Kanzaki

Post by Kento on Thu Dec 29, 2011 2:57 pm


Name: Hayato Kanzaki
Nickname/Alias: The Ice Dragon
Age: 28
Gender: Male
Looks:
Hayato has short black hair and dark blue eyes with a clean cut face, he stands at 5'11" ft. Unlike most shinobi, Hayato wears durable battle armor which is fire resistant. The hood he wears goes down his back and around his waist as a sash, and is made from red dragonscales which was converted into chainmail. This attire is the usual armor which his swordsmen clan wears before going into battle and their clan symbol is on the back of the armor under his hood, which is only revealed while the hood is tied around his waist like a sash. Also, on the back of his heels are curved blades which are sharp enough to even cut through stone. However, unlike the picture above Hayato wears metal arm braces which are attached to his forearms with bandages and can block oncoming sword slashes with ease.

Hayato also a pair of arm braces with gloves with one layer of pitch-black Titanium with another layer of rubber-based material connected to the inside of them, preventing electricty from conducting and shocking the user. They take the shape of the user's hand and appear to be leather, but on feel and effectiveness, are pure Titanium on the outer-layer. Hayato is fairly muscular but to the extent where he is swift as well as strong. Generally chesty with more upper body mass but strong legs which can run swiftly and deliver powerful kicks. He built his body up to the highest that he could achieve with it, but to an extent that it would not affect his movements or slow him down, therefore he achieved the body of the perfect warrior. Basically, he has the perfect blend of mass and tonnage to create the maximum amount of flexibility and strength needed in battle. Then, he built his muscle's tonnage to have a huge amount of endurance so he can last longer in battle when needed.

Personality: Hayato is proud, cunning, cruel, and loves to fight. The lives of others hold absolutely no value to him, and he shows no remorse for his actions. As a pragmatist, he will strike without a moment's thought, warning, or hesitation. This makes him a skilled and extremely aggressive opponent, showing a mastery in hand-to-hand combat and swordsmanship. He is swift and agile, able to perform complicated and nearly impossible acrobatic feats such as jumping off of a high cliff while landing squarely on his feet. The swift warrior is also a difficult opponent to fight in close combat, as he can quickly counterattack if struck multiple times, making him very dangerous. He is also shown to be an uncaring, cold, and ruthless individual, having not the slightest sympathy for anyone.

Hayato is a highly intelligent shinobi who recognizes and detests the absurdities (both obvious and perceived) of the society in which he lives. Hayato's personality is considerably calmer and much more serious than most individuals, but he still has a habit of joking around and disrespecting those around him. Despite his current limitations in battle, he is extremely arrogant, insulting even the strongest ninja and treating Akatsuki members as mere tools. On several occasions, he has demonstrated a following of Revolutionary Socialism. This isn't to say that he lacks a softer side, as he will take steps to help and protect those he considers close friends. Shown to be an extremely skilled martial artist, Hayato oftentimes demonstrates on various occasions an ability with a katana as well as hand to hand combat that far surpasses the expected capabilities of an average shinobi. Hayato developed his own style and exhibits an incredible degree of skill as a swordsman, being capable of delivering multiple precision strikes at lightning-fast speeds.
Likes & Dislikes: Hayato is a calm minded individual who loves to fight, he dislikes weak people and those who do not show a merciless attitude when it comes to battle. Hayato often loves having intelligent conversations with people on up to date events as well as read in solitude in order to further his knowledge.
Catch Phrase: N/A




Family Name: Kanzaki
Kekkei Genkai: Ice Release: Cryokinesis is the kekkei genkai which allows the user to create and utilize complete cold and ice manipulation. Family members with this power are able to shoot rays of intense cold from their hands, feet or eyes, fire off icy constructs, and radiate cold all around them. They also have the ability to create ice crystals. The pent-up energy will finally become too much for the user's physiology to withstand, making them so intensely cold that they will start shivering on a hot summer day until they fully master their abilities. When they master their abilities they will have complete ice manipulation which causes their enemies tobe frozen in ice with an absolute zero temperature, which is so cold to the point where even the electrons stop moving in an atom. Kanzaki family members are able to form a rising column of ice beneath his feet, capable of lifting him off the ground. The tensile strength of the column is determined by its thickness, and its steadiness by how well it has been braced. A well-braced and regular column, 6 feet in diameter at its base, is able to support his weight without toppling for about 85 feet in a 40-mile per hour wind. By forming long ice-ramps connected either to his ice-column or to an existing structure like a building or a bridge, the user is able to travel above the ground by sliding down the ramp he is creating. Unless he creates supports periodically, the ramp will crack beneath him, unable to support their combined weight.

This also gives the clan members the ability to lower their external and internal body temperature, projecting intense coldness from his body. Like any normal human being's, the nerve centers for regulating the user's body temperature are found in the part of the brain called the hypothalamus. However, the user of this Kekki Genkai can mentally override his hypothalamus to allow his body temperature to be lowered by an unknown internal mechanism. This ability converts the latent thermal energies in and around his body into an unknown form of energy that is efficiently dissipated. A related mutation has rendered his body tissues unaffected by sub-zero temperatures. The user can consciously, immediately lower his body temperature from its normal 98.6 Fahrenheit to subzero (The point where all molecular motion stops.) and lower within the span of a few tenths of a second. The user can send a blast of ice out of his hands directly towards the opponent to temporarily freeze them in place. Being able to control the temperature around him, he is also able to throw hundreds of subzero-degree celsius punches in a split second if they are a Taijutsu master. This is done by charging energy in user's fist and projecting it out, causing anything that it hits to be frozen in ice with a subzero temperature. However this ability isn't just limited to his fists as he can manipulate this ability to hit an opponent in any way which will freeze them in place or spread around his entire body so anything that he touches will also freeze.

As his body temperature falls, the surrounding moisture in the air that is in contact with him is similarly lowered. Just as condensed moisture forms frost, this moisture forms an icy covering which encompasses the user's entire body. It also obscures his facial features. When the user first begins to completely lower his body temperature, this covering took on a more snow-like appearance. But as he learned to increase the severity of his coldness, the covering assumed the consistency of crystalline ice that it has today. This ice constantly cracks with any movement of his body, and immediately reforms. (Hence, there is a cracking sound when the user, covered with ice, moves.) Through practice, every member of this clan has learned to control the intensity of his coldness, and he can selectively lower the temperature of isolated parts of his body.

This also allows the ability to control moisture such as to freeze any air moisture into super-hard ice. This ice can be formed into any object of his choosing: the only limitations are his own imagination, and the ambient air temperature which determines how long his ice sculpture will stay icy. He does not have to hold the ice physically with his hands in order to shape it. Apparently he can simply direct the waves of coldness he projects in certain ways so as to create ice in the shape he desires. SubZero clan members have a practically unlimited supply of moisture at all times since it is always present in the surrounding air or environment. Even desert air has sufficient moisture content for him to make practical use of. However, the mental effort needed to employ this Kekki Genkai could eventually fatigue the user and render their freezing ability temporarily dysfunctional.

These clan members have a sense which alert them to the presence of others who have high chakra reserves(A-Rank ninja and up) through a cold sensation (sometimes causing him to shiver) and a wisp of blue mist that comes out of his mouth as if they were seeing their own breath due to cold) The members of this clan are adept in the art of swordsmanship and carry a trademark "bushido-style" katana. At some point prior to acquiring the Mist Village, they acquired a taste for bladed combat, and received lessons in sword technique from the Seven Swordsman of the Mist. In the time since then, they presumably developed their own style and exhibits an incredible degree of skill as a swordsman, being capable of delivering multiple precision strikes at lightning-fast speed. Combined with their hyperspeed they attack their opponents with their swords and if successful can hit up to sixteen times in a split-second, as just C class, which improves vastly as their powers emerge. Also, SubZero clan members have shown to be able to throw their sword with pin-point accuracy, as evidenced by being able to stab through an opponent, completely missing every vital organ and muscle.
KKG Jutsu:
Name: Organic-Ice Form
Rank: S-Rank [B to maintain]
Type: Kekki Genkai
Element: Ice
Description: This is an ability to not only cover his body with ice, but to actually become organic ice. Though the appearance is similar, the user is now actually translucent in his ice form. The user is virtually indestructible in this form; he can reform his shattered body, unless the rest of his body is completely destroyed. In this form the user will be able to use the moisture in the air to form spikes, shields and other extra appendages to his body. If this icy form is shattered, he can rebuild himself through the same process as long as there is moisture in the air. This technique requires alot of chakra and concentration to be used accurately.

Name: Ice Release: Protective Ice Dome
Rank: A-Rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Ice
Description: The user can quickly create an ice dome around his allies and/or himself to act as a defense. It is strong enough to withstand the assault of many exploding tags at once, remaining almost undamaged. The ice is said to be even harder than crystal, which means it is very difficult to shatter. Only S-Rank jutsu can destroy this dome.

Name: Ice Clone Jutsu
Rank: A-Rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Ice
Description: This is a shadow clone which will immediately freeze an opponent's body part if destroyed physically, as the target whom destroys the clone makes physical contact with it ice will completely cover their arm or leg(Whatever they used to attack it) and freeze it in place with extremely cold tempuratures. Hayato has mastered this technique to be able to perform a substitution jutsu with it at any instant after making the clone.

Name: Ice Release: Ice Spikes
Rank: A-Rank [C to sink into the spikes]
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 25 Meters
Element: Ice
Description: The user unleashes giant spikes made of ice if they are endangered, this jutsu causes a giant forest of Ice spikes to burst from the ground. Each spike can be as large as 15 feet tall. The user is able to emerge from any Ice Spike at will, giving him a deadly element of surprise should the opponent be able to avoid the attack. The user can also cause more ice spikes to emerge from any individual spike that he wishes.

Name: Weather Manipulation
Rank: B [ C-Rank to maintain]
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 30 Meters
Element: Wind & Water [Ice Release]
Description: Hayato created this technique himself by training with his ability to manipulate the surrounding tempurature with his Kekki Genkai. After performing four single-handed signs(Two with each hand), he gathers all the clouds in the sky together in order to form one giant storm cloud. Even if there are no clouds located in the area, this jutsu will automatically create them by causing the moisture in the air to mix with the force of the surrounding air current to produce multiple clouds in the sky. Hayato can then immediately cause rain, snow or hail to begin falling from the sky. This will continue to occur due to the constant chakra fueling the jutsu(every post of the user), which will constantly cause the weather to expand around the area up to 30 meters.




Province: Free Lands
Title Rank: Wanderer
Skill Rank: S-Rank




Skill Specialty:
Main: Kenjutsu
Sub: Ninjutsu
Tertiary: Taijutsu

Elemental Affinity:
Main: Wind
Sub: Water
Tertiary: Ice

Special Characteristics: Elite - Hayato is extremely skilled with both speed and agility 30% higher than any other S-Rank level Shinobi. This has caused some to mistakenly believe he can teleport, when in fact he is just moving very quickly. This incredible speed gives him an edge in battle against slower or close-range fighters. Hayato can even move so fast to the point where he produces afterimages of himself in order to confuse opponents who are unable to follow his movements.
Average - Hayato is also able to perform certain Ninjutsu by using a single hand to perform Hand Seals while fighting with a weapon in the other hand
Flaws/Weaknesses: Super - The mental effort needed to employ his Kekki Genkai could eventually fatigue him and render Hayato's freezing ability temporarily dysfunctional.
Super - Although Hayato's speed and agility is highly advanced, his strength is 30% below average.
Average - Hayato is also weak against Genjutsu



Kunai
Ninja Wire
Smoke Bombs
Exploding Shuriken
Basic Medical Equipment

Name: Double Bladed Katana
Appearance: In Character pic
Rank: S-Rank
Special Abilities: This sword can be split into two spearate swords or shifted into a double-edged sword with swords coming from each side of the hilt. Hayato can channel his chakra into the blade with chakra flow, which will increase its sharpness greatly through high frequency vibrations, as well as increasing its cutting range as well as making the sword indestructible. This would allow him to cut through almost anything, as well as numb the target who have been pierced by this chakra blade. This sword has a laserpoint-sharpened edge which can easily cut through stone without any difficulty alone but when infused with chakra it increases the sharpness & durability enough to cut through Kaguya bone as well as becoming able deflect any B-Ranked(Or under) Ninjutsu coming directly towards him. This weapon is also light and versatile, meaning it can be used for both a quick counter and in blocking/deflecting oncoming projectiles.
Origin: Hayato made this weapon himself at an early age, it is always a first resort when it comes to combat as he has been trained in swordsmanship just like the rest of his family members. His fellow clan members provided him with enough of the metal found in order to produce the blade as well as showed him how to forge it.

Name: Hidden Death
Appearance: These are a pair of arm braces with gloves with one layer of pitch-black Titanium with another layer of rubber-based material connected to the inside of them, preventing electricty from conducting and shocking the user. They take the shape of the user's hand and appear to be leather, but on feel and effectiveness, are pure Titanium on the outer-layer. However, hidden under his arm braces are 13 inch hidden blades.
Rank: A-Rank
Special Abilities: These hidden blades can be brought out at any instant with swift speed and are located above the knuckle. The arm braces and gloves can be used to block and deflect any oncoming weapons. Furthermore, the mechanism does not require a wrist "flick" to extend the blade, thus the user could retract the blade without any wrist or hand movement. The hidden blades also gives the user more freedom in movement than any other weapon. For example, Hayato could easily strafe a 180° arc while in combat, which was barely possible (except from very close range) with the sword or dagger.
Origin: Hayato forged these himself



[Hayato knows all E-Rank Jutsu as well as all his KKG Jutsu]

Name: Kai - Release (Genjutsu Cancel)
Rank: D-S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This is Hayato's Genjutsu Cancel technique, the user is able to block the chakra flow in their body, which cancels the effects of Genjutsu, even before falling to its trap. The user can also release a victim of the Genjutsu by performing needed hand seals and tapping the victim.

Name: Body Flame Technique
Rank: D-Rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: A technique similar to the Body Flicker Technique, however, there is an optical illusion in which it appears that the user disappears view slowly, when in fact they have already left. It also appears as if their body is being absorbed or burned by a flame.

Name: Body Flicker Technique
Rank: D-Rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This Jutsu is a high-speed movement technique, allowing a ninja to move short to long distances at an almost untraceable speed. To an observer, it appears as if the user has teleported or flickered away. It is accomplished by using chakra to temporarily vitalise the body and move at extreme speeds.

Name: Barrier • Dome Method Formation
Rank: B [D to maintain]
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 20 Meters
Element: N/A
Description: This technique is a Ninjutsu barrier technique which senses an opponent based on movement. After clacking his feet together, The user can extend a sensory barrier to detect the movements of a hidden foe in a large area. Should the field be slightly touched by his opponent, he will know their position immediately.

Name: AfterImage
Rank: B
Type: Taijutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Hayato developed this technique himself from an early age. This is the ability to move so swiftly that an image of the user is left behind. Most often it is used to dodge an incoming attack and get behind the opponent to perform a counter-attack. Its usage is not limited to just counterattacks though, as it can also be used to confuse enemies. This technique merely requires moving faster than the eye can see. This is a similar phenomenon to that of moving your hand back and forth very fast, and seeing a sort of afterimage of your hand. However, the speed at which Hayato can move his entire body is far too much for an average shinobi to perform. This user can distract his/her opponent with an Afterimage Technique then when the opponent attacks the false image, the user can perform a sneak attacks

Name: Shadow Clone Jutsu
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Similar to the Clone Technique, this technique creates clones of the user. However, these clones are actual copies, not illusions. The user's chakra is evenly distributed among every clone, giving each clone an equal fraction of the user's overall power. The clones are capable of performing techniques on their own and can even bleed, but will usually disperse after one or two solid blows. They can also disperse on their own. The clones will be created in roughly the same condition as the original.

Shadow clones can't be distinguished from the actual person even by the Byakugan because the clones have the exact same amount of chakra and aren't made from any other substance.

Name: Bunshin Daibakuha "Clone Great Explosion"
Rank: A-rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This Jutsu works in combination with the Shadow Clone Technique to create a shadow clone that will explode on command. The blast created is considerable, and could potentially kill an attacker engaged in hand-to-hand combat. The user lures the target in, using a Shadow Clone as bait. The target, acting according to the principle of "attack to bring down the enemy," falls victim to a powerful explosion. If one can see through the body of the Shadow Clone, it is possible to evade the blast. However, by wrapping it up in trick after trick, the target will be guided into the technique for sure. The size of the explosion is considerably large enough to blow an opponent to pieces. Hayato has mastered this technique as well and can create an explosion substitution Jutsu with its use instantaneously with a single one-handed seal.

Name: Body Flicker Technique
Rank: D-Rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This Jutsu is a high-speed movement technique, allowing a ninja to move short to long distances at an almost untraceable speed. To an observer, it appears as if the user has teleported or flickered away. It is accomplished by using chakra to temporarily vitalise the body and move at extreme speeds.

Name: Samurai Saber Technique
Rank: B
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Unique to Samurai, this technique employs the concept of Chakra Flow in which the user channels their chakra through their swords. This extends the reach and the cutting ability of the blade, and also allows the user to fire crescents of chakra whenever the blade is swung. This released chakra is capable of great destruction as shown from how it destroyed a stone pillar. The samurai have also shown the ability to use shape transformation, as they can form their chakra blades into giant buzz-saws, broad swords, spiked shafts, and axes. This ability allows them to rely on smaller swords while retaining greater reach, damage, and surprise attacks as needed.

Name: Kuzu-ryūsen
Rank: A
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This is a formidable technique which utilizes swift swordsmanship to the fullest extent; dealing nine strikes to the most fundamental targets of swordsmanship all at the same time. These points are the focus of the technique as they make up the basis of one’s guarding stance, regardless of style or weapon. So with the Kuzu-ryūsen, attacking all nine all at once, guarding and dodging become virtually pointless to an opponent without speed. It should be noted, that this move was not created for actual combat, but as a byproduct in the creation of the secret; as an initiation for the secret. If the initiate can overcome their master, then they would be ready to acquire the secret. Unlike a regular multiple strike attack, all nine strikes of the Kuzu-ryūsen carry lethal force. However, weight and power play a critical aspect in the effectiveness of the technique. This means, even if the move is executed without flaw, the force behind the technique will differ from wielder to wielder depending on their class in weight and arm strength. Speed of the attack is 20% higher than the average speed of the user.

Name: Amakakeru Ryū No Hirameki
Rank: A
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: Wind
Description: This battōjutsu technique is performed with a swift slash coming towards an opponent that has an additional step with the user’s left foot, which adds instantaneous acceleration and weight to the sword. The secret behind the technique lays in an additional step with the left foot. However, this extra step is difficult to take as one of the fundamental teaching of battōjutsu states that one should step forward with the right foot as to avoid cutting their own foot with the attack. As such, the additional step forward with the left foot can spell certain death for the swordsman, as it takes precise timing to coordinate, as to not lose any momentum while drawing; it requires the utmost concentration, which can only be obtained by one's desire to live.

In addition, if the initial strike was avoided or blocked, the force of the unusually fast slashing motion mixed with wind chakra displaces the air around it, generating a vacuum in its wake and sucking the opponent in; as this happens, the user’s body is then instantaneously spun around for a second strike, with the previous action adding force and momentum to the swing, making the subsequent strike far stronger. If either of these slashes made contact they could easily cut his opponent in half. Speed of the attack is 20% higher than the average speed of the user.

Name: Battōjutsu Soryūsen ~ Ikazuchi
Rank: B
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: “Ikazuchi” is the reverse variant of Soryūsen, wherein the blade strike follows that of the sheath. The swordsman feints battōjutsu to distract from the sheath strike and follows-up with the second blade strike. It is a highly-advanced maneuver, as the sheath strike locks the adversary and their weapon, leaving them completely vulnerable to the swordsman's blade. Speed of the attack is 10% higher than the average speed of the user.

Name: Battōjutsu Soryūsen
Rank: C
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Stance with right foot placed in front of left, pressing the blade of the sheathed sword against the curve of the sheath, which increases draw speed. The drawing of the blade is the same motion used for the attack. It is an all-or-nothing attack where missing the target results in the user being completely vulnerable. However, with a follow-up attack utilizing the sheath as its secondary strike. This second swing fully covers the period of vulnerability left after a normal battōjutsu. The user’s speed of attack is increased 5% higher than their average speed when this technique is used.

Name: Battōjutsu Hiryūsen
Rank: C
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This projectile sword-technique uses centrifugal force and the user's hand (more precisely, the thumb) to shoot the sword from inside the sheath, allowing them to strike at adversaries outside the sword's reach. The culmination of centrifugal force and hand strength makes the accuracy of the strike all the more efficient, enabling the swordsman to strike regions on the adversary such as the middle of the forehead. Some have even shown to be able to throw their sword with pin-point accuracy, as evidenced by being able to stab through an opponent, completely missing every vital organ and muscle in the human body.

Name: Ryūkansen
Rank: C
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This is a move which takes advantage of centripetal force to accelerate the draw of the blade while simultaneously avoiding the adversary's assault, shifting directly into a counterattack. The user’s speed of attack is increased 5% higher than their average speed when this technique is used.

Name: Ryūkansen ~ Tsumuji
Rank: C
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: A variation of the normal Ryūkansen, the swordsman is in motion (and airborne in one particular case) while spinning. This causes the user to use the force of the spinning to draw the sword at lightning speed. The user’s speed of attack is increased 5% higher than their average speed when this technique is used.

Name: Sonic Sheath
Rank: C
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This is a technique where the user must be at close range to their opponent. When the sword hilt connects with the sheath, the high-speed sheathing produces a sonic boom that temporarily stuns an opponent's auditory nerve, impairing their hearing and equilibrium for two of the opponent’s posts.

Name: Rapid Thrust
Rank: C
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: The user, with weapon in hand, is able to deliver a series of fast thrust at one or more targets. Being that the thrust are meant for speed not power they will never skewer a foe. It serves as a means to deliver several puncture wounds on the opponents body which could lead to a lot of blood lose if not properly attended to. The speed of the attack will always be 5% higher than the average speed of the user.

Name: Meisaigakure no Jutsu (Chameleon Jutsu)
Rank: A-Rank [D to maintain]
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This is a ninja escape technique that allows the user to control how light is reflected around their body with chakra inflections. The technique also erases the user's scent and shadow, and is usable on any terrain, making it ideal not only for covert maneuvers but also offensive strikes. Perceiving the user's position is possible only for ninja who are astute enough to observe minute variations within their surrounding environment, such as distortions of air currents in the immediate vicinity or distinguishing sounds, i.e. footsteps etc. However, the usefulness of this ability can be entirely negated by those with special vision dōjutsu or sensory skills.

Name: Wind Release: Great Breakthrough
Rank: C-Rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wind
Description: This is a relatively simple technique that creates a sudden gust of wind, but its scale varies greatly depending on the user. If used by a superior shinobi, it has enough destructive power to knock down a large tree. After bringing his hand to his mouth, the user will blow a large blast of wind capable of leveling almost anything in its way. The wind from the squall can blow away all things in the user's line of sight. A variation of the technique involves a smaller blast of wind which gets ignited with flame.

Name: Kiai
Rank: B-Rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 30 Meters
Element: Wind
Description: This is a very powerful, white-clear force of wind that emits from the user's body and that inflicts severe damage to the surrounding area. Alternatively, this force can be used to dispel weaker attacks. The blast's power, speed, range, and force vary based on its user; however, there are also variations of the technique that have been shown to have different effects. This can be expelled from the hands, mouth and feet without even facing an opponent. This is basically Hayato's own improved version of Wind Release: Great Breakthrough.

Name: Beast Wave Palm
Rank: A-Rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wind
Description: A powerful jutsu of wind nature chakra that can cut and slash through almost any material. The user activates it by summoning chakra in his right hand, and then swipes a slicing chakra wave which appears to be controlled by Sora's will and thoughts. He is also able to use the technique in a rapid-fire, succesive motion.

Name: Fūton: Jūha Reppū Shō "Wind Release: Beast Wave Violent Wind Palm"
Rank: A-Rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wind
Description: This jutsu uses chakra infused in ones hand and condenses a mass amount of wind to form a massive demonic-like claw extending from the user’s hand to strike and grab a target, as well as deflect any weapon or attack. In addition to making it a deadly short range weapon, the extending claw also carries tremendous force that can devastate anything in its path without affecting the user, making it useful for dislodging solid and heavy objects.

Name: Shinkūgyoku "Wind Release: Vacuum Sphere"
Rank: A-Rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wind
Description: The user takes a deep breath and exhales several small blasts of wind chakra. The blasts are capable of piercing into an opponent's flesh, similar to bullets. It is similar to Wind Release: Vacuum Wave, but instead of shooting one large blast, it shoots several smaller ones.

Name: Fūton: Shinkū Taigyoku "Wind Release: Vacuum Great Sphere"
Rank: A-Rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: wind
Description:A stronger version of the Wind Release: Vacuum Sphere technique, where the user instead chooses to compress the entirety of the previously inhaled breath into a single large, crushing sphere of wind chakra that they then proceed to expel from their mouth. Basically the user launches a large, explosive bullet of wind chakra from their mouth.

Name: Whirlwind Fists
Rank: B-Rank
Type: Taijutsu/Ninjutsu
Element: Wind
Description: By only spinning his arms in a circular motion with great speed and harnessing the Futon Chakra into their hands, a small twister forms around the user's wrist. The middle is hollow, allows the user to punch the opponent. This technique does not require any hand seals to use, relying only on the chakra control of the user. Once it is complete, it becomes completely self-sustaining. The compacted nature and moving speed of the chakra allows the whirlwind to grind into whatever it comes in contact with to inflict major damage. Should the target dodge, the force of the sharp winds would knock them back, if not cutting them. This technique can be used as a shield against point-blank attacks as well as be used by both arms.

Name: Wind Levitation
Rank: A-Rank [D to maintain]
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wind
Description: This is a Ninjutsu technique which Hayato developed to manipulate the wind chakra around him in order to give him the ability to fly and maneuver using the wind currents in mid-air by constantly emitting chakra waves down towards the surface through his feet to lift and propel himself. The wind based speed has a limit, as he cannot exceed the speed of the wind itself. However, his own speed more than makes up for this flaw. He can fly really high in the air so long as he has enough chakra and have proper chakra control. While in flight, he is able to maintain complete balance.

Hayato mainly uses this technique for quick melee attacks in battle, often employing hit and run tactics, and flying away to avoid potentially dangerous situations. He can easily defend himself from long range as well. While this gives him an advantage over slower ground based opponents, he can only fly as fast as the wind can take him.

Name: Blade of Wind
Rank: A-Rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wind
Description: This technique is a pinpoint slashing strike, where the user emits chakra from their fingertips and materializes it into an invisible sword that assaults the enemy in a gust of wind and making a slicing sound. This jutsu is an uncatchable, unavoidable longsword. It leaves very deep slashes on the enemy. However this jutsu can be dodged if the opponent has a speed multiplier jutsu and knows that the attack is coming

Name: Wind Barrier
Rank: A-Rank [C to keep sustained]
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 10 Meters
Element: Wind
Description: After four hand signs, the user can harness the surrounding wind currents to form a dome or full body barrier of wind in order to protect themselves from various oncoming attacks. The technique gives off a loud bell-like screech after being formed. The wind is thin and sharp enough to countless microscopic wind-blades that damage the body on a cellular level and cut a close-range opponent into pieces. The constant flow of wind is mainly used in order to block or deflect certain oncoming attacks in another direction somewhat like a tornado. This technique can successively block against A-Rank jutsu, the shield is basically coating their body with chakra and expelling it out and molding it into a full body shield, which is a visable dome of wind that covers 360 degrees of the whole body from up down and all around and anyone caught in it other than the user will be severely injured

Name: Wind Kunai Blade
Rank: B-Rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wind
Description: The user exhales wind chakra onto a Kunai which expands into a sharp blade shaped like a scimitar which can penetrate a human body with ease. One advantage with this is that it retains both the light weight and versatility of the knife while gaining the length of a sword. This seems to involve changing both the shape and nature of one's chakra.

Name: Kazeryuu no Jutsu "Wind Dragon Technique"
Rank: S-Rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wind
Description: The user calls upon a a vortex portal at their side, which then turns into a wind dragon that has a body of a spinning tornado. The dragon is bound at its origin to the portal but can extend out to be Mid-Range. The dragon also has the power to blow away most obstacles, or to cut them apart if they are unwilling to be moved. The dragon can last for up to four posts.

Name: Shuriken Shadow Clone Technique
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Shuriken Kage Bunshin no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique that uses Clone Jutsu to create multiple physical clone copies from one thrown shuriken. It is A-ranked because the jutsu creates nearly 100 copies of the thrown weapons. This is a technique that combines ninja tools with ninjutsu. Compared to normal shadow clones, clones of material objects are said to be on a far higher level. There is no need for preparations beforehand, like stocking up on shuriken, yet since the shadow clones are real and not illusions, all the shadow blades that fly around are equally lethal.

Name: Water Wall
Rank: B-Rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Description: This defensive technique creates a wall of water around the user. Enemy attacks are completely intercepted by a fence of water blown out from the mouth, and is raised from below with tremendous might. The water is blown out in the form of a circle around the user, and it makes for a defence without openings. It is also possible for the user to control the amount of water and duration at will. The wall's strength and resistance change following the quantity of chakra poured down into the water, so a skilful shinobi will be able to build a sturdy one. Furthermore, because the field of vision is maintained even while defending one can easily go on to the next move, which is a great advantage. The wall can also be formed from a pre-existing water source.

Name: Water Clone Jutsu
Rank: C-Rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Description: The Water Clone Technique is similar to the Shadow Clone Technique except it creates clones out of water that have one-tenth of the original person's power. Like other solid clone techniques, the clones can be used to perform tasks the user is unable or unwilling to do for themselves. The range of the clone is limited however, as it can not travel very far from the original body without losing control. Like other clone techniques, if the water clones are injured enough they will revert back to normal water. Hayato has mastered this technique to where he can substitue himself with one of these clones at any instant with a single handed seal.

Name: Water Substitution Jutsu
Rank: C-Rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Description: This is a technique where the user can replace his body with any amount of water in the area within a 20 meter radius. Hayato has mastered this technique to where he can perform this substituion with a single handed seal.

Name: Water Prison Technique
Rank: C-Rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Description: This jutsu is used to trap a victim inside a virtually inescapable sphere of water. The only downside to this technique is that the user must keep at least one arm inside the sphere at all times in order for the victim to remain imprisoned. This jutsu requires a sufficient amount of water, which can be provided by expelling it from one's mouth. Despite the fact that the prison is made up entirely out of water, it is stronger than steel as stated by Zabuza Momochi. Once trapped the target is unable to move while within it due to the heaviness of the water. Because of the density of the water it can be used, to a limited extent, for defensive purposes if performed on oneself.

Name: Water Release: Great Waterfall Technique
Rank: A-Rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Description: This technique extends water over a large scale, surges and rises up to several dozen meters high. Then it streams down to the ground in one big cascade, much like a gigantic waterfall. In doing so, it resembles a huge wave, with tremendous power that can hollow out the ground. What remains after that technique's utilization is reminiscent of no less than the aftermath of a natural disaster. This is a considerably advanced ninjutsu, and activating this technique requires a fair amount of chakra.

Name: Water Release: Five Feeding Sharks
Rank: B-Rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Description: The user puts his hand on the surface of a body of water and from the tips of five fingers, chakra is released into the water, changing it into the form of five ferocious sharks. The sharks circle the target with high speed, creating a raging stream that takes away their prey's freedom of movement and their sharp teeth tear into the enemy with each consecutive attack. These sharks can regenerate from surrounding water, making them difficult to destroy.

Name: Water Release: Shark Bullet Technique
Rank: B-Rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Description: The user shapes water into the form of a large shark, and thrusts their hand forward sending it towards the opponent. The shark moves at high-speeds and creates a powerful impact. The user can also ride inside the water shark to increase their swimming speed.

Name: Water Release: Water Dragon Bullet Technique
Rank: B-Rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Description: This technique shapes a large amount of water into a giant, powerful dragon, which hits the opponent with formidable might, dealing physical damage. The ideal place to use it is near a body of water, but if the user's skill allows it, it is possible to use it even in a place where there is none. The amount of water used will be in proportion with the user's skill.

Name: Water Release: Water Mirror Technique
Rank: S-Rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Description: The user creates a large, flat, circular pool of water in front of their opponent. Its surface acts like a mirror, perfectly reflecting the attacking targets. By then hooking onto and rotating the 'mirror' 90° with their weapon, the reflections emerge and materialise from the mirror, where they collide with the mirrored targets. As these reflections use the exact same techniques as the enemy regardless of its type, they counter their respective target's attack completely, while repelling them in the process. However, upon impact, the reflections disperse back into water.

Name: Hidden Mist Technique
Rank: D-Rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Water
Description: This displacement technique which is usually a speciality of the ninja from Kirigakure, where one causes a mist to spring forth by lifting up some water, then goes in and out of sight at will from within the pearly-white realm. The mist's thickness is controlled by the amount of chakra kneaded into it. It can't fool the Byakugan, but, due to the mist being created with the user's chakra, any Sharingan-user will see the mist coloured by their opponent's chakra, which will effectively hide the user from almost any form of dōjutsu.




History:
Pre-Academy Ark:
Hayato was born in the Kanzaki family located in the cold snowy climate area and was praised by all as the best of his generation; a genius above all others. Even by the standards of the battle-adept Seven Swordsmen of the Mist, Hayato's prowess far outshined any of them. He was the eldest son of his family, he had a younger sister who was born 8 years after him. The clan possessed a proficiency in ice jutsu, which Hayato mastered with ease. At the mere age of 10 Hayato mastered his abilities while training with his father. It was now time for him to join the ninja academy. Even as a child who had yet to begin in the Academy, he had enough prowess to kill 100 trained students single handedly.
Academy Ark:
Hayato had discovered his mastery of ice manipulating abilities growing up at an early age, as one day he got into a fight with another child and his fist froze another academy student in place. First thing that happened was mastering all the E-Ranked jutsus, as this was the basic skills which every ninja needed to know. Hayato mastered all the E-Ranked jutsus with ease, but soon began to fight the other students after feeling that he wasn't being challenged enough. After being branded an out-of-control child, he was then abandoned by his parents at a young child, Hayato was found wandering the streets by a Rogue Shinobi whom happened to be an expert on the ways to manipulate ice. This man's name was Kento Uchiha, a Rogue shinobi from the west whom had much to teach this young warrior about his abilities.
Ninja Ark:
Hayato left the area he was born after studying the main jutsu of the village in order to become a successful water ninja. Kento Uchiha trained the young warrior how to withstand pain by placing him in the ultimate Genjutsu known as Tsukuyomi on a daily basis. This would alter the perception of time and allow Hayato to hone his skills as a ninja for years within his own mind without causing any mental trauma whatsoever. Hayato trained furiously day after day in order to hone and improve his skills to the fullest capacity. Hayato became a master of fighting in the dark, he is even good enough to track and kill opponents through sound alone.

Hayato enjoyed reading books which told the story of history in the Shinobi world; being trained by a rogue was difficult enough without hearing how truly horrible society was when it came to their view of missing ninja. Leaving the area gave him the joy of growing up a care-free like with the acception of training every day. This improved his combat skills as he trained to become the best at mastering Taijutsu, this would help him succeed in becoming a great rogue shinobi. His talents were expressed and improved each day as he progressed, he would soon be considered a real Shinobi to the outside world, unofficial of course.
Rurouni Ark:
Eventually his master died in a great and epic battle, although Hayato did not mourn over the death of his Sensei he still felt lost without him. With nowhere to go and nobody to turn to he allowed himself to become a cold blooded killing machine. Hayato would take on many people at a time, showing neither fear nor remorse for his actions. Hayato decided to wear a hood rather than a headband, it was best that nobody even have a clue of his true abilities.

Hayato obtained a tattoo of a tribal dragon on his right arm after he slayed a great serpent dragon in battle, this earned him the title of the ice dragon. Hayato would now be marked forever and be able to be spotted by opponents who wish to have him slayne, however the cocky warrior is willing to take on any who challenge him.
Current Ark:
Hayato is now a traveler among the world, he walks in silence among the shadows. Not knowing who he truly is or why he has the abilities that he does, but regardless he honed his skills to their best capacity in order to achieve both enlightenment and balance with the world around him. Hayato has demonstrated a depth of understanding that would seem to surpass his young age, such as knowing roughly what is going to happen in the future based on the actions and personalities of the people involved. Oratorical gifted, Hayato has shown the ability to seize and hold the attention of entire crowds of people when he wants to do so. This means he decides whenever he wants to be stealthy or merely attract attention to himself.
RP Sample:
Kento had just killed the moon spirit Yue and completely eliminated Waterbending from the face of the Earth. The skies were red from the unbalancing corruption upon the world that Kento himself had caused, Kento's favorite color was red so he loved it.

Avon had given him a mission, eliminate the Southern Water Tribe. Kento journeyed by turning his body into pure light and traveled at the speed of light directly to the Southern Water Tribe which was all the way across the world.

This took him less than a week to reach, there were only 200 soldiers left from Kaimu's alliance with Kyoko in which they split soldiers among each other. Kento had killed the old Southern Water Tribe leader and took his share of the soldiers to be added among his own army which was still in the Elemental Nations.

Kento appeared out of thin air in the middle of the Southern Water Tribe "My name is Kento! I am the one who killed Kaimu your old leader and destroyed the Northern Water Tribe! I have come here to kill you all!" Kento was suddenly surrounded by the last remaining 200 Southern Water Tribe soldiers. "You have brought about the destruction of the world and took away our bending! You are foolish to think that you could possibly take us on by yourself! Unlike the Northern Water Tribe, we do not rely on our bending so it was useless!" a soldier in wolf armor declared in anger, Kento drew the Buster Sword off of his back "Finally, a chance to use this thing. Too bad it couldn't be against anyone stronger" Kento said aloud as he was excited for the battle, he simply took a defensive stance and awaited their first move.

The man charged in anger at Kento's remark with a long sword made of bone, Kento used his master swordsmanship to slide down the blade with his Buster Sword and chopped the man in half. Kento looked at the sword as it had finally drew blood, and Kento's new personality liked it. Kento had grown up as an assassin for 4 years of his life, this was after he had killed his old master Yomado as a final test of his abilities for him to be free in the world.

Kento had killed many throughout his life, but something about his new personality made him enjoy it more than ever before. He hadn't been this happy since he killed the man who betrayed his father and got his home village destroyed. Kento looked up at the other 199 men standing around him, they were angry and Kento wanted to feed their anger "Come on! Come and get me you cowards!"

The men charged together, one after another Kento slew them easily with his Buster Sword. Kento killed them each by cutting a limb off, their blood soaked him along with the Buster Sword, his eyes thirsted for more blood. A soldier charged him with a spear, Kento cut the end of the spear off and hit the man in the gut which made the man move back with just a wooden stick. Kento felt with his seismic sense and felt that there were exactly 174 soldiers left alive.

Kento stuck the Buster Sword in the ground "Use brings about wear, tear and rust. Such a waist for a perfectly good weapon, wouldn't you agree?" Kento said in a mocking tone to the soldiers as he took his metal staff off of his back "Time for some fun" Kento said aloud with a small laugh. The soldiers looked at him. Some with pure anger and hatred, some with fear and some who were just annoyed. Kento stepped away from the Buster Sword and stood with his staff ready for anything, the men all charged at the same time and Kento smirked at their attempt to take his life.

Kento moved in a precise movement matching the soldier's speed blow for blow, he blocked everything coming his way and redirected their attacks back towards them with the sharp end of his staff and slit some of their throats and just whacked others away by hitting them in the head with the dull side. He continued to do this and was laughing as he did so. Suddenly, Kento saw that a man had taken his Buster Sword out of the ground and charged his recklessly at Kento. This angered Kento as he simply converted the weapon's structure into magma while in the soldier's hands before he reached Kento. Kento heard the sound of the man's pain and loved it. The soldiers now knew not to touch that sword or they would suffer his same fate.

Kento then Magma bended the buster sword the be in the ground like before and then converted it back into the special underworld steel it was made from while still holding his staff. Kento saw that there were now 126 soldiers left around him, they now surrounded him with shields and spears pointed at him. They were standing exactly 12 feet away from Kento and began closing in on him.

Kento took out his exploding shurrikans, lit then between his fingers with heat bending and threw exactly 28 of them at all the men surrounding him at high speed due to his doubled agility. They were blocked by the shields of course, but it blew them back away from Kento and destroyed the shields. Kento used this chance and made his fire scythe out of his staff and made the flame solid with lightbending. "Solar Flare!" Kento exclaimed as he made the sun rays emit a blinding light from Kento's body which would leave anybody looking at him temporarily blind. And with no shields, everybody surrounding Kento would not be blind for 5 minutes.

Kento light bended his body to turn into pure light and reappeared in the middle of the soldiers and began slaying them while he had the element of surprise on his side. He used his agility to slay them all quickly by cutting and burning their flesh. He continued this for 5 minutes strait until there was only a mere 75 soldiers left surrounding him. Kento knew if he continued to use the fire scythe any longer it could break so he stuck it in the ground next to his Buster Sword by the sharp end.

Kento then drew his Double-Bladed Katana "Huh, I haven't used this sword in awhile" Kento transfused lightning within the sword and charged the men armed with long swords. Kento once again used his master swordsmanship in order to slice up their bodies and stun them by getting shocked along with being cut, he dodged every attack they made towards him with a counter attack. He did this until there was only 50 men left that were armed with bone daggers.

Kento quit transfusing the lightning and sheathed his Katana and laughed as he saw that the last 50 men were the youngest in the tribe, he had killed all the oldest men there "Let's Go!" Kento demanded as he created his Chidori Beam: a beam of pure lightning that can reach up to 10 feet very quickly, which can cut through people and objects like a blade, and it is made solid with lightbending.

Kento was considered a High Lord when he created this technique, but he was now known as a Master so he created a 2nd one that he now held in his metal hand but made them both a simple 5 feet long beam. Kento used his fire jets to move quickly among the young warriors in a break dancing movement on the ground. So all together Kento was chopping men up with the Chidori Beam, slicing their throats with heated heel blades, and they were being blasted in the face by the fire jets.

Kento retracted the Chidori Beams and lowered himself while laughing at the last remaining 10 warriors who had pure fear on their face as they gazed upon the Blood soaked Kento under the red sky. Kento began laughing louder upon the scared look on their faces "You believed you could kill 'me'!?" Kento said to the young 10 warriors "I am the one who made the sky cry tears of blood! I made the sky bleed after I destroyed the source of waterbending! I have even slayed an undead dragon within the depths of hell! That is why they call me..." Kento extended his arm in a punch-like motion in order to create his Black Fire Dragon which now reached 30 feet long and Kento made it solid with lightbending "The Black Dragon!"

It wrapped its body around the 10 young boys and burned them alive, Kento then fire jetted himself in the air and controlled the Fire Dragon to burn the villagers alive along with destroying their homes and then made it explode in the middle of all the villagers. Kento then fire jetted himself to be in front of the sun, he was absorbing the energy from the sun in order to gather his energy in firebending. He then shot a GIANT ball of fire he made solid with lightbending and then made it explode.

Every surviving person was on fire, so they ran into the water in order to put it out. Kento laughed as he saw the survivors begin to swim away, so he simply gathered his lightning into a ball to create his Chidori and simply dropped it in the water. They all burned alive as the lightning ball conducted into everybody and everything in the water, Kento saw as all their bodies along with the bodies of dead fish floated to the surface.

Kento had succeeded in his mission, everybody here was dead and the Southern Water Tribe was no more. He lightbended his body to disappear and reappear by his staff and Buster sword. He picked them up, put them on his back then lightbended himself away and headed back to the Elemental Nations to meet up with his Master Avon. He was now more than a Master, he had taken down an entire tribe by himself, he was now an Elite Master.


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Re: Hayato Kanzaki

Post by Unagi on Thu Dec 29, 2011 4:29 pm

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Name: Organic-Ice Form
Rank: S-Rank
Type: Kekki Genkai
Element: Ice
Description: This is an ability to not only cover his body with ice, but to actually become organic ice. Though the appearance is similar, the user is now actually translucent in his ice form. The user is virtually indestructible in this form; he can reform his shattered body, unless the rest of his body is completely destroyed. In this form the user will be able to use the moisture in the air to form spikes, shields and other extra appendages to his body. If this icy form is shattered, he can rebuild himself through the same process as long as there is moisture in the air. This technique requires alot of chakra and concentration to be used accurately.

How many posts does this last?

Name: Ice Release: Protective Ice Dome
Rank: A-Rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Ice
Description: The user can quickly create an ice dome around his allies and/or himself to act as a defense. It is strong enough to withstand the assault of many exploding tags at once, remaining almost undamaged. The ice is said to be even harder than crystal, which means it is very difficult to shatter.

This is fine, though I would ask you to define exactly how hard it is to destroy? Since its an A-rank technique I assume it can also stop up to A-rank techniques, but that still needs to be added.


Name: Ice Release: Ice Spikes
Rank: B-Rank [D to sink into the spikes]
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 25 Meters
Element: Ice
Description: The user unleashes giant spikes made of ice if they are endangered, this jutsu causes a giant forest of Ice spikes to burst from the ground. The user is able to emerge from any Ice Spike at will, giving him a deadly element of surprise should the opponent be able to avoid the attack. The user can also cause more ice spikes to emerge from any individual spike that he wishes.

How big are these individual spikes? How many square meters of ground will be covered? Also if this is an ice version of Kimimaro’s technique than this needs to be A-rank at least, maybe even S.

Special Characteristics and Flaws

There are new rules concerning these, and a template. More can be read here

Jutsu

Name: Bunshin Daibakuha "Clone Great Explosion"
Rank: B-rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This Jutsu works in combination with the Shadow Clone Technique to create a shadow clone that will explode on command. The blast created is considerable, and could potentially kill an attacker engaged in hand-to-hand combat. The user lures the target in, using a Shadow Clone as bait. The target, acting according to the principle of "attack to bring down the enemy," falls victim to a powerful explosion. If one can see through the body of the Shadow Clone, it is possible to evade the blast. However, by wrapping it up in trick after trick, the target will be guided into the technique for sure. The size of the explosion is considerably large enough to blow an opponent to pieces. Hayato has mastered this technique as well and can create an explosion substitution Jutsu with its use instantaneously with a single one-handed seal.

Lol, I remember talking about this on Broken Strings Razz A-rank


Name: Heat Sensitivity
Type: Kekki Genkai
Rank: B-Rank
Element: Ice
Description: Subzero clan members have the ability to lower their external and internal body temperature, projecting intense coldness from their body. Like any normal human being's, the nerve centers for regulating the user's body temperature are found in the part of the brain called the hypothalamus. However, the user of this Kekki Genkai can mentally override his hypothalamus to allow his body temperature to be lowered by an unknown internal mechanism. This ability converts the latent thermal energies in and around his body into an unknown form of energy that is efficiently dissipated. A related mutation has rendered his body tissues unaffected by sub-zero temperatures. The user can consciously, immediately lower his body temperature from its normal 98.6 Fahrenheit to absolute zero (The point where all molecular motion stops.) and lower within the span of a few tenths of a second. As his body temperature falls, the surrounding moisture in the air that is in contact with him is similarly lowered.

This is not really a time based Jutsu; it is more of a mental Jutsu, though classified as Ninjutsu because it is not an illusion. This Jutsu can speed up the reaction time of the user, to where a split second can equal up to 2 minutes within the user’s mind even if their body doesn’t have time to react. So due to the fact that this would make Hayato more sensitive to heat, this would allow Hayato to distinguish what’s real and what isn’t if a Genjutsu is in effect. This is due to the fact that all creatures give off body heat, and the user would be able to feel the body heat from the attacker. So if Hayato doesn’t see that he is being attacked but feels the body heat from something, he will know instantly that it is an illusion or a clone. Thus, automatically making all Genjutsu an obvious illusion depending on the nature of it.

This may be a yes or a no depending on what you do with your flaws. I don’t want this to become a way to basically ignore your genjutsu weakness.


Name: Wind Barrier
Rank: A-Rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 20 Meters
Element: Wind
Description: After four hand signs, the user can harness the surrounding wind currents to form a dome or full body barrier of wind in order to protect themselves from various oncoming attacks. The technique gives off a loud bell-like screech after being formed. The wind is thin and sharp enough to countless microscopic wind-blades that damage the body on a cellular level and cut a close-range opponent into pieces. The constant flow of wind is mainly used in order to block or deflect certain oncoming attacks in another direction somewhat like a tornado. This technique can successively block against A-Rank jutsu, the shield is basically coating their body with chakra and expelling it out and molding it into a full body shield, which is a visable dome of wind that covers 360 degrees of the whole body from up down and all around and anyone caught in it other than the user will be severely injured

Is this sustained? Also, the range says 20 meters. What does this mean, because a 20 meter large dome is a no.

That’s all for now.

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Re: Hayato Kanzaki

Post by Kento on Thu Dec 29, 2011 4:43 pm

fixed and removed everything you told me to
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Re: Hayato Kanzaki

Post by .Zack on Thu Dec 29, 2011 4:57 pm

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Post by Suijin on Thu Dec 29, 2011 5:04 pm

Denied. Fix your history. No village ever existed.
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Post by Kento on Thu Dec 29, 2011 5:09 pm

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Re: Hayato Kanzaki

Post by Suijin on Thu Dec 29, 2011 5:31 pm

Name: Organic-Ice Form
Rank: S-Rank [C to maintain]
Type: Kekki Genkai
Element: Ice
Description: This is an ability to not only cover his body with ice, but to actually become organic ice. Though the appearance is similar, the user is now actually translucent in his ice form. The user is virtually indestructible in this form; he can reform his shattered body, unless the rest of his body is completely destroyed. In this form the user will be able to use the moisture in the air to form spikes, shields and other extra appendages to his body. If this icy form is shattered, he can rebuild himself through the same process as long as there is moisture in the air. This technique requires alot of chakra and concentration to be used accurately.
Make it B-rank to maintain and you can reform your head if it is shattered or decapitated.

Name: Absolute Zero
Rank: A-Rank
Type: Kekki Genkai/Taijutsu
Element: Ice
Description: This is a technique developed by Hayato which gives him complete Ice manipulation. The user can send a blast of ice out of his hands directly towards the opponent to temporarily freeze them in place. Being able to control the temperature around him, he is also able to throw hundreds of subzero-degree celsius punches in a split second. He does this by charging energy in his fist and projecting it out, causing anything that it hits to be frozen in ice with an absolute zero temperature, which is so cold to the point where even the electrons stop moving in an atom. However this ability isn't just limited to his fists as he can manipulate this ability to hit an opponent in any way which will freeze them in place or spread around his entire body so anything that he touches will also freeze.

Remove, this encompasses multiple techniques in one. They must be spread out into multiple techniques.

Name: Ice Clone Jutsu
Rank: A-Rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Ice
Description: This is a shadow clone which will immediately freeze an opponent's body part if destroyed physically, as the target whom destroys the clone makes physical contact with it ice will completely cover their arm or leg(Whatever they used to attack it) and freeze it in place with extremely cold tempuratures. Hayato has mastered this technique to be able to perform a substitution jutsu with it at any instant.

Add in that the Ice Clone must first be created in order to substitute with it. You can't just create it on the spot in your place.

Name: Ice Release: Ice Spikes
Rank: A-Rank [D to sink into the spikes]
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 25 Meters
Element: Ice
Description: The user unleashes giant spikes made of ice if they are endangered, this jutsu causes a giant forest of Ice spikes to burst from the ground. Each spike can be as large as 15 feet tall. The user is able to emerge from any Ice Spike at will, giving him a deadly element of surprise should the opponent be able to avoid the attack. The user can also cause more ice spikes to emerge from any individual spike that he wishes.

C-rank per post to sink into the spikes.

Name: Weather Manipulation
Rank: C [ D-Rank to maintain]
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 30 Meters
Element: Wind & Water [Ice Release]
Description: Hayato created this technique himself by training with his ability to manipulate the surrounding tempurature with his Kekki Genkai. After performing four single-handed signs(Two with each hand), he gathers all the clouds in the sky together in order to form one giant storm cloud. Even if there are no clouds located in the area, this jutsu will automatically create them by causing the moisture in the air to mix with the force of the surrounding air current to produce multiple clouds in the sky. Hayato can then immediately cause rain, snow or hail to begin falling from the sky. This will continue to occur due to the constant chakra fueling the jutsu(every post of the user), which will constantly cause the weather to expand around the area up to 30 meters.

Weather manipulation is an incredible feat. B-rank plus C-rank to maintain.




Remove all instances of cannon ranks from your application. You mention "Sannin" in some places such as your Special Characteristics.




Your history still mentions a Hidden Village. There has not been a Hidden Village yet and for your age you could not have possibly even been born in one of the current villages.




That's all I'll check for now. Fix them. :O:
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Re: Hayato Kanzaki

Post by Kento on Thu Dec 29, 2011 11:30 pm

Fixed
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Re: Hayato Kanzaki

Post by Rowan on Fri Dec 30, 2011 12:09 am

Approved (unless someone says otherwise)
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Re: Hayato Kanzaki

Post by Nuitari Kouga on Fri Dec 30, 2011 5:08 am

Denied.

See this guide for how to adjust your SC and Flaws
http://www.narutold.com/t1147-special-characteristics-guide

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Re: Hayato Kanzaki

Post by Kento on Fri Dec 30, 2011 11:46 am

FIXED!!!!!!! I am officially finished now -_-
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Re: Hayato Kanzaki

Post by Unagi on Fri Dec 30, 2011 11:47 am

Approved unless a higher staff says otherwise.
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