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Name: Lu Xun
Nickname/Alias: The Red Dragon of The Sky Village
Age: 21
Gender: Male
Looks:

Cloths
Lu Xun likes to wear an officer like uniform so that he is known throughout the village in the sky. The uniform is red and white in colour and has feathers where the officers rank would go it also has bit of cold type tasles on it. Lu Xun would wear a pair of black officer boots with this outfit as well.

Looks
Lu Xun as short shoulder length brown hair that is always kept need and tidy as he has set himself standards to maintain and uphold using his image to make an example. Lu Xun is extreamly hansome looking he has lots of woman in the village who follow him around like a fan troupee or trying to kiss him but he shugs off all these emotions and feeling as he has to set an example.

Personality:A man of few words and many strikes, he has been known to enter a battle and exit without a single sound coming from his lips. Raised as an orphan an abused as a drifter Lu Xun grew up as a fighter and was forced to kill in order to survive. This warrior's mind set has taken over any kindness that he might have buried deep down was killed at a young age and he only views things in ways that can some how benefit him in some way.

Lu Xun likes to make sure he follows orders set by the fedal lord at all cost and will often bow to her in acceptance of an order or request. Lu Xun loves to train but always does so in a profession and easy method, when he is training the shinobi in the village of the Skys he would often displine anyone who is not doing something correct.

Likes & Dislikes:

Likes: Eating, Training, Doing as the feudal lord wishs, Fedual Lord, keeping the discplined in the shinobi, Follows orders

Dislikes: Peace, Talking

Catch Phrase: "Get your Ass in line"




Family Name: Xun
Kekkei Genkai: Lava Release

Lava Release (熔遁; 溶遁, Yōton; Viz "Corrosion Style" or "Lava Style") is an advanced nature kekkei genkai that combines fire and earth-based chakra to create lava and related substances that can serve multi-faceted purposes.
KKG Jutsu:
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Name: Lava Release Armour
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lava
Range: (Optional for cannon jutsu.)
Description: The user envelops their entire body in a coating of lava that enhances the damage of their physical attacks. Due to the extreme heat generated by the lava, the user is capable of burning the target without coming into direct contact with them. In addition to the offensive damage the armour can inflict, it can also be used for defensive purposes, as it acts as a deterrent towards those who wish to attack the user physically.

Name: Lava Release: Lava Geyser
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lava
Range: (Optional for cannon jutsu.)
Description: This technique creates a lava geyser that emerges from the soil, and advances directly against the opponent. A strong Water Release technique can extinguish the lava pods.

Name: Lava Release: Melting Apparition Technique
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lava
Range: 0-15 Metres
Description: The user releases a large amount of lava from their mouth, which spreads into a broad, thin sheet as it travels through the air. Since the lava is shot upwards in an arc, so as to descend onto the targets from above, it prevents the intended individuals from jumping up to avoid the attack. A great deal of steam is created afterwards by the effects of the lava, so should the targets still be alive, a follow-up attack can be conducted while their vision remains obscured.

Name: Lava Release: Quicklime Congealing Technique
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lava
Range: (Optional for cannon jutsu.)
Description: The user expels a large quantity of quicklime from their mouth, which is capable of inflicting damage to an opponent. This ability can also be manipulated in order to restrict the intended target's movements, as after the initial blast the remnants of the substance can act in a similar manner to quick-drying cement. However, the technique requires the subsequent addition of water to set off the necessary reaction to make the substance harden. This can be easily achieved through the subsequent use of a water release technique, which can also serve to increase the area covered by the substance, thus further increasing the potential range of the technique.


Name: Lava Release: Rubber Ball
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lava
Range: (Optional for cannon jutsu.)
Description: The user expels a large glob of lava from their mouth, which quickly solidifies into a hollow ball that can be used to protect an object by surrounding it with the durable rubber-like material. The properties of this substance mean that it can both absorb and dissipate the force behind a blow when struck, resulting in it either deforming or bouncing upon impact.

A skilled user of this technique is capable of making it appear as if they were intending to protect an object or individual within the sphere, when in fact they merely use the ball as a distraction in order to occupy an enemy, while instead covertly withdrawing the item in question from the ball during its formation


Name: Lava Release: Rubber Defence
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lava
Range: (Optional for cannon jutsu.)
Description: The user creates a short tube with lava converted into a rubber-like material which can be used to guard against enemy's attacks.


Name: Lava Release: Rubber Rope
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lava
Range: (Optional for cannon jutsu.)
Description: The user creates a rope with lava converted into a rubber-like material. It can be used to quickly withdraw an ally of the attack line, being more efficient when combined with a distraction


Name: Lava Release: Rubber Wall
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lava
Range: (Optional for cannon jutsu.)
Description: The user creates an enormous torrent of lava from the ground directly in front of them, which then forms into a wall possessing immense durability due to its rubbery consistency that allows the material to deform when attacked, meaning it can both absorb and dissipate the force behind a blow rather than just simply obstruct it. This technique can also be used to provide reinforcement to a pre-existing barrier.

Name: Lava Release: Lava Hardening Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lava
Range: 4 feet in diameter
Description: This technique contains only one hand sign. The user is able to harden any magma nearby turning it into very strong igneous rock, which could make an attack stronger or weaker. Although D-ranked for members of the rank genin and sometimes chuunin, it takes a little bit to harden the jutsu.


Name: Lava Release: Scorching Stream Rock Technique
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lava
Range: (Optional for cannon jutsu.)
Description: The user expels a large amount of lava from their mouth, which quickly solidifies into multiple boulders of molten rock that are fired towards the target with tremendous force. Due to their composition, the boulders can melt through most objects with ease, and because a considerable number are dispersed over a wide range in quick succession, they are also difficult to avoid.




Province: The SKy Village
Title Rank: Kami
Skill Rank: S




Skill Specialty:
Main: Ninjutsu
Sub: Medical
Tertiary: Kenjutsu

Elemental Affinity:
Main: Fire
Sub: Earth
Tertiary: Lava

Special Characteristics:
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Name: Master swordsman
Rank: Elite
Description: This Sc gives the uses perfect skill at using bladed weapons which means controling them and how they are used in combat people with this trait are the best swordsman/woman. Lu Xun has this trait because of his training with swords for years.

Name: Master Sensory Ninja
Rank: Elite
Description: Lu Xun is a Master sensory ninja and uses his abilitys to be able to track chakra during battles and otherthings to do with sensory. Lu Xun train for some years developing this trait.
Flaws/Weaknesses:

Name: Lower Strength
Rank: Elite
Description: Due to been a sensory ninja Lu Xun strength is below par -30 percent that of the same rank as him.

Name: Genjust weakness
Rank: Elite
Description: It will cost the user twice the amount of chakra when using Kai to get out of a genjutsu.





Name: Injector Knife *2 (one on each wrist)
Appearance:[spoiler]


Rank: A
Special Abilities: The knife has an eight inch blade tucked away inside the main mechanism housing it. The whole device is set into a leather glove that extends from the base of the hand back up the arm nine inches so as to cover the entire thing and still give room for wrist movement. A ring on the smallest finger is a pressure device that when released almost instantly releases (one second release time) the blade so that it is fully extended. Extending the finger suctions the blade back in almost as fast as extending. (1.5 seconds)

The case of the wrist blade has a slot for small vials to be placed, this is an excellent place to put either medicine or poisons for easy injection, because of a system in the weapon the blade is re-coated in the vial's contents whenever the pressure is rel0eased and it retracts back in.

Afterthought, penetrating power. It all depends but if it was placed directly onto the surface it could go through a person with not much effort by shredding skin.muscle/bone along its path. Of course there might be armor or something, in that case if shreds steel and lower with the power to crack titanium but not break it.

Origin: Lu Xun created this weapon for using on his enemy's in battle

Name: Saw Tooth
Type: Bladed(Chain Sword)
Appearance:
Spoiler:

Rank: S
Special Abilities: This weapons has sone interesting cabailities like first of all chaka from the user can be channeled through the weapon so that it makes the blades move turn it to a chain blade sword or this can be used with out pumping chakra into blade as the teeth of the blades are very sharp and will cause damage when hit. At D Rank chakra that is pumped into the blade per post the blades move at 1 rotation per second, at C rank the blade rotates at 5 rotations per second, at B rank chakra that is pumped it make the blade rotate at 9 per second and at A rank chakra the blades will roatate 13 times per second must pay the revelvent amound per post if want to use this feature. It is impervious against chakra based defenses or offensives. The blade is made from a special alloy that was found during the war dante saved some of the special alloy from the war and used it to consturst the blade with it, The alloy had some unique elements to it like it is extream tough and durable, greater breaking point and the weapon is coated in blatium plates to give it unique added strength, it is said to be resitance to elements and is said to make it easy to weild giving the user easy control of it. Since the size of the blade it makes a good defence due to the flat part of the Sword this can be used to defend again enemy jutsu and attacked because of the swords extreame durability and toughness as well as offering protection againest the elements. The final function at the cost of S rank chakra the blade contains an orb near the handle while channeling the S amount of chakra into the blade the orb will activate and then the user will be able to stick the massive blade into the ground causing a massive shockwave that will rip up the ground in all directions the radias of the shockwave is 15 metres can only be used once per post after the jutsu is been done the orb deactivates. The resestance it protects against is fire mainly it offers protect againest that and water element as for wind, earth and lightning this does effect the sword. other denfence it protects from is kunai, senbon that type of defence not defence from anything like bombs etc the defence part only block from the front can be attacked from side and behind etc. Defening from the front mean the direction dante protect himself from the sword is 6'0 long.
Origin: Lu Xun crested the weapon in his lab after various tests and other part and build of the weapon.

Name: Blades Of The White Lotus.

Appearance:
Rank: S
Special Abilities:
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~Mixed Steel Casing~
The outer coating of steel on these blades is made with such a mix that it allows the swords to retain their sharpness and shape without regular maintenance, mixed with the knowledge and care of a katana it has made these blades able to cut through most materials known through the Shinobi world. It is also able to chanel different natures of chakra through the blades like earth when chanelled make the blade slightly heavy but has more power for each slash, when water is chanelled through the blade it can be used to combat enemy's fire justu, when fire is chanelled through the blade it makes the blade anything it touches burn

~Light Weight Core~
Having studied the various materials around the shinobi world, Fox has discovered the best choice for both strength and weight is not in fact steel, But the bone of the Kaguya. Seeking two bone Katanas from Rabbit, She shaved the bone down and coated it in metal to allow for a light weight and deadly core to her new blades.

~Sharpened Steel~
The special mix of steels combined by Fox herself has meant these blades when sharpened stay sharp and rarely have to be sharpened again. This means the cut created by these blades are unique, able to often cut through some of the strongest defences and even ignoring some of the natural protection some people have.

Origin: Lu Xun




Summon
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Animal:Dragon (Either for traveling with in case of not allowed mythical summons just had to make him though)
Rank: S
Element: Wind and Fire

Name: Toothless
Appearance
Rank: S
Sex: Male
Height and Weight: Toothless is almost 8 Foot tall and almost 15 foot in length and weights 100KG due to his small size he is one of the smallest breed of dragons but is one of the fastest if not the fast because of his size and has also one of the most powerful fire balls that is fired from his mouth.
Type: Dragon
Element: Wind and Fire
Description: Known as Night fury as it so fast it is perfect for night time attacks because of it been fully black and almost completely invisible during nighttime. He has jet black scales covering his whole body, his sides having small light patches in a pattern similar to that of a manta ray. Toothless posseses at least two sets of wings (one main pair and two smaller ones near the base of his tail). Very rare dragon. He proves himself to be a very able fighter. Toothless quickly causes the larger dragon to back down. Toothless also shows himself superior to most being's, as proven against in a quick skirmish.

Toothless is very intelligent and seems to have a dry sense of humor, similar to kaira's. He does not take kindly to being offended or anyone offending or endangering his human friend, but is usually playful, docile, maybe even a little teasing when not threatened.

Jutsu:2

Name: Blue Dragon Flame Ball
Rank: E-S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire
Description: The size of the fire balls that are fired from toothless mouth are blue in colour and have different size depending on the rank of them the smallest is a bouncy ball size which is E Rank the biggest is the size of a great fire ball jutsu size which is S rank the reason the jutsu is high ranked it is because the flames are off blue colured and is not like normal fire this fire travels much quicker through the air and causes a lot more explosive damge when phyical contact is made.

Name: Fly
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu Passive
Element: Wind
Description: This jutsu allows Toothless to fly in the air when he wants to and this can be used to travel with. Kaira as well can go on the back of toothless to fly as well.


Academy Jutsu
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Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu -- Body Replacement Technique
Rank: E
Requirements: N/A
Type:Ninjutsu
Description: A technique that allows the user to quickly switch places with another nearby object.

Name: Bunshin no Jutsu -- Clone Technique
Rank: E
Requirements: N/A
Type:Ninjutsu
Description: A technique that creates intangible clones of the user. Because they are not real at all, they will dissipate if they come into contact with almost anything. They also cannot interact with their environment, easily giving away what they really are.

Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu -- Rope Escape Technique
Rank: E
Requirements: N/A
Type:Ninjutsu
Description: The basic art of freeing oneself from rope bonds.

Name: Henge no Jutsu -- Transformation Technique
Rank: E
Requirements: N/A
Type:Ninjutsu
Description: A technique that allows the user to alter their appearance. Though they may appear differently, they do not take on any of the physical characteristics of whatever they transform into.

Name: Kinobori no Waza -- Act of Tree Climbing
Rank: D
Requirements: N/A
Type:Ninjutsu
Description: A technique derived from a training exercise that allows the user to walk on walls by focusing enough chakra through their feet to cause them to 'stick' to the surfaces.

Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza -- Act of Water Surface Walking
Rank: D
Requirements: N/A
Type:Ninjutsu
Description: A technique derived from a training exercise that allows the user to walk on the surface of water by focusing an even amount of chakra through the soles of their feet.

Name: Shunshin no Jutsu -- Body Flicker Technique
Rank: D
Requirements: N/A
Type:Ninjutsu
Description: A high-speed movement that allows the user to move short distances at nearly untraceable speeds, accomplished by using chakra to boost the user's reflexes.

None Element
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Name: Kage Bunshin no Jutsu - Shadow Clone Technique
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Element: N/A
Chakra Use: Moderate
Description: Kage Bunshin is a Jounin level Ninjutsu technique. When Naruto stole the scroll of seals, he learned this technique as well. The normal Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja that lacks any substance. The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. This makes Kage Bunshin an excellent training method if the ninja has the chakra capacity and stamina to maintain the Kage Bunshins for an extended period of time. This allows the ninja to essentially reduce the time it takes to train and learn with each clone added. This is especially true when used with Tajuu Kage Bunshin.

Name: Bunshin Bakuha - Shadow Clone Explosion
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Chakra Use: Moderate
Description: Bunshin Bakuha is a Ninjutsu technique utilized by Uchiha Itachi. At first glance the clone appears to be a normal Kage Bunshin, but Itachi can detonate the clone at any time to form a very large explosion.

Name: Hiding with Camouflage Technique
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Style: Ninja Art
Description: By controlling the reflection of light from one's surroundings with chakra, one can make oneself invisible. This allows the user to sneak up on their enemy without being noticed. It is impossible for people with normal eyes to find out the user's location. Only those with special eyes like the Sharingan or Byakugan can see through this techniqu

Name: Kuchiyose no Jutsu (Summoning Technique)
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Element: None
Description: The Summoning Technique is a ninjutsu that allows the summoner to transport animals across long distances instantly. Before an animal summoning can be performed, a prospective summoner must first sign a contract with a given species. The contract comes in the form of a scroll, on which the contractor uses their own blood to sign their name and place their fingerprints and once signed is valid even after the contractors death. After this they need only offer an additional donation of blood on the hand they signed the contract with, mold their chakra with hand seals and then plant the hand they signed the contract with at the location they wish to summon the creature.[6] The amount of chakra used during the summoning determines how powerful the summoned creature can be. In the anime, it was shown that if a user attempts to summon an animal without first signing a contract, the user will be teleported to the home of the animal they have a natural affinity for. this also can be used on weapon scrolls to release there weapons from it upon the enemy or use with other jutsu.

Name: Mind's Eye of the Kagura
Classification: Ninjutsu
Rank: S
Class: Passive
Range: 10 kilometres

Description: This ability allows Lu Xun to find, sense, and track individuals through their chakra over vast range that exceeds ten kilometres. This is done by focusing and opening the mind's eye, though Lu Xun has it active often. The ability extends to telling when a person is lying from the fluctuations in a person's chakra made from dishonest emotions or detecting if someone, including herself, is under a genjutsu. Also by focusing on a particular chakra Lu Xun can perceive its location and movement with great detail.

Earth Jutsu
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Name: Earth Release: Hiding Like a Mole Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Style: Earth
Range: Self
Description: This technique changes earth into fine sand by channelling chakra into it, allowing the user to dig through it like a mole. This effect goes around the body (not just the hands), making it just large enough for a person to move through. The user can pinpoint where they are, despite being underground, by sensing the magnetic forces. They can also sense what is happening on the surface and use that information to launch a surprise attack on the enemy. One can also hide deep in the ground, escaping to a depth where the enemy can't reach. It also appears that after digging, the ground can be returned to its original state, leaving no trace of where the user entered the earth.

Name: Earth Release: Earth Spear
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Style: Earth
Range: Self
Description: The user flows chakra through all parts of their body causing it to become noticeably darker, which increases their defensive power to its utmost limits by making the skin as hard as diamond. Furthermore, the destructive power of physical attacks is increased, making this a great all-purpose technique. The amount of techniques that can break through the areas hardened by the Earth Spear are close to zero, excluding its undeniable weak point: Lightning Release ninjutsu.

Name: Earth Release: Earth-Style Wall
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Style: Earth
Range: 5-10 metres
Description: The user creates a solid wall of earth as a form of defence. Chakra is either converted to earth within the body and then spat out to form the wall or the user can manipulate pre-existing earth to form the wall. The earth then instantly rises up and takes form. The barrier itself is also coated with chakra, making its strength incomparable to that of a normal mud wall. Because of the earth's special characteristics, the wall is highly resistant against, for instance, fire and water. Also, for a Kage-class shinobi it is possible to create a vast volume of earth. When used by Kakashi he creates a wall composed of bulldog sculptures to box-in Pain.



Name: Earth Release: Swamp of the Underworld
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Range: 5-20 Metres
Description: By changing the surface of an object beneath an enemy into mud and creating a swamp, the user can sink his enemy into the mud. The adhesive, chakra-infused mud ensnares the enemy's body, making it almost impossible to recover one's strength and escape from the swamp. The size and depth of the created swamp depends on the user's skill and the amount of chakra used, but if the user is an expert in this technique, it will always be possible to make a fair-sized swamp which is extremely effective against a great number of enemies or when having to face gigantic creatures.


Name: Earth Release Aggravated Rock Technique.
Rank: B
Type: Nin
Element: Earth
Description: This technique simply allows the user to make whatever they are touching increase in weight. When used on living organisms they exhibit petrification and then begin to crumble.


Name: Anitlion Technique
Rank: A
Type: Nin
Element: Earth
Description: This technique causes the ground and everything on and around it to be sucked in towards the middle of a large pit, much like the method an antlion uses to catch prey. Upon being dragged to the centre, the victim will then be sucked underground. There the victim, depending on how deep the user makes them sink, will be trapped and/or suffocated. The range of the pit is determined by how much chakra is put into the technique.

Name: Rock Clone Technique
Rank: B
Type: Nin
Element: Earth
Description: The user creates a clone made of rock, which is made by expelling earth from their mouth. Unlike other clones, the rock clone does not disappear when attacked, but rather breaks apart.

Name: Rock Golem
Rank: A-S
Type: Nin
Element: Earth
Description: This technique allows the user to create a large animated creature composed of rock, although the necessary earth can be created either from within the user's own body and expelled through their mouth or from a nearby pre-existing source of earth.

Although its size can differ between uses, the golem always possesses an ample amount of brute strength, being able to bite and tear through a It is also very durable, as it was left almost completely intact after being hit by a powerful explosion, detonating at point-blank range. This makes the golem ideal whether it be serving as additional support or simply as a mobile shield.

Name: Earth Release: Light Weigted Rock Technique
Rank: A
Type: Nin
Element: Earth
Description: Contrary to its counterpart the Earth Release: Added-Weight Rock Technique, instead of making the target heavier, this technique makes it much lighter. This allows freer manipulation of the affected objects, which would normally carry considerably more weight and as such, require a greater amount of exertion to move. The technique can be used on the user or other shinobi to increase their speed,but as a consequence of using it this way, it results in the decrease of the physical force of their blows.

Name: Earth Style: Ultra light weighted rock technique
Rank: A
Type: Nin
Element: Earth
Description: A more advanced version of the Earth Release: Light-Weight Rock Technique, in which the user drastically decreases the weight of any object in direct physical contact, but to a much greater extent than that of the original ability. The user can use this technique to lift enormous objects that they normally wouldn't be able to, even an entire island.[1]

Name: Earth Release Fist Rock Technique
Rank: A
Type: Nin
Element: Earth
Description:By encasing their arm in rock, the user can deal a powerful hardened punch against an opponent while being protected from direct contact with their target. If necessary, the weight of the rock can be increased to further increase the punch's destructive power.

Shi'gawa Fighting Style
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Style: Shi'gawa Thrust
Rank: D
Type: Kenjutsu
Range: Within the range of the sword
Description: The user sends a quick thrust towards the enemy, going to stab them with the tip of the blade


Style: Shi'gawa Backstab
Rank: B
Type: Kenjutsu
Range: Range of the sword used.
Description: The user appears behind the enemy in a blurring motion, sending his blade(s) into the back of his enemy, If caught off guard the enemy would be subject to a greater amount of damage.



Style: Shi'gawa Cross Slash
Rank: B
Type: Kenjutsu
Element: None
Range: Range of the blades used.
Description: The user holds the two blades out infront of them, before slicing a single enemy in a cross shape, After the attack the user would spin the blades around and prepare for the enemy's assault.

Style: Shi'gawa Arc Slash
Rank: B
Type: Kenjutsu
Range: Range of the blades used
Description: The user holds the blades out to the side before they push forwards, slashing them across the area.. any enemy infront of the user would most likely be cut open by the fierce attack.


Style: Shi'gawa Spin Slash
Rank: B
Type: Kenjutsu
Range: Range if the blades used
Description: The User ducks down and unleashes a quick spin attack slashing those around him. Using the blades of the user he or she will will to a quick spin and slash.


Style: Shi'gawa Cripple
Rank: A
Type: Kenjutsu
Range: 10 metres
Description: The User's eyes would narrow looking over their opponent for any weakness in their defense, next the shi'gawa would go to slice down at the opponents weakness, be it a joint, or a muscle. The enemy would feel themselves grow weaker after the slash.


Style: Shi'gawa Multi Slice
Rank: A
Type: Kenjutsu
Range: Range of the blades in the circle motion
Description: The User spins their blades around, before dashing forwards appearing infront of the enemy in the blink of an eye, they then proceed to slash the enemy multipule times with the sharp shi'gawa blades.

Fire
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Name: Phoenix Sage Fire Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Element: Fire
Range: Short-range
Description: This technique creates a volley of small fireballs, which are sent flying in an unpredictable manner assaulting the enemy. In addition, the flames are controlled one by one with chakra, so avoiding them all is extremely difficult. Shuriken can also be concealed within the flames, creating an unexpected secondary surprise attack.

Name: Ash Pile Burning
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid-range
Element: Fire
Description: The user spews a stream of chakra infused gun-powder from their mouth, which surrounds the region. As the gunpowder is composed entirely of ash, it stays in the air around the victim like a cloud, which can be used like a smokescreen. After surrounding the enemy with the ash, the user can ignite it with a flint placed on their teeth beforehand to create a spark, resulting in a violent explosion, burning the enemy

Name: Dragon Fire Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid-range
Element: Fire
Description: The user breathes fire along a cord or any other type of long object, which rushes forward in straight line catching the enemy on fire. A line of enemies can be used as the conductor as well. Kirisame usually uses his sword as the conductor.

Name: Great Dragon Fire Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offesnive
Range: All ranges
Element: Fire
Description: The user compresses a large amount of chakra built up inside their body and changes it into a dragon-shaped fireball. The user then skilfully manipulates that great fire, and attacks their opponent.

Name: Running Fire
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid-range
Element: Fire
Description: This jutsu will create a stream of fire that can be manipulated into several forms before striking the target

Name: Fire Dragon Flame Bullet
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short to Mid range
Element: Fire
Description: The user kneads chakra into flames, which are then manipulated into a genuine-looking dragon. Since the art of having the flames obey the user's will is outrageously difficult, its mastery is restricted to a limited number of skilful shinobi. The flames are divided to launch a left side, right side, and frontal assault in all three directions at once, turning the enemy into ash in a matter of seconds.

Name: Great Fireball Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-range
Element: Fire
Description: A technique where chakra kneaded inside the body is converted into fire, and expelled from the mouth in a massive orb of roaring flame or as a continuous flamethrower. The scope of the attack is altered by controlling the volume of chakra that is mustered. The released flames will engulf their target, and leave a crater on the ground's surface.

Name: Great Blaze Ball
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-range
Element: Fire
Description: a meteor-sized sphere of fire, said to be 10 times bigger than the great fire ball. it carries the enemy away and causes a massive explosion on impact, which resembels an nuclear explosion. This is much like Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique, but a larger and more destructive version.



Medical
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Name – Medical Analysis
Type – Medical Jutsu
Rank – E-S
Rp – Utilising both their medical knowledge and skill with medical techniques, the user is able to focus chakra into their hand and determine the makeup of a poison, disease, cancer or the like, effectively finding out its ingredients, how it was made and how to best cure it with not harm to the patient.
Rp Effects – Able to analyse a patient, vial of poison, or what ever the user wishes using the required amount of chakra depending on the ailments rank to determine a cure.


~D-Rank~

Poison Cleansing Jutsu
Jutsu Type: Medical Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Description: User creates an incision on the target, then filters anti-bacterial liquid into the cut to draw out the poison while at the same time healing the damage.

Wound Extension
Jutsu Type: Medical Ninjutsu
Rank: D
Description: User extends their hands out at an injured target focusing their chakra to expose their wounds.
~C-Rank~


Basic Setting Jutsu
Jutsu Type: Medical Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Description: User treats a target using items from their medical pouch, applying an average amount of chakra to the healing process.


Pressure Point Strike
Jutsu Type: Medical Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Description: User funnels chakra into their hands and aims to hit a major artery on the opponents body.


Prepared Needle Shot
Jutsu Type: Medical Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Description: User secretes body oils out of their finger's pores and applies it onto a weapon or shuriken, then motions to strike swiftly.


Mystical Palm Technique
Jutsu Type: Medical Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Description: User concentrates chakra into the center of the palm, releasing the energy over a target's wound or injecting it into their nervous system to place them in a state of slumber.


Pain Reliever
Jutsu Type: Medical Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Description: User would attain firm control over their electrical signals in preparation for an attack, that would heighten their reflexes or numb the pain.
~B-Rank~

Bone Mending Jutsu
Jutsu Type: Medical Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Description: User treats a target using items from their medical pouch, applying a large amount of chakra focusing on producing enhanced calcium to grow bone.


Chakra Scalpel Jutsu
Jutsu Type: Medical Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Description: User channels chakra into their hand thinning it into a blade that does not create external incisions but internal ones instead. Perfect for Surgery.


Shadow Wound Preparation
Jutsu Type: Medical Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Description: User surrounds their body with chakra aimed at producing enough cells to sustain damage and numbing the pain as the wounds seal immediately after.

~A-Rank~
Poison Mist
Jutsu Type: Medical Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Description: User inhales a moderate amount of oxygen then corrupts their cells in the lungs into a dark-purple gas before releasing it at a target.

Weaponary Jutsu
Cerebral Shock Technique
Jutsu Type: Medical Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Description: User concentrates a highly focused amount of chakra into their palm and strikes from behind at a target's spine causing them to fall incapacitated.



Vestibular Disruption
Jutsu Type: Medical Ninjutsu

Rank: A
Description: User concentrates a highly focused amount of chakra into their palm and strikes at the side of the target's head with an open palm. Releasing the energy into the target's inner ear thusly upsetting their Vestibular System, causing their head to feel heavy and balance hindered.



Regeneration Enhancement
Jutsu Type: Medical Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Description: User channels chakra along their body healing their wounds and quickly begins to recycle this energy each time until it is gone.



Jutsu Name – Kiss Of Life
Jutsu Type – Contact Medical
Rank - A
Description – The sister to the Kiss of Death, This kiss has the power to heal its target or even bring them back from severe wounds or even unconsciousness. When used the users lips glow a soft white.


Jutsu Name – Kiss Of Death
Jutsu Type – Contact Medical Rank - A
Description – The sister to the Kiss of Life, This kiss has the power to wound its target, make existing wounds more painful or even knock its target out completely for a short period of time. When used the users lips glow a dark black.


Name – Body Destruction
Type – Medical Jutsu
Rank - A
Rp – Similar to the Important Body Points Disturbance in the fact it inhibits the targets combat abilities but at the same time unlike its sister technique it actually breaks down the targets body at the same time, this can sometimes leave a slightly permanent effect on its target for the remainder of the battle.



Jutsu Name – Dual Chakra Scalpel Technique
Jutsu Type – Medical Ninjutsu
Rank - A
Effect – Cannot be used in battle.
Rp Effect – This is a greater version of the Chakra Scalpel Technique, though this version is so difficult it cannot be used in battle at all, it allows the user to work much faster in surgery and work on different various parts in the body at once.



Manifestation of the Covenant
Type: Medical
Rank: A
Description: Layie unleashes, a massive torrent of healing energies, which heals up to 5 targets in the battle.



~S-Rank~


Greater Healing Jutsu
Jutsu Type: Medical Ninjutsu
Rank: S
Description: User treats a target using items from their medical pouch, applying a large amount of chakra into their heart massaging it with their chakra to produce a vast amount of new bloodcells as it is pumping - but if done incorrectly it can damage their heart instead.


Five Point Palm Exploding Heart Technique
Jutsu Type: Medical Ninjutsu
Rank: S
Description: User uses their mastery over the human body's anatomy and channels chakra into their fingers striking 4 artery points along the human body and the final one a thrust of the palm at the heart. Simple taps are enough to inject a strong amount of chakra into these arteries causing them to pump extra blood into the heart as it closes. Once the effect ends, the target suffers from a heart attack as the heart valves open with a rush of blood enough to seep from their pores.




History: Lu Xun was born within a deep forest. The forest where the village of the sky ' is located. He had some 'demonic traits' to his appearance, even though he didn't act like one. This is for example the red eyes he has. He started his official training sessions at the age of 4, before he started the academy. At times, this training was rough, but Lu Xun somehow always made it through. He didn't even show a sign of sweat. He just kept up his usual slight smile, which would carry on for ages.

At the age of 5, Lu Xun entered the academy. The other kids within the academy were scared of his so-called 'demonic traits' and avoided any possible contact with him. Lu Xun didn't seem to even bother caring, knowing that this was to be expected. Day in, day out, the same result happened, going through the schooldays without having any contact with the other students. This also includes not having anyone to spar with.

At the age of 8, Lu Xun graduated from the academy, using his fighting ability to raise up from rank to rank, obviously starting at Genin. He was assigned to a squad; but even that squad avoided him at first. As time passed, they got used to Lu Xun's demonic traits and treated him like no other human being. During his time in that squad, he overcame death multiple times, though not landing into the hospital.

Two years later after his graduation, Lu Xun now being 10 years old, the Chuunin Exams were announced with a time limit to prepare for it. Lu Xun 's squad assembled for their daily training. During the past two years, Lu Xun had gotten a katana and got used to fighting with it. He apparently had a talent for Kenjutsu, not Taijutsu. The training soon ended, the day after the Chuunin Exams began.
The squad sensei waiting patiently for each and every result of the Chuunin Exam parts. With every part they all succeeded, until the last part. The last part would be like a daily Shinobi life, putting their own lives on the line for succession, but the only one returning was Lu Xun . His two other squad members were killed in the midst of battle against the other squads, it being over before they all even noticed it. Lu Xun 's katana was completely covered in blood; his usual smile not there anymore and his eyes looking like they only focus on the death of his squad members. His squad sensei wasn't happy with the result either. Afterwards, they retrieved both of the bodies to give them a proper funeral.

Three years later after his promotion to Chuunin, Lu Xun had made it in the selection for the Jounin rank, which is pretty rare for a person to become a Jounin at the age of thirteen. These past three years, his usual smile had returned, having his katana sheathed and leaning over his shoulder while waiting for the results of the Jounin selection. Beside him were the other candidates for the Jounin rank. After a while,.a person walked by each and every person to tell them if they were raised in rank or remained the same. By the time the person stood in front of Lu Xun , the person nodded and said the word 'congratulations'; Lu Xun had officially became a Jounin at the age of thirteen. The next day of graduation, he got himself an own squad, completing missions the day after another, but this was after introducing themselves to each other.

Lu Xun was now 21 and was now a kami in the village of the sky.

Rp Sample
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Kaira was about to start her first day as Kage after she got ready in her home, found out her clothes from the boxes that were packed as she was moving to live and work in the kage tower since it would be easier to work out that way. Kaira but on her attire which consistered of a pink flower that went in her blue medium length tied up hair, her black sliky bottoms that were made of a mesh material but were really comfortable for her which had a built on ninja heels that she wore and finally a blue tunic like top that showed off her lady parts as kaira never weared a bra it also showed off her stomach area. Kaira after having a shower got dressed and set off to the Kazekage tower.

Kaira arrived to the tower after arround 30 minutes when she got there she went up the long stairs till she reached the reception deck kaira said that she arrived for duty and then was shown by the receptionist where her office would now be and wear kaira would now be working it was just down the hall from the reception desk and did not takelong to arrive there.

Finally she had arrived at what would be her office as the reseptionist opened the door to show kaira inside the whole office had had a make over new chairs new table new equipment everythig had been updated since the last kage had died because the old kage used to be very old fashioned so like to keep his office that way, Kaira loved the new look of the office as it was now as she walked over to her new chair and desk as she moved the dchair from the desk to sit down on it but unlike a person would sit down in a chair kaira sat down in the chair sideways with her feet over one side of the chair while her back was on the other arm of the chair, Kaira prefered to sit like this as it was most comfortable for her. Kaira looked at the massive pile of paper work on her desk and decided that she would make a start on the paper work while she was in a good mood. Kaira then spoke to the receptionist near the door to the office. "If there is anyone that needs to see me send them right up Okay and thanks" After kaira had finished speaking to the assistant she left the room and went back to her desk nodding to kaira in responce to her request as she left the room, as Kaira made a start on the massive paper work that needed doing.


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Re: Lu Xun-Revamp Character (Done)

Post by Kaira on Thu Dec 29, 2011 3:56 pm

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Re: Lu Xun-Revamp Character (Done)

Post by Unagi on Thu Dec 29, 2011 5:27 pm

First of all, your SC's and Flaws don't match. You have three elite SC's, which will require two super flaws or three avarage flaws each to compensate for. Also, since you are not a kage you can only have up to two Elite SC's
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Re: Lu Xun-Revamp Character (Done)

Post by Kaira on Thu Dec 29, 2011 5:38 pm

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Re: Lu Xun-Revamp Character (Done)

Post by Nuitari Kouga on Fri Dec 30, 2011 5:19 am

Flaws follow the same template as the SC fix that.

Also lets be more practical with the flaws you are using. Saying you can't use taijutsu is irrelevant when you already have used all your other SC you would be allowed as a high ranked character. Its not like you can unlearn a Specialty or can gain another as the character progresses . You are at the top in terms of Specialties allowed thus i expect to see better flaws that reflect as such.
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Re: Lu Xun-Revamp Character (Done)

Post by Kaira on Fri Dec 30, 2011 5:34 am

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Re: Lu Xun-Revamp Character (Done)

Post by .Zack on Fri Dec 30, 2011 4:48 pm

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Re: Lu Xun-Revamp Character (Done)

Post by Rowan on Fri Dec 30, 2011 6:54 pm

Cherry Blossom Impact
Jutsu Type: Medical Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Description: User channels chakra into their arms and legs molding it to stimulate their muscles at incredible limits. They then release this charged energy on impact with destructive results.

That is Taijutsu, not medical ninjutsu, so you need to get rid of it. :3

Bone Mending Jutsu
Jutsu Type: Medical Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Description: User treats a target using items from their medical pouch, applying a large amount of chakra focusing on producing enhanced calcium to grow bone.


And this should be A-rank
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