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Post by Kaizo on Tue Dec 20, 2011 11:46 pm


Name: Kaizo Raiketsu Hitake
Nickname/Alias: (A to S rank Village shinobi or Missing Ninja only.)
Age: 18 years old
Gender: Male
Looks:
Kaizo Hitake is exactly 6'4 in height, has moderately long red hair, and is often found sporting a stern/serious disposition. He is muscular and his attire consists of simple clothing with subtle colors, such as a plain black t-shirt, etc. He also normally wears a black collared jacket with his usual ensemble. There is also a chained bracelet with a small sword attached to one of the links always found on his right wrist.

Personality: Kaizo has a bit of a seclusive nature due to his constant search for knowledge of the cosmos and beyond. So he has a habit of drowning out the world around him. Those who have managed to hold a conversation with Kaizo will normally tell you that he is a serious man who has little interest in what people have to say, unless it benefits him in his search for exponential knowledge. The only time you will see Kaizo out in public, away from his study, is if he is training, getting Aiden out of trouble, or lending emotional guidance to Enoshi.
Likes & Dislikes: Likes: Studying the cosmos and beyond, studying philosophy, welding, weapon modification, weapon creation, studying and discovering various forms of energy, studying japanese mythology, collecting weapons, practicing weaponry, ninjutsu, and taijutsu.
Dislikes: Pretty much everything that isn't related to his likes
Catch Phrase:




Clan Name: Magure
Kekkei Genkai: Enshi (遠視) : This ability typically means far sight and is a passive ability that can be used as will. This is the primary ability for members of this clan. The ability known as Enshi entails those members of this clan can focus in and see incredible farther than the average human being. Members of this clan have eyes that can fix in on anything or things up to 1000 meters away (approximately as high as a jet plan can elevate) and see things in that area with clear vision. This clear vision works despite the conditions wither it be natural conditions or conditions caused by jutsu such as the hidden mist jutsu. This technique doesn’t necessarily mean that members of this clan have eye balls popping out of their heads, or that they can’t see anything close up. It simply means that they can extend their vision at well. Because of this ability, members of this clan have outstanding peripheral vision, allowing them 360 degree vision on everything that is 10 ft from them. When using Enshi’s ability of far sight, members of this clan will lose 1ft of their 10ft -360 peripheral vision for every 100 meters used. If they max out at 10k meters they will no longer be able to see anything coming from behind them or at the side of them, until they decrease their range in vision. This ability serves well in battle because users will be able to see attacks coming from in front, the sides, and from behind for up to 10 ft around them, but it is up to their own capabilities to spot attacks coming from above or underground. This technique helps them rp wise because they will be able to spot enemies from a far, as long as nothing is obstructing their view(such as trees or whatever).

Kanpekina shotto (完璧なショット): This technique roughly means “perfect shot”. This ability is the secondary ability for members of this clan and was said to have been one of goods only blessings to the hunters of this clan. This blessing is what we mostly refer to as luck or even dumb luck, but for the hunters of this clan, its known as a “perfect shot”. Members of this clan are known to be undoubtedly lucky all the time. People whom would follow up on members of this clan would note extremely lucky events such as a giant tree branch breaking from a tree and barely missing a member of this clan because that member had sneezed and buggers came out and while stringing the buggers out he/she moved a few steps and barely missed the falling branch. At first followers just thought that it was dumb luck, but as lucky situations kept happening, spectators judged this as divine help. This doesn’t necessarily mean that members of this clan will always dodge death or will never find themselves unfortunate. This just means that in their life time, members of this clan will have experienced more luck than the average human, and the one activity that members do in which their luck never falters is shooting. This ability has it that no matter what conditions are supposed upon a member of this clan, that as long as they can see their target and fire(throw things or shoot things), that the shot will always hit the target so long as the target is still there, even if it was a sloppy shot. The only exception being that the target was protected by some kind of force in which would prevent this hunter from making contact with the target, unless the hunter had taken precautions to see around that situation. Ex: Ninja 1 is in a rain storm, and spots a pig, this pig spots the Ninja, this ninja is startled and throws a shuriken aiming for the pig’s neck. Chances are the shot will miss because the ninja was startled and threw the weapon out of impulse and the winds of this storm are blowing hard, if the pig doesn’t completely move out of the way, the shuriken will definitely hit the designated spot. EX2: Same situation, but this time the pig uses wind repellent jutsu, that protects him from incoming projectiles, the shuriken will still go to the designated spot, but will not hit the pig because the pig was protected and the shuriken couldn’t go through. Now if he had enforced the shuriken with a wind cutting technique to keep wind element jutsu from being used as a shield, then the pig will be hit in the designated area if it doesn’t move out of the way completely in time. This technique does not mean that the target will be auto hit, this only means that the weapon will always go where it needs to go, so long as the person with this ability can see and fire at the opponent. Now if the opponent does nothing valid to counter, dodge, or repel this weapon then it will count as a hit, in the hunter’s next response post.

Magure Waltz: Members of the clan (MAGURE) are naturally faster than the average person. This pertains to their reflexes; which includes faster responsiveness in battle, quicker thinking, and the ability to be lighter on their feet.


Faster responsiveness: During battle, member of the clan has the privilege of having faster reaction time than the opponent.
Ex. Say a member of the clan and another Shinobi are battling; for the sake of the situation, let’s say the first two posts consist of them forming hand signs. By the third post, the clan member is able to release the attack spontaneously right after completion of the hand signs, as opposed to the other shinobi, who must naturally wait a second or two for their attack to unleash. However, this ability has a cool down period of 5 posts and cannot under any circumstance be used until that cool down session is complete.

Battle Ex: Player 2 being a Magure clan member
P1: Performs Hand seals
P2: Performs Hand seals as well
P1: Sees that player two is performing hand seals but while player two started his set of handseals, I had finished mine. “ High Speed Fire Ball Jutsu” , I shout as this fire ball speeds towards player two at such blinding speeds.
P2: Had started his hand seals later than player one, but due to the ability of the Magure walts he was able to complete his hand seals before his opponent and send forth his high speed fire ball jutsu before player 1 could finish his hand seals and complete the technique. This ability can not be used for another 5 posts after this one. Player 2 stands there a bit tired from the adrenaline rush, and readies himself for his opponent’s response.


Quicker Thinking: The ability to think rationally and quickly under extreme duress; greater analytical skills. The ability to have great perception of what is real and illusion

Common Ex. Allows the clan member to break out of a genjutsu or binding technique. Can be used only once per battle and when in a moderately fatigue state
Lighter on their feet: Self-explanatory. This part of the Magure Waltz gives clan member the ability to be quicker and lighter on their feet. In result, allowing clan members to even glide/surf over surfaces (Water, magma, thorns, etc). Members of this clan can glide/surf over these surfaces with no damage done, so long as their feet are still moving, keeping them a few inches off of the surface, regardless of what kind of surface.

Ex. Increased speed, Gliding, Ice Skating like motion
Clan Symbol:
Spoiler:

Clan Jutsu: \ Name: Hand Speed
Rank: E
Type: Clan
Element:-----
Range: Self
Description: This technique utilizes the Magure Walts’ ability of fast responsiveness to grant the user the ability to perform a handseal, complete it and use its corresponding technique in the same post. This means that Magure clan members will not have to wait for their next post for their jutsu to activate. This technique can only be used if Fast responsiveness is ready to be used(meaning not in a cool down state) and will increase the cool down for Fast responsiveness to 8 posts every time this technique is used. This technique does not require hand signs to use, since it is a supplementary technique.

Name: Saving Grace
Rank: E
Type: Clan
Element: -----
Range: Self
Description: This passive technique goes back to the fact that members of this clan are faster, but a bit more fragile than the average person. This allows the user to go into a hyper mode, in which can only be triggered when the clan member is in a state of danger that is life threatening or can cause severe damage to the user of this technique. This hyper mode increases all of the user’s capabilities and allows the user to completely dodge any and all attack that can prove fatal or critical so long as the technique itself isn’t something inescapable (like a technique that blows up an entire island), and/or rescue someone else from a similar situation. This technique does not require hand signs but has a cool down of ten posts. This technique is said to be the lucky part of being a Magure clan member. Opponents whom have had the privilege of seeing such luck say that it wasn’t luck but a giant angelic spirit that had engulfed their body and spared them.

Name: Magure Predator Mode
Rank: E-S
Type: Clan
Element: Dependent on the users primary element
Range: Self
Description: The users skin pigmentation is changed into the color that is representative of their element (Light hue of orange for fire, light hue of blue for water, white for lightning, an earthly green for Earth, and a light hue of teal for wind) and patterns form on the users body (Wave like patterns for water, spiraled patterns for wind, blue cracks for lightning, thorn like patterns for Earth, and dark red tiger scratch patterns for fire.) This technique can be activated or canceled at will, lasts 5 posts, and has a cool down period of 10 posts
Techniques and disadvantages of Magure Predator Mode:
Main technique: User can infuse element with weapon
Disadvantage: Cannot infuse too much of the element into the weapon or it will destroy it and damage the user.

Fire) Techniques: Hot skin- Opponent can be burned when making contact with user’s skin
Heat tolerance- Can withstand intense levels of heat. Cannot withstand fire completely, but as the user grows stronger so does the tolerance
Can shoot fire from the palm of their hands- Heat damage is dependent on user’s level

Disadvantages: Higher intolerance to water: User receives significantly more damage to water than usual
Cannot create lava, only fire: User can only produce fire
Water) Techniques: Breathe underwater- Can breathe underwater as long as the user remains in this form
Tolerance to underwater pressure- Can withstand intense pressure underwater. Higher level = Higher tolerance
Water jutsus are increased two fold- Water jutsu power is doubled

Disadvantages: Higher intolerance to lightning: Lightning attacks do more damage to the user
Fragile: User is weaker to physical attacks

Lightning) Techniques: Quicker reflexes- Quicker evasion skills, and quicker reaction time
Paralysis- Can cause temporary immobility and numbness
Lightning rod- Can absorb lightning/lightning attacks and release it

Disadvantages: Jutsus require 20% more chakra- User is drained of more chakra when performing a jutsu
Fatigue: Causes one post of fatigue after use of lightning Magure

Earth) Techniques: Super strength- Users physical strength is tripled
High tolerance to physical damage- Physical damage done to the user is halved
Dig- User can burrow deeply into the earth
Can create walls of sediment and rock- User creates a shield by stomping the ground. Height, width, and strength of the wall are determined by the level of the user

Disadvantages: Takes higher Ninjutsu damage- Weak to Ninjutsu attacks
High intolerance to lightning, moderately intolerant to fire: Weak to lightning based attacks, moderately weak to fire based attacks
Slower: The user can only use half of their normal speed; body weight is doubled

Wind) Techniques: Heightened senses- Users sense of hearing are drastically heightened
Trajectory change- Can change the trajectory of projectile weapons

Can jump to great heights- User can jump very high and without harming themselves (E rank- 15 meters, D rank- 30 meters, C rank- 45 meters, B rank- 60 meters, A rank- 75 meters, S rank- 90 meters)

Wind blast- Can blast wind from hands and feet. Force is determined by level

Disadvantages: High fire damage- Very weak to fire
Weak to sound- Weak to sound based attacks due to heightened sense of hearing
Weak to physical attacks- Weak to Taijutsu based moves

Name: Spiritual Heat
Rank: E
Type: Clan
Element: ------
Range: Self
Description: This technique is a passive jutsu which uses the user’s chakra to keep their body temperature from reaching dangerous heights or dangerous lows. The only exception to this technique is if the user uses Magure Predator Mode.

Name: Curved shot
Rank: D
Type: Clan
Element: -------
Range: As far as the projectile is thrown
Description: This technique does not require hand signs and allows the user to curve projectile weapons at the last minute. This technique can be used to send a kunai that has already missed, curving back at the target up to 10 meters. This technique lasts one post and has a cool down of three.

Name: Ricocheting Weapons
Rank: C
Type: Clan
Element: -------
Range: As far as the weapon goes
Description: This technique does not require hand signs and allows the user to infuse weapons with a thin layer of chakra. This will then allow the weapon to gain enough force to break a tree, and /or once or many times ricochet off of any surface to hit the designated target at strange angles. This technique lasts one post and has a cool down of three.

Name: Dying Star
Rank: B
Type: Clan
Element: -----
Range: 50 meter radius
Description: Dying Star: User focuses and creates a dense mass of chakra with a strong gravitational pull, attracting any nearby debris and metallic objects. The ball then floats above the user, implodes, and then bursts in a fiery explosion of energy and debris. The attacks accuracy is dependent on the opponent’s natural gravitational force on their body, so if the opponent were to have unnatural gravitational force acting upon their body, the accuracy of the technique would be affected.

Name: Guardian Angel
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: -----
Range: Self
Description: User creates a barrier that takes the form of an Angel. The Angel covers the user and or designated person with its wings. This technique lasts three posts, but prevents the user from moving the entire time; has a cool down period of 5 posts


Name: Fallen Angel
Rank: S
Type: Clan
Element: ---------
Range: 0 -50 meters
Description: This technique requires hand seals. After completing the required seals, the user will have summoned his guardian angel, which will engulf the user and emanate of the user as a giant angel made of chakra. The user will then have the option of either keeping the monstrous angel around him or manifests the angels chakra into a weapon. There are three ways to execute this technique. One could be by making physical contact with the target; once physical contact is made the angel will instantly engulf the target and trap the target within its body. After doing such the angel will rise 70 meters above ground and then drop all the way to the bottom, upon hitting any surface this angel will explode with the target inside of it, causing a large 100 meter S ranked explosion. This technique can be done also with weapons, in which the weapon will have to make contact with the opponent to do the capture/explosion process. Finally this technique can be fired from the user’s body to grab the opponent. This can only go up to 50 meters, but cannot cause harm to those that they wish to protect. After using this technique, one will be very tired and unable to use any clan jutsu for five posts.

Clan History: Magure clan members are descendants from two proud families from two proud countries. The Magure clan is the product of a farmer boy for the royal family of Spain named Heusen and a high ranked shinobi of the Blazing Moon clan, Yuzuki . Yuzuki was an elite shinobi whom was arranged to marry with the handsome warrior of her clan, but during an unusual mission to Spain she met the farmer boy who swept her off her feet. The two returned to japan, but didn’t return to her homeland, instead they ran away to start their own family. Yuzuki’s father wanted the bloodline of his clan to go one through her children and he believed that if the two best warriors have children, that their children are destined for greatness. In honor of her father she attempted to keep the bloodline moving along, but with Heusen, a man with no bloodline. Years later, trouble comes to paradise when Heusen fails his many attempts to get Yuzuki pregnant. Yuzuki contemplates going back to her father, and Heusen drops to his knees and prayed. A few tries later Yuzuki is pregnant, and all is well for a little while. 11 months later they had a beautiful baby boy and named him Kigoshi Hitake. On Kigoshi’s first birthday he fell seriously ill, and no matter what Yuzuki and Heusen did, Kigoshi was going to die. In desperation Heusen being a man of faith fell to his knees and offered his final prayer, and then he slit his own throat right in front of baby Kigoshi. A few hours later Yuzuki walks in to find her love lying on the floor lifeless. In tears she raged, as her judgement began to grow cloudy. She contemplated killing Kigoshi but for some reason , that seems strange to her, she didn’t. Yuzuki would then abandon Kigoshi in a house alone, with his severe illness. A day later Kigoshi is found by a Farmer lady, who had less experience than any medic. This farmer lady took Kigoshi and showered him in green herbs, and after two days under her care Kigoshi made a full recovery. Kigoshi grew up to be a strong and respected ninja of the mist village, but rumor has it that he is an extremely lucky man, but some of his enemies along with the farmer lady who raised him say that it's his father Heusen serving as his guardian angel. Kigoshi fathered three children in his lifetime : Aiden, Kaizo, and Enoshi. He believes that his father watches over them as well.




Village: \Kirigakure
Village Rank: Jounin
Skill Rank: A




Skill Specialty:
Main: Weaponry
Sub: Ninjutsu
Sub: Taijutsu
Elemental Affinity:
Main: Earth
Sub: Fire
Tertiary:

Special Characteristics: Expert at welding and weapon creation, gifted intellect, rapid learning curve
Flaws/Weaknesses: Seclusive, not compliant with others unless it benefits his pursuit of further knowledge





Name: Burakko Shinsei
Appearance: A blade that is pure silver in color, a pointed hilt, and has a chain attached at the end of it (Found around Kaizo's right wrist in its miniature state at all times)
Rank: S
Special Abilities: Doubles power of user's elements and weapon based jutsus, can extend up to 150 feet with chain and be used as a whip, and the chain can be used to launch Kaizo in the direction he specifies (However, this weapon can only be transformed to normal size by a ritual performed by all three Hitake Brothers, and the user must supply heavy amounts of chakra to use it).

Origin: Burakko Shinsei (Black Divinity) was created by Kigoshi Hitake along with the help of his three sons. They wanted to develop a powerful enough weapon to protect and regulate clarity within the Magure. The weapon was molded from precious metals, super heated by Kigoshi and Aiden in their Magure Predator Forms, then was cooled by Enoshi and Kaizo in their predator forms. After the completion of this magnificent weapon, their father explained to them that in order for the weapon to maintain stability it must be reduced in size and permanently bound to a host. He told them of the ritual he developed that would perform such a task, and that it must be performed by all three of them. Being an avid weapons enthusiast, Kaizo graciously offered himself to bear the weapon. Kigoshi warned Kaizo of the collateral this weapon took, but Kaizo remained undeterred, and offered himself again. Kigoshi respected his son's wishes and for weeks taught the brothers the ritual that would bound Kaizo forever to the weapon. After the ritual was mastered, it was performed, and thus began the eternal relationship between the weapon and Kaizo. The weapon was named Burakko Shinsei for its divine power and its parasitic qualities. (The weapon is 5 1/2 feet normal size and the chain wraps around Kaizo's forearm)



Name: Gishiki Tenrai Doki (Ritual of Divine Wrath)
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: -----
Range: Self
Description: *Must be performed only by all three Hitake brothers.*
As retribution, Kaizo slashes his wrist, allowing droplets of blood to seep into the bracelet. Kaizo connects his chakra flow to the blade, and Aiden begins the phrase that completes the ritual: Aiden: Tear your opponent to nothing- Gishiki! Enoshi: Blessed be the user who wields you- Tenrai! Kaizo: In the name of the Magure, allow me to wreak destruction upon my enemies- Doki! Burakko Shinsei is then transformed to its normal size and is ready for use. (The blade may only be used for three posts and will cause fainting if exceeded past that; has a cool down period of 15 posts)

Name: Astronomical Fury
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: -----
Range: 50 feet
Description: The user raises their hands to the sky and quickly focuses chakra into their wrists and summons a constellation made out of pure spiritual energy, that charges and violently rams, or shoots a beam of energy, at the opponent. The shape of the constellation is dependent on the constellation present in the sky that day. (Note that the attack can’t only be performed at night. Although the constellation may not be seen during the day, it is still there). Has a cool down period of 3 posts.

Name: Unmerciful Mother Earth
Rank: C
Type: Weapon
Element: Earth
Range: 100 foot parameter
Description: The user fills various clumps of sediment with shuriken and kunai and disperses them in a specified direction and place in the ground where they remain hidden. The clumps of sediment act as landmines, so they are motion sensitive. When the opponent steps on one of these clumps, or gets too close, the clump spins upward and bursts, sending shuriken, kunai, and bits of sediment at the opponent. Has a cool down period of 2 posts

Name: Yomi
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth/Fire
Range: 20 feet; encompasses user
Description: The user intensifies the ground around him with chakra. If the opponent is to step within that field of energy or make contact with it, the ground beneath him/her will begin to rot and burn wherever they step. This technique halves the opponents speed for two posts and does small fire damage to the opponent. Has a cool down period of 5 posts
Name: Super Nova
Rank: B
Type: Weapon
Element: Fire
Range: Self
Description: The user summons various flame enforced blades behind him that interconnect, forming the shape of the sun. The user can control the connecting blades by swinging his arms or tilting his finger in the desired direction. The technique lasts for 3 posts and has a cool down period of 4.

Name: Stone Shards
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Range: Long (75 feet)
Description: User summons two large clumps of rock and sediment onto the palm of his hands. The clump then rapidly rotates, shooting sharp, high velocity shards at the opponent. The technique has a cool down period of two posts.

Name: Dancing fans
Rank: A
Type: Weapon
Element: -----
Range: Wide (Surrounds opponent)
Description: The user summons shadow clones that are holding steel fans. The clones surround the opponent and begin to quickly spin around him/her, occupying all angles of the opponent’s field of vision. The clones then swing the fans, releasing several chakra enforced blades, shurikens, kunais, etc. at the opponent. Has a cool down period of 6 posts.




History: Kaizo is the middle child of the Hitake brothers. He was born in the hidden mist village along with his brother Aiden, and Enoshi, who was born two years after. Kaizo was the type of child who usually kept to himself, for he was always contemplative of what was around and possibly beyond him. Kigoshi took notice of his son's curiosity and began to read him stories; particularly those that focused on japanese mythology. Kaizo became smitten by the stories and begged his father to teach him how to read. Kigoshi happily did as his son pleaded. Kaizo had a very quick learning curve, so he grasped reading and understanding literature fast, and finished books that were a few years above his level. Surprised by his son's gifted intellect, and noticing that Kaizo quickly became dissatisfied with the remedial text that he brought him, Kigoshi began to bring him more advanced literature; such as the books he read to him on japanese mythology, and new books about Astronomy and the cosmos. Eager to learn more, Kaizo started the academy at the age of 6 and maintained his dedication to lucubration throughout. He graduated the academy at age 10.
Genin
After graduating the academy, Kaizo continued his search for knowledge and strength; still studying the cosmos and reading Japanese mythology for enjoyment.. Kaizo also began to rigorously study and practice weaponry and ninjutsu to increase his combat capabilities. Kaizo highly respected the finesse of the weapons he practiced with and decided to study welding and weapon crafting. Kigoshi was an expert weapons crafter in the Hidden Mist and took pride in the fact that Kaizo was interested in a similar passion. So, Kigoshi helped his son perfect the art of weapon crafting. As he improved this skill, Kaizo began to make and modify weapons for his own personal use. Kaizo was so caught up in his studies that he became practically non-existent to everyone around him. He became neglectful to his obligatory duties, such as attending missions, household duties, etc. It even got as far as him missing and failing his Chuunin exam twice because he forgot to attend. Finally, after much effort, his parents managed to make him more attentive to his priorities. He passed the Chuunin exam at the age of 14.
Chuunin
Now a Chuunin, Kaizo began to broaden his horizons. He began to improve and sculpt his body in order to maintain his health and increase his physical power. This time period of his life mainly focuses on Kaizo sharpening his skills and further increasing his repertoire for the Jounin exam. Through the constant encouragement of his brothers and parents, Kaizo became more involved with the public. Whether it be providing weapons for the hidden mist or frequently attending missions. It was through these missions that he was able to discover information on a weapon he thought only to be in myth. It was the Staff ofSusanoo; a powerful weapon spoken of in Japanese mythology that was said to be wielded by Susanoo himself. Enthralled by this information, he spent months focusing on only his training, passed the Jounin exam at age 18, and began his search for the staff. But his quest became derailed after the death of his parents. Devastated by this loss, Kaizo went into seclusion in his study, to distract himself from the heartache. He is rarely seen during the day, only when shopping for groceries or visiting his brothers. However, he is often seen training late at night in the forest outside of Kirigakure.

RP Sample: Kaizo awakes early in the morning, and performs his usual routine. Wash himself, grab whatever snack that first catches his attention in the kitchen, and head to his study. He enters his study and sits at his desk, which has an open book on Japanese Mythology on it, and a journal filled with notes right next to it. Kaizo quickly eats his snack, and continues where he left off in his studies from last night. He tries to piece information together that will bring him closer to the staff, but he draws a blank. Gritting his teeth, he chucks the book at his book case, knocking down several books. He curses under his breath and goes to attend to the mess. A book about storms and irregular weather patterns catches his eye. “Susanoo…” He thinks to himself. He quickly picks up the book, goes to a fresh page in his journal, and gets back to work.
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Re: Kaizo

Post by Unagi on Wed Dec 21, 2011 5:13 am

Alright, I’ll assume the clan jutsu are fine since the clan is approved.


Name: Burakko Shinsei
Appearance: A blade that is pure silver in color, a pointed hilt, and has a chain attached at the end of it (Found around Kaizo's right wrist in its miniature state at all times)
Rank: S
Special Abilities: Doubles power of user's elements and weapon based jutsus, can extend up to 150 feet with chain and be used as a whip, and the chain can be used to launch Kaizo in the direction he specifies (However, this weapon can only be transformed to normal size by a ritual performed by all three Hitake Brothers, and the user must supply heavy amounts of chakra to use it).

Origin: Burakko Shinsei (Black Divinity) was created by Kigoshi Hitake along with the help of his three sons. They wanted to develop a powerful enough weapon to protect and regulate clarity within the Magure. The weapon was molded from precious metals, super heated by Kigoshi and Aiden in their Magure Predator Forms, then was cooled by Enoshi and Kaizo in their predator forms. After the completion of this magnificent weapon, their father explained to them that in order for the weapon to maintain stability it must be reduced in size and permanently bound to a host. He told them of the ritual he developed that would perform such a task, and that it must be performed by all three of them. Being an avid weapons enthusiast, Kaizo graciously offered himself to bear the weapon. Kigoshi warned Kaizo of the collateral this weapon took, but Kaizo remained undeterred, and offered himself again. Kigoshi respected his son's wishes and for weeks taught the brothers the ritual that would bound Kaizo forever to the weapon. After the ritual was mastered, it was performed, and thus began the eternal relationship between the weapon and Kaizo. The weapon was named Burakko Shinsei for its divine power and its parasitic qualities. (The weapon is 5 1/2 feet normal size and the chain wraps around Kaizo's forearm)

Having a sword double the power of elemental techniques is a no. It doesn’t make sense.


Name: Astronomical Fury
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: -----
Range: 50 feet
Description: The user raises their hands to the sky and quickly focuses chakra into their wrists and summons a constellation made out of pure spiritual energy, that charges and violently rams, or shoots a beam of energy, at the opponent. The shape of the constellation is dependent on the constellation present in the sky that day. (Note that the attack can’t only be performed at night. Although the constellation may not be seen during the day, it is still there). Has a cool down period of 3 posts.

Could you give a more detailed explanation about the constellation? How big is it? What shapes can it take? How fast and powerful are the energy beams?



Name: Unmerciful Mother Earth
Rank: C
Type: Weapon
Element: Earth
Range: 100 foot parameter
Description: The user fills various clumps of sediment with shuriken and kunai and disperses them in a specified direction and place in the ground where they remain hidden. The clumps of sediment act as landmines, so they are motion sensitive. When the opponent steps on one of these clumps, or gets too close, the clump spins upward and bursts, sending shuriken, kunai, and bits of sediment at the opponent. Has a cool down period of 2 posts

This should be A-rank, and the parameter is too big.

Name: Dancing fans
Rank: A
Type: Weapon
Element: -----
Range: Wide (Surrounds opponent)
Description: The user summons shadow clones that are holding steel fans. The clones surround the opponent and begin to quickly spin around him/her, occupying all angles of the opponent’s field of vision. The clones then swing the fans, releasing several chakra enforced blades, shurikens, kunais, etc. at the opponent. Has a cool down period of 6 posts.

Two problems with this technique. First of all; to use this you would need the Shadow Clone Technique, which can easily be solved by adding it to your jutsu list. Second is the way these clones are used. From the description I can conclude that a lot of clones are created. I hope you do realize that shadow clones are very costly; your chakra is evenly divided among them. Make three clones, and you only have 25% of your chakra left.

The way I’m seeing this technique, it could easily be a variant of Tajuu Kage Bunshin no Jutsu, which takes immense reserves of chakra to perform and is banned at that. Keep this at four clones at max. Also, do the clones continue to exist after the jutsu or do they disperse?


Name: Super Nova
Rank: B
Type: Weapon
Element: Fire
Range: Self
Description: The user summons various flame enforced blades behind him that interconnect, forming the shape of the sun. The user can control the connecting blades by swinging his arms or tilting his finger in the desired direction. The technique lasts for 3 posts and has a cool down period of 4.

How many blades are summoned?


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Re: Kaizo

Post by Oasis on Wed Dec 21, 2011 3:47 pm

Okay, before this goes any farther, i feel that your clan has too many abilities. I know that your clan was already approved however your clan needs to be more focused on one aspect, Because as it stands now it is very overpowered.
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