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Kagejiro Senju (when im considered officially dead)

Post by Akki Kumori on Fri Dec 16, 2011 6:15 pm


Name: Kagejiro Senju
Nickname/Alias: The Manipulator (in referance to marionettes)
Age: 26
Gender: male
Looks:
Spoiler:

Kagejiro has a baby face, so now that he is 26 he still looks young. He has black hair which some of his bangs go under his headband he wears on his forehead. He wears another metal guard over his lower abdomen which has the senju clan symbol on it. He has three scrolls which carry three different sets of puppets, though he usually has his main puppet draped over him in a cloak like manner. He wears black clothing except over his left shoulder, which is wrapped in bandages. These bandages cover a scar he had gotten from a mishap with one of his puppets. He wears long pants, black shoes, and black fingerless gloves that come up to the elbow. He has dark green eyes that match his wood release element symbol. One scroll pouch is on his waist and the other two are on the outside of his knees.

Personality: Kagejiro is a joking and mocking ninja. He messes around a lot and loves pulling pranks. He is loose and doesn't take many things seriously. When you get to know him he is a great guy and would love hanging out with him. When you get on his bad side though watch out, he does not hesitate to kill. He is quick to lose his temper and long to bring it back under control. He has a thing for mythical creatures, thats why all of his puppets are some sort of mythical creature. He loves variety thats why all of his puppets have a different poison, allowing for many ways to kill someone. He has taijutsu so he can fight alongside puppets that he moves. Often you will see him playing with his reaper puppet. There is actually a secret behind his first and main puppet...
Likes & Dislikes:
Likes:
-Playing with puppets
-Making poisons
-being content
Dislikes:
-pain
-very talkative people
-litterers and forest killers
Catch Phrase: "AH, Such a nice specimen..."




Clan Name: Senju
Kekkei Genkai: Wood Release
Clan Symbol:
Spoiler:
Clan Jutsu:
Spoiler:

Hokage-Style Sixty-Year-Old Technique — Kakuan Entering Society with Bliss-Bringing Hands
Wood Clone Technique
Wood Release Secret Technique: Nativity of a World of Trees
Wood Release: Four-Pillar House Technique
Wood Release: Four-Pillar Prison Technique
Wood Release: Great Forest Technique
Wood Release: Nativity of a Sea of Trees (Manga only)
Wood Release: Serial Pillar Houses Technique
Wood Release: Smothering Binding Technique (Manga only)
Wood Release: Stocks (Manga only)
Wood Release: Transformation (Anime only)
Wood Release: Tree Bind Flourishing Burial (Anime only)
Wood Release: Wood Locking Wall
Wood Release: Wood Spikes Ring (Manga only)
Wood Release: World of Trees Wall (Anime only)
Clan History:
Spoiler:

The Senju clan is descended from the younger of the two sons of the Sage of the Six Paths. He was born with the "body" of the Sage, inheriting his father's strength of will and physical energy. The Sage's younger son believed that love was the key to bringing peace to the world. The Sage grew to favour the ideals of his younger son over those of his older son, who believed that power alone was the true key to finding peace. Therefore, on his deathbed it was the younger of the two brothers that the Sage chose to name as his successor. The elder brother, bitter and hateful at having being denied what he felt was rightfully his to inherit, attacked his younger sibling. The Uchiha clan would descend from the elder brother, resulting in the bitter centuries-long rivalry between the Senju and the Uchiha.

The Senju clan during Hashirama's era.
The Senju clan gained their fame in the era before the founding of the hidden villages. Where other clans focused on mastering one particular skill, the Senju were masters in all skills, from ninjutsu, to taijutsu, to genjutsu. Because of this, they were feared as "the clan with a thousand skills" (「千の手を持つ一族」, "sen no te o motsu ichizoku"), which gave them their name Senju (千手, "a thousand skills", "a thousand hands").
The most famous member of the clan was their leader, Hashirama Senju. His unique Wood Release ninjutsu even gave the clan the nickname the Senju clan of the Forest (森の千手一族, Mori no Senju Ichizoku). This Wood Release, and his ability to control the tailed beasts, made him the greatest shinobi of his time.

The Senjus' place at the top of the shinobi world was undisputed, but there was one clan that was able to stand up to them: the Uchiha clan. Whenever one country hired the Senju, their enemies would hire the Uchiha, and vice versa. This led to a rivalry between the two clans and, more specifically, between the leaders of the clans, Hashirama and Madara Uchiha.

The Senju and Uchiha form an alliance.
However, in a world of constant bloodshed, Hashirama had a dream of peace, and a great love for his fellow men. Known as the "Will of Fire" (火の意志, "Hi no Ishi"), this belief made the Senju clan propose a truce to the Uchiha clan. Weary of fighting, and persuaded by Hashirama's great charisma and negotiation skill, the Uchiha accepted, ending their bloody rivalry. Only Madara was against this truce, believing the Senju would one day destroy the Uchiha clan. He was forced to accept, but his humiliation wouldn't end there.
Some time after the alliance between the Senju and the Uchiha was signed, the Land of Fire hired them to stabilise its borders, and the clans created a permanent settlement within the country. Thus, Konohagakure was founded, and, with it, the system of one Hidden Village per country. As the system spread throughout the world, the constant violence stopped, and Hashirama's dream began to become a reality. But it would soon start again after Hashirama was elected as the First Hokage; a move Madara felt was a humiliation and made him decide to leave the new village, eventually returning to attack it.

The Uzumaki and Senju.
Throughout the years, the Senju retained their supremacy over Konoha, and made the village into what it is today. After the First Hokage's death, his younger brother, Tobirama Senju, stepped up to become the Second Hokage. Although likely not a Senju by blood, Hiruzen Sarutobi, who would become the Third Hokage after the Second's death, was trained by both the First and Second. His successor, Minato Namikaze, was the student of Jiraiya, who was a student of the Third. Tsunade, the Fifth Hokage, was not only a student of the Third, but also the granddaughter of the First and the grandniece of the Second. All of them strongly held to the Will of Fire philosophy.
It is unknown if the Senju clan still exists as an organisation since there are no known persons with the Senju name alive, although the Fifth Hokage, Tsunade, might have the Senju surname. It is very possible that the Senju clan disbanded into smaller clans and families, especially since they never had specific traits or techniques like the Uchiha or Hyūga clans with which to easily identify them. Their legacy however, lives on strongly in the hearts of the people of Konoha.




Village: Ex-Konoha
Village Rank: Aka no Katana
Skill Rank: S




Skill Specialty:
Main: Puppetry
Sub: Ninjutsu, Fuinjutsu

Elemental Affinity:
Main: Wood
Sub: Earth
Tertiary: Water

Special Characteristics:
- one handed seals
- Master Control: can control moe puppets than usual (one per finger)
Flaws/Weaknesses:
- Weakness to genjutsu (cant break out of genjutsu without the help of someone else)
- 30% less endurance (takes less hits)




Wood Jutsu:
Spoiler:


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Mokuton: Ningyou Kakuchou [Wood Release: Puppet Extension]
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wood
Rank: C
Description: Upon performing the necessary handseals, the user's chakra will travel through their chakra threads, connecting to the puppet. About five sharp stakes will burst from the puppet he/she is controlling. These stakes must come out vertically three feet. Curved stakes are not possible. However, the can come out of anywhere on the puppet: front, back, side, head, etc. The stakes burst forward for a range of one meter. The stakes will stay on the puppet until the end of battle.

Mokuton: Roddo no Jutsu [Wood Release: Rod Technique]
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wood
Rank: D
Description: The user creates a pole made of wood that is 2 feet long, and has a diameter of 1 inch out of their hand. This can than be used as a tool for close range combat. Easily broken by a strong force, or cut by particularly sharp objects; kunai get stuck in it, but an average sword of any kind can slice it in half.

Sen Ira no Jutsu- [Thorned Wire Technique]
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wood
Rank: D
Description: The user channels wood chakra into a wire, causing thorns to grow from it, essentially making the wire barbed. This is useful for making traps or for causing captured enemies additional pain and discomfort.

Mokuton: Mokuzai Bure-ka [Wood Release: Wood Breaker]
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wood
Rank: D
Description: The user of the just punches a wall or block of wood and shatters it as if he were strong enough to break through it. The the amount of chakra it takes to do this depends on the thickness of the wood that is targeted. Any wooden barrier too much taller or wider than the user won't be affected by this jutsu.

Mokuton: Rashingu Buranshi [Wood Release: Lashing Branch]
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wood
Rank: D
Description: Upon performing of the necessary handseals, the user lets his chakra seep into a tree by placing their hand on it. After that, the user can control a certain limb of that tree to attack the target in reach in a lashing attack.

Mokuton: Ki no Mikata [Wood Release: Tree Ally]
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wood
Rank: D
Description: The user's handseals will allow them to control a near by tree in slight ways. They can have its branches move at will to aid them in climbing it, or they can control a part of the tree to fail a target standing on it and make them fall.

C Rank Jutsus

Mokuton: Moku Joheki [Wood Release: Wood Locking Wall]
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wood
Rank: C
Description: Using the correct amount of chakra, the user creates a half-dome of wood to shield around him or herself. The shield can be burned by fire or broken if enough power is put behind the oncoming attack.

Mokuton: Mokusei Tate [Wood Release: Wooden Shield]
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wood
Rank: C
Description: A technique that instantly creates a wooden shield on a users hand or both hands if the shield extends beyond 3 feet. The shield is often heavy to be used while moving but is great to stop senbon, shuriken or kunai attacks and other low level attacks. The maximum size of the shield is 5 feet by 5 feet.

Mokuton: Mokuzai Kakujuu [Wood Release: Wood Expansion]
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wood
Rank: C
Description: The wood can grow larger than it already is. This is useful for creating wooden shields or longer staffs. However, this can't be used to grow the wood past the weight of an average human being.

Mokuton: Toba no Fuku [Wood Release: Thorn Whip]
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wood
Rank: C
Description: By performing a set of handseals, the user creates a vine-like whip from the palm of their hand that is covered in large sharp thorns. This whip can withstand several cuts from shuriken before it is actually cut through and is strong enough to support the user's weight if it is tied to something.

Mokuton: Yari Sousaku no Jutsu [Wood Release: Spear Form Technique]
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wood
Rank: C
Description: The user opens his palm and a large spear comes from it, extending in a quick jab motion up to 5 feet.

Mokuton: Moumoku Kougeki no Ca-curu [Wood Release: Blind Attack Ring]
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wood
Rank: C
Description: The user's handseals will allow them to surge chakra through the soil and help grow a wide circle of tall dark and pale green grass. This will help the user hide and attack the opponent while they are sight-hindered within the dense grass.

Mokuton: Ki no Joushou Jiku [Wood Release: Rising Axis of Wood]
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wood
Rank: C
Description: The user's chakra manipulation, through handseals, allows him to create a couple of meters long pillar strong enough to withstand his weight. The user will then use this wood beam as an axis for kicks, elevation and jumping.

Mokuton: Koi Mokusei no Ryouboku [Wood Release: Dense Wood Beams]
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wood
Rank: C
Description: The user will perform sneaky handseals and then take the chance of a target in his close range. Flashily, the user will slam his palms into the ground causing several moderately thin beams to shoot out of the soil in many directions around the user. This will give the user a bit of protection while assaulting the target. This jutsu can be used ultimately on a descending target. The shoots of wood will retreat a few moments after use.

Mokuton: Mokuzai Dakegi [Wood Release: Wood Blow]
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wood
Rank: C
Description: The user's handseals will allow them to create a wood extension from the ground in front of them. The wood beam will dart quickly towards the opponent and hit them forcefully..

Mokuton: Kuikku Bo-meran [Wood Release: Quick Boomerang]
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wood
Rank: C
Description: After finishing his handseals, the user will extend wood from his hands to create a simple wooden boomerang. The weapon can then be used to throw at the opponent. With its very simple aerodynamic design, this boomerang is quite efficient for being so swift.

Mokuton: Kusa Suke-chingu [Wood Release: Grass Skating]
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wood
Rank: C
Description: Performing handseals, the user will create a skate of wood that will help them move freely or glide across various convenient terrain, but ultimately grass.

B Rank Jutsus

Mokuton: Jikan no Ru-zu [Wood Release: Roots of Time]
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wood
Rank: B
Description: The user places their hand on the ground and summons roots from beneath the soil to tangle the opponents.

Moku Bunshin no Jutsu [Wood Clone Technique]
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wood
Rank: B
Description: A clone that is created by altering the user's own cells with chakra. It has more endurance than the normal shadow clones and doesn't disappear when hit by the enemies' attacks. Moreover, since it has the ability to merge with plants and trees, it is also great for reconnaissance missions.[2] They have the ability to travel far distances from the user and are able to communicate with the original. The clones can be as simple in function as a wooden dummy for use in the Body Replacement Technique.[3] The basic concept of the Shadow Clone Technique also applies to the Wood Clone Technique. However, the chakra-composed shadow clone and the cell-based wood clone are completely distinct techniques. By directly touching the wood clone with his hand, the user can absorb the information it gathered and changes the shape of the clone.[4]
The clone is made up of the user's own cells, transformed into vegetation. Because of this, when it is changed into a seed and ingested into the body or left on a target, it can be used as a transmission device of sorts. The user can use these to track their target as the seeds respond to their chakra only.[5] This and all other uses make this technique extremely convenient.

Mokuton: Juhi Koboshi [Wood Release: Bark Fist]
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wood
Rank: B
Description: After creating a fist with their hand, a thick layer of bark forms over their fist which allows them to cause more damage with their punches as well as stop minor weapon attacks with the thickness of this bark.

Mokuton: Jushi Hifu [Wood Release: Bark Skin]
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wood
Rank: B
Description: The user of this jutsu forms a layer of bark on a selected area of their body to act as a form of armor. This bark can stop a kunai attack and get it caught at best but it textured enough to cause some pain to someone who tried to punch it for example.

Mokuton: Kamisori no Ha [Wood Release: Razor Leaves Technique]
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wood
Rank: B
Description: The user creates of flurry of leaves that can hit an opponent causing multiple amounts of thin slices. After multiple hits this can cause excessive bleeding.

Mokuton: Shichuka no Jutsu [Wood Release: Four Pillars House Technique]
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wood
Rank: B
Description: This technique causes a fully-formed wooden house to grow out of the ground. Normally used during overnight trips or camping.

Mokuton: Shuryuudan no Hahen [Wood Release: Splinter Grenade]
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wood
Rank: B
Description: The user creates then tosses a wooden ball. This ball explodes on impact with anything, and bursts into hundreds of tiny splinters.

Mokuton: Takemorigakure [Wood Release: Hidden Bamboo Forest]
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wood
Rank: B
Description: The user will focus a large amount of chakra into their hands and then place them onto the ground. This will cause many shoots of bamboo to form around the target, either impaling them or trapping them.

Mokuton: Houshi Ba-suto [Wood Release: Spore Burst]
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wood
Rank: B
Description: By using this jutsu, the user creates a sea of fungi in the surrounding area. If the user has a gas poison, they can choose to have the spores release it as well, spreading it over a wide area.

Mokuton: Daijurin no Jutsu [Wood Release: Great Forest Technique]
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wood
Rank: B
Description: The user will use handseals to prod the formation of wood around one of his arms. The wood will then form into a spike extending to impale his opponent. Performing the half of the Tiger seal, the user can extend a large mass of spikes from his arm around the original one to strengthen his attack.

Mokuton: Jubaku no Jutsu [Wood Release: Tree Restraints]
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wood
Rank: B
Description: Using his ability to utilize Mokuton (wood release) techniques, the user will form handseals and cause beams of wood to emerge from the ground. These beams will wrap around his target to bind them.

Mokuton: Furaingu Supaiku [Wood Release: Flying Spikes]
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wood
Rank: B
Description: The user's quick handseals will surround him with a field of wooden blunt spikes. A falling enemy can be damaged and bruised by such projections. However, the normal use is for this field to erupt for the blunt spikes to fly up and came down crashing on the targeted enemy or enemies.

A Rank Jutsus

Mokuton: Kabe Panchi [Wood Release: Wall Punch]
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wood
Rank: A
Description: After hand-seals the user of this jutsu raises both of their hands up quickly and a large rectangular wall of wood comes up from the ground in front of them. The user then leans in and kicks the wall, moving it forward at a high speed.

Shizen Kaidan [Nature's Stairway]
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wood
Rank: A
Description: By continuously releasing chakra through their feet, the user is able to create a pathway of wood. Emerging as cylindrical pillars, trees form adjacently with variable heights and widths. The tops of these trees are adjustable from a road to a point. However, the user must be close to every part created, so a point has a good chance of hitting the user as well. Due to the way they form, the path created much resembles a wall or dam. Others can use or destroy the path as well.

Mokuton: Shichuro no Jutsu [Wood Release: Four Pillars Prison Technique]
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wood
Rank: A
Description: This technique causes a large cage of wood to grow out of the ground. It is a wood-type technique, which can only be performed by the most powerful ninja.

Mokuton: Gurando Makusei no Ki [Wood Release: Grand Wooden Tree]
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wood
Rank: A
Description: The user's string of handseals will call upon a large tree structure of wood, mainly a strong beam with several branches of wood extensions. Those extensions will then extend more and more and crash down upon the target, creating a huge network of timbered girders in the process.

S Rank Jutsus

Mokuton: Jukai Koutan [Wood Release: Forest Genesis]
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wood
Rank: S
Description: A Mokuton ninjutsu technique where the ninja uses their chakra to create the sapling of a great tree, and then continues to use their chakra to feed the root of the sapling. It grows, twists, and winds through solid obstacles, and wraps around the ninja's enemy, trapping them in its branches.
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Name: Wood Sculpting
Rank: C-Rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wood
Description: The user forms empty puppets, small weapons, and other miscellaneous items made of wood. After a puppet was made it can then be filled with poisons and weapons or sealed into scrolls. This jutsu can also mend broken puppets instantly on command with a hand seal.
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Name: Thousand Hand Technique
Rank: S-Rank
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wood
Description: The user's body protrudes an extra 998 arms at varying lengths, but keeping symmetry to the body. The arms can be used like regular arms.
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Name: Puppet Sensing
Rank: C-Rank
Type: ninjutsu/Puppetry
Element: Wood
Description: Using the natural ability of wood control as a senju the user who is a puppeteer can see in through a puppets eyes, so if the puppet is looking one way the user can see alos in that direction without having to look. The puppet can be blinded.



Earth Jutsu:
Spoiler:

D-Rank

(Doton No Jutsu) - Earth Style Technique

(Doton: Shinju Zanshu no Jutsu) - Earth Style: Double Suicide Decapitation Technique
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Element: Earth
Description: The user, emerging from the ground below the target area, pulls down the opponent so that only their head is above ground. Unable to move, the opponent can easily be decapitated or tortured.

C-Rank

(Doton: Ganban Kyu) - Earth Style: Bedrock Coffin
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Mid/Long
Element: Earth
Description: This jutsu allows the user to control multiple sections of rock and move them around their opponent. The user then forms two gigantic sections that crush the opponent.

(Doton: Moguragakure no Jutsu) – Earth Release: Hiding like a mole technique
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user changes earth into fine sand by channeling chakra into it, allowing the user to dig through it like a mole. While underground one can sense what is happening on the surface and use the information to launch a surprise attack on the enemy. Once can also hide deep in the ground, escaping to a depth where the enemy cant reach.

(Doton: Dorosandan) – Earth Release: Mudshot
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Element: Earth
Description: The user spits a thick globule of mud at the target. If aimed correctly, it can blind the target's vision and choke them. It can also be used to create a sticky patch on the ground.

(Doton: Doryuu Jouheki) - Earth Style: Earth Rampart
Rank: C
Type: Supplenetary
Range: Short
Element: Earth
Description: An earth jutsu that makes the earth rise like a Plateau and can be used with Waterfall Basin to make a waterfall.

(Doton: Doryudan) - Earth Style: Earth Dragon Bomb
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Long
Element: Earth
Description: When used with Earth Style: Great Mud River, this jutsu can create a dragon-like head to fire concentrated mud at an opponent. This can also be combined with a fire jutsu to shoot lava toward an opponent.

(Doton: Doryu Taiga) - Earth Style: Great Mud River
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Element: Earth
Description: This jutsu can transform the ground upon which the enemy stands into a river of mud to throw them off balance.


(Doton: Doro Hoshi) - Earth Style: Mud Indulgence
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Element: Earth
Description: This technique lets the user summon a river of mud. This technique can have water added to it to speed up the flow and increase its power.

(Doton: Retsudotensho) - Earth Style: Split Earth Turn Around Palm
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Element: Earth
Description: This technique causes the ground surrounding the enemy to spiral inwards on itself, burying them alive or crushing them. This technique is much more damaging if used in rocky mountainous areas, or inside a cave.

Name: Earth Release: Subterranean Voyage
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range:
Element: Earth
Description: A technique that transforms the earth surrounding the user into a fluid, allowing them to close in on the enemy with high speed by swimming underground. Since being under the ground is a blind spot, the target has no warning; allowing the user to launch a surprise attack. By using this technique in conjunction with a weapon, it also gains great effect as an "assault ninjutsu".

(Doton: Doryuu Kekai) - Earth Style: Earth Fissure
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Element: Earth
Description: This jutsu splits the earth apart to make a fissure. The size of the fissure is proportioned to the amount of chakra of the user.

B-Rank

Name: Earth Release Barrier: Earth Prison Dome of Magnificent Nothingness
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Short to Mid range
Element: Earth
Description: This technique traps the victims inside a self-repairing dome of earth which is almost instantaneously able to reform, even after Kiba hit it with his Passing Fang. Jirōbō was able to absorb the chakra of anyone trapped inside, something he enjoyed greatly. However, Jirōbō's chakra was not evenly distributed throughout the dome. Near the back, relative to him, his chakra was much weaker, making the dome weaker in that spot.

Name: Earth Release: Earth Spear
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Self
Element: Earth
Description: The user flows chakra through all parts of their body causing it to become noticeably darker, which increases their defensive power to its utmost limits by making the skin as hard as diamond. Furthermore, the destructive power of physical attacks is increased, making this a great all-purpose technique. The amount of techniques that can break through the areas hardened by the Earth Spear are close to zero, excluding its undeniable weak point: Lightning Release ninjutsu.

(Doton: Musaborudzuchi) – Earth Release: Devouring Earth
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Element: Earth
Description: The user performs five handseals and slams their palm on the ground. Instantly, the ground to the sides of the opponent take the shape of huge jaws and attempt to crush and stab him between them.

(Doton: Tsuchi Kairo) - Earth Style: Earth Corridor
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Mid
Element: Earth
Description: This jutsu will cause the earth in the surrounding area to rise up and over a target and create a cavern or dome, imprisoning the target.

(Doton: Arijigoku no Jutsu) - Earth Style: Antlion Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Mid/Long
Element: Earth
Description: This jutsu causes the ground and everything on and around it to be sucked in towards the middle of a large pit, much like the method an antlion uses to catch prey. Upon being dragged to the center, the victim will then be sucked underground. There the victim, depending on how deep the user makes them sink, will be trapped and/or suffocated.

(Doton: Doryu Joheki) - Earth Style: Earth Flow Rampart
Rank: B
Type: Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short/Mid
Element: Earth
Description: This technique raises a large ridge or hill (plateau) from the ground. The user can combine this jutsu with Water Style: Waterfall Basin Technique to create a waterfall.

(Doton: Doryuheki) - Earth Style: Mud Wall Jutsu
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Element: Earth
Description: The user spits out mud from their mouth onto the ground. The mud then solidifies into a large, protective wall of earth.

(Doton: Iwagakure no Jutsu) - Earth Style: Hidden in Stones Jutsu
Rank: B
Type: Defence/Supplementary
Range: Long
Element: Earth
Description: This is a technique that allows its user to blend into rocks and then move in and out of other rocks undetected.

(Doton: Doryuso) - Earth Style: Rising Stone Spears
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Element: Earth
Description: This technique lets the user condense mud or stone from the ground and shape them into spikes that will protrude from the ground to skew the target. The spikes cannot penetrate targets of greater density.

A-Rank

(Doton: Tsuchi Bunshin no Jutsu) – Earth Release: Shadow Clone Technique
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Element: Earth
Description: The user creates clones of earth and mud. Since they are made of such materials, they can reform after being hit by physical

(Doton: Yomi Numa) - Earth Style: Swamp of the Underworld
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Element: Earth
Description: This technique creates a swamp beneath the target (relative to them) that immobilizes them. If the swamp is made deep enough it will kill the target. The size of the swamp is proportioned to the amount of chakra of the user.

S-Rank

(Doton: Uiten Pen) - Earth Style: Wheel Of Fortune
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Element: Earth
Descripton: A form of summoning where the user first takes out a topographical map that they can use to change any earth-based feature of the battlefield.


Water Jutsu:
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D-Rank

(Kirigakure No Jutsu) - Hidden Mist Jutsu
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Mid
Element: Water
Description: The user creates a thick, dense mist that covers the surrounding area.

(Suiton: Mizu Kuri No Yaiba) - Water Style: Sword of Draining
Rank: D
Range: Short
Element: Water
Description: A technique that utilizes water to create a sword. The sword can be wielded in the normal fashion, allowing the ninja to cut and stab like with a normal blade.

C-Rank

(Suiton: Mizuame Nababara) - Water Style: Syrup Capture Field
Rank: C
Range: Short/Long
Element: Water
Description: The user projects a stream of sticky, syrupy liquid which can be spit onto a surface to form an adhesive trap or onto a person to inhibit their mobility.

(Mizu Bunshin) - Water Style: Water Clone
Rank: C
Range: Short
Type: Supplementary
Element: Water
Description: The user creates a clone of themselves made of water.

Hidden Mist Eye Sight Deprevation
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Element: Water
Description: Using the hidden mist jutsu the user reflects the natural light an a way that it blinds there opponent temporarily as long as the opponent is in the mist.
Note: Must have already used hidden mist jutsu

(Suiton: Mizu No Tatsumaki) - Water Style: Water Tornado
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Element: Water
Descripton: Utilizes water to create a spinning water vortex around the ninja. The water acts both as a barrier and attack mechanism. The power of the vortex is enough to knock an opponent unconscious. Can only be performed if there is a water source near by.

(Suiton: Suishouha) - Water Style: Water Shock wave
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Element: Water
Descripton: causes a large volume of water to materialize out of nowhere. The water can then be directed at his target.

(Suiton: Chakra Kenpa No Ame) - Water Style: Chakra Senseing Rain
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Element: Water
Description: A down pour of rain will fall and any thing with chakra that it touches the user can sense there location and instantly know there.

(Suiton: Suirou No Jutsu) - Water Style: Water Prison
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Element: Water
Description: Traps opponent in a orb of water that the user must maintain contact with or the jutsu is broken.

(Suiton: Mizu Kawarimi) - Water Style: Water Replacement
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Element: Water
Description: The user can freely transform his body into liquid. This form allows him to avoid taking direct damage from many physical attacks but can not attack while in this form.

(Suiton: Teppoudama) - Water Style: Water Bullet
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Element: Water
Descripton: A large sphere of rotating water that is spit out of the users mouth that can blast a huge area leaving it soaked.

(Mizu Kamikiri) - Rising Water Cutter
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Element: Water
Description: The user slams his foot to the ground, causing water to rise up and travel towards his target as a slicing jet.

(Suiton: Taihoudan) - Water Style: Water Gun
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Element: Water
Descripton: A strong water wave spit from the mouth that is more compressed than Chaos Water Wave and can carve the earth if used on the same area multiply times.

(Suiton: Seibun Houfutsu) - Water Style: Water Cannon Replica
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Element: Water
Description: After performing the required hand signs the user makes water rise from the ground and surround his target and then drown it.

(Suiton: Suichuu Teigen no Jutsu) – Water Release: Underwater Motion Technique
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Mid
Element: Water
Description: This Technique allows the user to properl themselves through a body of water by using their chakra. While underwater, this technique will also partially mask the users prescence.
Note: Must be a large water source such as a lake to use.

(Suiton: Suihachi) – Water Release: Hand of waves
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Element: Water
Description: the user will produce a fairly powerful jet of water from the user's hand.

(Suiton: Suishi no Jutsu) – Water Drowning Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offensive, supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Element: Water
Description: the user will gather a large amount of water to form a large spiraling stream of water. It can be guided to strike a target in a number of angles.

(Suiton: Daibakuryuu) - Water Style: Great Exploding Current
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Element: Water
Description: User creates a whirlpool that sucks any opponent in range underwater.(Must be performed on a water source)

(Suiton: Kokuun) - Water Style: Black Clouds
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Element: Water
Description: Creates small black clouds, which cover the area flammable oil.

(Suiton: Takitsubo) - Water Style: Waterfall Basin
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Element: Water
Description: This jutsu summons a large amount of water. Yamato used this technique along with Earth Release: Earth Flow Rampart to create a waterfall as an example of elemental chakra to Naruto. (No water source required)

B-Rank

(Suiton: Hahonryuu) - Water Style: Destruction Torrent
Rank: B
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short/Mid
Element: Water
Description: Water vortex created in the palm of the user’s hand that can then be blasted forward creating a spiralling wall of water that can be used to attack or defend. (No water source required)

(Suiton: Suiryuudan) - Water Style: Water Dragon
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Element: Water
Description: A huge rushing water projectile in the shape of a dragon that can level anything in its path.

(Suiton: Suiryuuben) - Water Style: Water Dragon Whip
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Element: Water
Description: This jutsu creates an orb of water from which several sharp whips of water emerge that can be directed towards and impale a target or multiple targets.

(Suiton: Teppoudama) - Water Style: Water Bullet
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Element: Water
Description: The user gathers water in their mouth and then spits out a large sphere of rotating water that can blast a huge area leaving it soaked.

(Suiton: Suirou No Jutsu) - Water Style: Water Prison
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Element: Water
Description: This jutsu is used to trap a victim inside a virtually inescapable sphere of water. The only downside to this technique is that the user must keep at least one arm inside the sphere at all times in order for the victim to remain imprisoned. This jutsu can't be performed without a sufficiently large body of water to supply the water for it. The target is unable to move while within it

(Mizu Kamikiri) - Rising Water Slicer
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Element: Water
This jutsu creates a fast jet of water running through the ground that is powerful enough to slice through solid rock.

(Suiton: Ja No Kuchi) - Water Style: Water Snakes Mouth
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Element: Water
Description: This jutsu allows the user to summon a large amount of water. The water then transforms itself into the shape of a snake and crashes down on their enemy, literally swallowing them. After it has swallowed them it turns into a river.

A-Rank

(Suiton: Daibakufu) - Water Style: Giant Water Vortex
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Element: Water
Description: After doing the needed hand seals a column of water will circle the ninja and then a large force of water will erupt to hit the attacker. Due to the force of the water the target will be fully enveloped by the water and at its mercy as is pulls them away.

(Suiton: Kyojin Nami Shougeki) – Water Release: Gaint Wave Crash
Rank: A
Type: Offensive , Deffence
Range: Long
Element: Water
Description: The user gathers a large amount of water that can then be used to crash into the opponent. It is strong enough to push back Killer bee in Eight tales form.
Note: requires a water source

(Suiton: Suijinheki) - Water Style: Water Encampment Wall
Rank: A
Type: Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short
Element: Water
Description: This defensive jutsu creates a wall of water around the user. This wall of water is especially effective at stopping fire techniques. The wall can be formed from a preexisting water source or by spitting a protective stream of water from the mouth. However, it is unable to defend against elemental combinations such as those employed by Kakuzu.

(Suiton: Koukasuijin) - Water Style: Hard Water Spike
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Element: Water
Description: The user generates a huge, highly condensed spike of water around their arm that drills opponents into the ground

(Suiton: Mizu no Tatsumaki) - Water Style: Tornado of Water
Rank: A
Type: Attack/Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Element: Water
Description: A technique that utilizes water to create a spinning water vortex around the user. The water vortex acts both as a barrier and an attack mechanism. The power of the vortex is enough to knock an opponent unconscious.


Fuinjutsu:
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Name: Generic Sealing Technique
Rank: D
Type: Fuinjutsu
Range: Self
Element: N/A
Description: This technique is a standard ninja skill which allows a ninja to summon an assortment of items that have been stored using fūinjutsu. Scrolls are the most common choice for item storage. When needed, the owner will activate the seals releasing their item or weapon of choice. Scrolls can also be used as ammunition for other weapons or have other seals inside of them, which expands the number of potential tricks a shinobi can use.[1]
Weapons are the most commonly sealed objects. Tenten, a weapons specialist from Konohagakure for example, uses this technique to store her many weapons, making them easier to carry around with her. Toroi of Kumogakure also used this technique to store his shuriken which he used in battle. Puppet masters also use this technique with their puppets either through hidden scrolls in various compartments or a simple seal as a means of increasing their own killing potential as well as hiding useful weapons from the opponent's sight. This can be seen with Sasori's Thousand Hands Manipulation Force.

A wide variety of other things can also be stored in scrolls, to be released when the scroll is opened or under a specific condition. In the manga, this is done with the Water Prison Technique by Kisame Hoshigaki. Along with a medium for his sharks, it was used effectively as a trap, immobilising the persons that tried to read the scroll.[2] In the anime this is seen when Shikamaru summoned a large amount of water, and with Tenten's Exploding Dragon Strike technique.
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Name: Summoning: Lightning Flash Blade Creation
Rank: B
Type: Fuinjutsu
Range: self
Element: N/A
Description: This is a special "ninja tool summon" that allows the user to seal ninja tools like swords or kunai into a scroll or their clothes beforehand, allowing them to be called upon when needed. The ninja tools can be summoned in an instant just by touching the sealing "marks" which can be drawn anywhere. The greatest advantage of this technique is that the time between taking out a ninja tool, taking the right stance and actually throwing it is greatly reduced. Also when a weapon such as a Fūma Shuriken is summoned, the time needed to throw it can be further shortened by having prepared the weapon in its fully extended form beforehand.
The ninja tools are thrown with the actual speed of a "flash of lightning", ruining the opponent's outset of the battle, and snatching away the initiative. Furthermore, because the summoned ninja tools can remain hidden until right before they are used, if this technique is mastered, there are an exceptional number of possible tactics. A large number of ninja tools can be stored within the sealing marks, which can make the efficiency of this technique last longer.
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Name: Portable Water Field
Rank: idk
Type: ninjutsu
Range: scroll
Element: N/A
Description: Shikamaru opens a scroll and lays it on the ground. He then performs the required hand seals and then taps his foot in the middle of the scroll, which summons a large amount of water that covers a wide area which, with the right timing, can be used against a Lightning Release technique; Shikamaru used this to channel Kakuzu's Lightning Release: False Darkness back at him.
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Name: Exploding Dragon Strike
Rank: idk
Type: ninjutsu
Range: all ranges
Element: N/A
Description: Through one of her scrolls, Tenten summons a large flame dragon that explodes upon impact.
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Name: Fire Sealing Method
Rank: B
Type: Fuinjutsu
Range: Scroll
Element: N/A
Description: A kind of fūinjutsu that involves sealing a technique's effects within a specific location. As it is tailored for fire release ninjutsu, it requires a caster well-versed in the exacting art of "Sealing Formulas", as well as in ninjutsu. The jutsu-sealing space in the scroll is left blank, for the formula to be inscribed in with a brush. After performing the needed hand seals, vapour appears from the scroll, and envelops the flames. They are sucked in towards the scroll, and the appearance of the kanji for seal (封) certifies the technique's completion. Once the sealing is performed, the technique's effects cannot be released anew as long as an unsealing technique is not applied. It is an effective technique to circumvent any secondary damage a dangerous enemy technique might cause. It is even capable of sealing the black flames of Amaterasu.
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Name: Finger Carving Seal
Rank: C
Type: Fuinjutsu
Range: Self
Element: N/A
Description: The user concentrates chakra into their finger and using the heat from that can apply writing on whatever they want to a surface. This technique however requires them to be very delicate with their chakra control. This technique causes slight discomfort for a living target and if it is on flesh, it will scar.
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Name: Five Elements Seal
Rank: A
Type: Fuinjutsu
Range: Touch
Element: N/A
Description: This jutsu produces a powerful seal that is used to block or disturb the flow of chakra in a target. Once the seal is completed, the target will become unconscious and unable to fight for a short time. Orochimaru performed this jutsu to tamper with the seal on the Nine-Tailed Demon Fox. The original seal allowed the Nine-Tails' chakra to seep out into Naruto Uzumaki, but the additional seal disturbs this, preventing Naruto from using the Nine-Tails' chakra or even controlling his own chakra properly. This is because an odd-numbered seal creates an imbalance when placed on top of an even-numbered seal. When Orochimaru later notices that the seal has been removed, he remarks that there are very few ninja capable of doing so.
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Name: Five elements Unseal
Rank: A
Type: Fuinjutsu
Range: touch
Element: N/A
Description: This technique is used to remove seals of up to equal power, like the Five Elements Seal.
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Name: All element sealing method
Rank: A
Type: Fuinjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This is an ugraded version of the fire sealing method. The difference is is that this fuinjutsu can seal any element. The seal can be written on any surface to be used, whether it be scroll, skin, or clothing, even kunai. The seal has five open circles on it, and it can seal one attack of each element. The rank of this jutsu is A but its chakra cost is a C level. Its just because of its intricacy. Once the attack is unsealed it can be used to power up other attacks or be used in the same way as it was sealed. It doesnt harm whatever it is sealed into. The seal can be written more than once but as long as it doesnt over lap another.

Non-elemental Jutsu:
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Name: Shadow Clone Technique
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Range:
Element: N/A
Description: Similar to the Clone Technique, this technique creates clones of the user. However, these clones are actual copies, not illusions. The user's chakra is evenly distributed among every clone, giving each clone an equal fraction of the user's overall power. The clones are capable of performing techniques on their own and can even bleed, but will usually disperse after one or two solid blows. They can also disperse on their own. The clones will be created in roughly the same condition as the original.
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Name: Chakra Threads
Rank: E
Type: Puppetry
Range: Short to long
Element: N/A
Description: Chakra Threads is a technique that is usually used by puppet users to allow them to control their puppets in battle. And because these strings are constructs made from concentrated chakra, they can be seen by people besides the user. Interestingly, as well as pulling objects towards them with the strings, the user can also "push" objects away from them as well, and even get moving objects like buzzsaws.[2] Chakra can also be transferred via the strings, such as to activate some abilities in puppets.[3] This means that the chakra strings can also be attached to other objects, allowing the user to control, or at the very least disrupt other things. In one instance, Kankurō uses chakra strings to trip Naruto Uzumaki when they first met.[4] In another, Chiyo uses chakra strings to control a person like a puppet. The strings can be made invisible, as Chiyo did with the Manipulating Attack Blades to sneak a string to bind Hiruko's iron tail.[5] This technique is limited to one string per finger for normal humans, but Sasori's modified heart was able to emit enough strings to control over one hundred puppets
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Name: Body Replacement Technique
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Short range
Element: N/A
Description: With this technique, one replaces their own body with a block of wood or some other object, the moment an attack lands. This creates an optical illusion, making the enemy think the attack was successful. From this, the user can use the lapse in the enemy's attention to attack or flee from the battlefield. Exploding tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise. It's a basic ninjutsu even taught at the Academy, but it's a useful art that can be applied in variety of situations.
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Name: Body Flicker Technique
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Range:
Element: N/A
Description: This technique is a high-speed movement technique, allowing a ninja to move short to long distances at an almost untraceable speed. To an observer, it appears as if the user has teleported. A puff of smoke is occasionally used to disguise the user's movements. It is accomplished by using chakra to temporarily vitalise the body and move at extreme speeds. The amount of chakra required depends on the overall distance and elevation between the user and the intended destination.
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Name: Summoning Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range:
Element: N/A
Description: The Summoning Technique is a space–time ninjutsu that allows the summoner to transport animals across long distances instantly.
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Name: Shuriken Shadow Clone Technique
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Short to Mid range
Element: N/A
Description: The user creates a thousand shadow clones from one shuriken, striking down the enemy. This is a technique that combines ninja tools with ninjutsu. Compared to normal shadow clones, clones of material objects are said to be on a far higher level. There is no need for preparations beforehand, like stocking up on shuriken, yet since the shadow clones are real and not illusions, all the shadow blades that fly around are equally lethal. Because the clones form in just an instant, completely evading them is next to impossible.
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Name: Killing Intent
Rank: idk
Type: General skill
Range: short range
Element: N/A
Description: Killing Intent, is simply the user exuding pure killing intention, and having it affect their opponent, themselves, and others around them,[1] up to the point of paralysing them with fear. When the Killing Intent is particularly strong, it can even give the victim visions of their own gruesome death. This can cause killing intent to be confused with a genjutsu, despite it not being a jutsu at all.
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Name: Silent Killing
Rank: idk
Type: N/A
Range: short
Element: N/A
Description: As the name suggests, this technique is simply a very quiet method of killing an opponent, usually from behind with a blade. Additionally, because the user is very silent, it cannot be defended against. The user will often slit their opponent's throat, preventing any cry that might give them away. The Seven Ninja Swordsmen of the Mist are said to be masters of this technique, and were even good enough to track and kill opponents through sound alone.
The Hiding in Mist Technique was used by Zabuza in conjunction with this technique.
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Name: Puppet Silent Killing
Rank: idk
Type: Puppetry
Range: short
Element: N/A
Description: Same as silent killing accept done with a puppet.

Name: Clawed Glove
Appearance:

Rank: B-Rank
Special Abilities: on the hands of the puppet master he wears fingerless gloves. These gloves have blades over the fingers like claws tha are attatched to wires. The gloves can be in claw form, spike knuckle form, or loose blade form where the blades shoot off and attatch to something, pulling it to Kagejiro or pulling him to it. the blades can retract when not in use. The wires can extend up to fifteen feet, but the wires can not cut things, only the knives can.
Origin: They were given to Kagejiro by a friend who helped him with close range fighting.



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Name: The Reaper
Appearance: (in character image)
Rank: C
Special Abilities: [spoiler]A puppet in the shape of a grim reaper. It Wears a black cloak, the only thing you see is arms hands coming out of the sleeves and the scythe it carries. Underneath the cloak the puppet looks somewhat like a skeleton. It has a demon-like face with four evil eyes, it has four arms, two it keeps at its side unless used, it has rib cage that can wrap around and immobilize an enemy, it has no legs but a tail-like spine that has rotating blades. the spine can extend and attack with, its arms can extend to great distances that form studs and can drain chakra from an enemy and place the chakra into scrolls
(Name: (Chakra Kyuuin Jutsu) - Chakra Absorption Technique

Rank: C-Rank

Type: Supplementary

Element: N/A

Description:
This jutsu allows the user to absorb their enemies chakra.The draw back
is the user must be holding onto there target for this jutsu to work.

blades can pop out on its arms and it spins like a tornadoe and can cause major damage, it can shoot out a cord with a knife on the tip out of its mouth and use to pull enemies into its attacks. This puppet can fall apart to combine with anyother puppet or onto the puppet master for extra strength. Its spine comes off, its arms come off, its torso comes off, and its head comes off. the arms go onto the the back of the other, the torso wraps around the torso of the other, the spine becomes a whip-link sword with the ability of spinning saws, the head forms a mask that can open up and shoot senbon.
Origin: First Puppet ever made based off of the first holloween character he saw when he could make puppets.

Name: The Dragon
Appearance:
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this puppet is 16 feet long and has a body diameter of 7 feet. It doesnt have wings but has spikes going along its back. There is a ring around its neck. On the ring are containers. In these containers are scrolls of the elements and poison and other stuff. The ring will spin to a certain position allowing the dragon to release an attack depending on the scroll out of its mouth. This dragon has a holding area in its stomach that is nearly unbreakable to any jutsu or attack. It is used to hold and transport captives and other things, dead or alive.
Rank: B
Special Abilities: Chakra enhanced holding cell in the stomach, Chakra Scroll holder around the neck, metal claws and teeth
Origin: Was the second puppet made by Kagejiro when he read about dragons later on history.








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Re: Kagejiro Senju (when im considered officially dead)

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Kagejiro's Secret Black Move: Ten Black Puppets. These puppets are the alter ego of Monzaemon's Ten White Puppets. There is a werewolf, weresnake, wererabbit, werebull, weretiger, wereeagle, wereturtle, wereshark, werefox, weremole, and a weredragon puppet. All in one scroll.

Name: Wereturtle
Appearance:
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Rank: S
Special Abilities: the turtle's main attribute is its large impenetrable shell. It can open up allowing the puppet master ultimate defense, the puppet master can use the turtle like a suit, still being able to control all the other puppets while being inside it. Its shell on the back can sprout spikes and spin along the ground like a death top. The turtle can withstand extreme heat, cold, pressure, and piercing due to its chakra enhanced defense. The turtle can also put the enemy into its shell and secret a gas that knocks the enemy out, then the turtle dumps the enemy
Origin: Made as a set when used in conjunction with the other puppets of the black set.

Name: Weremole
Appearance:
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Rank: S
Special Abilities: this puppet has claws that are two feet long. its a smaller puppet but it has a long reach, swinging its claws and slicing through almost any armor, able to pierce straight through an enemy and rip out their insides. It can shoot its claws like a missile, quickly punching a hole through whatever its aiming at. If this effect lasts long enough it breaks all the bones in the enemy's body. This puppet works in collaboration the the wereeagle. The wereeagle will pick up the weremole and spin while moving through the air, creating a high speed projectile
Origin: Made as a set when used in conjunction with the other puppets of the black set.


History:
Birth Arc:
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In Konoha during a short war a six month pregnant woman was in the hospital. Her child was having issues developing and she seemed to be drained of energy. The doctors were going to perform an abortion but she begged and pleaded. She would do anything to save her baby boy. One of the...less refined doctors made a suggestion. He suggested they try adding some of the First's DNA to help support the fetus. The woman, after all, was a part of the Senju clan. Three fifths of the doctors voted yes, so it was agreed to perform the operation. Ready samples that were left from before during Orochimaru's experimentations were used. The doctors injected the DNA straight into the fetus. The woman seemed to immediately gain some color back. Over the next few weeks the woman's stomach doubled in size. When a doctor checked her out she found out the woman now had two fully growing and healthy babies. The woman was over joyed but seemed serene about the whole thing. A couple months later she went into labor, but the woman never made a fuss. During the birthing processthe woman denied an epideral, but she never cried or made any notion of having any pain. Whent the first baby came out everyone was overjoyed, till the umbilical cord stopped short. Thinking it was wrapped around the other infant the doctors immediately went to working on getting him out. When the second infant was born an amazing discovery was made. The umbilical cord came out of the mother as one, then split into two as each segment went to the other infant. The cord was cut and disposed of. The two children were given to the mother and all the doctors left except one, who was setting up medical safeties. A messenger came in the main hospital door and the doctor back in the other room yelled for help.All the doctors ran to the room to see the woman turn into a bunch of pink petals and float out of the window to the great tree in the middle of Konoha. One of the doctors turned to ask the ninja what the message was. The father had died during combat, leaving these two twin boys without any parents.

Academy Arc:
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Growing up Kagejiro and his brother were inseperable, even at the youngest age they always seemed to be able to stick together. Kagejiro had a fascination for puppets. He loved being behind the scenes as he would make tiny puppets pull pranks on people. His brother seemed to love being out right in the front, being very verbose. Sometimes he would allow Kagejiro to allow to play with him like a puppet for fun. Kagejiro's skills as a Senju grew rapidly. His fascination with puppets grew as he realised how he could manipulate them so easily. His brother's skills grew as well, but more developed in the art of getting things done head on. Yet both loved to fight. They would wrestle together, never being able to best the other. And if one of the two got picked on the other could sense it, and soon would join the fight. Kagejiro's brother was a little creeped out at the fact his brother was so fascinated with puppets. He carved and widdled tiny figures and always had a joke for a puppet. The only thing kagejiro's brother ever did like using besides his own body were clones. Ofcourse Kagejiro would screw it up when he would come around, using a transformation jutsu to make himself look like a girl and mess around. They were good boys, but hated losing, still being good sports when they did. Which wasnt often they had to. Kagejiro made his first puppet out of the thing his brother was for halloween. It looked like the grim reaper. When his brother saw that he laughed and joked about it, but was very happy Kagejiro did so. He promised he would make it up to him one day, somehow he would.

Genin Arc:
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When the two brothers were ranked to genin they became over joyed. They wore different clothes, did things differently. The only similarity was there bodies. They had the exact same chakra signature and physique. They alone were assigned to one jounin to train them both, who was also a senju. His name was Yamato. Yamato taught Kagejiro and his brother some things about the senju clan and what they can do. All three of them were surprisingly not a very popular team because Yamato wanted to train the genin in peace and quiet. Every now and then they would take a mission from the Hokage just to get use to certain scenarios. Kagejiro worked on his puppetry, mixing it with his Senju abilities. He was able to use his chakra threads as direct ports to mend back together his broken puppet. His brother worked more on physical techniques. He learned to cover his body in a hard wood to use as a weapon and an armor. Both were excellent at hand-to-hand, but Kagejiro was better at lengthy fighting and his brother was better close up, the perfect combo. Yamato taught them as mich as he could, not holding back knowledge or going soft when telling the two boys what could happen. He treated them like they were his sons, and they thought of him as a father.

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After succesfully passing the chuunin exams Kagejiro and his brother still stayed together. They were always hanging out and only left eachother on "certain" occasions.Yamato still trained with them, but not as a sensei but as a peer. He didnt hold anything back in his fighting, pulling out the brother's potential. Kagejiro developed more in his puppet ways, creating a puppet in the shape of a dragon. His brother was quite impressed with it, and so was Yamato. Kagejiro's Senju capabilities greatly heightened his skill for puppetry. His brother was able to make three wood clones at once, and his fighting skills and speed were greatly improved. The brothers grew and learned even more. Together they could perform higher ranked jutsu from their clan and other things of their elements. Yamato became hard pressed every now and then by there skill. As the boys grew their bodies' appearance never faltered from the others. One day Yamato talked to the Hokage about the boys' growth. The Hokage was pleased and decided to give the boys a high ranked mission. When they passed the mission together they became jounin.

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One day Kagejiro and his brother were called to the Hokage's office. They were given a special assignment. To hunt down and capture an S-rank rogue ninja. If they couldnt capture him then they were to make him disappear, forever. Both young men knew what to do. They headed off into the forest, searching for the rogue ninja. A trap sprung up under them and both were ready. The ninja appeared and attacked. Near the end of the fight Kagejiro's brother was mortaly wounded. In a fit of rage Kagejiro was able to remove the ninja's right arm and paralyze him from the waist down. In a crazy escape attempt the ninja disappeared. Kagejiro knelt next to his brother, trying to aid him. But his brother stopped him, telling him that now he could repay him. When his brother died three seeds feel from his ear. Kagejiro picked them up and swallowed them, digesting and absorbing the information in them that his brother had recieved and learned, being now one young man. Following his brother's wish Kagejiro turned him into a human puppet. To try and hide the fact of what happened Kagejiro altered the physique and appearance of his brother to look like a humanoid fox. Because the puppet was his brother and had the same chakra signature as him noone could tell that there was someone else there, that the puppet used to be human, and used to be his brother.


Becoming Aka no Katana Arc:
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Kagejiro had become insane with his puppet fantasy, and had become dangerous to many around him. The Aka no Katana had contacted him about joining and he agreed, and now he waited. He was waiting in Konoha, about to leave it in a haste.
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Kagejiro and Jun sped through the forest looking for their target. They ran past a small ray of light poking through the tree top and a net with metal spikes flew up and tried to catch them. Being wary both shinobi escaped the trap. That is when the rogue ninja appeared. He wore a white cloak that had a red flame-like pattern at the bottom. He pointed and laughed at the two, drawing a sword. "You wont be able to catch me," he said. Jun laughed and made a few handsigns, then flexed his hands. A hard wood formed over his fists creating gauntlets. "We will have to see about that," Jun said. Kagejiro touched a scroll he had hidden in his vest, it was wrapped around his body and already open, ready for immediate use. His reaper like puppet appeared, far more proficient and deadly then when he first had constructed it. Jun ran forward, kagejiro's puppet close behind him. Kagejiro moved his fingers and the puppet's arm that was holding its weapon, a scythe, extended and swiped at the ninja. The rogue ninja blocked and Jun came up from below, going for an uppercut. The rogue ninja slapped him the flat of his sword, knocking Jun back. Jun laughed but the ninja shook his head and pointed. When Jun looked down he saw a small piece of mteal protruding from his chest. The ninja made a handsign and the metal exlpoded, knocking Jun down. In a fit of rage kagejiro appeared behind the ninja, using one clawed glove he pierced the back of the ninja's neck, then his free hand fingers moved and his puppet brought its scythe down, taking off the arm of the ninja. He screamed and disappeared in a bright flash. Kagejiro ran and knelt next to his brother. "Jun..." "Kagejiro..." Jun reached up and lightly touched his brother's face. Kagejiro went to pick him up when his brother stopped him. "wait...i wont make it. But...i know how i can pay you back." Kagejiro looked at his brother. "you dont have to do that, i already told you i dont care anymore." "No listen..." Jun formed a handsign and his eyes went dull. Three seeds fell from his ear. Jun caught them and handed them to Kagejiro. "Take them...you will know what to do after you do." With that june died and Kagejiro had a tear fall from his face to the ground, where a small sapling sprouted. KAgejiro clenched his eyes shut and swallowed the seeds. All of his brother's memories and thoughts that he ever had filled his head, starting from the beginning. Kagejiro shed even more tears remembering their past together. When the final memory came it was like a movie. The thoughts played a small will to Kagejiro. When the moment was finished Kagejiro picked up his brothers lifeless body, took it to a safe and quiet place, and turned it into one of the best puppets ever made.


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Post by Akki Kumori on Sat Dec 17, 2011 4:54 pm

roxas said to make a new character



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Post by The Blainiest on Sat Dec 17, 2011 10:21 pm

Need medical for poisons, flaws and strengths dont even out.



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Cheshire Cat: He did what?
Alice: Went that way.
Cheshire Cat: Who did?
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Cheshire Cat: What rabbit?
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Post by Akki Kumori on Sat Dec 17, 2011 10:50 pm

bump, and how are they unbalanced?



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Post by The Blainiest on Sat Dec 17, 2011 10:53 pm

Special Characteristics:
- one handed seals
- can fight along side a puppet (control puppet with one hand while hitting with other, able to switch if necessary)
- 30% faster
Flaws/Weaknesses:
- Weakness to genjutsu (needs S rank kai to bust outta gen, and cant bust out without help of an S rank)
- 30% less endurance (takes less hits)
- poor accuracy with throwing weapons (kagejiro cant hit a target with a standard weapon over twenty meters if they were standing still, he himself has no aim with thrown weapons, but if he uses his puppets or a ninjutsu its okay)

One handed Seals, thats A or S
A rank
S rank

You dont have genjutsu of course youre weak to it
S rank
Youre not a weaponist and you bypass the weakness with what you will use anyways.



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Alice: Who did?
Cheshire Cat: The White Rabbit.
Alice: He did?
Cheshire Cat: He did what?
Alice: Went that way.
Cheshire Cat: Who did?
Alice: The White Rabbit.
Cheshire Cat: What rabbit?
Alice: But didn't you just say - I mean - Oh, dear.
Cheshire Cat: Can you stand on your head?
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Post by Akki Kumori on Sat Dec 17, 2011 10:55 pm

i have to use S rank kai to break from any genjutsu, others have used that as an S rank flaw, ask roxas. And the shit im throwing is shuriken and kunai bud, i have crappy throwing skills. I cant even throw a rock straight



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Post by The Blainiest on Sat Dec 17, 2011 11:33 pm

Mokuton: Ningyou Kakuchou [Wood Release: Puppet Extension]
Type:
Element:
Rank: D
Description: Upon performing the necessary handseals, the user's chakra will travel through their chakra threads, connecting to the puppet. About five sharp stakes will burst from the puppet he/she is controlling. These stakes must come out vertically. Curved stakes are not possible. However, the can come out of anywhere on the puppet: front, back, side, head, etc. The stakes burst forward for a range of one meter. The stakes will stay on the puppet until the end of battle.

Make this C as one meter is three feet and I think thats too long for a D


Moku Bunshin no Jutsu [Wood Clone Technique]
Type:
Element:
Rank: C
Description: This is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes wood to create a Bunshin clone. Unlike a normal Bunshin, the Moku Bunshin has the ability to interact more with the environment due to it having physical substance. This allows the clone to carry out attacks on its target. Also, elemental clones can think, but only on the rudimentary level, and the concentration for their jutsu needs to be maintained by the user.

B rank imo

Got add thats as far as I got with the jutsu

on the hands of the puppet master he wears fingerless gloves. These gloves have blades over the fingers like claws tha are attatched to wires. The gloves can be in claw form, spike knuckle form, or loose blade form where the blades shoot off and attatch to something, pulling it to Kagejiro or pulling him to it. the blades can retract when not in use

Extends how far

Alright just be precise on everything bokay?



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Cheshire Cat: The White Rabbit.
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Cheshire Cat: He did what?
Alice: Went that way.
Cheshire Cat: Who did?
Alice: The White Rabbit.
Cheshire Cat: What rabbit?
Alice: But didn't you just say - I mean - Oh, dear.
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Post by Kaira on Sun Dec 18, 2011 12:01 pm

if you weak againest genjutsu you can't even use kai that is usually the rule.


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Post by Lord Auron on Sun Dec 18, 2011 12:07 pm

Weakness to genjutsu (cant break out of genjutsu without the help of someone else)

thats my weakness after i edited
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Post by The Blainiest on Sun Dec 18, 2011 7:46 pm

Please look at the jutsu limit as well



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Alice: Who did?
Cheshire Cat: The White Rabbit.
Alice: He did?
Cheshire Cat: He did what?
Alice: Went that way.
Cheshire Cat: Who did?
Alice: The White Rabbit.
Cheshire Cat: What rabbit?
Alice: But didn't you just say - I mean - Oh, dear.
Cheshire Cat: Can you stand on your head?
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Post by Aiden on Wed Dec 21, 2011 3:34 am

Alright as granted by Zero, I am given a shot to check this application. Mainly because this is such a large application and many of the staff-men seem to be getting weary from it. I am not trying to be a jerk of any kind and keep in mind that i do not have any power to be on a power trip either, so everything I'm about to say is completely out of observation.

1) S ranked applications are suppose to consist of more character history if anything else. I understood that the S rank was granted to you, so i will respect that and look past it. Regardless as an S rank you need to put a lot of work into your application. Meaning that these careless grammatical errors, and lack of structure/organization is simple inexcusable.

2) With permission from Zero( Roxas) and as a kindness to you, I have dedicated my time to your application and any application that needs checking. But I require for you to bare with me and put in some work, so that we can get you approved ASAP. The biggest problem with your application that i can see is that you're jutsus are really poorly written. Now some of them are still comprehensive but some of them are still unclear. I have spoken to you in the chat box and your response was that you had someone else work on them for you a few years back and are too lazy to make the proper changes. Well I am positive that once you take the time out to do them right, you're application will be easier to grade and this approval process can happen much quicker. Here is an example of some of the jutsus you've typed(copy & pasted for that matter) and that ive edited for the sake of clarity based on what i understood from the techniques:

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Mokuton: Ningyou Kakuchou [Wood Release: Puppet Extension]
Type:
Element:
Rank: C
Description: Upon performing the necessary handseals, the user's chakra will travel through the threads which controls the designated puppet. Once the chakra reaches the puppet, five sharp stakes will spear out of the body of the designated puppet, but remain connected to the body of the puppet. These stakes are exactly three feet long and come out vertically across the chosen area. Although these stakes cannot be curved, they can appear anywhere on the puppet (front, back, side, head, etc). On the user’s command, these five stakes can shoot forward as far as one meter. Although this jutsu has a 3 post cool down, the five stakes created will remain on the puppet if they are not destroyed or shot out. If these stakes are shot out then the sharp stakes will remain wherever they land unless moved, or destroyed.

This technique needed cool downs.

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Mokuton: Roddo no Jutsu [Wood Release: Rod Technique]
Type:
Element:
Rank: D
Description: This technique requires hand seals. After completing the required seals the user will be able to create a two foot tall and one inch wide pole made of wood that will appear in the palm of his/her hand. This wooden pole can be used as a tool for close range combat. Because it is made of wood, this pole can be easily broken by physical force at least one rank higher, or by being cut by sharp weapons such as a katana. Because of the density objects projectile objects that hit this pole such as kunais will get stuck, but an average sword of any kind will be enough to even slice this weapon in half. This jutsu has a three post cool down, but these poles can last until it is completely destroyed and void of use.

Needed cool downs
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Mokuton: Mokuzai Bure-ka [Wood Release: Wood Breaker]
Type:
Element:
Rank: D -S
Description: To use this jutsu the user will punch a wooden object or any wooden surface . Once the user’s hands or feet makes contact with a wall or block of would, it will shatter giving the illusion that the user had shattered the object using pure force. The user will actually use their wood manipulation ability to drastically weaken the composition of the wooden object and shatter it with minimal force. The amount of chakra required to perform this jutsu in succession varies on the thickness of the wood or wooden object being targeted. Wooden barriers/ objects much taller and /or wider than the user will require 10 % more chakra to shatter, and cannot be affected by this jutsu, if the barrier(s)/ object(s) is four times wider or longer than the user, until the user reaches A rank. At A rank the user will be able to shatter great walls, at the cost of 50% chakra as long as this wall is made of wood. This jutsu has a 2 post cool down
Alright since it was a jutsu that depended on the user’s rank I altered it a little if you don’t like it you can change it back, but this jutsu still requires hand seals.


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Mokuton: Rashingu Buranshi [Wood Release: Lashing Branch]
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wood
Rank: C
Description: This technique requires hand signs. After the completion of the hand signs, the user will be able lets his/her chakra seep into a tree by first placing their hand on it. After the user’s chakra has seeped into the tree, he/she can control one specific limb of that tree to lash out at the target(s) in reach. The user must specify in their posts how big and tall the limb is. This post has a 4 post cool down and lasts 2 posts.
This has the ability to let you use tree limbs, meaning you can use branches. Some branches are heavy enough to completely total cars, and definitely kill human beings. So this technique is actually a very serious technique when done right. Granted, it’s only one limb, so I decided that it’s right to bump it up to C rank. It needs cool down posts, and you shouldn’t be able to use that limb for the entire topic.

Mokuton: Ki no Mikata [Wood Release: Tree Ally]
Type: Wood
Element: Ninjutsu
Rank: D
Description: This technique requires hand signs. After completing the required hand signs, the user will be able to control any nearby tree in sight ways. The user can have the branches move at will to aid them in climbing. The user can also control a part of the tree to shake off any target(s) standing on it and make them fall. This technique has a 4 post cool down and lasts 3 posts.

That’s what I understood about this technique, if that’s not what it means edit the technique to be clearer. Keep in mind that if you use this technique to attack then it will be higher than a D rank attack. Also techniques such as this one require cool down posts and can’t last forever.

C Rank Jutsus

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Moku Bunshin no Jutsu [Wood Clone Technique]
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Wood
Rank: B
Description: This is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes wood to create a Bunshin clone. Unlike a normal Bunshin, the Moku Bunshin has the ability to interact more with the environment due to it having physical substance. This allows the clone to carry out attacks on its target. Also, elemental clones such as these can think, but only on the rudimentary level, and the concentration for their jutsu needs to be maintained by the user.


As far as writing goes this one isn’t bad, but you are also implying here that these B ranked clones are no smarter than elementary school children. I doubt this is what you meant, be sure to know what rudimentary or any word for that matter, mean before using it.

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Mokuton: Moku Joheki [Wood Release: Wood Locking Wall]
Type:
Element:
Rank: C
Description: Using the correct amount of chakra, the user creates a half-dome of wood to shield around him or herself. The shield can be burned by fire or broken if enough power is put behind the oncoming attack.


How large is this half dome? This jutsu also must use hand seals since you have to create and/or bend wood to do. Also this requires a cool down or you’d be able to just half dome everything all the time. Also how long does this dome last.



What you need to do now: Overall you have some really good basic ideas, but you need to either expand on them, or make them smaller depending on what your plan is for these techniques. What you definitely need to do is follow the rules of the template. You've neglected to type what element and what type of jutsu you are using, this is important. You must remember that every jutsu you do needs a cool down, and that they expire after time has past. If they do not expire you should say so, and probably explain why, so that we can take it from there. Make sure you think of the possibilities of your techniques and rank them properly. Finally make sure your techniques make some kind of sense grammatically because in the English language, when one messed with grammar it changes the entire meaning. As rpers our characters will live or die passed on what the jutsu entails for the user to do, and if the user thinks it does one thing, but it really was meant to do another, the user can die from misusing their own techniques, so think about that. So i want you to use my examples( not saying im the best writer btw) and redo or check your technique, if you feel that this is too much work, then maybe you just have too many techniques(jutsus).
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Post by Akki Kumori on Wed Dec 21, 2011 3:53 pm

before i even wanna read what you wrote i wanna say

HOLY FUCK!

now i shall read it and post again.



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Post by Akki Kumori on Wed Dec 21, 2011 4:15 pm

now i want you to realize a lot of these jutsu arent custom. most of them are canon and copy and pasted from the wikia. now, for what are custom, they have been gone in depth more than nought. S rank history needs more? ya no, there are those who are higher up than me who have less history, let alone ones who are on the same level. Oh by the way i edited the wood clone. Also, not all jutsu need cool downs, i asked Zero and he confirmed. SO, what else did you have to say?



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Post by The Blainiest on Wed Dec 21, 2011 4:24 pm

S rank history needs more? ya no, there are those who are higher up than me who have less history

Yeah thats what Ace, jojo, and Cut said. S ranks just post more than you normally do so just add more history and proofread.

Also, not all jutsu need cool downs, i asked Zero and he confirmed. SO, what else did you have to say?

Well derp hence why he didnt say all your jutsu needed cooldowns. Now listen to what he says and dont try to fight with him.



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Alice: He did?
Cheshire Cat: He did what?
Alice: Went that way.
Cheshire Cat: Who did?
Alice: The White Rabbit.
Cheshire Cat: What rabbit?
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Post by Aiden on Thu Dec 22, 2011 12:53 am

Alot of your techniques need cool downs. In the long run these cool downs also helps you not burn to much chakra too fast. think of it this way as well, if it needs hand signs, then it is suppose to have a cool down.


Mokuton: Ningyou Kakuchou [Wood Release: Puppet Extension]: Needs cool downs

Mokuton: Roddo no Jutsu [Wood Release: Rod Technique]: You seem to not want to make this technique require hand signs. explain to me were this wood comes from. I understand you make it out of chakra but you cant create would out of thin air without hand seals. Do you make it by using your wood element jutsus to pull it out of a tree, or pieces of wood on the ground? cause i know you cant do it from dirt, because dirt doesnt turn into wood, unless you are thinking of saw dust in which you in this case will be very fortunate to find. Explain this to me, or add hand signs, but once you add hand signs put a cool down on the technique. it could be a one post cool down, it wouldn't matter it just shouldn't happen consecutively.

Sen Ira no Jutsu- [Thorned Wire Technique]: Ok, sure you know what this doesnt require hand signs, or cool down post? fine i can see that, we'll let that slide, but how much wire can you barb with that technique? and how sharp are these thorns?

Mokuton: Mokuzai Bure-ka [Wood Release: Wood Breaker]: Ok, so you changed my version of the technique, so explain to me how this technique can allow a user to shatter walls and or wood. What about if the wall is made of stone or hard rock? even metal for that matter. All it reads is that you can shatter walls. This would not be a D rank technique is it could be done from jutsu and not out of pure force. Safe to say , D ranks cant do that.


Mokuton: Rashingu Buranshi [Wood Release: Lashing Branch]: This technique is not D rank. Ive explained that a branch can kill someone with one hit because some branches are hundreds of pounds. They total cars man, so to use one could instant kill anyone it hits with barely any velocity and its weight. bring it up to c rank at least. This technique also must require cool down posts.


Mokuton: Ki no Mikata [Wood Release: Tree Ally]: Sure I approve this technique, so long as failing doesnt mean hitting. Seems right, so long as you cant use this technique to hit people its fine with no cool downs.

Mokuton: Moku Joheki [Wood Release: Wood Locking Wall]: How big is this half dome, how much force is required to break this half dome? This technique doesnt come out of no where and so it should require hand seals, and have a cool down post.

Mokuton: Mokusei Tate [Wood Release: Wooden Shield]: this would does not come out of thin air so it requires hand signs and a cool down post.

Mokuton: Mokuzai Kakujuu [Wood Release: Wood Expansion]: You actually have to have wood right?

Mokuton: Toba no Fuku [Wood Release: Thorn Whip]: How long is this whip, how sharp are these thorns?

Mokuton: Yari Sousaku no Jutsu [Wood Release: Spear Form Technique]: this technique definitely needs hand seals, you cant create something out of nothing without these hand signs. Also needs a cool down

Mokuton: Moumoku Kougeki no Ca-curu [Wood Release: Blind Attack Ring]: needs cool down

Mokuton: Ki no Joushou Jiku [Wood Release: Rising Axis of Wood]: describe this in other words. Also this post needs cool downs

Mokuton: Koi Mokusei no Ryouboku [Wood Release: Dense Wood Beams]: Needs cool down. Are these wood beams sharp?

Mokuton: Mokuzai Dakegi [Wood Release: Wood Blow] : needs cool downs


















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