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Aiden Kidoshi Hitake

Post by Aiden on Sun Dec 18, 2011 4:32 pm


Name: Aiden Kidoshi Hitake
Nickname/Alias: The Bringer of Mischief
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Looks:
Aiden’s hair goes from short to long frizzy blond hair. He is extremely attractive with nice broad shoulders and a gorgeous smile. He also has flawless skin and his eye color is known to always change. Sometimes its due to lighting but he can go from having dark brown eyes to green eyes in a day. He has really thin eye brows and a normal sized nose. He stands 6' 2” tall and weighs 156 pounds. He was a great build to his body and is a very toned.

Personality: Aiden Hitake, a fresh -faced – nineteen year old teenager, whom spends most of his time alone or training. He is often found reading books on topics such as chemistry, spiritual science, and Theory/Philosophy. Apart from his love of knowledge, he is more of an opportunist when it comes to things that centers on, “Becoming Powerful”. This normally would be a positive thing but the people who know of Aiden’s past know how being “Opportunistic” has leaded him to doing questionable things. Things such as the death of his child hood best friend, Zaseraf, whom was killed by a village officer, two days after being accused of stealing a sacred sword from the village grave of legends. People who knew Zaseraf and Aiden believed that Zaseraf, was not a man of trouble, and that Aiden was possibly the person who stole the sacred sword. This gave Aiden his infamous reputation as the Bringer of Mischeif. This also made Aiden a prime suspect in result making Kirigakure no home for the young Aiden. His opportunistic actions have lead people, such as his late father, Kigoshi Hitake to question, his mental health. Other than the questionable actions in his past,Aiden seems to be like most teenage boys his age, and just like most of the boys around his area, he has grown a strong attraction to females and finds himself at times being randomly perverted, although he is quieter about it than others. Overall Aiden is a very ambitious person and has a great future, wherever he may end up.

Likes & Dislikes:
Aiden Likes: Rootbeer, Women, Science, Power, Jutsus, Training, Fighting, and Missions
Aiden Dislikes: Bullies, Mercenaries, and Whores
Catch Phrase: Funny how we say we don’t really want it, then we turn around and try to achieve it.




Clan Name: Magure (まぐれ)
Kekkei Genkai:
Enshi (遠視) : This ability typically means far sight and is a passive ability that can be used as will. This is the primary ability for members of this clan. The ability known as Enshi entails those members of this clan can focus in and see incredible farther than the average human being. Members of this clan have eyes that can fix in on anything or things up to 1000 meters away (approximately as high as a jet plan can elevate) and see things in that area with clear vision. This clear vision works despite the conditions wither it be natural conditions or conditions caused by jutsu such as the hidden mist jutsu. This technique doesn’t necessarily mean that members of this clan have eye balls popping out of their heads, or that they can’t see anything close up. It simply means that they can extend their vision at well. Because of this ability, members of this clan have outstanding peripheral vision, allowing them 360 degree vision on everything that is 10 ft from them. When using Enshi’s ability of far sight, members of this clan will lose 1ft of their 10ft -360 peripheral vision for every 100 meters used. If they max out at 10k meters they will no longer be able to see anything coming from behind them or at the side of them, until they decrease their range in vision. This ability serves well in battle because users will be able to see attacks coming from in front, the sides, and from behind for up to 10 ft around them, but it is up to their own capabilities to spot attacks coming from above or underground. This technique helps them rp wise because they will be able to spot enemies from a far, as long as nothing is obstructing their view(such as trees or whatever).

Kanpekina shotto (完璧なショット): This technique roughly means “perfect shot”. This ability is the secondary ability for members of this clan and was said to have been one of goods only blessings to the hunters of this clan. This blessing is what we mostly refer to as luck or even dumb luck, but for the hunters of this clan, its known as a “perfect shot”. Members of this clan are known to be undoubtedly lucky all the time. People whom would follow up on members of this clan would note extremely lucky events such as a giant tree branch breaking from a tree and barely missing a member of this clan because that member had sneezed and buggers came out and while stringing the buggers out he/she moved a few steps and barely missed the falling branch. At first followers just thought that it was dumb luck, but as lucky situations kept happening, spectators judged this as divine help. This doesn’t necessarily mean that members of this clan will always dodge death or will never find themselves unfortunate. This just means that in their life time, members of this clan will have experienced more luck than the average human, and the one activity that members do in which their luck never falters is shooting. This ability has it that no matter what conditions are supposed upon a member of this clan, that as long as they can see their target and fire(throw things or shoot things), that the shot will always hit the target so long as the target is still there, even if it was a sloppy shot. The only exception being that the target was protected by some kind of force in which would prevent this hunter from making contact with the target, unless the hunter had taken precautions to see around that situation. Ex: Ninja 1 is in a rain storm, and spots a pig, this pig spots the Ninja, this ninja is startled and throws a shuriken aiming for the pig’s neck. Chances are the shot will miss because the ninja was startled and threw the weapon out of impulse and the winds of this storm are blowing hard, if the pig doesn’t completely move out of the way, the shuriken will definitely hit the designated spot. EX2: Same situation, but this time the pig uses wind repellent jutsu, that protects him from incoming projectiles, the shuriken will still go to the designated spot, but will not hit the pig because the pig was protected and the shuriken couldn’t go through. Now if he had enforced the shuriken with a wind cutting technique to keep wind element jutsu from being used as a shield, then the pig will be hit in the designated area if it doesn’t move out of the way completely in time. This technique does not mean that the target will be auto hit, this only means that the weapon will always go where it needs to go, so long as the person with this ability can see and fire at the opponent. Now if the opponent does nothing valid to counter, dodge, or repel this weapon then it will count as a hit, in the hunter’s next response post.

Magure Waltz: Members of the clan (MAGURE) are naturally faster than the average person. This pertains to their reflexes; which includes faster responsiveness in battle, quicker thinking, and the ability to be lighter on their feet.


Faster responsiveness: During battle, member of the clan has the privilege of having faster reaction time than the opponent.
Ex. Say a member of the clan and another Shinobi are battling; for the sake of the situation, let’s say the first two posts consist of them forming hand signs. By the third post, the clan member is able to release the attack spontaneously right after completion of the hand signs, as opposed to the other shinobi, who must naturally wait a second or two for their attack to unleash. However, this ability has a cool down period of 5 posts and cannot under any circumstance be used until that cool down session is complete.
Battle Ex: Player 2 being a Magure clan member
P1: Performs Hand seals
P2: Performs Hand seals as well
P1: Sees that player two is performing hand seals but while player two started his set of handseals, I had finished mine. “ High Speed Fire Ball Jutsu” , I shout as this fire ball speeds towards player two at such blinding speeds.
P2: Had started his hand seals later than player one, but due to the ability of the Magure walts he was able to complete his hand seals before his opponent and send forth his high speed fire ball jutsu before player 1 could finish his hand seals and complete the technique. This ability can not be used for another 5 posts after this one. Player 2 stands there a bit tired from the adrenaline rush, and readies himself for his opponent’s response.


Quicker Thinking: The ability to think rationally and quickly under extreme duress; greater analytical skills. The ability to have great perception of what is real and illusion

Common Ex. Allows the clan member to break out of a genjutsu or binding technique. Can be used only once per battle and when in a moderately fatigue state
Lighter on their feet: Self-explanatory. This part of the Magure Waltz gives clan member the ability to be quicker and lighter on their feet. In result, allowing clan members to even glide/surf over surfaces (Water, magma, thorns, etc). Members of this clan can glide/surf over these surfaces with no damage done, so long as their feet is still moving, keeping them a few inches off of the surface, regardless of what kind of surface.

Ex. Increased speed, Gliding, Ice Skating like motion

Clan Symbol:

Clan Jutsu:

Spoiler:

Name: Hand Speed
Rank: E
Type: Clan
Element:-----
Range: Self
Description: This technique utilizes the Magure Walts’ ability of fast responsiveness to grant the user the ability to perform a handseal, complete it and use its corresponding technique in the same post. This means that Magure clan members will not have to wait for their next post for their jutsu to activate. This technique can only be used if Fast responsiveness is ready to be used(meaning not in a cool down state) and will increase the cool down for Fast responsiveness to 8 posts every time this technique is used. This technique does not require hand signs to use, since it is a supplementary technique.

Name: Saving Grace
Rank: E
Type: Clan
Element: -----
Range: Self
Description: This passive technique goes back to the fact that members of this clan are faster, but a bit more fragile than the average person. This allows the user to go into a hyper mode, in which can only be triggered when the clan member is in a state of danger that is life threatening or can cause severe damage to the user of this technique. This hyper mode increases all of the user’s capabilities and allows the user to completely dodge any and all attack that can prove fatal or critical so long as the technique itself isn’t something inescapable (like a technique that blows up an entire island), and/or rescue someone else from a similar situation. This technique does not require hand signs but has a cool down of ten posts. This technique is said to be the lucky part of being a Magure clan member. Opponents whom have had the privilege of seeing such luck say that it wasn’t luck but a giant angelic spirit that had engulfed their body and spared them.

Name: Magure Predator Mode
Rank: E-S
Type: Clan
Element: Dependent on the users primary element
Range: Self
Description: The users skin pigmentation is changed into the color that is representative of their element (Light hue of orange for fire, light hue of blue for water, white for lightning, an earthly green for Earth, and a light hue of teal for wind) and patterns form on the users body (Wave like patterns for water, spiraled patterns for wind, blue cracks for lightning, thorn like patterns for Earth, and dark red tiger scratch patterns for fire.) This technique can be activated or canceled at will, lasts 5 posts, and has a cool down period of 10 posts
Techniques and disadvantages of Magure Predator Mode:
Main technique: User can infuse element with weapon
Disadvantage: Cannot infuse too much of the element into the weapon or it will destroy it and damage the user.

Fire) Techniques: Hot skin- Opponent can be burned when making contact with user’s skin
Heat tolerance- Can withstand intense levels of heat. Cannot withstand fire completely, but as the user grows stronger so does the tolerance
Can shoot fire from the palm of their hands- Heat damage is dependent on user’s level

Disadvantages: Higher intolerance to water: User receives significantly more damage to water than usual
Cannot create lava, only fire: User can only produce fire
Water) Techniques: Breathe underwater- Can breathe underwater as long as the user remains in this form
Tolerance to underwater pressure- Can withstand intense pressure underwater. Higher level = Higher tolerance
Water jutsus are increased two fold- Water jutsu power is doubled

Disadvantages: Higher intolerance to lightning: Lightning attacks do more damage to the user
Fragile: User is weaker to physical attacks

Lightning) Techniques: Quicker reflexes- Quicker evasion skills, and quicker reaction time
Paralysis- Can cause temporary immobility and numbness
Lightning rod- Can absorb lightning/lightning attacks and release it

Disadvantages: Jutsus require 20% more chakra- User is drained of more chakra when performing a jutsu
Fatigue: Causes one post of fatigue after use of lightning Magure

Earth) Techniques: Super strength- Users physical strength is tripled
High tolerance to physical damage- Physical damage done to the user is halved
Dig- User can burrow deeply into the earth
Can create walls of sediment and rock- User creates a shield by stomping the ground. Height, width, and strength of the wall are determined by the level of the user

Disadvantages: Takes higher Ninjutsu damage- Weak to Ninjutsu attacks
High intolerance to lightning, moderately intolerant to fire: Weak to lightning based attacks, moderately weak to fire based attacks
Slower: The user can only use half of their normal speed; body weight is doubled
Wind) Techniques: Heightened senses- Users sense of hearing are drastically heightened
Trajectory change- Can change the trajectory of projectile weapons

Can jump to great heights- User can jump very high and without harming themselves (E rank- 15 meters, D rank- 30 meters, C rank- 45 meters, B rank- 60 meters, A rank- 75 meters, S rank- 90 meters)

Wind blast- Can blast wind from hands and feet. Force is determined by level

Disadvantages: High fire damage- Very weak to fire
Weak to sound- Weak to sound based attacks due to heightened sense of hearing
Weak to physical attacks- Weak to Taijutsu based moves

Name: Spiritual Heat
Rank: E
Type: Clan
Element: ------
Range: Self
Description: This technique is a passive jutsu which uses the user’s chakra to keep their body temperature from reaching dangerous heights or dangerous lows. The only exception to this technique is if the user uses Magure Predator Mode.

Name: Curved shot
Rank: D
Type: Clan
Element: -------
Range: As far as the projectile is thrown
Description: This technique does not require hand signs and allows the user to curve projectile weapons at the last minute. This technique can be used to send a kunai that has already missed, curving back at the target up to 10 meters. This technique lasts one post and has a cool down of three.

Name: Ricocheting Weapons
Rank: C
Type: Clan
Element: -------
Range: As far as the weapon goes
Description: This technique does not require hand signs and allows the user to infuse weapons with a thin layer of chakra. This will then allow the weapon to gain enough force to break a tree, and /or once or many times ricochet off of any surface to hit the designated target at strange angles. This technique lasts one post and has a cool down of three.

Name: Dying Star
Rank: B
Type: Clan
Element: -----
Range: 50 meter radius
Description: Dying Star: User focuses and creates a dense mass of chakra with a strong gravitational pull, attracting any nearby debris and any lingering or projectile metallic objects. The ball then floats above the user, implodes, and then bursts in a fiery explosion of energy and debris. The attacks accuracy is dependent on the opponent’s natural gravitational force on their body, so if the opponent were to have unnatural gravitational force acting upon their body, the accuracy of the technique would be affected.

Name: Guardian Angel
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: -----
Range: Self
Description: User creates a barrier that takes the form of an Angel. The Angel covers the user and or designated person with its wings. This technique lasts three posts, but prevents the user from moving the entire time; has a cool down period of 5 posts


Name: Fallen Angel
Rank: S
Type: Clan
Element: ---------
Range: 0 -50 meters
Description: This technique requires hand seals. After completing the required seals, the user will have summoned his guardian angel, which will engulf the user and emanate of the user as a giant angel made of chakra. The user will then have the option of either keeping the monstrous angel around him or manifests the angels chakra into a weapon. There are three ways to execute this technique. One could be by making physical contact with the target; once physical contact is made the angel will instantly engulf the target and trap the target within its body. After doing such the angel will rise 70 meters above ground and then drop all the way to the bottom, upon hitting any surface this angel will explode with the target inside of it, causing a large 100 meter S ranked explosion. This technique can be done also with weapons, in which the weapon will have to make contact with the opponent to do the capture/explosion process. Finally this technique can be fired from the user’s body to grab the opponent. This can only go up to 50 meters, but cannot cause harm to those that they wish to protect. After using this technique, one will be very tired and unable to use any clan jutsu for five posts.


Clan History:

Magure clan members are descendants from two proud families from two proud countries. The Magure clan is the product of a farmer boy for the royal family of Spain named Heusen and a high ranked shinobi of the Blazing Moon clan, Yuzuki . Yuzuki was an elite shinobi whom was arranged to marry with the handsome warrior of her clan, but during an unusual mission to Spain she met the farmer boy who swept her off her feet. The two returned to japan, but didn’t return to her homeland, instead they ran away to start their own family. Yuzuki’s father wanted the bloodline of his clan to go one through her children and he believed that if the two best warriors have children, that their children are destined for greatness. In honor of her father she attempted to keep the bloodline moving along, but with Heusen, a man with no bloodline. Years later, trouble comes to paradise when Heusen fails his many attempts to get Yuzuki pregnant. Yuzuki contemplates going back to her father, and Heusen drops to his knees and prayed. A few tries later Yuzuki is pregnant, and all is well for a little while. 11 months later they had a beautiful baby boy and named him Kigoshi Hitake. On Kigoshi’s first birthday he fell seriously ill, and no matter what Yuzuki and Heusen did, Kigoshi was going to die. In desperation Heusen being a man of faith fell to his knees and offered his final prayer, and then he slit his own throat right in front of baby Kigoshi. A few hours later Yuzuki walks in to find her love lying on the floor lifeless. In tears she raged, as her judgement began to grow cloudy. She contemplated killing Kigoshi but for some reason , that seems strange to her, she didn’t. Yuzuki would then abandon Kigoshi in a house alone, with his severe illness. A day later Kigoshi is found by a Farmer lady, who had less experience than any medic. This farmer lady took Kigoshi and showered him in green herbs, and after two days under her care Kigoshi made a full recovery. Kigoshi grew up to be a strong and respected ninja of the mist village, but rumor has it that he is an extremely lucky man, but some of his enemies along with the farmer lady who raised him say that its his father Heusen serving as his guardian angel. Kigoshi fathered three children in his lifetime : Aiden, Kaizo, and Enoshi. He believes that his father watches over them as well.




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Re: Aiden Kidoshi Hitake

Post by Aiden on Mon Dec 19, 2011 5:14 am


Village: Kirigakure

Village Rank: Jounin

Skill Rank: A




Skill Specialty:
Main: Ninjutsu

Sub: Weaponry


Elemental Affinity:

Main: Raiton
Sub: Suiton


Special Characteristics:

Divine Voice: He is known to have the most beautiful male voice in the world. He can be found singing on his spare time, but what is most remarkable about his voice is his vocal range, and how loud he can project when he wants to. Rumor has it that sometimes his voice can be heard clearly over 100 meters away.


Faster responsiveness: During battle, member of the clan has the privilege of having 30% faster reaction time then their opponent. This does not mean that the user is faster than the opponent, it just means the can react sooner, but it is possible that they can be too slow to maneuver an attack. This special characteristic is particular to Aiden, Kaizo, and Enoshi.

Martial Artist: During his time in the village of Kirigakure, he had to learn to defend himself, or risk being killed by the villagers and thugs alike. So Aiden learned Martial Arts in his time their and became top of his class. That being said, Aiden is really good at hand to hand combat although this skill isn’t his primary or secondary specialty.

Hyper Observation/ Information Hording: Being as mischievous as he is, Aiden had to teach himself a few skills such as being able to retain and gather a lot of information in a short period of time. Part of being able to do this comes from Aiden’s incredible talent for spotting the smallest, yet most important details in various situations. Aiden has been known to be able to gather all the information in a text book by just skimming through every page, and to be able to spot a needle in a hay stake.


Flaws/Weaknesses:
Sensitivity: His body in general is a tad bit more fragile than the average person. It would talk one punch to his nose to cause bleed. This sensitivity has proven to be the reason why taijutsu isn’t one of his two main specialties. If he goes up hand to hand with a taijutsu specialist he will most likely end up being injured by the end of the fight, unless the taijutsu specialist just inst as good.

Trouble Maker: Maybe it’s because of the way he was as a kid, but there is just something about the way he carries himself and the look on his face that makes others believe that he is always up to no good. He tends to always get blamed for anything that goes wrong, even though it has nothing to do with him. The only time this disadvantage fails is if someone was with him at the time and proves his innocence, other than that he is usually the one that is blamed.

Blood Lust/ Mischief: This is what has become of Aiden during his years in kirigakure. Aiden growing up with people blaming him for many things that goes wrong, and his natural tendency to do things just to cure his boredom, he has developed a bad habit, and psychological tick. This was generally what his father, Kigoshi was worried about. Aiden would get random urges to go on an uncontrollable killing rampage. People have been known to be able to trigger this zone in which Aiden falls into, but nonetheless Aiden keeps himself from going through with it, by doing what he does best, which is cause mischief.


Weapon Info

Name: Jagaken

Appearance: This sword has a long 10ft blade, with the handle being the head of a snake with snake white skin and white scales still on it. Along the head is the end of the handle which has along bladed human like spine extending past the head as if it was the body of the snake. This part is razor sharps and can be used as a whip and ranges up to 50 meters.

Rank: D- S rank

Special Abilities: This weapon not metallic, rather it is made of strong bones that are as hard as metal and gets stronger as the user grows more powerful. Two main abilities are as followed:

• Jagaken can channel its wielder’s chakra throughout the entirety of the weapon. This brings the blade to life allowing the wielder to manipulate the spinal whip, blade, and snake head of the sword. This blade can also turn into a serpent’s bow, which is a white bow with a similar white serpent design as the sword form. In bow form the user is allowed to store chakra into this weapon to create chakra arrows, which travel at 50 mph and are sharp enough to penetrate through stone like butter. This does not necessarily mean that the bow cannot shoot physical arrows.

• When chakra is placed throughout this weapon in either sword(with spinal whip) form or bow form, the arrows or blades become as hard as titanium steel and can cut through stone like butter.

• This sword was said to have been created in the spirit of the Basilisk, god of serpents. This blade gives its wielder an unmatched ability to control all serpents and any creature that falls under this relation. This blade allows the user to use snakes as partners in fights and instantly stores all venoms or poisons that are affecting the wielder’s body into its composition making the venom or poison part of its blade or chakra arrows, therefore infecting anyone that it cuts with the poison. This ability is passive and will do this every time the wielder is infected with poison or venom, but it will only store the poison temporarily. When it takes in poison the poison lasts up to 8 posts maximum.

Origin: This blade belonged to an old warrior who lived somewhere outside of the mist village. This old woman use to roam the world collecting snakes and human bones in order to conduct her experiments. People believed that she gathered the human bones and serpents to create a sword, which lives off of the energy of its wielder. With this blade she performed many secret services for the kage until the day she was killed in battle. Her body was retrieved and she was buried in the Grave of Legends with her sword alongside her. A few months later her grave sight was reported as having been broken into. When authorities arrived to the sight all remained in place except for her weapon Jagaken, which to this day has not been found by authorities in kirigakure. Authorities reported that her only apprentice, Zaseraf had stolen her weapon and hid it. Zeseraf was killed in a confrontation with the village authorities, and the blade is rumored to now be with Aiden Hitake, best friend of Zaseraf Kitashi.


Aiden's Jutsu

Spoiler:

Name: Hand Speed
Rank: E
Type: Clan
Element:-----
Range: Self
Description: This technique utilizes the Magure Walts’ ability of fast responsiveness to grant the user the ability to perform a handseal, complete it and use its corresponding technique in the same post. This means that Magure clan members will not have to wait for their next post for their jutsu to activate. This technique can only be used if Fast responsiveness is ready to be used(meaning not in a cool down state) and will increase the cool down for Fast responsiveness to 8 posts every time this technique is used. This technique does not require hand signs to use, since it is a supplementary technique.

Name: Weapon Storage Seal
Rank: E
Type:-------
Element: ------
Range:Self
Description: This technique is a sealing technique that appears at will. The user will be able to seal within him/her up to 200 weapons. This seal can be made loose so that the user can draw weapons from the seal mid battle without completely shattering the seal.

Name: Saving Grace
Rank: E
Type: Clan
Element: -----
Range: Self
Description: This passive technique goes back to the fact that members of this clan are faster, but a bit more fragile than the average person. This allows the user to go into a hyper mode, in which can only be triggered when the clan member is in a state of danger that is life threatening or can cause severe damage to the user of this technique. This hyper mode increases all of the user’s capabilities and allows the user to completely dodge any and all attack that can prove fatal or critical so long as the technique itself isn’t something inescapable (like a technique that blows up an entire island), and/or rescue someone else from a similar situation. This technique does not require hand signs but has a cool down of ten posts. This technique is said to be the lucky part of being a Magure clan member. Opponents whom have had the privilege of seeing such luck say that it wasn’t luck but a giant angelic spirit that had engulfed their body and spared them.

Name: Magure Predator Mode
Rank: E-S
Type: Clan
Element: Dependent on the users primary element
Range: Self
Description: The users skin pigmentation is changed into the color that is representative of their element (Light hue of orange for fire, light hue of blue for water, white for lightning, an earthly green for Earth, and a light hue of teal for wind) and patterns form on the users body (Wave like patterns for water, spiraled patterns for wind, blue cracks for lightning, thorn like patterns for Earth, and dark red tiger scratch patterns for fire.) This technique can be activated or canceled at will, lasts 5 posts, and has a cool down period of 10 posts
Techniques and disadvantages of Magure Predator Mode:
Main technique: User can infuse element with weapon
Disadvantage: Cannot infuse too much of the element into the weapon or it will destroy it and damage the user.

Fire) Techniques: Hot skin- Opponent can be burned when making contact with user’s skin
Heat tolerance- Can withstand intense levels of heat. Cannot withstand fire completely, but as the user grows stronger so does the tolerance
Can shoot fire from the palm of their hands- Heat damage is dependent on user’s level

Disadvantages: Higher intolerance to water: User receives significantly more damage to water than usual
Cannot create lava, only fire: User can only produce fire
Water) Techniques: Breathe underwater- Can breathe underwater as long as the user remains in this form
Tolerance to underwater pressure- Can withstand intense pressure underwater. Higher level = Higher tolerance
Water jutsus are increased two fold- Water jutsu power is doubled

Disadvantages: Higher intolerance to lightning: Lightning attacks do more damage to the user
Fragile: User is weaker to physical attacks

Lightning) Techniques: Quicker reflexes- Quicker evasion skills, and quicker reaction time
Paralysis- Can cause temporary immobility and numbness
Lightning rod- Can absorb lightning/lightning attacks and release it

Disadvantages: Jutsus require 20% more chakra- User is drained of more chakra when performing a jutsu
Fatigue: Causes one post of fatigue after use of lightning Magure

Earth) Techniques: Super strength- Users physical strength is tripled
High tolerance to physical damage- Physical damage done to the user is halved
Dig- User can burrow deeply into the earth
Can create walls of sediment and rock- User creates a shield by stomping the ground. Height, width, and strength of the wall are determined by the level of the user

Disadvantages: Takes higher Ninjutsu damage- Weak to Ninjutsu attacks
High intolerance to lightning, moderately intolerant to fire: Weak to lightning based attacks, moderately weak to fire based attacks
Slower: The user can only use half of their normal speed; body weight is doubled
Wind) Techniques: Heightened senses- Users sense of hearing are drastically heightened
Trajectory change- Can change the trajectory of projectile weapons

Can jump to great heights- User can jump very high and without harming themselves (E rank- 15 meters, D rank- 30 meters, C rank- 45 meters, B rank- 60 meters, A rank- 75 meters, S rank- 90 meters)

Wind blast- Can blast wind from hands and feet. Force is determined by level

Disadvantages: High fire damage- Very weak to fire
Weak to sound- Weak to sound based attacks due to heightened sense of hearing
Weak to physical attacks- Weak to Taijutsu based moves

Name: Spiritual Heat
Rank: E
Type: Clan
Element: ------
Range: Self
Description: This technique is a passive jutsu which uses the user’s chakra to keep their body temperature from reaching dangerous heights or dangerous lows. The only exception to this technique is if the user uses Magure Predator Mode.


Name: Lightning Weapon(s)
Rank: D
Range: -----
Type: Ninjutsu/ Weapon
Element: Raiton
Handsigns: posts of loading is required instead
Description: This technique requires one post of loading. While loading, their palms glow blue. Once the technique is ready the user can create weapons up fo 6 feet long with raiton chakra. When the target is hit with one of these weapons, they will suffer a little shock. These raiton weapons are weaker than the actual weapon but can prove to be quite helpful when needed. These weapons last 3 posts and this technique has a cool down of 4.


Name: Curved shot
Rank: D
Type: Clan
Element: -------
Range: As far as the projectile is thrown
Description: This technique does not require hand signs and allows the user to curve projectile weapons at the last minute. This technique can be used to send a kunai that has already missed, curving back at the target up to 10 meters. This technique lasts one post and has a cool down of three.

Name: Serpents Arrow
Rank: C
Range: 60 meters
Type: Ninjutsu/ Weapon
Element: -----------
Handsigns: Required
Description: This technique allows the user to infuse chakra into their bow and shoot out arrows with a large coat of chakra around it forming a snake. This allows the user to manipulate the arrow as they wish within a 60 meter range. This technique can be done with more than one arrow, and lasts up to 4 posts and has a 6 post cool down.


Name: Lightening Arrows
Rank: C
Type: Weaponry
Element: Raiton
Range: 0-60 meters
Description: This technique requires hand signs. After completing the required hand seals the user will be able to use his/her raiton chakra to forge 14ft long and 3 ft wide arrows made of pure raiton chakra from the palm of his/her hands at will. These arrows can be used on any bow without causing harm to it. The user can make up to 100 lightning arrows per post, these arrows move at 50 mph. If these arrows make contact with an opponent, it will cause temporary paralysis in the area, where the opponent is hit. This technique can penetrate through stone objects and earth element jutsus like butter, and if it hits water it will cause a electric surge throughout the water. This technique can not harm anything made of Fuuton chakra, and lasts 3 posts and has a cool down of five posts.


Name: Water infusion
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu/ Weapon
Element: Suiton
Range: as far as the weapon can be thrown
Description: This technique requires hand signs. When the hand seals are complete the user will be able to infuse weapons with suiton element chakra. When a weapon is infused with suiton element chakra the weapon has a thin baby blue coat of chakra. Upon contact the weapon will release 80 pounds of pressure, pushing anything back 5 ft. This jutsu can be used in combination with other infusing techniques except for fire. This technique lasts 4 posts and has a cool down of 6.


Name: Ricocheting Weapons
Rank: C
Type: Clan
Element: -------
Range: As far as the weapon goes
Description: This technique does not require hand signs and allows the user to infuse weapons with a thin layer of chakra. This will then allow the weapon to gain enough force to break a tree, and /or once or many times ricochet off of any surface to hit the designated target at strange angles. This technique lasts one post and has a cool down of three.

Name: Dying Star
Rank: B
Type: Clan
Element: -----
Range: 50 meter radius
Description: Dying Star: User focuses and creates a dense mass of chakra with a strong gravitational pull, attracting any nearby debris and metallic objects. The ball then floats above the user, implodes, and then bursts in a fiery explosion of energy and debris. The attacks accuracy is dependent on the opponent’s natural gravitational force on their body, so if the opponent were to have unnatural gravitational force acting upon their body, the accuracy of the technique would be affected.

Name: Lightning net
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: ------
Range: 0 – 25 meter in radius
Description: This technique requires hand signs. After this technique is completed allows the user to create a small ball in his hands made of purely raiton chakra. At will the user can throw this ball and make it explode into a 25 meter chakra net, made of pure raiton. If this net lands on the target(s) it will cause shocking damage, and trap the user for 3 posts. This technique can be broken out of by brute strength of someone of higher rank or with a wind element jutsu cutting throw it.

Name: Mizu shokushu, Water Tentacles
Rank: B
Range: 15 meters
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Suiton
Handsigns: Required
Description: After completing hand signs this technique allows the user to summon water from the earth that will wrap around the user’s back and create tentacles made of water chakra. These tentacles come in eights and range 15 meters long. These tentacles can be used as limbs for as long as they are on the user’s back. During this time the tentacles will be conductors of lightning or electricity and can cause the user damage if it makes contact with lightning or electricity. These arms are three times the strength of the user, they are also as durable as steel and as sharp as a katana. These tentacles can be used to to grab hold of things and can also serve as a advantage for the user to use the tentacles as a conductor for their lightning jutsu to shock the people they capture without damage done to them. The only way lightning damage can be done to the user, is if the lightning does not come from them. This technique lasts 8 posts and has a cool down of 10.


Name: Guardian Angel
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: -----
Range: Self
Description: User creates a barrier that takes the form of an Angel. The Angel covers the user and or designated person with its wings. This technique lasts three posts, but prevents the user from moving the entire time; has a cool down period of 5 posts


Name: Raitoningu no Ratto (Lightning Rats)
Rank: A
Range: 35 meters long
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Raiton
Handsigns: Required
Description: After completing hand seals this technique leaves the users hand blue for two posts. When the user is ready he can slam his hands on the ground anytime within the two posts and cause a thunderous sound to come about. Following the thunderous sound will be rats made of raiton chakra charging at the target(s). These rats move at 40 mph and explode on impact causing a surge of electricity to engulf the target. There are exactly 35 rats everytime this jutsu is used, and if this technique makes contact with water it will cause electricity to surge through the water. This technique lasts 2 post maximum and has a cool down of 4 posts. The user can also use the rats to spy on others.

Name: Serpent of Lightning, Resuka
Rank: A
Range: 0-20 meters
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Raiton
Handsigns: Required
Description: Using the raiton chakra attribute of the clan the user will create a large black Taipon serpent made, purely of chakra. This jutsu is a serpent made of chakra that ranges 20 meters long and 15 meters wide, and moves at 20 mph.This technique comes from the hands of the user, and can split up to five. In which the length and width of each snake becomes the dividend of the amount of times it has been split. Ex: if split into 5 heads, they become roughly 3 meters wide and 4 Something meters long. This technique causes shocking damage. This technique lasts 5 posts and has a 6 post cool down.


Name: 100 Arrow Ritual, Reokashimito
Rank: S
Range: 60 meters
Type: Ninjutsu/ Weapon
Element: Raiton/ Suiton
Handsigns: Hand Signs are required
Description: After completing the necessary hand signs this technique will cause the user’s bow to turn blue. This will allow the user to shoot out over 30 arrows at one time. These arrows are all made of blue chakra and travel as fast as 80mph. These arrows do slicing damage along with shock damage. If one of these arrows hit the target the target will be dealt with a pierching wound 4 feet long in the area, they will also become wet around the area as the area that was hit will go numb and immobile for 3 posts. These arrows have horrible accuracy and can be dodged, but are indestructible. After all the arrows have hit the ground the user will land in the middle revealing the design in which he/she has made with the arrows. The design will be the face of a dragon and from the design a huge burst of blue chakra will rise up and enter the user’s bow. At will the user can fire out of his/her bow a huge 40 meter long and 20 meter wide dragon, with the body of a snake, which is made of pure chakra. This dragon can move at 100 mph and can be controlled by the user’s bow. This dragon is the combination of water and lightning chakra and causes critical damage from the combination of water and lightning, along with 100 arrows when contact is made. This dragon can only last for 2 post and can only be used twice per topic.



Name: Fallen Angel
Rank: S
Type: Clan
Element: ---------
Range: 0 -50 meters
Description: This technique requires hand seals. After completing the required seals, the user will have summoned his guardian angel, which will engulf the user and emanate of the user as a giant angel made of chakra. The user will then have the option of either keeping the monstrous angel around him or manifests the angels chakra into a weapon. There are three ways to execute this technique. One could be by making physical contact with the target; once physical contact is made the angel will instantly engulf the target and trap the target within its body. After doing such the angel will rise 70 meters above ground and then drop all the way to the bottom, upon hitting any surface this angel will explode with the target inside of it, causing a large 100 meter S ranked explosion. This technique can be done also with weapons, in which the weapon will have to make contact with the opponent to do the capture/explosion process. Finally this technique can be fired from the user’s body to grab the opponent. This can only go up to 50 meters, but cannot cause harm to those that they wish to protect. After using this technique, one will be very tired and unable to use any clan jutsu for five posts.




History:
Genin Arc

Magure clan members are descendants from two proud families from two proud countries. The Magure clan is the product of a farmer boy for the royal family of Spain named Heusen and a high ranked shinobi of the Blazing Moon clan, Yuzuki . Yuzuki bore Heusen a child that they named, Kigoshi Hitake, whom would then go on to having three children of his own. The oldest he called Aiden Kidoshi Hitake. Aiden grew up with the love of his mother and father, and by age four, he already had two younger brothers, one by the name of Kaizo, and the final brother was named Enoshi. At his young age, Aiden began to show much interest in spiritual energy and the concept on how spiritual energy just like natural energy cannot be destroyed, only transformed. These fascinations with the arts lead to Aiden training under a local clan member, Jaithen along with attending kirigakure’s shinobi academy at an early age.

By age six, Aiden had already completed his second year at the academy, making his mother and father very proud. While in school Aiden’s training with Jaithen was going exceptionally well, though he could not yet master every single technique thrown at him, he was able to break down and understand the clan techniques taught to him and come up with ways to make them better. It became clear to Jaithen that information gathering and comprehend was a beautiful talent that Aiden had possessed. Jaithen would show and explain high ranked techniques to Aiden and have him analyze them, and think of ways to improve upon them. Aiden’s parents never really understood where Jaithen’s school was located, but Aiden always told them that not assigning one place as the training area gives the student a sense of freedom, and incentive to train and grow, no matter what the location maybe. So under that idea Jaithen’s school didn’t have a specific location but training sessions took place in random parts of the mist village. Although these locations didn’t sound too appealing to the wealthier members of the clan, the training was exceptional and it showed in the amount of successful students Jaithen had. There Aiden made many friends, and met a young girl around his age named Sonya. Sonya like most girls was very intelligent and focused on her craft, while Aiden on the other hand had developed a knack for getting in trouble to cure his boredom. At first it started as just innocent fun such as cherry bombs in the school’s bathrooms to causing food fights. He then graduated the academy with his friends and became the first genin of the three brothers.

Chuunin Arc
Shortly after graduating from the academy, Aiden’s brothers became Genins as well. Aiden’s relationship was a good one, and for a while was a great example to them. As a genin, Aiden was assigned to a jounin from the village, named Kentoshi . Although Aiden had not stopped training with Jaithen , he found it extremely difficult to keep up with Kentoshi’s teachings, yet meet Kentoshi’s expectations. Under the supervision of Kentoshi , Aiden began his training in Weapons. Aiden found this aspect to be very interesting, and shortly learned to combine jutsus with his weaponry skill. Aiden had trained hard with Jaithen and Kentoshi until he has completed all that they had to teach him for his rank. He continued training under both masters until the age of 14 where he would then sign up for the chuunin exams. Aiden survived the first two rounds of the chuunin exams but then lost to one of the other genins by the name of Zaseraf. Since he had gotten as far as the second round he was still promoted to Chuunin but Zaseraf got promoted to jounin. After the exams Zaseraf and Aiden became close friends, but this would prove to be a bad partnership for Zaseraf. Aiden started to get into a lot of trouble and a lot of fights, followed by many reports for breaking and entering. Zaseraf became a highly respected jounin in the village, and because of him, Aiden was shown mercy by the villagers and his peers alike. Aiden’s best friend Zaseraf later became the apprentice of the village voodoo priestess, Danka whom became a personal errand girl for the kage. Aiden and Zaseraf’s friendship gradually flourished as the two began to take missions together, and even occasionally take part in some mischievous activities.

Jounin Arch

Three years later, Aiden’s relationship with his brothers have weakened due to him being away on missions. His two other brothers had become chuunins at this time and had been away on missions as well. Aiden and his parent ended up spending time together but his father quickly started to lose admiration for Aiden’s hard works. Aiden ended up going through the whole phase of attempting to gain his father’s approval, but no matter how hard Aiden tried, there was always something to criticize in the eyes of his father. Two years later, Aiden gets arrested after losing control of himself on a battle field and this causes his father to think that Aiden has completely lost his mind. Eventually he was let out and became hell bent on becoming the mizukage. He trained hard along side of Zaseraf, and registered for the Jounin exams. Zaseraf and Aiden performed well in the exams but just like last time, Aiden lost to Zaseraf in the final round. It took some serious consideration before the mizukage had allowed Aiden to become a jounin. Aiden began to become a bit impatient with his training, and then one day Zaseraf’s master was reported dead. Only Zaseraf and the mizukage were allowed to attend her funeral. She laid there lifeless in her casket and along with her was sword. This was supposed to be a secret kept from everyone except for Zaseraf and the Mizukage, but Zaseraf told Aiden everything. Zaseraf had no idea that Aiden would actually attempt to break into the heavily guarded cemetery and take the sword from her casket. After taking the blade, Aiden hid it from Zaseraf and shortly after Zaseraf was visited by the village guards. Aiden and the entire village witnessed as Zaseraf being publically beaten and interrogated for the sword. Zaseraf said nothing although he had a good idea on who might have taken the blade. Zaseraf was beaten and interrogated until he finally stood up for himself, but by this time he was too late, he had taken quite a beating and could not fight them off himself. Aiden watched as his best friend was killed . Aiden had never thought that they would actually kill him and when they did he retreated back to his house. People who knew Zaseraf and Aiden believed that Zaseraf, was not a man of trouble, and that Aiden was possibly the person who stole the sacred sword. This gave Aiden his infamous reputation as the Bringer of Mischief. This also made Aiden a prime suspect in result making Kirigakure no home for the young Aiden. His opportunistic actions have lead people, such as his late father, Kigoshi Hitake to question, his mental health. The mizukage had Aiden and his family put under investigation, and once Aiden found out he escaped the village and headed for the sound village along with the sacred blade.


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I wake up the day after arriving to my home village. As my body regains its consciousness I am overwhelmed by the welcoming aroma of muffins in the air. It is all silly because while there seems to be nothing but darkness out there in the world to me, the only thing I can depend on is there always being comfort here at home. I stretch my arms out as I lay in my bed looking outside at the window to my left. As I stare out my face literally lights up as for the first time since ive arrived, I have noticed that the sun has returned. I am filled with joy as I can now understand the mouth watering smells of sweets coming from the outside. The villagers must be celebrating the sun right now, and as I come to this realization, my confirmation is nearly instant as I can faintly hear a shout from a distance. All I can make out from the shouting is , “Praise Hakushin” and some cheering following after. This brings a smile to my face, but only for a moment, as my attention turns to the ceilings, and as I began to observe the paintings around my room. I am taken back, by what the designers have done to it. As I can recall there was a few things that ive agreed to and one of them were that I would like my room to be made over and though this was a long time ago I am now realizing the things they have done.[/size][/font]



My room is filled with animated images of every villager of Nadaregakure. This normally would have freaked me out and to be honest if today was any ordinary day then I would have probably asked for it to be changed. Seeing as today isn’t ordinary the images of all the faces both deceased and the living are all staring at me smiling. This was impressive to me because they weren’t just smiling and standing there, they were all doing something related to what they do as part of their everyday life currently or before they died. They all had little bubbles near their heads and words written down on them, each containing a sentence that would hint at their personalities. I laugh at one that looked like a kid that had fallen into a duck pond, with a live duckling stuffed in his mouth and what appears to be a mother duck letting out a loud quack, as it says in his bubble, “Nobody can take a joke”. I think to myself that I actually like this room as I get dressed to go about my day. As much as I feel like lingering about and prolonging what I have to do, I know the longer I take the harder it will be to do, so I make my way upstairs to my office and begin to write my will. I write this in my finest ink and best paper , and with caution I begin:



Dear Nadaregakure,

I am Aeneas Soriano, the first Takekage and your Blood Moon Prince. I’ve been your kage for a majority of my life and now I must take my leave. This time its not the last time, under no circumstance will I return to power. I am sure that many of you may think that I’ve betrayed you or abandoned you. All I can say is that you might be right about most of whatever comes across your mind, but ive never betrayed you. I have dedicated my entire life to you and your children, and still as I write this letter I am praying that in some way or form, that I am helping you guys a bit more. I have learned that as far as the idea of world peace goes, that it is very possible, but this world just doesn’t want it. We rather hate each other and be quick to end lives that aren’t our own. This world is damned by your previous leaders and as far as villages go I want you all to remember that no matter what happens after I am gone, that we are the better people. Upon my absence Nami Dragonhato will be your new Takekage, and Synyster Kenshou will be not only the rank of jounin, but also the future Atsusakage. I also leave control of the death country to Genesis Garisha and the Blood Moon Dynasty to my little brother Finnik. As far as my weapons go I will leave them behind as my gesture to you all that my fighting spirit has not been broken and that I have not lost faith in you guys. I leave my Haiten blade and White Fang to Nami, My Alma Buskador to Synyster Kenshou, and my Mask of Hakushin to Finnik. I hope that they take good care of my blades for that is all they will have to remember me by. Please understand that as long as I am your kage , you will never achieve world peace, as my reputation is horrible amongst the nations, but my leave wont be make things any easier. Its time that you guys become the protectors of the village and if it comes down to it kill all your enemies, but never surrender. I trust that you all will make me proud, so that if the day comes that I can come back to you, that I will be able to fall to my knees and say once again, that I am home.



As I finish this letter I am satisfied and I hope that I didn’t leave anything out. Funny thing is as the clock hits 9 I realized that this letter has taken up my entire day. I spent most of the time trying to find words to explain myself and even after many hours I cant seem to shake the fact that these words are no more than satisfactory. I mean how do you tell the people you care about that you can no longer be with them? I could just go, but just doing anything was never my style, I always wanted everything to be right and specific so that I can avoid the unnecessary stuff in between. Anyways my time is running short so I get up and neatly folded my letter. I begin to follow the help as they follow the instructions that I have left them literally a few hours before I went to bed and begin to head out of the mansion. I look to one of my butlers and entrusted him with all my weapons and the letter. I smile at him and even hug him for his great work as he reacts with just the most puzzling look. I begin to walk throughout the village as I first decide to village the waterfall pool. This interesting little place is one of the most relaxing locations on the village, and now that im about to go, I wish I would have spent more time there. I walk up to the water and as I expected I cant see my reflection. Regardless, memories flow through my brain like the waters of the falls. I remember as if it was yesterday, my first day as kage:

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That memory makes me chuckle, thinking of how sweet those days were, especially those days with her. It seems ive just been so caught up in serving everyone that I never even had the time for her, not even time to mourn my losses. Its sad really cause for a while life was actually fun, I was actually a teenage boy, what happened? I stand up keeping my eyes fixed on the water as my memories of the place come to an end, or atleast that’s as far as im willing to let them go, cause then I decide to visit one of my personal favorite place, Mt. Hakushin. I continue my walk towards the mountain as I pass by the Aeneas coliseum and my eyes widen a bit and like last time memories come like water of my first ever coliseum fight:

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I cant help but wonder whatever happened to that masked man. He was really good and im sure even though I don’t know exactly what he does that he is in a good place now, assuming that he isn’t dead. I keep pushing forward as I walk pass a mirror and stop right in front of it barely noticing the man in the reflection. I take notice of how beautiful ive become, as I gently rub my face I can feel the youth against my finger times as I now pass my hands through my hair allowing my long white hair to fall, tickling my forehead. Its sad, looking at myself looking so young, when I feel so old. What have I been doing? It must be that in some way I feel like I am literally the father of the village, there is no telling the countless times I had to act as such, but a few entertaining ones come to mind:

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I get much closer to mt, hakushin. I look back at the village and smile but one thing that catches my attention the most was the sight of my kage mansion. In that mansion lies the office in which I made the first decision which altered penultimately would change the fate of the entire world:

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I was young then, yet Istill don’t regret my decision, but why did I do it then. It could have been that back then I thought just like everyone else. The village with the stronger shinobis gets to call the shots, and for a long while we held our own in terms of value and quantity. But if my intentions were really just for the best interest of my village, who would have stopped me from taking kusamuragakure, or even kazangakure for that matter. Even back then, when I wasn’t sure on exactly how to do it, peace was my main objective. I chuckle a bit as that had quickly back fired. It seemed that my dear friend rather kill me then understand how peace could have benefited him. Well he had proven already that just like me , he can keep his village alive, but as far as alive goes his village had always had the ghost town feel to it, but I guess that’s the way he likes it. One thing that im definitely going to regret is that I never got to tell him how I feel about him. The truth is that Dominic Edrick was just a bigger fish than he was, but even then maybe if I was a little less careful around him :

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Well maybe not, I don’t know how anyone could be more careless then I’ve been when it comes to tenzou, and to be honest the whole breaking of the table now gives me a little laugh. Its cool cause now im thinking back at it I cant help but feel a bit cool, but I know better. I know that if it wasn’t for the fact that I was literally standing up for my family the whole time, there would be no way I would dare to put myself in such a position. Hm, family, I dont really know what that is all of a sudden you know. I never had a mother or a father, actually the closest thing that ive experienced that has ever came to a father moment was that one time in that very same meeting, the Kanetsukage wanted to protect me. He pretty much told me to calm down and put himself in the way of his best friend. That was simply amazing in my eyes, mostly because of the fact that I was more than willing to cut through him as well, but that gesture was a powerful one. It calmed me instantly, and from then ive been trying to work on my “maturity” level. But there really is no point after a while, its silly how the simplest ideas are sometimes the hardest to sell. I fight to protect my friends, yet somehow im always the villain. Ive been to every village there with even an ounce of life. My visit to hyougagakure was actually about putting away differences to establish peace, and well lets just say that topic ended with explosions. Ive also visited the jungle village once too, after traveling all that way the kage pretty much dismissed me right away wanting nothing to deal with me. Shippugakure and Boufuugakure never really liked me so that’s a given, but surprisingly the sand village was disappointing. I look towards the gates as I continue to think of how that went for me. In all honestly I expected to be welcomed as a hero, since before there village even came together I bent over backwards to help the sand ninjas to the best of my ability. Allowing them to work in my village and even tried training one of them, I took them in as my own. Now they work with a mass murder, and worse a criminal of a village that cared for them.

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I get much closer to my favorite spot on this mountain and I see a spot quite familiar to me. Oh yes, our training grounds, speaking of family I guess I do know what that can be like. Ive had two people that were like family to me. Nami and Synyster, though I wonder if they will care for me when im gone or will they just chose not to understand and take the abandonment as a sign to give up. I surely hope they keep fighting cause if this wasn’t my fate then that’s what I would do. But now its seems that I cant help but fall into yet another wave of the good times.

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You know Nami and I never did get to play that prank on jojo, and it seems like most of our found memories were all spent training . I know I left them with a lot of unsolved puzzles but I have faith in them to get it done . I continue on before a tear escapes my eyes and as he got to his favorite spot. The tear comes down, this si the final destination. He thinks to himself that no one has ever been with him at this spot except for shizen, and if shizen was here, he would understand why holding your tears when standing in this spot was pointless:

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One of the most important part of the memory keeps playing over in my head. The part when I said, “Sometimes there is just soo much darkness that we forget that the light isn’t so hard to find”. I really found the light in those blue shirts. I bet a hand ful of them in my time and they all seemed very kind and nothing like my sworn enemy. I would even go as far as saying that I would die for them too, especially one in particular. I turn and there she is, waiting for me as planned, her name is eliza, and the way we met was a bit strange, its not every day you end up kidnapping a random girl and she ends up being a princess/ love of your life. We’ve had quite some strange adventures with her:

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Things get a bit quiet I try to move closer. I don’t know how she feels about me, but the feeling must be neutral if she is willing to leave behind a life of fame and leisure to enter a world of nothing with me. To me that means everything, and right now she means everything to me. So as I leave I look her in the eyes taking in her beauty for a minute. I attempt to touch her face gently, as by now im sure she gets where this will be going , but ill let her choose. Either way as long as im with her im satisfied , so I ask her a question a bit beyond my years, but seeing as there is no time but the present I ask, “Eliza will you marry me?”. I typically wait for a response but yes or now I try to get in that kiss leaving her like 20 seconds to think. I know cause im counting the seconds before touch down.
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Post by The Blainiest on Mon Dec 19, 2011 7:55 am

Yo man I feel good for you and all, but lemme say that ninjustu and weaponry are two things, and deserve that reward.



Cheshire Cat: Oh, by the way, if you'd really like to know, he went that way.
Alice: Who did?
Cheshire Cat: The White Rabbit.
Alice: He did?
Cheshire Cat: He did what?
Alice: Went that way.
Cheshire Cat: Who did?
Alice: The White Rabbit.
Cheshire Cat: What rabbit?
Alice: But didn't you just say - I mean - Oh, dear.
Cheshire Cat: Can you stand on your head?
Alice: Oh!

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Post by Aiden on Mon Dec 19, 2011 12:25 pm

I changed my primary to Ninjutsu, and my secondary Weaponry
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